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Mmz….DARK: An action flick

Hello guys…first let me say something…for this story I got my idea from constant attacks on world n India,d company n other black organization n terrorist activities in world with illegal dealing,human trafficking etc…..specially the NIT Rift at srinagar…how could people enjoy every facility being a citizen of one country n praises another…so irritating…i salute those who bravely show their love for own country…m so pissed of with all this..so it came out as result…

Second thing in my ff you will always find girls as a strong,courageous n independent characters like men..so lets go…tell me if I will proceed with this plot..

It will be all about lil bit of Politics conspiracy action thrill with lil bit of fun …a short ff…basically it’s a saga of vengeance n love for own country…

CHARACTER SKETCH

Radhika Mishra

A 24 year spoilt brat..mysterious…too much pampered by her father n brother coz her mother passed away in childhood…her bratty nature to cover up other things…very strong n independent woman never accept anybody’s help…may b its physical or emotional …she is trained in each aspects…

Neil Malhotra

27 year ,Honest n tough police officer…very much reserved..he is a man of principles..duty is god for him..his life is full of secret..want to help radhika without her knowledge…

Samaira Khanna

25 year,young beautiful reporter..she was always after truth..uncover things which were tried to hide..she has a crush on Neil…she has a charming way to make people spoke truth in front of her

Arjun Mehera:

27 year,very dashing handsome cool guy…Leader of the national bureau’s investigation wing n head commander in Prime minster’s security services…apart from that in personal life he is known as a high class playboy with glowing personality..though it’s a mask…very much proud on his good looks which gave him some good results …but loved his work…very sharp minded..

Ankush Mishra( little bit of characterization but very important)

28 year,a diplomat working under pm n defense ministry…a faithful n trustworthy person…love his sister more than his life…aquittance of Arjun..

SOS: Secret operational services ((SOS))

This is a secret private organization tasked with destroying foreign threats and protecting the country from terrorism n chaos through secret operations… It can go to the extent assassination of anyone who could be a threat to Indian national security… Since its founding in the time of Mumbai attack 2008 in hurriedly, jointly by some high level officials of national bureau n defense ministry… the agency’s very existence has remained a state secret from public…operations secretly carried out to repress terrorist n other outbreak..but inside it a secret is yet to reveal…

Eagle Eye ((E2)) :
An organization of influential people that controls the world’s resources for their fortunes..A black organization who gained its profit by creating conflicts between two countries…never allow for peaceful talk between them..create chaos…it has branches all over world…apart from committing wars now this organization interested to acquire new nuclear power formulae by which it can rule on all over the world…n establish its own black world …this organization is father of all illegal activities in the world including terrorism…

NDN: News day n night…the news media where samaira works…one time it was famous for its news which conveyed only truth…but now a days it can’t compete all those in trp matter by conveying useless n rubbish factor…more than that it buried a secret which caused a mess some years ago…

Many other characters are there also…it will disclose as the story progress…

So guys let me know…if u liked character sketch…if u want any changes u r welcome to give ur views n suggestions…i know many of here won’t be interested in politics n conspiracy…but I hope it works..

I know its my second ff…but I can’t control myself from writing this…sure I’ll end the first one…then write it…

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77 Comments

  4. manju on

    rosie it was really awesome dear

    i just loved ur concept
    nice thought

    pls update this one soon

  5. Roshni on

    Arey yr amazing mind blowing and superb.
    Really blowed mind. And great idea and loved and will support the nstionality.
    Great going.
    Plz updste next asap .so many and’s…

    • rosie on

      Thanks a ton ? Roshni…yes nationality should be first for everyone…now m scared of seeing all ur expectations…tc?

    • Roshni on

      Haha dnt be yrr.. it sound so great that we are hoping so much. Write keeping in mind what you thought before making this ff. You will surely do amazing. I am really very eager to read the next part. Hope you are happy mindedly free 🙂

    • rosie on

      Thanks yaar for advice ?…as I told before its basically a revenge n action oriented plot…other things are added as spice…

  7. Sejal on

    Rosie… Continue..
    Its something different and unique…..
    Uniqueness always increases curiosity…. And attracts others… The same ur ff’s intro is doing…

  8. Shree on

    My baby mamma!! You here with a sooper lower packed action story!! Sooperb plot!! Characters sketched beautifully!! Looking forward to it!! All the best to you!! I know you’ll rock it!! Muuaaahh!! Post the next part soon… Pllllleeeaaaaassseee

    Love you loads… Tc.. Keep smiling… Bear hug ??

    • rosie on

      Ohoo…ma choti darling…no no my big daughter…u know it’ll rock??? How??? So much faith on me…gud have faith on ur mamma…loads of love ❤…tc?

    • Shree on

      How can I not have faith on you?! It’s the inner conscience that tells me you’ll rock it… Yes mamma yes… Big daughter I am ??… Eeeee ??

      Love you loads.. Tc.. Keep smiling.. Bear hug ??

    • rosie on

      Don’t scare me….where is ur update??? U told post it today??? Inner conscience….interconnected…u r such a power booster..luv ya…tc?? n post soon ??

    • Shree on

      Eeeeeeeeeee!! Me having Colgate smile!! ??????… I’ll post… Today evening or tomorrow.. It’s holiday and maa is like no using phone… I’m struggling to type here…. Yes, interconnected!! You too be my energy booster!! ??

