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Home»Fan Fiction»Raglak – The rain in Spain , stays mainly on the plain! ( OS )
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Raglak – The rain in Spain , stays mainly on the plain! ( OS )

administratorBy administratorApril 12, 201642 Comments5 Mins Read
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Salam , Namaste , Hi!!
So guys I am Zuha , and u must know me and if not so you will know me. Guys I am here with my first OS which is for Raglak , hope you enjoy.

The journey begins…..

In a dark rainy night , I was all alone on the road as my car’s tyre was puncture , in hope of an aid I was praying to god , when I noticed a shadow lurking behind me. A thought came in my mind “Oh No!” This one word only comes when I see his face and listen to his stupid talks. I was not in the mood to see his face , but what can I do if destiny made me his. Yes , he was Lakshya , commonly known as Laksh. Laksh”Senorita , need my help?” I “Mr. Maheshwari , please I want to reach home ,pack my stuff and fly back to India , well I am happy that I will be staying away from you.” Laksh”Senorita , Laksh Maheshwari gets what he wants , and this is the case of true love”

Yes , he loved me madly like anything , and I was fed up of his words which only said “I love u , Senorita!!!” Literally , 2 years these 2 years were like hell for me to tolerate this mad person , he knows I am going to get married to Sanskaar when I will reach India , but his madness , Uffff!!!

Laksh continues”Senorita , aisay chotay chotay daishon mai aisi choti choti baatein hoti rehtein hain”

And the most irritating thing of him was , he keeps on repeating SRK’s line and think himself of Raj from DDLG and me as his Senorita urf Simran. Ugghhhh!!!!

Laksh ” Look , atleast today accept my love , look you are leaving today, 4rever , I do not care you will be in my life or not , you will be my Simran or not , you marry me or someone else but just say you love me , please…”

I know he is mad totally mad , crazy , stupid , idiot , psycho , whatever , but today I did not wanted to spoil my mood by shouting or fighting with him coz this is the last day of mine with him , then I will be free from him , so I was standing queitly and listening to his stupidity.

Laksh pulled me closer , and asked me do I love him , I wanted to say no , but something was stopping me to do so, I did not know why? But then I realized I am someone’s fiancee , Sanskaar flashed in my mind and I pushed him. I started walking away , ignoring him. I heard him calling out my name but I had to control on my unknown emotions , which I felt today and what they meant I do not know and actually donot want to know.

Laksh”Goooo! But if my love is true you will never leave me , today I am challenging God , My love will win or your commitement which you never made.”

I turned to reply him back , but was left shocked at seeing the sight , he was pointing a pistol towards himself , leaving me shocked.

I shouted “Laksh!!!” , he did not listened and was about to pull the trigger when the emotions which were hidden somewhere in my heart came on my lips. I shouted “I love you Laksh , I love you to the eternity , I love u!!” I broke down into tears , he left the pistol , stretched out his arms, I ran and hugged him , I felt peace in him , I found myself complete that day.

Yes , it is my story , my love story , which makes me complete. I am Ragini , Ragini who came to study Textile Designing in Spain but she did not knew she will find his Prince , sorry Raj there. That rain made me fall in love with him and the trees of love grow each and every day at the plain of our heart. That rain , that night , that feeling I can never forget. And yeah about Sanskaar , he married my little sissy Swara , and they both are a happily married couple in India. So , our love story finishes here , remember 1 thing , Love can happen anywhere , any momment , but never stop yourself from loving your soulmate , or you will regret.

So this One Shot ends here , hope u enjoyed , tell me in the comment box below.
Sorry , no Swasan but will come up with a new one for them surely.
But , till then bye ~ Zuha Fatima

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42 Comments

  1. Swati on April 12, 2016 8:15 pm

    Nice

    • zuha(Asya Fan) on April 12, 2016 8:53 pm

      Thanks.

  2. Dev on April 12, 2016 8:16 pm

    Short but cute

    • zuha(Asya Fan) on April 12, 2016 8:54 pm

      Yeah it is short , thanks for liking.

