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Destiny vs love. (Thapki pyaar ki) Episode 5 Holi special

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Destiny vs. love. (Thapki pyaar ki) Episode 5 (Holi special)

Well guys, I seen some people comment on my ff, and most of them are my friends in real life. But if you do read my ff, please do comment, I will try my best to make this ff interesting for you. Hi guys I’m new aha. Well I’m going to try writing stories about Bihaan and Thapki and Tia and Karan 🙂 So please bear with me. I like many couples in Telly-wood. But I will start off with Thahaan and Tiran (Also known has zoya and asad from qubool hai). This story is nothing like the ongoing track. So enjoy a different twist in this Fan-Fiction. Also there will be more romantic couples in this ff I hope you will love them also aha! There are many characters in this ff. But I added three for now. I will add the rest between the paragraphs when a new name appears. Now I’m planning to do at least 80-90 episodes it depends. I’ll post every episode Fridays, Saturdays and Sundays. Just enjoy and read my episodes. Also don’t forget to comment. Btw Bihaan’s ex girlfriend is (Nia Sharma) most voted!

Beside Karan’s car (8pm)
Karan: Tia, listen to me
Tia: Stop following me
Karan: Tipto the troublemaker
Tia: Tipto??
Karan: Sometimes, you came to visit our family and you would bully me 24/7.
Tia: Ka-ka??
Karan: Stop calling me that
Tia: Oh, I get it now you wanted to take revenge from me because of our childhood problems. You’re so dumb, I swear to god.
Karan: Do you even know what you caused? You burned all my toys, you got me kicked out of school once and you made my pants fall in front on the whole neighbor hood. Oh wait, remember a few days ago you made me fall in the mud puddle and made everyone start laughing at me.
Tia: That was really funny but you’re selfish, always quiet and you would never talk
Karan breaks the car glass in anger and this shocks Tia. While he takes something out of his car.
Tia: Why did you do that?

Karan: Happy Holi, idiot
Tia: Oh my god, I hate you so much? See why I always bully you
Karan: No you don’t bully me, you get me in trouble
Tia: Wait, your hand is not bleeding
Karan: It’s called Karan Singh Rajput smartness, the best business man; I can do any move without anyone noticing. You see I had a glove on my hand with sharp spikes and also it’s red but its Holi color. Also fooling you is very easy.
Tia: Oh shut up that doesn’t even make any sense and you idiot ruined my clothes.
Karan: Excuse me, those clothes are mine, I gifted you for our “fake revenge date”
Tia: There pretty ugly anyways and I’ll take revenge for throwing color on me.
Karan: I will be waiting, foolish girl
Tia: Ugh, you make me so mad, bye Ka-ka
Karan: Wait
Karan pulls Tia and they are really close to each other (Mitwa Ishq ke pe plays) He apply holi on her face.
Karan: Just to let you know, I would never fall in love with someone who is so selfish like you (laughing evilly)
Tia makes a weird face at him but then
Tia (laughing): Oh my gosh, me for fall for you? You’re kidding me; I would never fall for someone like you anyways
Karan is watching her laugh and he smiles. She sticks her tongue out while dancing and leaves the place leaving Karan.
Karan (In mind): I feel weird around this girl, she’s full of happiness but why do I always feel horrible when she’s sad?

At Thapki’s house (8:30pm)
Poonam: Aditi? Thapki? Shubh?
Aditi: Yes Ma? What’s wrong?
Poonam: Remember tomorrow is Holi and also your Baba is coming back home tomorrow morning.
Aditi: Yes Ma I already know, all the preparations are happening outside of our house
Poonam: But we haven’t made any food for tomorrow?
Aditi: I can’t help you cook Ma; I am working on the preparations
Poonam: I know Aditi, that’s why I was going to ask you where Thapki is.
Aditi: I think she’s in her room
Poonam: Oh okay
Aditi: Okay Ma, I am going bye
Poonam: Shubh? Where you running of too?
Shubh: I am going to go help Aditi, I promised her
Poonam: Oh okay, but do you know where Thapki is?
Shubh: Yes Ma, she’s in her room
Poonam: Thank you Beta
Shubh: Could I go now Ma?
Poonam: Yes Beta be home by 9:30pm
Shubh: Okay Ma
In Thapki’s room

