Hello people..I’m back with another episode of Samjhota…Swaragini ka…
Swara wakes up and sees that Sanskar has already left for office…she checks her medicine box and finds out that her medicines r finished……she is about to call Sanskar when she remembers something…..their wedding….
Swara:No…I can’t deisturb him for evry single issue…he is already doing so much..Sanskar…….u,Ragini and Laksh were my life…..U were my best friend..Ragini my sister and Laksh…my love…..but he left me….at that time u held my hand…..I still remember the day I got married to Laksh…everything was so perfect..we were living like every other perfect couple….and then………
FB…
Swara:Laksh….I’m pregnant…..
Laksh:What?
Swara:Aren’t u happy? We r going to be parents…..u dad me mom…..our baby…..I’m so happy…
Laksh;Swara…..see….its not even 6 months of our marriage…we r not ready for such a huge resposnsibily….
Swara:What r u saying Laksh?
Laksh:I don’t want this child….
Swara:Laksh?
Laksh:See Swara…I don’t have any interest in this parenthood….I’m Lucky……i need to enjoy my life….and this child…..we r going to plan it after 3-4 years….not now…
Swara:I don’t believe this Laksh…..
FB ends…
Swara;I never imagined that u would change so much…..u forced me for abortion…..how could u being the father of the child? When family members tried to stop u….u even opposed them……Ma(Ap) got so angry on u and she threatened u to throw u out for the house…..and u…u left the house…..Laksh…..u were jobless…u were living in your dad’s money….still I married u thinking that u’ll be able to take my responsibility….u will change…but the way u change…..its unbelievable..i went against my mom and dad and married u and u….when mom threw u out of the house…..i was worried for u….i got to know that u r staying with your friend….I went to your friend’s place….i was feeling sorry for u that’s why I went there…but what I saw there was a shock…..u were……u were romancing with a girl…..how could u forget your family,wife and child in 2 day?I was broken…….when I confronted u ….u asked me to get out of your life…u considered me the reason of u being separated from your family…..u went to US…leaving your family and your pregnant wife…..to give my child a name….Sanskar married me…..no actually family members got us married….I will soon get out of Sanskar’s life..I can’t destroy his life for my sake…..he has his own life….i can never love him…and he knows that…..i will free him from this relation as soon as possible…..
The scene shifts to Ragini…..
Rags pov..
I always loved u Sanskar….i love u love u and will love u…I know that u r my jiju now…but I can’t do anything….u married my sister as I ask u to marry her…what could I have done? When that Laksh left my sister…she was shattered….and pregnant too….i didn’t want my sister or her child to face any problem in future…so I asked u to marry her……Laksh used to be my best friend….i still can’t believe that he can do such a thing….he loved Swara from childhood…I knew it…how could he do this to my sister? I’m sorry Sanskar..I’m really sorry Sanskar…..
Sanskar’s point of view…(Office)
U asked me to marry Swara and I married her….she is my bestfriend…..i chose friendship over love…..but how can I stop loving the girl who only lives for others? Ragini…I’m sorry..I’ll never be able to love Swara…cause I only love u……
Someone knocks on his door…
San:Come in…
A girl:Sir…your wife has come to meet u….
Sanskar:Swara? Whats she doing here? Ask her to come in…
Afetr sometime…
Swara:Hello Sanky…
Sanky;Hi….u here?
Swara:U didn’t take your lunch box…and I know that u don’t like to eat anything from outside….u love homemade food..thats why I bought it…
Sanky:Okay…..thank u Shona….
Swara:Hay….shona…..u don’t call me by that name since we got married……thanks for making me realize that u r still my idiot, duffer boring friend Sanky…..
Sanky;Accha…I’m idiot..aur tu?
Swara:Idiot ki dost…..(Swara starts laughing)
Sanky:Sudregi nehi na?
Swara:Agar ham sudhar gaye toh tum bigar jayo ge….btw…I bought chocolate pastries as well…
Sanskar:For me or yourself?
Swara makes a funny face:Vey funny….(She takes some cream from the cake and puts it in his nose…)
Sanskar:Swara….
Sanskar even puts the cake in her face….
Swara starts feeling dizzy..
Sanskar;R u okay? Shona? Shona?
Swara:I can’t bear the smell of chocolate partry….
Sanskar:So sorry yar….
Sanskar takes a tissue and cleans Swara’s face….Swara makes a funny face…
Sanskar;Sorry…
Swara:Its ok….
Sanskar goes to the washroom to clean his face….
Swara to herself:What did u think Sanskar? I won’t know that u love my Ragini? Its my bad luck I didn’t know this before our marriage…or else..i wouldn’t had married u…..
FB is shown…..Sanskar and Swara r married…..Rags came to MM house….Rags was talking to Sanskar when Swara heard everything….
Rags:Sanskar,thank u so much for marrying my sister..
San:Ragini…she is my bestie…..i can do anything for her…..
Rags:Thanks..and yes….please don’t…ever say this to her the..
