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Home»Fan Fiction»A journey from tashan e dosti to tashan e ishq episode 14
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A journey from tashan e dosti to tashan e ishq episode 14

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Hello lovely readers here v go with the 14th episode… this one is something different hope ull like it.

Scene 1.
Kunj and Twinkle are in exam hall writing their papers…Kunj finishes his paper 15 minutes early…he submits the paper and signs twinkle that he is waiting outside near the bike parking slot…twinkle nods and signs him to go she will come.
Kunj is waiting outside near the parking stand and speeking on phone with usha.
Twinkle comes out of the college and is extremely happy as her exam was superb…she happily runs towards kunj…kunj doesn’t see her and is talking to usha…Just then he hears a noise and turns to see…he is shoked…twinkle gets hit by a car…people gather arround twinkle… kunj rushes to her and see her bleeding badly through her head… he is shocked too see that state of her.
Kunj: Ye kya hogaya…kaise hogaya ye sab…(he falls on his knees and holds twinkles face) I won’t let anything happen to you. Today even if god comes down to take you I won’t let u go…I won’t let u go far from me ever…and thats a promise.
He rushes her to the hospital.

Scene 2
In the hospital the receptionist asks him to fill the consent form first…he gets extremely angry and screams.
Kunj: (holding twinkle in his arms)What nonsense is this…cant u see her condition…its worsening every second…and all that matters to u is this consent form…if any thing happens to twinkle i swear to god i will get ur hospital closed and not leave anyone of you.
Receptionist: But Sirrr…
Listening to the noise the doctor comes there and asks whats going on
Kunj: Doctor.. doctor she is my fiance…she got hit by a car…she is bleeding badly doctor…plzzz save her doc plzzz save her…plzzz don’t let anything happen to her.
Doc: Nures..ward boy take her to the OT(operation theatre) right now.
They put twinkle on the stretcher and take her to the OT…kunj is holding twinkles hand and doesn’t want to leave it..he requests doc to let him come inside the OT but he refuses…they take twinkle inside and kunj hesitantly leaves twinkle’s hand…He falls on his knees and cries bitterly.
Kunj: Twinkleeee….plzzzz jaldi se thik hoja meri Siyappa Queen…plzzzz
Sarna and taneja family come there.
Kunj: Maa…papa aap log yaha.

A flash back is shown.
Looking at twinkle’s accident mobile falls from kunjs hands. Usha was still talking to him but she was not getting any response.. so she cut the phone and tried calling him again…at first no one answered but later a man from the crowd saw the phone ringing and picked it up and told Usha everything what had happened…usha gets shocked she asks the man if he knows which hospital they r taking twinkle to..the man says there is only one hospital close by ie city hospital so they might take her there only…usha informs leela about it and all of them rush to the hospital.
Flashback ends.
Kunj hugs usha and cries bitterly… usha bebe and leela console him.
Bebe: Kunj puttar Rab per bherosa rakh…rab sab thik kerega…teri twinkle ko kuch nahi hoga.
Leela: (Sits on the chair and starts crying)Babaji plzzz keep my twinkle safe…if anything happens to her even I will die.
Rt and bebe console leela.

Rt: Leela don’t take tension nothing will happen to our twinkle…she is a fighter… she will fight this situation also and will become totally fine.
Mahi can’t control her tears any more…she cries and runs from there…yuvi goes behind her.
Mahi:(in front of ganesh ji’s idol)Bappa everyone calls u vigna harta as u don’t let anything bad ever happen with good people. Then why are u making twinkle suffer like this…bappa plzz plzzz dont let anything happen to her…plzzz save her bappa plzzz.
Yuvi comes there and keeps hand on her shoulder. She turns back and hugs him and cries…yuvi consoles her and says my saali is a fighter as rt uncle rightly said…she will show her tigress avtaar and even death will fear and runaway.
Mahi smiles a little and yuvi takes her with him.

Outside the OT everyone is waiting for the doctor to come out.
Doc comes out and kunj holds his hand and asks him if twinkle is fine.
Doc: She is out of danger partly as we hav removed all the blood clots from her head but she is still in danger as she has slipped into coma.
Everyone get shocked.
“She has slipped into coma” these words echo in kunjs ears…he runs to the OT and this time looking at his state the doc doesn’t stop him.