      Love you loads.. Tc.. Keep smiling.. Bear hug ??

  9. Chinmayi on

    Rosie dear,luv u for bringing a much needed change,,yes we being youths of a developing country,should be aware of wats all going in our country and maybe we cant do anything in some matters but analysing it ll help us fetch knowlegde of wats right and whats wrong….i ll always wait for this ff of urs..

    • rosie on

      Omg…Chinmayi thanks a lot for having such ideas…may b we can’t do anything but we can love n respect our country…n we should be..u r such a darling…lots of love ❤…tc?

  10. Chinmayi on

    Forgot to talk about the character sketch dr…we hve alwayz seen radhika as a perfect girl,but u hve made her a spoilt kid!! Interesting…sam is reporter…omg,my neil is a tough cop…!! Dude,u r too gud…
    :* :* 🙂

  11. Niharika on

    Rosie please don’t end the first one. Stop this one but please continue the first one. Both your ff are amazing.

  12. Sv on

    Rosie totally a new plot. Wow that was nice. Super start. Update soon and the other one too . Oye do it simultaneously coz or at least small small update pls update at least once in a week. Dear please.

    • rosie on

      Thanks my twin darling…I need to complete first one…then xams…after may 5 I’ll b able to give its chapter…u know u have to put ur brain for such kind of thing…but I promise I’ll give a prologue to this chapter after some days…luv u…tc?

    • Sv on

      Now releaved . But u got skills pls do write more and entertain us with ur ff dear . Love u take care stay blessed and bear hugs darling.

    • rosie on

      Don’t scare me….me got skills…i just look at situations n write without any second thoughts..u know for my first ff I never thought what to write or what not…just sit down when I got time n write..luv ya…tc?? n post soon ??

  13. Bhabya on

    Rosie di bahut badhiya story. Neil aau radhika ku best friend bhaliya dekheba please. The story is really amazing n interesting.

    • rosie on

      Literally tam pain apekha karithili….Neil au rads bhal bond share karibe…sure…but tike alga …eita mostly action oriented…glad u liked it…tc?

    • Bhabya on

      Di sorry late reply paien. N ya aita really bahut interesting haiba padhiba ku. I’m a action thriller fan too.

  16. Natasha on

    I just luved it Rosie????………u have a very very awesome and different plot????………waiting eagerly for the 1st epi???………pls update soon or else i will become mad byvthinking how will the story proceed????…….luv ya dude❤?????

    • rosie on

      Thanks a ton ? Natasha…may I know if u r the same Natasha who wrote where is heart there is life??? Try to update soon ? love u ?

  18. susi on

    Nice intro yaar ….totally different ways mmz…I loved it…pls continue regularly…thanks for another superb story…tc…

  22. Amy on

    Eagerly waiting for it rosie…….. i love your other ff but i love this intro too…
    So if possible upload both……. please…..
    I hope there is a lot of suspence and action in this one…….
    Love u….. post both ff soon 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂

    • rosie on

      Yiiiii….thanks a ton ? Amy darling…both…my xam r coming…so I’ll try to finish the current ff within may 5…after the new one…what m not good at suspense like u…but sure action will b there..waiting for ur scl

    • Amy on

      I am sure when you start writing this one it will be amazing……. you hav to wait till tmrw for scl nd pls upload new dimension soon…. 🙂

  25. aastha on

    Superb Rosie…….its a different plot n pretty interesting too…….keep going……i like ur thought of presenting woman as independent n strong…….hats off to ur thinking………i ve a doubt : LL there be the element of love in ur ff???????????

    • rosie on

      Thanks aastha dear? ..imo women are more capable…n yes a lil bit of love will b there…but basically its revenge n action based

    • aastha on

      oh so who is gonna take revenge on whom????? u really are a wonderful person di………when r u gonna update new dimensions…………….n di plzz cal me aasthu…..I love it…….by the by how r u?????????? now that u r gonna prepare for civil service exam you must b really busy na???? what job were you doing previously???

    • rosie on

      M Fyn aasthu…lil bit busy for exam…u will see who is gonna take revenge but any guess??? I already posted new dimension…u too post urs…i did my work at NGO…specially at women empowerment sector…so its effects on my ff is here…lol…thanks a lot dear for considering me as wonderful person..tc?

  27. dipika on

    Hey its superb dear…patriotic story…good plot..actually whenever i think abt attacks n all i too get pissesd off n my blood boil…hate such ppl who do this kind if shameful things only behind the name of religion…super excited for nxt one

    • rosie on

      Thanks a ton ? dipika…really those people should be hanged….its not only behind the name of religion…the chaos they create unbelievable also…

  28. Honeybee on

    Wah wah wah kiya baat hai. So now everyone knows the secret you told me ?
    Update. Update. Update soon.
    And how was your civil service exam? Don’t forget to give me good results. ?

    • rosie on

      I was expecting u here…but see I didn’t disclosed ur identity…come baby soon…u r a greedy support for me u know…missed u too much…exams starting from 25 to may 5…m trying…getting irritated with study sometime…I’ll never forget u to give results…love ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ u so much

  30. Roma on

    Wowwww awesome rosieeeee….muaaaaahhhhhh loved it..? Plzzz continue dear. …loved the characters sketch n the description. ..looking forward to read this unique amazing story. …plzzzz continue dear. ..all the best. .love you loads