Thapki is sitting on her bed thinking about the insults that her family had to go through because of her wedding break ups. She’s starts crying.
Poonam: Thapki, Why are you crying?
Thapki: Ma, you’re here? Do you need something?
Poonam: First tell me, why are you crying Thapki?
Thapki: Ma, every time when I am about to get married my marriage breaks because of my stammering and you and Papa get insulted because of me. It hurts me every time and I can’t see another marriage break up so you and Papa get insulted again and again.
Poonam: Where did this topic even come from??
Thapki: I was going through my closet and saw my wedding dress and it hurts me every time.
Poonam: Thapki forget the past and move on. Now you have a job, you have your family and Tia’s help everywhere you go. I promise you Thapki one day you will find someone who will accept you just the way you’re.

Thapki: But how about that never happens?
Poonam: Destiny, you will realize it when you’re really close to someone and you will eventually fall in love with him. That’s why Destiny equals love.
Thapki: You’re right Ma; I’ll meet my soul mate by destiny.
Thapki gets up from her bed and goes near the window. She wipes her tears and looks at the stars. She closes her eyes and sees a guy and realizes that he will be my soul mate and everything in her life will change. She smiles
Poonam: Thapki?
Thapki: You’re right Ma; let’s go prepare food because tomorrow is Holi!
Poonam: That’s my Thapki; I just want you happy and please don’t be sad during Holi.
Thapki: I won’t Ma, Papa is coming back tomorrow morning too, I’m extremely happy.
Poonam: Okay, no more talking, we have so much work to do, let’s go Thapki
Thapki (in mind): I wish I can keep you all happy, and I always wish to fall in love with a guy who will take my hand and stand by my side, I’ll be waiting for that day.
Holi day at Pandey family’s house (In the morning)
Dhruv: This place look beautiful just like our childhood memories right Kiran?
Kiran: I know Bhai; this is why I love Holi
Dhruv: Kiran you have something on your face?
Kiran: Really? I just washed my face
Dhruv: No it’s something blue
Kiran: I just washed my face Bhai, wait I know what you’re planning to do.
Dhruv: Um I am not planning anything
Kiran: You’re trying to throw Holi on me

Dhruv: Wow you’re so smart
Kiran: You can’t throw Holi on me Bhai
Dhruv: Yes I can, here I come
Kiran starts running and Dhruv runs after her and she stops and bends down but the Holi falls on Bihaan. Dhruv and Kiran are shocked.
Kiran: We are so sorry Bihaan Bhai
Dhruv: You came out of nowhere, we didn’t see you
Bihaan: What’s wrong with you guys?
Dhruv and Kiran become quiet, but all of a sudden Bihaan starts laughing.
Bihaan: its Holi let’s enjoy it
Dhruv: Love the change in this Bihaan
Bihaan: Very funny Dhruv
Dhruv: No Mr. Pig it’s actually funny
Bihaan: Ya right, wait a minute did you just call me a pig?
Kiran: Bhai he did call you a pig
Bihaan: Oh really, now watch me
Dhruv: Oi Bihaan, don’t throw Holi on
Bihaan: Aye why you running, come back here
Kiran: Here we start again
All of a sudden Balvinder comes
Balvinder: Holi Mubarak, Kiran Beti
Kiran: Papa, when did you come, I missed you so much
Balvinder: I missed you too
Suman: Hello Kiran
Preeti: Hi Kiran
Kiran: Hi bhabis, Happy Holi

Suman: I am going to the kitchen, I’ll be right back
Preeti: Wait for me
Balvinder: Okay Beti, I’ll be right back, I’ve to go talk to Bihaan and Dhruv
Kiran: Okay Papa, I am going to see where Ma is
Kiran goes upstairs to see where her mother is, she is hiding Holi behind her hands so she can throw it on her
Kiran: Ma, happy holi!!!!
Vasu: You’re so childish and always will be my little doll
Kiran: I am know Ma (laughing)
Vasu: Happy Holi to you too Kiran Beti
Kiran: Let’s go Ma, the holi party is about to start
At Tia’s house
Tia is sitting down all alone at house and crying. She looks at her mom’s picture and starts asking questions.
Tia: Ma, today it’s Holi and every time I remember this day I wanna cry. Ma I really miss you, I haven’t found Papa yet. Why does everything bad happen to me? I saw you die right in front of me? Why did you leave? Why did god do this with me? Mummy and Mama took me in and took care of me. But how did that fire happen? Why can’t I find Papa? Why can’t I ever smile without you? Why do I fake to be happy? Ma one more thing I am wearing your favorite dress because you told me you wore this on your first Holi when you got a job and you were full of happiness. Today your daughter Tia Sharma will wear this beautiful dress for my mother. I love you Ma, I always will and I always have. (Tia is crying so much because she really loves her Mother.)
Thapki was standing by the door and cries seeing Tia in pain she wipes her tears and goes inside.
Thapki: Happy Holi Tia