Kunj goes near twinkle and takes her hand in his hand.
Kunj: Twinkle mujhey pata hey tu na sirf drama ker rahi hai…tujhe na mujhe pareshan kerne mai maza aata hai…dekh ho gaya mai pareshan vo bhi bohot pareshan…. ab to tera maqsad pura ho gaya na…ab to uth jaa siyappa queen..dekh agar to abhi bhi nahi uthi na to mai tujhse kabhi baat nahi karunga…aur…aur maine vo jo teri favorite waali chocolate laai hai na tere liye vo bhi mai bhabi ko de dunga…uth ja na twinkle plzz.Tears fall from his eyes…he shakes twinkle and says…mai tere bina nahi jee sakta twinkle…plzzz mujhe chod ker mat ja plzzz…he keeps his head on her hand and cries(Agar tum saath ho plays)
He comes out and asks doctors as to how much time will twinkle take to recover.
Doc: I can’t give any definite answer… it may take days..weeks..months or in worst cases even years.
Everyone cry.
Kunj says I’m fine with it…i will take care of her till she gets up and speaks to me…fights with me…doc I will take twinkle home…u send whatever things are required and a nurse for medical assistance… all other care will be taken by me.
Doctor agrees.
Kunj: Tujhe thik hona hoga twinkle mere liye sirf mere liye…jab tak tu thik nahi hojati mai chain ki saans nahi lunga…zameen aasman ek kerdunga but mai apni siyappa queen ko kuch nahi honey dung…ye mera wada hai khud se.
Screen freezes on kunjs face.

Precap: Twinkle is shifted from hospital to kunjs room…kunj takes immense care of her.

Hope ull liked the episode guys…plzzz share ur views via ur comments… and let me know if it was boring as there were no twinj scenes.

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95 Comments

  1. Rashi verma on February 28, 2016 7:23 pm

    Emotional kardiya aakansha tune….twinkle theek kab hogi.???

    • Aakanksha on February 28, 2016 7:52 pm

      thanx rashi yaar…very soon twinkle will be perfectly fine

  2. sanam on February 28, 2016 7:32 pm

    such heart touching episode aakanksha well done

    • Aakanksha on February 28, 2016 7:52 pm

      tysm sanam…im glad u liked it

  3. smiley on February 28, 2016 7:36 pm

    Nice one . continue <3

    • Aakanksha on February 28, 2016 7:54 pm

      thanx smiley…and im really happy as u want me to continue

  4. Harna on February 28, 2016 7:37 pm

    So touching..nice yaar

    • Aakanksha on February 28, 2016 7:55 pm

      thanx harna

  5. prapti on February 28, 2016 7:46 pm

    boring???what r u talking abt??it’s awwwwwsomee…luv it??

    • Aakanksha on February 28, 2016 7:56 pm

      thankyou sooo much prapti…actually there are no twinj scenes so I thought ppl might find it boring

  6. lara on February 28, 2016 7:47 pm

    Awww so sweet akanksha.. cntnue nd update asap dear…

    • Aakanksha on February 28, 2016 7:57 pm

      tysm tara I promise my next update will be by tomorrow night or….day after tomorrow in the early morning

    • lara on February 28, 2016 9:44 pm

      I’m lara not tara!!

    • Aakanksha on February 28, 2016 10:47 pm

      I m soo sry lara I read ur name right but I dk how I wrote tara in my comment sry dear…I hope u didn’t feel bad

    • tei on February 29, 2016 2:04 pm

      It’s ok akanksha?

