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Home»Fan Fiction»Rishto ki Dastan (Part 5)
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Rishto ki Dastan (Part 5)

administratorBy administratorApril 7, 201671 Comments5 Mins Read
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Hello people…I’m back…..if u don’t like my ff then u can criticize it…..but plz don’t say that u hate me….u can’t hate anyone seeing his or her ff….

Swara is sleeping……Rags come there and wakes her up…
Rags:Shona….u need to take medicines…..
Swara:No di..plz…
Rags:U need to get well soon na….eat it…
Swara makes a puppy face….and eats it…..
Rags:God…u r more childish the Siya…….
Swara:Haha..very funny….

The scene shifts to the office….
Laksh thinks about Swaa…
Laksh;What happened to this Jhansi ki rani…….she didn’t come to annoy me for once even……
Vidhi comes and informs him that Swara didn’t come today…when he asks for the reason..she says that she is having fever….
Laksh;Oh….okay…
Vidhi leaves…
Laksh is working…but just then he remembers Swara’s acts…..and starts smiling…..he starts finding his file…..but doesn’t find it…
Laksh;Let me ask Swara about my file…
Laksh calls Swara..
Swara:Ha Sir boliye…
Laksh: Nitra properties ka file kaha hai?
Swara:So mean of u sir….i mean…u didn’t even ask me about my health..and…..
Laksh:Plz tell me na….
Swara:Its in your table’s right side’s second drawer…
Laksh:Okay..let me see…
He finds the file there…
Swara:Okay bye…
Laksh:Btw….wanted to ask u anther thing…
Swara:Now which file do u want?
Laksh:Not about file…Just wanted to ask that how r u?
Swara:Ummm….fine….I’m fine now Sir…..bye…

It’s the next day…
Swara comes to the office…
Laksh:U here? U weren’t fine right?
Swara:I said to u that I’m fine..so I came here…
Laksh:Btw, u go back…
Swara:Hay?
Laksh:Ya….cause I’m going to khandala for a meeting….with Ashish……u were not there…so I asked him to come…u see now I can’t ask him to not come and take u…. bhai left for khandala before me..
Swara:Oh..okay sir….
Swara goes to a corner and calls Ashish
Ashsish:Ha Swara bol..
Swara:Plz yar don’t come today…..
Ashish:Why?
Swara:Wohh…sir said that u r going with him to Khandala…..and I want to go there….plz don’t come..
Ashish:Koi chakkar chalraha hai kya?
Swara:No no….plz na….I’m your friend na….plz…
Ashish:Fine..who wants to travel with that arrogant person…other than u…
Ashish calls Laksh and tells him that he is not coming….Laksh asks Swara to come with him….
Swara informs her family that she is going to Khandala..
Laksh is driving…Swara opens the window and enjoys the windy weather…
Laksh closes her window from his side…
Swara;Sir…u have any prob with my happiness?
Laksh:Ha hai toh?
Swara makes faces………

Just the Laksh’s car stops..
Swara;Sir..y did u stop the car?
Laksh;I didn’t….i guess…theres some prob..I’ll check..
Laksh check everything…
Laksh;Gosh…it had to happen today….we need to take a lift…..
Swara;Okay sir…let me help u in that..cause no one will give a lift to an arrogant man like u but will definitely give a sweet ad innocent girl like me a lift….
Swara goes and stands in the road……she tries to stop the cars..but none of them stop…..
Laksh starts laughing…
Laksh;Hogaya tumhara?now move..let me try…
Laksh sees a truck coming…and stops it…
Driver:Ji…u need any help?
Laksh:I need lift…
Driver:Where do u want to go?
Laksh:Khandala…
Driver:Sit in my truck….
Laksh calls Swara..
Driver:Who is she?
Laksh:Umm…my..
Driver:Oh..pyar wyar ka chakkr hai…..I’m leaving bhai….maybe u have eloped…..I don’t want to face any prob bhai…
Laksh asks him to stop bt he doesn’t…
Swara;Why did he leave?
Laksh;Cause he didn’t want to face any prob because of us…he thought that we eloped from our homes..and…
Swara:Why didn’t u tell him the truth?
Laksh:He left before I could tell him anything..okay..
Laksh gets a call….and gets tensed..
Swara:What happened?
Laksh:If we don’t reach there by 6 then…….
Swara:Now what do we do? Its your fault…u bought a khatara gari…..
Laksh:Shut up…….idea…..u have lips stick?
Swara:Why?U wanna use it?
Laksh:Just answer the question I ask…u have one?
Swara:Umm….ya..a red one…
Laksh:Take it out..
Swara:Fine..
She takes it out…..Laksh makes a mark in her forehead…..which is looking like sindoor…
Swara:Why r u doing this?
Laksh:So that now people don’t think that we r eloped couple…..we r a married couple..