Tia quickly wipes her tears so Thapki doesn’t notice it.
Tia: Hi Thapki, Happy Holi to you too, okay I am going to go change
Thapki: Wait, you can’t hide your pain from me, I am your best friend, I saw you crying, and you can’t say you don’t have a family here. You’re my sister and I am always here for you. If you die, I’ll have to die with my sister. You’re a part of my family. You can’t leave me and I can’t see you cry in front of me.
Tia cries even more and she gives a big hug to Thapki
Tia (crying): Oh Thapki, I love you so much my sister, thank you for always being here for me
Thapki(crying): I love you too my sister, okay no more crying now go change and let’s go celebrate Holi and you better not me sad because my family is your family.
Ten minutes later, Tia comes out wearing the dress that her mother wore on her first holi.
Tia: How do I look?? (In a sad tone)
Thapki: My sister looks beautiful has always, you know your mom is watching you; she’s really proud of you and always will be Tia.
Tia: Thanks Thapki (In a sad tone)
Thapki: Don’t be sad, let’s go celebrate Holi
Tia: Yes you’re right Thapki, let’s go celebrate Holi
Tia (in mind): I love you Ma, happy Holi Ma I miss you so much
At Thapki’s house
Poonam: Happy Holi Tia!!!

Tia: Happy Holi to you too Auntie
Aditi: HAPPY HOLI MY IDIOT
Tia: Happy Holi to you too my idiot
Krishnakanth: Happy Holi my Thapki and Aditi
Aditi and Thapki: Papa!!!!!!!!!!!
Aditi and Thapki hug their father and smile. Tia is standing there seeing the love in their family. She wishes if her Papa was alive. Tia was about to walk away but someone calls her.
Krishnakanth: Tia beti, come here you’re also my daughter and always have been
Tia gets emotional and hugs him and all of a sudden Shubh comes running out of nowhere. He throws Holi on all of them.
Shubh: Papa you’re back and happy holi
Krishnakanth: Happy Holi my Beta
Poonam: Now you guys go play Holi together
Aditi, Thapki, Tia and Shubh starts playing Holi with each other and Poonam and Krishnakanth get emotional.
Poonam: I am happy today Krishnakanth ji, today my daughters and son are happy, I wish our happiness stays like this.

Krishnakanth: I was always waiting for this moment. My family is very important for me.
Poonam: Let’s go play Holi with our family
Krishnakanth: Let’s go
Everyone was enjoying Holi and having fun all of a sudden Tia gets a call from someone.
Tia: Hello
Guy: Come to Rajput mansion right now
Tia tells Thapki she is leaving for a while.
At Rajupt Mansion
Tia comes to the Rajupt Mansion and sees many people playing Holi all of a sudden someone comes from behind.
Zina (Sangeeta Kapur) Tia’s Mummy and her Mama Anwar (Harsh Vashisht) come there.
Tia: Mummy!!! Mama??? (Hugging them so hard) I missed you so much, when did you come back from New York.
Zina: I came from New York yesterday to come visit you
Anwar: Your mummy was missing you so much; she wanted to see you badly
Tia: I missed you both so much. But wait what are you guys doing here?
Zina: Ria karan’s mother invited us she’s my old friend
Anwar: Oh look there she is
Ria: Hello Tia Happy Holi
Tia: Hello Auntie, Happy Holi to you too
Ria: Do you remember Neha?
Tia: Yes auntie just a bit, I’ve met you guys only for a couple of months
Ria: Where do you live??

