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Home»Fan Fiction Original»You are Mine Ch. 23
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You are Mine Ch. 23

administratorBy administratorMarch 5, 201621 Comments3 Mins Read
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“Surpriseeeee” Nivin hugged Aisha. She was still looking the same ‘surprised’.

“Hey, aishu won’t u invite me to ur home?” Nivin smacked her head.she smacked back him..

“I won’t. .u were Zayn’s guest. .right zayn? ” she gave me a glare.I nodded and went to hug Nivin. “Yeah bro, welcome to my home”

Aisha made coffee and snacks for us.we chated for a while.

“Now go ans freshen up nivi..u r smelling bad” Aisha said while covering her nose.

“Aishu, don’t do that..u very well know what will I do if u cover ur nose like that” Nivin got up from his seat..Aisha ran to our room and locked the door. She was laughing hard.I didn’t understand anything.

“Its nothing bro..when we were in college Aisha came to watch my football match.and my team won the match..I was super happy. I rushed to Aisha to hug her but she cover her nose and said “nivi u r smelling bad and u r sweat too..chee” I cut him off “then???” “then I wiped my sweat in her clothes. .now we r equal..she too smells bad”

“Oh that’s why she run” Nivin nodded a yes.

“We will have our dinner from outside” I told Nivin as I lead him to guest room.

—–

We went to have our dinner. We were looking for non veg restaurant and Aisha veg..finally we gave up and went to vegetarian restaurant. .

Whenever I and Nivin talked while eating aisha slapped our hand.

Nivin’s pov

Dinner was awesome after one whole month..I really missed aisha a lot..she was happy with Zayn. .co of zayn she became my old aishu.a girl was sitting in next table to us.she was staring us.maybe we three annoyed her..I went to wash room after our dinner. .when I was coming from wash room I met the same girl..her eyes were ocean blue, golden hair and she was wearing he pottu (bindi) I was surprised.she smiled at me and forwarded her hand to shake.

“Eva..Eva Stewart” I shook her hand and said “Nivin. .Nivin Iyyer” oh god did I just imitate her??? No no..she is smiling. .

“Malayali analle? “(U r a malayali?/keralite)literally my jow dropped on the floor. .coz her Malayalam was perfect then Zayn’s malayalam.

“How do u know Malayalam” I managed to ask

“I was in Kerala for two years and I love kerala and malayalies” she was happy when saying this.we bide by after getting few about each other.Eva was a school teacher.she is teaching in an Indian school.

About my job Zayn already appointed me in his dad’s company. It is another surprise for Aisha.

♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
Yippeee one more chapter is done..

Some questions are here for u..please answer meeee

1-What do u think about Eva?
2-did u like the chapter?
3-which name is good for Aisha+Zayn=Zaysha or Aiza?

Credit to:Ruby_Ryan

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21 Comments

  1. suraj on March 5, 2016 10:17 pm

    u did a grt job by soo many chaps together….i read 5 chapters just nw all together…seems like a movie….abt d pairs aiza is good name n eva is good fr nivi…let both get married n stay in d same city as aiza….thnx so much fr updatng….missed ur ff s vry much …..

  2. suraj on March 5, 2016 10:25 pm

    u did a grt job by soo many
    chaps together….i read 5 chapters just
    nw all together…seems like a
    movie….abt d pairs aiza is good name n
    eva is good fr nivi…let both get married
    n stay in d same city as aiza….thnx so
    much fr updatng….missed ur ff s vry
    much …..

  3. nishi on March 5, 2016 10:29 pm

    Zaysha di …it’s sound cuter. Eva could be Nivin’s mate!!

  4. sarah on March 5, 2016 11:32 pm

    Hey……ithaa….Spr???
    I dnt knw y ,I cmntd bfre they dnt pstd….I mssd u nd ua stry….I red all remaining epi tday…

  5. sarah on March 5, 2016 11:34 pm

    It’s me faima…ma real name s Sarah faima

    • Ruby_Ryan on March 6, 2016 12:48 am

      oh it is u my cutie pie..I thought who is this new girl calling me itha. .coz only u calls me itha..lv u dr..I missed u

  6. rishi on March 5, 2016 11:40 pm

    Nice episode ruby Eva pair of vini ok that’s gud idea .”pottu” means ? wat is tis meaning I think tis is “bottu” it’s Telugu na right

    • Ruby_Ryan on March 6, 2016 12:49 am

      mera matlab bindi tha..

  7. suraj on March 6, 2016 12:16 am

    u did a grt job by soo many
    chaps together….i read 5 chapters just
    nw all together…seems like a
    movie….

  8. suraj on March 6, 2016 12:17 am

    abt d pairs aiza is good name n
    eva is good fr nivi…let both get married
    n stay in d same city as aiza

  9. suraj on March 6, 2016 12:19 am

    thnx so
    much fr updatng….missed ur ff s vry
    much …..

  10. Ruby_Ryan on March 6, 2016 12:25 am

    next chapter is also sent. now I am writing chapter 25.thnq so much suraj

  11. suraj on March 6, 2016 12:30 am

    wow thts gud.

  12. Ananya on March 6, 2016 1:03 am

    Ruby it was a nic episode… I love yo see Eva pairing with Nivi.. And I think i like Aiza more than zaysha.. So ruby u r gonna end this story soon..?? Loved this story..

  13. Hayathi on March 6, 2016 8:27 am

    Superrr yaarrrr

  14. Lakshmi on March 6, 2016 9:43 am

    Superb episode ruby. Aiza name will be good. I think Eva n nivin will make good pair.luv u..tc..

  15. Nive... on March 6, 2016 2:23 pm

    Just now i read all the 5 epi… all epis are?? ?? ?? ?? superb…

  16. Ruby_Ryan on March 6, 2016 6:26 pm

    thnq so much dears…love u all. I am little busy with my cousin’s Nikkah

  17. sarah on March 6, 2016 6:28 pm

    Aiza…….

  18. Sindhu K S V on March 6, 2016 9:53 pm

    Awesome episode dear…

  19. Roma on March 9, 2016 11:44 pm

    Loved the epi. ..awesome story. …loved Eva n nivin pair…zaysha or aiza…both lovely….love you loads

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