He sees a truck passing by…he stops it…..and says that he and his wife needs lift…to Khandala….there wer 4 people…one of them said…
Man:This is today’s generation…maybe….they r lying……leave them….
They leave…

Swara puts her hand on her head…..
Laksh;Now what?
Swara:What?…let me think…..
Laksh:Bolo na…
Swara:My mind is not an idea shop…okay?
After sometime..Swara shouts IDEA!!!!
Swara puts her scarf in her tummy…
Laksh:How will this help?
Swara:Sir..my baby will help me…
Laksh:What?
Swara:Ha..sir….everyone will give a lift to a abla garva vati nari…
They see a car passing by….they stop it…its sardarji and his wife..

Laksh:Sardarji..we need a lift…plz….can u drop us to Khandala?
Sardarji:We? U and whom?
Laksh:Wohh..me and my wife..
Swara comes there…
Sardarji’s wife:Oh ho…..your wife is pregnant…and u guys r waiting here…..we should give them lift..
Sardarji:Sit in the car…
Swara winks at Laksh and sits in the car…
Sardarji is driving very slowly..
Laksh;Sardarji…y r u driving so slowing?
Sardarji’s wife:Beta…..your wife is pregnant na…so I asked him not to drive fast..
Swara keeps her hand in her head…
Swara in a lower voice:Sir…if we continue going like this..then we won’t reach there tomorrow even…
Laksh:Aur karo drama…..abla nari..and all that….
Swara:Sardarji….plz drive fast…….
Sardarji;Na beta…..
Swara:Sardarji…y baby wants to reach Khandala fast…plz plz plz…
Sardarji:Thik hai beta…
They reach Khandala….

Precap:Sardarji telling Laksh to take care of his wife..infront of his clients…the clients think that Mr Maheshwari brought his wife with him as well…..Sanskar looks on confused….

People….wanna ask something to u all…..there were polls on swasan vs swalak….now lets try something diffrent…now i want u to u tell me…whom u like more…
a.Raglak
b.Swalak
People….plz don’t think like if u r a swasan fan u have to vote for Raglak….or u r a ragsan fan and must vote for swalak….its your choice…
PEOPLE…THIS IS NOT RELATED TO MY FF…..I HAVEN’T DECIDED THE COUPLES THOUGH BUT I’LL DECIDE IT SOON….AND I WON’T SELECT IT THROUGH VOTES….JUST WANT TO KNOW WHICH COUPLE IS MORE FAMOUS…..

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71 Comments

  1. xxx on April 7, 2016 9:17 pm

    obviously swalak for me… because SWALAK ROCKS!!!

    • Eva on April 8, 2016 12:04 am

      I knew it..that u r a swalak fan cause your all ff were about them only…?

    • xxx on April 8, 2016 3:15 am

      Did u read my ff’s Eva di?
      R u a die hard fan of swalak too?

    • Eva on April 8, 2016 9:14 am

      Umm…..i love swalak,swasan and ragsan……not anyone of of them in particular…..but yap..i don’t like RAGLAK…

  2. rakhi on April 7, 2016 9:19 pm

    Nice..i like raglak

    • Eva on April 7, 2016 9:58 pm

      Thanks dear 🙂

  3. Jyotii on April 7, 2016 9:21 pm

    Couples does not matter! But u can make it Ragsan! Or anyone of uhr choice! But the episode was mind blowing! I was waiting fr uhr ff only! 🙂

    • Eva on April 7, 2016 9:50 pm

      Thank u Jyotii.. 🙂

  4. jhanvi on April 7, 2016 9:26 pm

    i am swalak fan so definately swalak

    • Eva on April 8, 2016 12:08 am

      TQ for making the choice dear..