Tia: I live in a small apartment
Ria: Do you live alone?
Tia: Yes auntie, but now my Mummy and Mama are back
Zina: Tia, I’ve to go back to New York today because I still have some important papers to fill out.
Anwar: Yes Tia, that’s why we want you to live with Ria jj for now.
Tia: Why Mama?? I can manage alone
Anwar: You already suffered enough from your past
Zina: Anwar, don’t bring up this, please
Tia: I am fine Mummy and Mama, I’ll manage.
Ria: Tia, you can live with us, you’re like a family to us
Zina: Tia just for two months I promise.
Tia: Okay Mummy if you insist.
Anwar: Okay Tia we have to leave, we will be back soon
Zina: You better me a good girl and please be nice with them. She’s a really nice friend of mine I know she can take care of you.
Tia: Okay Mummy

Zina and Anwar gives hugs and kisses to Tia and leave to New York.
Ria: Tia, are you going to be okay living here?
Tia: Yes, I’ll auntie
Ria: Neha come down
Neha: Coming Ma
Ria: Tia this is Neha my younger daughter
Tia: Hi Neha, I am Tia Sharma you must of heard my name, I am the superstar of India
Neha: Hi Tia, I remember you, we met once during the beach when we were children
Tia: Oh you do?
Neha: Yes, come let’s play Holi
Ria: Okay you guys play Holi, I need to talk to someone on the phone
Tia and Neha start playing Holi together and Neha starts chasing Tia, all of a sudden Tia bumps in to Karan and they both fall on the grass.
Karan: Well Tia you have finally moved in to my house
Tia: You live in this house?
Karan: No my ghost lives here
Tia: very funny, then she starts walking away from him and he pulls and applies Holi on her again
Karan: Happy Holi Tia (Bolna plays)
Tia takes a bucket fall of water and dumps it on his head
Karan: What the heck is wrong with you?
Tia: Happy Holi to you too, Ka-Ka
Karan, Tia, Neha and everyone else in the Rajput family was dancing and enjoying Holi.
At Thapki’s house
All of a sudden Thapki gets a call
Bihaan: Thapki come to my house right

Thapki: But why Bihaan Sir?
Bihaan: Because I said so
Thapki: But I don’t know where you live
Bihaan: oh that’s even better; I’ll text you how to get here
Thapki: Okay Bihaan sir, I am coming
Thapki was about to leave my Aditi stops her
Aditi: Where you going Dii?
Thapki: I am going to Bihaan sir’s house, I’ll be back soon
Aditi: Okay Dii
At Pandey family’s house
Thapki enters the Pandey Mansion
Dhruv: Hey Thapki what are you doing here?
Thapki: Bihaan sir called me
Dhruv: Oh okay and Happy Holi
Thapki: Thank you Dhruv sir and happy Holi to you too
Dhruv: Well all our staff is here so enjoy the Holi party
Thapki: Wait Dhruv sir do you know where Bihaan sir is?
Dhruv: I have no idea
All of a sudden Bihaan enters between their conversations
Bihaan: I am right here
Dhruv: There he is, Okay I’ve to go haha
Thapki: Oh okay and thank you
Bihaan: Thapki do you still have the evidence from yesterday?
Thapki: Yes I do but I left it at my house
Bihaan: Okay I need to talk to you, follow me
Bihaan and Thapki are hiding behind a tree.

Thapki: What happened Bihaan sir
Bihaan: You can’t tell anyone about the evidence thing or it will cause problems.
Thapki: Don’t worry sir I won’t tell anyone
Bihaan: Thank you
Thapki: By the way happy Holi Bihaan sir
Bihaan: Happy Holi to you too Thapki
All of a sudden someone pushes Thapki and the tree while running and thapki and Bihaan fall on the ground and a bunch of flower peddles fall from the tree. Thapki and Bihaan are staring at each other for exactly a minute ( Sapna Jahan plays)
Thapki and Bihaan get up
Bihaan: This is why I hate Holi
Thapki: Ouch my hand is bleeding
Bihaan: Oh god that’s a bad cut, come inside I’ll bandage it for you
Thapki: No it’s okay, I’ve to go home
Bihaan: You want that hand to get infected??
Thapki: No, I’ll do it when I get home
Bihaan: Geez you’re stubborn, just come with me
Bihaan takes Thapki into his house and looks for the aid box he makes her sit on the sofa and bandages her hand (Janam Janam plays) Thapki says ouch because her hand is paining and Bihaan blows on it
Bihaan: There it’s fully bandaged.
Thapki: Thank you Bihaan sir

