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Home»Fan Fiction»DOSTHI aur dil…(raglak) 10
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DOSTHI aur dil…(raglak) 10

administratorBy administratorMarch 28, 201625 Comments5 Mins Read
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Lak: ragini, plz forgive me ragini ( he was begging for his life)
Ragini: jst go………………
Lak: sry ragini!!!( he came to know that this time his mistake is unforgivable)
He and his mother turn to go out ,
Ragini: hey!!!!??!!?!!

They both turn
Ragini comes and catches his collar
Ragini: what haa? If I tell u to go, u will go? Don’t u dare think of leaving me
Laksh was shocked, he didn’t understand
Ragini: what? Only u guys know hw to act!!! I am the headmaster of the school in which u guys studied
Lak: u r unbelievable !!!
Ragini: I know that ( wiping her tears)
Lak: u r not angry on me?

Ragini: no!!!!
Lak: I am sry!!!
Ragini: if u tell me sry one more time I will kill u, remember I agreed to marry u only on the condition that we will be bffs forever and no sry and no thank u between bffs.
Lak: what I did was wrong!!!
Ragini: it is , but that’s fine and I don’t wanna lose u

Meherbaani nahi tumhara pyar maanga hai
Tumhe manzoor hai tabhi to yaar manga hai
Ghairon ke dar se, tere sheher se
Hai kasam rishta todoon na
Tera rastaa main chhodoon na..
Plays in bg and they both have a eyelock

ragini: and u were right if u had not done that I would be chasing u with that knife for my whole life.
Lak: see I only speak the truth
Ragini: then?(in an irritated tone)……. And by the way I don’t love u , I love ur stupidity
Lak: lifts his collar
Ragini: and the way u do the stupid acts , mind blowing!!!!!! ( sarcasm)
lak: r u praising me or cursing me?
Ragini: arey, of course praising u!!!! do u have any doubts on ur ability
Lak: no!!!
Ragini: and did u see ur face, hahahahahahahha ( she starts imitating him ) plz ragini forgive me plz…………hahahahahhaha
Laksh: today I will not leave u

She starts running but this time laksh was chasing her with knife
Ragini: laksh, chasing is my work
Lak: its ok ragini , u will get bored if u do it often

They both fall down and start laughing,

Ragini: hw was my acting mom!
Mom: very good
Lak: u knew she was acting ?
Mom: yes , when I told her sry, she winked at me

Lak: wow ragini not bad, u r learning many things from me
Ragini and mom: shut up!!!!!
Laksh makes faces. All the three laugh.
————————————————————————————————
In a moving train,
Girl: wow, what a love story!!!
Raglak: it is!!

boy: where r u guys going?
Ragini: to get married
Girl and boy: what? Alone!!!!
Raglak: yaa, we are alone, coz we r running away and getting married
Girl: what?
Boy: why? both ur parents were happy with ur marriage
Raglak: yes
Ragini: were r running away and getting married……
Lak: with our parents permission.
Boy: wow u r really lucky
Girl: yes he is lucky, indeed sanskar!!
Sanskar: shut up swara!!!!
Swasan start fighting,

Ragini to laksh : looks like the beginning of another love story

Ragini goes to the door followed by laksh, both stand waving their hands outside
———————————————————————————————–
Meherbaani nahi tumhara pyar maanga hai
Tumhe manzoor hai tabhi to yaar manga hai
Ghairon ke dar se, tere sheher se
Hai kasam rishta todoon na
Tera rastaa main chhodoon na..
Agar ye hai nahi, to phir jaane pyar kya hai
Mere jeet hai tu, kise parvaah haar kya hai
Tera rasta chhodoon na..
Chhodoon naa main tera rasta chhodoon naa
Zindaa hoon lekin, wo baat nahi hai
Haathon mein teraa, jo haath nahi hai
Ishq ka hai naam bada
Maine hai kiya kaam bada
Kar ke magar aadha chhodoon na
Tere rukh se ye chehra modoon na
Tera rastaa main chhodoon na…

plays in the background.

The end.
——————————————————————————-
Guys read the below para too, something important!!!!!!!!

Don’t love people jst bcoz they say I love u, love someone who shows in every single action that they love u , after all ,actions speak louder than words.