  5. Sandy on April 7, 2016 9:28 pm

    Wat the.heck is this
    plz do voting,I wont select it thr votes bakwass
    all of them knows which couple more famous

    • Eva on April 7, 2016 9:55 pm

      I did voting once…but i was bashed badly….so now i decide the couples myself…..and this is not voting……just wanted to know which couple is more famous….u said that everyone knows which couple is more famous…..tbh..i really don’t know which couple is more famous….i go for stories and not couples….

  6. Lila on April 7, 2016 9:32 pm

    Superb epi as always….I genuinely luv Swalak not becuz of Ragsan but becuz of their awesome chemistry

    • Eva on April 7, 2016 9:57 pm

      Thanks Lila 🙂

  7. shloka on April 7, 2016 9:33 pm

    U r great yaar…loved it…….and i dont understand why do and how can people hate u …. u r awesome yaar…..and dont worry we r there for ur support….m..and i think u must be knowing my choice……..

    • Eva on April 7, 2016 9:50 pm

      hehehehe…..i know your choice……Shloka.. 🙂

  8. Abhi on April 7, 2016 9:39 pm

    Its very interesting….n i like raglak more than swalak

    • Eva on April 7, 2016 9:57 pm

      Thanks Abhi 🙂

  9. Abdul hafiz on April 7, 2016 9:42 pm

    Awesome.I loved it . swalak scenes so funny. Plz swalak . Waiting for nxt.

    • Eva on April 7, 2016 9:56 pm

      Thank u Uma..

  10. Kittu on April 7, 2016 9:47 pm

    Wow awesome..waiting fr nxt part eagrly..nd ha M SWARAs fan i love her alot..so i lyk both swasan nd swalak….
    HERE I SUPPORT “SWALAK”..

    • Eva on April 7, 2016 11:50 pm

      Thank u Kittu..?

    • Eva on April 7, 2016 11:53 pm

      TQ Kittu..

  11. Kritika on April 7, 2016 9:48 pm

    There were no swasan scenes..incomplete epi…bt plz include in next part…

    • Eva on April 7, 2016 11:54 pm

      So sorry about that dear..I’ll try to add swasan scenes in the next one..

  12. Kittu on April 7, 2016 9:50 pm

    Wow awesome..waiting fr nxt part eagrly..nd ha M SWARAs fan i love her alot..so i lyk both swasan nd swalak….
    HERE I SUPPORT “SWALAK”

  13. Bisha on April 7, 2016 9:53 pm

    Great! Onr more LOL Episode. i missed the last one and thenwent back again. Anyways, keep it up

    • Eva on April 7, 2016 11:56 pm

      TQ Bisha?

  14. masthi on April 7, 2016 9:55 pm

    swalak is always interesting.

    • Eva on April 8, 2016 12:09 am

      TQ dear for making a choice between raglak and swalak….keep reading..?

  15. Ritu on April 7, 2016 9:58 pm

    swalak swalak and only swalak. swalak rock. awesome episode.

    • Eva on April 7, 2016 11:50 pm

      Thank u dear..

  16. sherin on April 7, 2016 10:04 pm

    Swalak plsss

  17. karan on April 7, 2016 10:08 pm

    I am a die hard fan of swalak

  18. Crazygirl on April 7, 2016 10:14 pm

    I like Swalak

    • Eva on April 8, 2016 12:11 am

      Hey Crazygirl,Karan and sherin..thank u for telling me your choice..?

  19. Jwala on April 7, 2016 10:15 pm

    swasan is the more popular couple and have crazy fans everywhere.. only love swasan. but a helly fan i like swalak also.. raglak also good

    • Eva on April 7, 2016 11:57 pm

      I know swasan is more popular..but i guess after that come.swalak or ragsan..

  20. Anu on April 7, 2016 10:17 pm

    I like swalak but because I love swasan nd hate ragsan I never said to make their pair but u r asking between raglak nd swalak so definitely I like swalak more

    • Eva on April 7, 2016 11:58 pm

      Tbh I like Ragsan even..TeVar rocks..i love their off screen bonding..