Bihaan: Anytime
Thapki: Okay Bihaan sir, I am leaving
Bihaan: Why don’t you join the Holi Party?
Thapki: I can’t sir my family is waiting for me
Bihaan: Okay then, you want me to drop you off?
Thapki: No it’s okay I’ll take the auto
Bihaan: Okay see you at the office at 9am sharp tomorrow
Thapki: Okay sir, bye
Thapki was wearing high heels and was about to fall while leaving but Bihaan catches (Na na re plays)
Bihaan: Watch your steps not every guy is going to catch you on the streets
Thapki: Sorry, I didn’t see that (in an angry tone)
Bihaan: Nah its fine
Dhruv: Bihaan you coming Papa is calling you
Bihaan: Coming Dhruv
Thapki: Okay bye sir
Bihaan: Bye Thapki see at the office tomorrow
Ten minutes later Bihaan and his family are enjoying Holi inside their before the party ends and someone enters the house. It was a girl with long hair, she was wearing a nice blue dress and she was a tall girl pretty girl. They hear the girl calling Bihaan’s name. So they turn around to see who it is and the family was shocked. But Bihaan was extremely shocked.
Episode ends

Recap: Bihaan is extremely shocked to see his ex girlfriend Tanya. Meanwhile Karan and Tia are fighting in the middle of the road but suddenly Tia gets dizzy and faints. Lastly Thapki gets a phone call and is shocked to hear the news.
Will Bihaan’s ex girlfriend add some twist in the upcoming episodes?
Why do you think Karan and Tia are fighting?? What was the cause of her fainting?
Why do you think Thapki is shocked?
Will Tanya bring Bihaan and Thapki together and make destiny into love?
Will Karan and Tia’s love story go ahead in their lives?

Well you have to watch Destiny vs love!! And wait for the answers. So guys this is my fifth episode. It is nothing like the actual ongoing track at all. I hope you like this different track and twist in the story. Trust me the story will get better then the first episode. By the way, I’m sorry if I don’t write many Hindi words it’s because I am not from India, I am from England but I do watch so many Indian dramas aha! I hope I get to know each one of you through this ff. But please comment any idea and no harsh comment. Also keep in mind this is nothing like the ongoing track!!. Enjoy for now my lovely friends

(By the way, if you’re reading this ff, please do comment your ideas and how is the story going for you.)

Btw I’ll post the next episode on Friday March 25th 2016 or Saturday March 26th 2016. But till then please bear with me if I can’t. Till then bye ((:

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120 Comments

  1. Sunehri on March 23, 2016 3:38 pm

    Wow super episode nusz. .. I’m waiting for the next episode 🙂

    • Nusz on March 23, 2016 9:54 pm

      Thank you sunehri :>

  2. Fatarajo on March 23, 2016 3:46 pm

    Awesome yaar your ff is too good I m a big fan of your ff it’s just that i m too lazy to comment 😛 and I am a big fan of thahaan and also asya thanks for recreating asya magic via tiran

    • Nusz on March 23, 2016 9:56 pm

      I happy you’re enjoying my story. Thank you so much for reading it fatarajo :> and honestly your stories are my favorite too.

  3. Bihaan on March 23, 2016 4:45 pm

    It was nice episode but plz , dont show their individual family drama….and only focus on thahaan and tiran

    • Nusz on March 23, 2016 9:58 pm

      Bihaan, reasons why I show family is because they are important. This ff is going To be pretty long. In the upcoming episodes there will be more scenes of thahaan and tiran and thank you for always commenting :>

  4. Sanjana on March 23, 2016 4:48 pm

    Awsm epis dear!! Reaalyy enjoyed it..:):)i reaaly miss asya..

    • Nusz on March 23, 2016 10:15 pm

      Thank you Sanjana!!! :> Same here!!! I loved them so much.

  5. Saya on March 23, 2016 4:54 pm

    Hi nusz. I had commented on the p promo but I guess I was too late. I would like it if you read that too. I don’t wanna write the same thing here. And the epi is nice. Mummy and mama?? Do you mean mami and mama? As her mom is already dead.

