Swaragini starts from COLLEGE LIFE (Episode 1)

Hello guys this is my first fanfiction…i hope u all wil lik it n encourage me. Guys i need ur feedback n encouragement coz tis is the first tim so please help me.
It starts in RR college.

@ parking lot
Laksh will be sitting on his bike with his friends and was chatting…
There comes ragini in red salwar and loose hairs…books in her hand and she was coming with her…from cool breeze her hairs wer flying….laksh saw her and he felt a light music in his heart.
Laksh friend: arey..laksh wer r u looking at…bhai chalte hey…we r getting late for class…afterwards u carry on staring at tat gal….
Laksh: hey roni( frnd of laksh) who is tat gal she is so beautiful… wic class is she? Wic Department man…knw tat please for my sake….
Roni: first lets attend the class afterwards i wil giv info abt her…
Laksh: ok bhai chal abhi…

@ class…
Lecturer came inside the class bacame silent….
Lecturer came inside and started taking attendence…he called ragini…none answered… again he called….somone said sir here..from outside…
Yea its same ragini….saying sir here…

Omg….laksh was flying in his heart
Laksh: roni same gal here? How cum..??? Her name is ragini…she is a real beauty…
Roni: bhai cool down…i knw she is same gal bt…u plss control urself…

Lecturer started taking the class…in the mean time…laksh. was starring at ragini…
Laksh in mind: she is so beautiful… wow…yeah i luv her….bt i dnt knw anything abt her…i shud get to knw abt her n make her friendship first….i shud impress her…but how????????

Precap: laksh in maheshwari mansion…thinking abt ragini…and finding ways to impress her….

Guys please tell hows tis???… i need feedbacks…plsss encourage me frm ur comments.. please…
Yours lovingly..
Sritha