  21. Shirin on April 7, 2016 10:17 pm

    Swalak

    • Eva on April 8, 2016 12:12 am

      Thanks for making a choice dear..keep reading.

  22. IREENA on April 7, 2016 10:22 pm

    SWALAK n the episode is awesome update next soon want to see how swalak will handle the clients

    • Eva on April 8, 2016 12:11 am

      Thank u Ireena..and I’ll update soon..

  23. Mahima on April 7, 2016 10:23 pm

    Swalak… thy are good..

    • Eva on April 8, 2016 12:13 am

      TQ dear for making a choice…keep reading..

  24. Riya on April 7, 2016 10:27 pm

    Awesome kiddo .. I hope u read my comment on your previous page .. Don’t feel bad kiddo .. Don’t listen to them .. Just ignore ., I personally like raglak more.. But I suggest not to do voting..

    • Eva on April 8, 2016 12:00 am

      Riya I’m not doing voting….trust me…bohot baru sikh mili hai mujhe Samjhota 1 seh..i won’t repeat that again..and thank u….

  25. kriya on April 7, 2016 10:28 pm

    swalak n ragsan

    • Eva on April 8, 2016 12:18 am

      TQ for sharing your choice dear..

  26. pavani on April 7, 2016 10:30 pm

    Ragsan or raglak no prblem I like teeju if imp is given to her then no matter of bothering of pairs

    • Eva on April 8, 2016 12:19 am

      Oh Teju fan hah? I even like Teju.I appreciate her brilliant acting skills..she is doing a fabulous job…

  27. pari on April 7, 2016 10:56 pm

    Hey eva plz dnt do this voting system plz yaar I knw swasan will win .ok my vote for swalak

    • Eva on April 8, 2016 12:17 am

      I did not do voting…this has no connection with my ff..and yes I gave options of raglak and swalak..swasan toh haihi nehi waha…

  28. priya on April 7, 2016 11:00 pm

    swalak swalak

  29. Anjali on April 7, 2016 11:13 pm

    Loved the epi Eva…. I dont remember if I commented in the prev chapter… Sorry im not feeling well…
    But loved this epi

    • Eva on April 7, 2016 11:49 pm

      Hey Anjali..u okay right? Take care dear…? and thank u..

  30. Rey on April 7, 2016 11:20 pm

    wow… haha its soo funny swalak nd eva plz dn’t care abt useless fellows dey dn’t even care abt other feelings… so jst leave those cmts dear… abt pairs i luv swasan nd i lyk swalak bt i dn’t care abt pairs jst do watever u want … v r always wit u dear…

    • Eva on April 8, 2016 12:15 am

      Thank u Rey..for your support dear..and yes..just now I realized that u asked to write in english..so sorry about that dear…that thing slipped out of my mind dear..but from next time I’ll keep this in mind..

  31. Anvee on April 7, 2016 11:35 pm

    I think it would be swara laksh

    • Eva on April 8, 2016 12:14 am

      Keep guessing dear .

  32. sinzo on April 7, 2016 11:37 pm

    hey today’s epidode is awesome…….i loved it….?

    first i used to love swalak…..but now i think Raglak are meant to be together……Ragini loved laksh truly that’s y they are together now….so for me Raglak …..
    but cant deny the fact that i Love Ragsan more……they are my fav.

    • Eva on April 8, 2016 12:05 am

      TQ Sinzo..

  33. meena on April 7, 2016 11:57 pm

    Swalak

  34. Ahana on April 8, 2016 12:09 am

    Swalak plz
    N ragsan if possible
    Luv ur ff
    Waiting fr d nxt prt!!!

    • Eva on April 8, 2016 12:20 am

      TQ Ahana..and I’ll update soon dear..

  35. tanu on April 8, 2016 12:13 am

    raglak

    • Eva on April 8, 2016 12:22 am

      Cool..thanks for sharing your choice tanu..?

  36. K on April 8, 2016 12:38 am

    I do like raglak but if I’m given option between raglak and ragsan then ragsan rocks forever

  37. Anu Ann on April 8, 2016 2:38 pm

    I love swara dan everyone.. So swalak..

  38. sara on April 8, 2016 10:16 pm

    always swalak rockzzzz…

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