    • Nusz on March 23, 2016 10:17 pm

      Yes I seen, I’ll change that up from episode 6. Sorry about that and thank you for commenting and supporting me. Also Yes I call it Mummy and Mama, I am actually born in Canada and raised in England. So England we actually talk like that. But In my upcoming episodes I’ll fix that mistake up.

  6. Shruti on March 23, 2016 4:59 pm

    Wow!!! Superb ep.waiting eagerly fr nxt ep?

    • Nusz on March 23, 2016 10:17 pm

      Thank you so much Shruti!!! :> You’re always supporting me, thank you very much.

  7. zuha (Asya fan ) on March 23, 2016 5:11 pm

    I am not a big Thahaan fan but a big lover of Asya or TiRan so I love it dear.And for ur questions all answers of mine are positive☺

    • Nusz on March 23, 2016 10:18 pm

      Thank you Zuha!!!! Always supporting me, you’re an awesome friend!!! :>

    • Zuha (Asya fan) on March 24, 2016 12:35 am

      Thnx to u that u regularly read my FF of Asya and bear with me and my story and bearing me is an impossible thing even oftenly my BFF is fed up of me coz of my stupid nature coz whenever I write a ep. It is my habbit to call her and she is a v.practical personality and me full of WOW emotions and whenever someone qs.our friendship so we reply”OPPOSITE ATRRACTS!”

    • Zuha (Asya fan) on March 24, 2016 12:36 am

      HAPPY HOLI!!

    • Nusz on March 24, 2016 12:47 am

      Loll Zuha, just like my bff Milly were friends in real life. We both are from England so it’s hard too. So she uses my account and I use hers sometimes. But you’re my bff too :>

    • Nusz on March 24, 2016 12:47 am

      Happy Holi to you aha!!

    • Nusz on March 24, 2016 1:39 am

      Thanks Zuha me and Milly are friends in real life and we both love you story a lot.

    • Zuha (Asya fan) on March 24, 2016 1:59 am

      So sweet of u and happy holi dear frnd!

    • Nusz on March 24, 2016 4:29 am

      your*

    • Nusz on March 24, 2016 5:05 am

      Thanks again Zuha!!! You rock

  8. payal on March 23, 2016 5:41 pm

    asum one.

    • Nusz on March 23, 2016 10:18 pm

      Thank you Payal :>

  9. pooja prabha on March 23, 2016 9:04 pm

    Nice……..HAPPY HOLI DEAR FRIEND.

    • Nusz on March 23, 2016 10:19 pm

      Thank you Pooja and Happy Holi to you too :>

  10. Maya on March 23, 2016 10:24 pm

    love the stry yaar…..

    • Nusz on March 23, 2016 11:33 pm

      Thanks maya :>

  11. Maya on March 23, 2016 10:25 pm

    I love family bonding…. and llove tiran and thahaan…they cte couples…..

    • Nusz on March 23, 2016 11:33 pm

      Thank you so much.

  12. Maya on March 23, 2016 10:26 pm

    can’t wait nxt epi…. love your stry yaar… very much…..

    • Nusz on March 23, 2016 11:34 pm

      Thanks maya thank you so much :>

  13. Maya on March 23, 2016 10:27 pm

    Happy Holi to you…..nuszz….

    • Nusz on March 23, 2016 11:35 pm

      Thanks maya. Happy holi to you too.

  14. Vennila on March 23, 2016 11:57 pm

    Nice..

    • Nusz on March 24, 2016 12:12 am

      Thanks vennila.!

  15. rafay don kon on March 24, 2016 12:22 am

    Osum?

    • Nusz on March 24, 2016 12:43 am

      Thank you so much Rafay :>

  16. Milly on March 24, 2016 12:36 am

    OKAY, BAE THIS STORY IS INTENSE LOVE IT SO MUCHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

    • Nusz on March 24, 2016 12:44 am

      you’re so high Milly, but thanks :>

  17. Milly on March 24, 2016 12:37 am

    NOW I CAN’T WAIT FOR THE NEXT EPISODE XDDDDDDDXDXDXD

    • Nusz on March 24, 2016 12:44 am

      Lol you will just have to wait aha.

  18. Milly on March 24, 2016 12:37 am

    BY THE WAY HOW LONG ARE YOU MAKING THIS STORY??