Guys I am ending it bcoz cute( u guys say it is cute ) stories need cute endings and if I drag it more it will lose its original essence.

And priya, I am in school so u decide I am ur elder sister or younger sister, both the ways I am fine.

I will try to come up with a season two but I don’t know when nor do I know surely that I will come. Stay happy, be happy and don’t forget there are still good people in the world like laksh, like ragini.

And guys don’t u dare forget me afra( asheeyana). Love u all.Thank u.

Thank u ,
Pratheeksha, riya,ridhi, needhi, swati,kalai, megha, anamika,s priya, divya,sia, rakhi, naimi,dafsi, aarti, taiaana, kriya, Lovely, sindhu rm, Ayesha, joona, ammu, ani, raglak, ragini, joona, ruhani, dhara, heena, ananya, pari, pavani,anu ,kirti, sarika shah, sanaya ( sry if I forgot to mention any of ur names) and silent readers too, and my sister fidha ,Thank u very much.

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25 Comments

  1. Swati on March 28, 2016 8:42 pm

    Please come back with another ff on raglak

  2. pavani on March 28, 2016 8:43 pm

    Ohh noo u ended it

  3. Priya on March 28, 2016 8:45 pm

    I consider you as my elder sister di and ya I will not forget you please come back with an awesome love story of raglak soon I l be waiting di

  4. Dafsi on March 28, 2016 8:54 pm

    OMG mind blowing, simply superb, awesome etc..very simple and sweet…come up with another ff for sure?? Gonna miss it for sure

  5. rakhi on March 28, 2016 9:00 pm

    Awsm..fabulous..will miss ur ff

  6. Dhara on March 28, 2016 9:03 pm

    Very nice ending.i will miss your ff a lot.

  7. anamika on March 28, 2016 9:05 pm

    Oh such cute ending waiting for ur comback

  8. Ani on March 28, 2016 9:05 pm

    Cute and lovable story… But nvr thought tat u will end it soon…

  9. naimi on March 28, 2016 9:07 pm

    superbbb…….they are running away wid parents permission that’s awesome n i’l be waiting for another ff from my dea friend afra…

  10. kriya on March 28, 2016 9:12 pm

    what a awesome ending i loved it n u r an amazing writer n i hope u will come back soon with a new storyline……

  11. megha on March 28, 2016 9:12 pm

    Miss ur ff badly yaar

  12. illeana on March 28, 2016 9:47 pm

    I will miss ur ff . I loved it.
    Plz come soon with another season.

  13. Aarti on March 28, 2016 10:02 pm

    Superb it was nice ending and plzz come back soon

  14. Ragini on March 28, 2016 10:03 pm

    Thank you for a wonderful ff
    And waiting for season 2

  15. lovely on March 28, 2016 10:07 pm

    start another raglak story

  16. pratheeksha on March 28, 2016 10:10 pm

    OMG so cute love story..will definitely miss it alot

  17. Ammu on March 28, 2016 10:11 pm

    Happy ending and plz write another raglak ff

  18. Mitti on March 28, 2016 11:00 pm

    Wowwww jst awesome. ….It was soooo cute …..and indeed a cute ending. …plzzz come back soon

  19. anonymous on March 28, 2016 11:08 pm

    I was a silent reader but this episode n ur story compelled me to comment. It’s brilliant. I would be waiting for season 2 where raglak would be married and there would be more cute knok jhok like this.

  20. peggy on March 28, 2016 11:13 pm

    aap ita jldi update karte jare ho…mere favourite bnte jare ho..

  21. heena on March 29, 2016 12:08 am

    it was so cute yr lvd it plz come back wid new ff or season 2

  22. Ayesha on March 29, 2016 12:41 am

    very beautifully portrayed.. waiting for u next ff.

  23. Ruhani on March 29, 2016 7:02 am

    Y dr y did u end it so soon plz plz cme up with a new ff on raglak plz u r an awesome writer

  24. Riya on March 29, 2016 5:35 pm

    Really very cute?? N ur cute ending!Wow???Come up with another cute ff soon??Thanks for writing?

  25. asheeyana on March 30, 2016 2:58 pm

    Thank u everyone I will definitely come with another ff asap.

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