San:I love u…..no worries…i won’t tell her…cause if she knows this then she will be broken….she will curse herself and think that she has separated us……
Rags:Please forget me…cause u r now my sister’s husband….
San:Will u be able to accept me as your jiju?
Rags has no answer..she runs from there Swara hides…..
FB ends….
Swara:Now Mr Sanskar Maheshwari…I’ll fix your love life….I’ll bring your Ragini back to u…..cause I know I painful it is to get separated from your love…..
Precap:Moments…..
Hey guys…why r u guys so disappointed that I wrote on swasan? I’m trying something new….I keep on telling that my ffs r based on each and every couple……No worries…..a hint for everyone..I never said that this is swasan and Raglak…point to be noted…I hate the couple of Raglak……
89 Comments
Interesting… Love SwaSan..
Want to see them together… Continue soon…
Tq Anu…but I love both swalak and swasan…
Awesome…
TQ dolly
So idiot Swasan or ragasan
sooo nice
Tq naimi
Yippppiieee. Im soooo happy. I now knw ur gonna make ragsan together. My guess was right on first epi. Thank. Even I dont like raglak hate them and also swasan I hate
Thanks Lila..but please don’t say anything against swasan cause I love their couple….
Eva…I really love u…u just amazing.. I am so happy today…
As usual I opened ur ff,i thought it will be swasan,but started reading bcz u know na I just love ur story line more than the pairs..but when I read its last part..specially swaras mission to join ragsan… I was in shock.. Truely …u turned whole story in single second… U r just amazing dear..keep writing… I eagerly waiting for your next episode… Have a great day…
Love u too Joona…tbh I’m still confused about the pairs….btw what r u presently in? As in r u a student or into some profession? Sorry if it is too personal…Generally asking cause u r my friend…
Of course dear u r my friend (I really mean it)..u can ask me any questions.. I don’t mind… I am a student.. In fact completed+2and studying for medical entrance.. And also I am a classical dancer…what about u dear?
Dear I gave my fb Id on 22nd episode of ur ff I hate u too..plz sent me a friend request or say ur fb Id..I will send it…
Eva…I want to say one more thing… I went through ur comments… I saw u r going to make a vote section.. Then it is clear that swasan will win..I think u need to take a discission of urs..I saw a idea that ,pair swara with a new entry… It will be great.. I also don’t like raglak yaar…I didn’t mean to hurt you or anyone… If I hurt anyone plz forgive me..
Joona…in that case I should be calling u di…cause I’m 8th grader….and yes I’ll add u..Jodha siyad right?
Dear..this time I’m kinda sure that swalak is going to win cause swalak fans read my ff more…
Ya
Ya ..I am waiting if swalak and ragsan win..I will be the happiest person..
Worst situation in a family
Dont separate ragsan
Dear…i’m very confused…I am tensed right now cause I don’t feel like disappointing anyone….
Hey Eva .i have always been silent reader .
Plz can you make it swasan itself.bcz I love swasan more than ragsan
To be honest I haven’t decided the pairs…and I’ll be doing a voting in my next episode…so that I don’t disappoint anyone……
If u don’t mind can u pair ragini with some others hero other then sanskar or laksh. It my opinion don’t take me wrong I loved ragsan or raglak.
That’s a nice idea Maya.L…I’ll think about it….
Hi Eva its nyc n cool n yaevn i hate raglak pair but m a diehard swasan n sanky fan
I love Swasan too…but the thing is I really hate raglak..I don’t know the reason….if I show swasan then I have to show raglak….and that’s kinda irritating for me…no worries…I’ll do a voting on my next episode about the pairs…..
Plz make it swasan
I’ll try dear…
Thnx for trying… actually I am very big fan of swasan bt don’t know why I cant see ragSan together…. Other wise I like raglak…. even I can c swalak bt nt ragSan…. I m just suggesting… its ur ff… do what you think will be best ???
Superb
Tq Aarti..
Wow…awesum epi…watevr u mk..i wl read it
Thanks Bisha…
Plz make it swasan
I’ll try Ayesha…
so its ragsan fanfiction. plz join them i am a big fan of ragsan i hate laksh
I like all the couples accept for raglak but I’ll do a voting next episode…..so if raglak wins then I have to write on them…..
Awesome dear..
TQ renu..
I am swasan fan, but after reading ur story I want ragsan to be together, plz make them together.
And one more request if only it is possible, don’t bring laksh for swara again, u can bring someone new. And later lucky should see swara and her partner together very happy and should realize his mistake.
I am sorry, if I had hurt u, but whatever was in my mind, I said it.
Coming to ur current track it was wonderful, full of emotions, amazing, superb. U nailed it.
🙂
Your words haven’t hurt me at all dear…I liked your idea..I’ll definitely think about your idea….and thanks…
I liked the idea of tania…
Eva….so its not raglak…Then pls make RAGSAN na…They love eachother…plsss…a humble request..i think it will be a misunderstanding of swara that laksh has an affair with someone else…there might be some thing like that na…its just my guess,…
Ragsan couple is awesome…but I need to think about it…as my previous ffs were also about Ragsan…..