    • Nusz on March 24, 2016 12:45 am

      I told you at school remember and I posted it on here, I am making at 80-95 episodes, I am not sure yet but be shorter or longer. But you have to wait Milly.

  19. Milly on March 24, 2016 12:38 am

    HOW MANY EPISODES ARE YOU MAKING???? XD

    • Nusz on March 24, 2016 12:45 am

      I just told you loll

  20. Milly on March 24, 2016 12:39 am

    ALSO I WAS THINKING YOU SHOULD CHANGE YOUR NAME NA TO THAPKI AND TIA PYAAR KI

    • Nusz on March 24, 2016 12:48 am

      Oh my god, you’re commenting so much, That seems like a nice idea. I will think about it.

  21. Milly on March 24, 2016 12:40 am

    BUT IT’S YOUR CHOICE, JUST GIVING MY IDEA LIKE YOU SAID XD

    • Nusz on March 24, 2016 12:48 am

      Okay Loll

  22. Milly on March 24, 2016 12:40 am

    LOVE YOU STORY BAE AND CAN’T WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE XD

    • Nusz on March 24, 2016 12:49 am

      Aaha

  23. Milly on March 24, 2016 12:41 am

    AND HAPPY HOLI TO EVERYONE ON HERE AND NUSZZ

    • Nusz on March 24, 2016 12:49 am

      You too Milly AHA :>

  24. Milly on March 24, 2016 12:53 am

    Allah, I will stop commenting now XD, I spam people so much XD

    • Nusz on March 24, 2016 4:25 am

      Lol

  25. sanam on March 24, 2016 12:55 am

    Yaar… love the story… keep it up..

    • Nusz on March 24, 2016 4:26 am

      Thank you sanam :>

  26. sanam on March 24, 2016 12:56 am

    and happy Holi pyaari frind…

    • Nusz on March 24, 2016 4:26 am

      Happy Holi to you too Sanam.

  27. NINNNAAAA on March 24, 2016 1:34 am

    I LOVE YOU STORYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYM SO MUCH

    • Nusz on March 24, 2016 4:26 am

      Thank you Ninaaa for commenting on my story.

  28. NINNNAAAA on March 24, 2016 1:34 am

    I AM GOING TO BEAT LORENA ON THE COMMENTS, SO I GOING TO DO TWENTY COMMENTS STRAIGHT XX

    • Nusz on March 24, 2016 4:27 am

      Oh wow, good luck

  29. NINNNAAAA on March 24, 2016 1:35 am

    WELL I READ YOUR STORY ITS GOOD, BUT I NEVER WATCHED HINDI SHOWS IN MY LIFE ONLY HEARD SONGS, BUT YOUR STORY IS LIKE A ACTUALLY SONG AND A MOVIE

    • Nusz on March 24, 2016 4:29 am

      It’s okay and thank you very much, there is better ff then mines, you should try some out and read them too, You should try reading Zuha’s or sunehri ff it’s really good. There’s many more I’ll send you links later okay!.

  30. NINNNAAAA on March 24, 2016 1:37 am

    I LOVE YOU NUSS YOUR STORY ROCKS

  31. NINNNAAAA on March 24, 2016 1:37 am

    THEY BETTER POST ALL MY COMMENTS I HATE WHEN THEY DIDNT LAST TIME

  32. NINNNAAAA on March 24, 2016 1:40 am

    MY NUS STORY ROCKS

  33. NINNNAAAA on March 24, 2016 1:40 am

    LOVE YOU SO MUCH

  34. NINNNAAAA on March 24, 2016 1:41 am

    ME AND LORENA BOTH DOING THIS FOR YOU SO YOU CAN GET TO 100 COMMENTS

  35. NINNNAAAA on March 24, 2016 1:41 am

    THEY HAVE TO READ YOUR BAUTIFUL STORY

    • Nusz on March 24, 2016 6:05 am

      Thanks, there is better stories then mine.