  3. Sindhu rm on April 12, 2016 8:23 pm

    Nice

    • zuha(Asya Fan) on April 12, 2016 8:54 pm

      Thanks.

  4. tasi on April 12, 2016 8:24 pm

    Awesome……..god bless u……continue with more os or ff

    • zuha(Asya Fan) on April 12, 2016 8:55 pm

      Thanks Tasi 4r so much love , will come up soon.

  5. Dhara on April 12, 2016 8:34 pm

    Amazing

    • zuha(Asya Fan) on April 12, 2016 8:55 pm

      Thnx.

  6. rakhi on April 12, 2016 8:49 pm

    Awsm

    • zuha(Asya Fan) on April 12, 2016 8:56 pm

      Thanks

  7. S Priya on April 12, 2016 8:51 pm

    Nice

    • zuha(Asya Fan) on April 12, 2016 8:56 pm

      Thanks

  8. dipti on April 12, 2016 9:07 pm

    ur way of writing is really good and nice and write more os on raglak

    • Zuha (Asya fan) on April 12, 2016 10:23 pm

      Thanks for appreciating my work I will come up with more ☺

  9. kriya on April 12, 2016 9:11 pm

    superb….waiting for next part of ur ff update asap……

    • Zuha (Asya fan) on April 12, 2016 10:24 pm

      Thanks Kriya, I will be posting it by tomorrow parka ☺

  10. priya tripathi on April 12, 2016 9:21 pm

    Hi zuha u remember me us os is good n ya i m fan of swasan more than raglak

    • Zuha (Asya fan) on April 12, 2016 10:34 pm

      Of course I remember u Priya, Ok soon will come up with an OS for Swasan soon, thanks for reading☺

  11. Anu on April 12, 2016 9:48 pm

    Superb ♥♥

    • zuha(Asya Fan) on April 13, 2016 4:06 pm

      Thanks?

  12. Nikki on April 12, 2016 10:04 pm

    Superb ….and thanks for writing os on raglak…. Pls write more os on raglak

    • zuha(Asya Fan) on April 13, 2016 4:08 pm

      Thanks Nikkin , I will come with more soon.

  13. Halima on April 12, 2016 10:12 pm

    Awesome…..literally I was smiling, it was so good.

    • Halima on April 12, 2016 10:13 pm

      Sorry, forgot to say Wasalaam.

    • zuha(Asya Fan) on April 13, 2016 4:10 pm

      No worries?

    • zuha(Asya Fan) on April 13, 2016 4:09 pm

      Awwww, I am happy that u smiled?
      Keep smiling?

  14. Naimi on April 12, 2016 10:19 pm

    very nice

    • zuha(Asya Fan) on April 13, 2016 4:10 pm

      Thanks?

  15. Ammu on April 12, 2016 10:23 pm

    Superb dear and thanks for raglak

    • zuha(Asya Fan) on April 13, 2016 4:11 pm

      My pleasure!

  16. lovely on April 12, 2016 10:45 pm

    awesome

    • zuha(Asya Fan) on April 13, 2016 4:12 pm

      Thanks , Lovely!

  17. Ani on April 12, 2016 11:44 pm

    Awesome

    • zuha(Asya Fan) on April 13, 2016 4:13 pm

      Thnx ?

  18. Bisha on April 13, 2016 12:24 am

    Its such a cute short fairytale love story. Really very good. Keep it up.

    • zuha(Asya Fan) on April 13, 2016 4:14 pm

      Thanks 4r ur lovely comment?

  19. Nita on April 13, 2016 9:05 am

    Nice story…. Plz come up with more such one shots

    • zuha(Asya Fan) on April 13, 2016 4:15 pm

      Thanks Nita , will come up with more OS?

  20. swara on April 13, 2016 3:36 pm

    wow good.you are an amazing writer.short and sweet story

    • zuha(Asya Fan) on April 13, 2016 4:15 pm

      Thanks Swara , for reading and complimenting.

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