Awesome.. pls don’t separate ragsan
Thanks and I’ll try….
Thnks god its swalak and ya join ragsan and yaaa take sometime to join swalak
I’m still confused on the pairs….and if it is swalak then it will take time to unite them….
osmmmmm
ragsan
Ragsan fan right?
Yippeeee……at least it’s not raglak…..so I still have hope that may be it becomes swalak and ragsan……
Just fingers crossed for that….I thought that it’s a time to bid a good bye to ur ff….but again I have got hope to read it……u know Eva never told u that I’m more than mad for ur ff…..u r in class 8 but writes better than all those SaaS bahu serials writers….keep the good work always………and keep posting more episodes
Never thought that il post such Long comment…..
Aww…u r comparing me with expert serial writers……that’s a big appreciation for me…..thank u so much….shloka…:)
Superb twist..unit ragsan, swalak asap
I’ll try doing that dear…
Yaar please dont make swalak. Aur please bring new hero for swara . Hate this laksh
I’ll think about it Noor….do u hate Laksh for the present track of swaragini?
i really at first felt so sorry for him
but after seeing laksh in the current track i hate him sooo much
Hi eva. I am fan of your fanfiction. But i have one request please don’t make swalak and ragsan as couple. just only love swasan . I want to give you a suggestion you should make laksh realise his mistake and make him fall for ragini. Ya i hate laksh for present track in serial. And please think about the suggestion
I liked your suggestion dear…thanks…
Can u pls make it swasan…pls..pls…pls..
I’ll try…dear not sure…
Eva!! I don’thave anything against Swalak…But hate this Laksh!!!
I am a huge fan of Swasan…But Urs is the only Swalak story ive ever read…So will continue to read this as well…But just one request…No LAKSH…Put some other hero, Pleasse
Okay dear..I’ll think about it….
superbb dear ….
TQ dear..
Awesome plz make it swasan
TQ Mia and I’ll try dear but not sure…
awesome. ..plz make it swasan. ….
Sara thanks and I’ll try…
Eva….I read a ff just now….its the same as yours….exactly same storyline….its name is love makes life live…..opening scene Pari doing the aarti..Ap asking her about Swara….Pari saying that Swara is tired….Ragini entering the MM….she colliding with Sanskar..and also Swara is pregnant 7 months…..wasn’t that your intro?
Hey..me too read that,…Both looks same na..
I started my ff 2 days before..now if someone liked my story so much that she copied it..then that’s not my prob….maybe she has some other story line and got influenced by my one…no worries my friends r there to support me….
hey eva u r awesome
n plz make it ragsan
i believe in first love
first love if true has its own strength and whatever happens they wil be together if their love is true
after reading ur ff i felt that ragsan love is true so pls make them together
sry if my views hurt u 🙁
Your views didn’t hurt me dear..and thanks for sharing your view…and I’ll think about it..and even I believe that first love can’t be forgotten….question is how Swara forgot Laksh…….in the serial…maybe because of Sanskar’s true love…
Eva ..read ur Ff..feel something different.. Don’t do vote..its hurt everyone..bz some already done this mistake ..hurt everyone feelings.. Choose other pair who has less vote.
Actually am a swasan fan….I thought nd confused bz sanskar is very caring towards swara after all she his wife and ragini his past.
Now after reading comments i think ragsan hoga..
Do wat in u r mind try to write that only..
It will be d best output. All d best yaar
Thanks for sharing your views dear but 8’m actually very confused….i thought to write on swasan and then received so many disappointing comments…my friends were hurt…so I leave the decision on them…and trust me..i’m going to be fair..and I’ll write on the couples whom majority will vote for….
So my guess is right..u planned to make it swasan..in my pov there is many reason for dat swasan marriage is not forceful one, rag and San took this decision together..so how can he forget his wife..I believe in marriage if its not a forced one.
If it possible Don’t pair Raglak it will look odd.
I think ur previous Ff is on ragsan .that’s y dey expecting..
I read someone comments on another Ff, that he or she will left reading if dey not pairing their fav pairs…hmm
I think u r in pressure..
K go ahead wid ur decision Dr..
I want ragsan
I’ll try ?
iwant swalak and ragsan please
I try dear but no sure about it
..
Plz make swasan
Oh my god u are 8th grader and u write so well I m impressed
I would suggest u to bring new hero for swara
Eva plz dont do voting yaar bcuz swasan are gonna win. I knw they always win. Plz make it ragsan there so many less ragsan ff
So nice…
Hi dr l love ur ff.im also sm kind of silent reader.n also i knw this is ur ff bt dear.if u cn plz make swasan together.bcoz im a big fan of swasan plz
Pls make ragsan..
I thnk so by trying to make ragSan… swasan will form… plz swasan
eva u too like me even i like swasan … swalak was k for me only in ff..