  36. NINNNAAAA on March 24, 2016 1:41 am

    AND ALSO GOOD LUCK

  37. NINNNAAAA on March 24, 2016 1:44 am

    LOVE YOUR STORY

  38. NINNNAAAA on March 24, 2016 1:44 am

    I AM GOING TO WIN LORENA

  39. NINNNAAAA on March 24, 2016 1:45 am

    YOU ROCK

  40. arruu on March 24, 2016 1:50 am

    AWESOM NUSZ. KEEP IT UP

    • Nusz on March 24, 2016 6:32 am

      Thank you Aruuuuu

  41. NINNNAAAA on March 24, 2016 1:55 am

    I love this story very much

  42. NINNNAAAA on March 24, 2016 1:56 am

    SO PLEASE MAKE IT LONG

    • NINNNAAAA on March 24, 2016 2:01 am

      This website

  43. NINNNAAAA on March 24, 2016 1:58 am

    SHOULD

  44. NINNNAAAA on March 24, 2016 1:58 am

    POST

  45. NINNNAAAA on March 24, 2016 1:58 am

    MINE AND LORENAS COMMENTS

  46. NINNNAAAA on March 24, 2016 2:01 am

    Why are they posting my comments xx

  47. NINNNAAAA on March 24, 2016 2:02 am

    Well its Holi everyone!! xx

    • Nusz on March 24, 2016 6:05 am

      Yep aha.

  48. NINA'S (VER) on March 24, 2016 2:04 am

    Love this name better xx

  49. NINA'S (VER) on March 24, 2016 2:05 am

    I really hate the color green

  50. NINA'S (VER) on March 24, 2016 2:07 am

    Well good luck with your story xx

    • Nusz on March 24, 2016 5:01 am

      Thank you very much, but this is a lot of comments, you’re spamming a lot lol. but thank you so much and also I don’t see Lorena’s comments.

  51. NINA'S (VER) on March 24, 2016 2:07 am

    Can’t wait till who falls for who xx

  52. Nahiiiii on March 24, 2016 7:09 am

    SISSY I love it a lot

    • Nusz on March 24, 2016 7:29 am

      Thanks Nahii!!! and episode 6 will be out soon!!!

  53. Nahiiiii on March 24, 2016 7:09 am

    Can’t wait for the next episode sissy

  54. Nisi on March 24, 2016 8:04 am

    Nice episode ……! I like it,

    • Nusz on March 24, 2016 8:59 am

      Thank you so much Nisi!!!!~ :>

  55. Sarika Shah on March 24, 2016 8:08 am

    Oh ma god….its awesome Nusz…seriously i loved it … 🙂
    Keep rocking Friend u r aawesome…
    cant wait 4 the nxt episode!!!!!

    • Nusz on March 24, 2016 8:59 am

      Thank you so much Sarika :> I love your ff too. Thank you for commenting and supporting me~!!!

  56. santhosh on March 24, 2016 10:57 am

    Superb………
    Waiting for next FF. …

    • Nusz on March 24, 2016 6:37 pm

      Thanks santhosh

  57. Miya on March 24, 2016 11:43 am

    It is so gud

    • Nusz on March 24, 2016 6:37 pm

      Thanks Miya :>

  58. Miya on March 24, 2016 11:43 am

    Nice

    • Nusz on March 24, 2016 6:38 pm

      Thanks again

  59. Miya on March 24, 2016 11:44 am

    Nice waiting for next

  60. Miya on March 24, 2016 11:44 am

    Nice waiting for next.

  61. priya tripathi on March 24, 2016 2:13 pm

    Nice nusz sorry i had never read this but i like ur ff

    • Nusz on March 24, 2016 6:36 pm

      Thank you priya, for reading my ff. Hope to see more comments of yours.

  62. Malika on March 24, 2016 2:30 pm

    Soo nice waiting for next part…

    • Nusz on March 24, 2016 6:36 pm

      Thank you Malika.

  63. Abhi on March 25, 2016 8:39 am

    Superb yaar..??

    • Nusz on March 25, 2016 9:47 am

      Thank you so much Abhi!!! :>

  64. Sindhu rm on March 25, 2016 10:28 am

    Nice i read all your episodes nice loved it

    • Nusz on March 25, 2016 11:09 am

      Thank you so much Sindhu rm!!!

  65. Sarika Shah on March 25, 2016 8:04 pm

    Superb yaar 🙂

    • Nusz on March 26, 2016 1:44 am

      Thank you again Sarika~Nusz

  66. mahria on March 25, 2016 11:28 pm

    Amazing expressing ii

    • Nusz on March 26, 2016 1:45 am

      Thank you Mahria~nusz

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