  7. Shatakshi on February 28, 2016 7:52 pm

    Aakanksha it was really heart touching n plz update fast… Can’t wait for it:-)

    • Aakanksha on February 28, 2016 7:58 pm

      thankyou soo much shatakshi for commenting….I promise to update it asap

  8. Ruchi on February 28, 2016 7:57 pm

    Emotional epi… Nice one…

    • Aakanksha on February 28, 2016 7:59 pm

      thanx ruchi….I hope u didn’t find it boring

    • Ruchi on February 28, 2016 11:37 pm

      Welcum…No yr the epi was not at all boring… I thnk i should take tutions frm u to write ff…

    • Aakanksha on February 28, 2016 11:47 pm

      Ohh god plzzz don’t say like that ruchi u too write amazing FFs yaar

  9. komal on February 28, 2016 8:09 pm

    Akansha u r a superb writer keep writing like dis nd give back to back episodes

    • Aakanksha on February 28, 2016 8:24 pm

      OMG komal thankyou soo much….that’s soo sweet of u…plzz wait till 4th march after that ill promise ull get atleast 2 episodes a day or maybe more…luv ya

    • komal on February 28, 2016 9:30 pm

      Oh dats so sweet of u m feeling like m un heaven rght now.. luv yaa too ?

  10. tammana on February 28, 2016 8:22 pm

    emotional kar diya na muje it was written very nice

    • Aakanksha on February 28, 2016 8:31 pm

      thanx a lot tammana im glad I cud deliver the feelings in the epi to ur hearts.

  11. Aakanksha on February 28, 2016 8:34 pm

    THANKYOU SOOOO MUCH GUYS I HAV NEVER RECIEVED SUCH A QUICK AND AWESOME RESPONSE ON ANY OTHER FF…I GOT SUPERB RESPONSES EARLIER ALSO BUT NOT SO QUICK…THANKS AGAIN IM REALLY VERY HAPPY TODAY

  12. twinkle on February 28, 2016 8:42 pm

    I am a slient reader but I couldn’t resist myself from commenting awesome episode so emotional

    • Aakanksha on February 28, 2016 8:51 pm

      thanx a lot twinkle….ur so lucky ur name is twinkle its a bful name

  13. Chayonika Chakraborty Chandra on February 28, 2016 8:49 pm

    Nice Aakanksha di…As u already know u r a good writer . And yes . I m a girl . And call me Chandra . My nick name . U r just like my lovely elder cousin .Love u .

    • Aakanksha on February 28, 2016 8:53 pm

      thanx a lot Chandra…im glad to get 1 more younger sibling….I already hav one on this page her name is simi

    • Chandra on February 28, 2016 9:13 pm

      Di . What is ur name . I will send u friend request .

    • Aakanksha on February 28, 2016 9:26 pm

      my full name is Aakanksha Singh…im wearing a goggle and black shrug in my profile pic on fb

  14. Gauri on February 28, 2016 8:59 pm

    Please post the next one soon

    • Aakanksha on February 28, 2016 9:29 pm

      yesss gauri pakka….by tomorrow evening or 1st march early morning…im glad and extremely happy that u…the great writer gauri is commenting on my ff

    • Gauri on February 28, 2016 9:34 pm

      Honey I am not that G8 …but blessed to have you for appreciating me so much

    • Aakanksha on February 28, 2016 10:06 pm

      gauri that’s just how talented people are they are unaware of their greatness…and so r u…for me u r my fav writer that’s all I know

  15. sonal on February 28, 2016 9:17 pm

    Akanksha you are very nice your ff are mind blowing I m very happy to have a friend like you thanx ……
    Why there is no written update of nagin plzz update nagin serial kl ka bhi update nhi hua aaj ka bhi nhi hua plzzzzz update I want to read…..

    • Aakanksha on February 28, 2016 9:24 pm

      thanx a lot sonal im glad u consider me as ur friend…are u there on any of the social networking sites..if yess plzz tell me we can connect through that

  16. Shanaya on February 28, 2016 9:24 pm

    Akanksha! Your FF’s are Amazing!!
    This episode was kinda emotional! ?

    • Aakanksha on February 28, 2016 9:27 pm

      heyyy shanay I realy love ur name it 1 of my fav names…and thanx a lot….luv u…I know it was emotional…but I hope u liked it

    • Shanaya on February 28, 2016 10:00 pm

      Thanks a lot Akanksha! Well your name is no less! ?
      I love your FF!
      Love you too! ❤

    • Aakanksha on February 28, 2016 10:21 pm

      tysm wud u like becoming my friend on any of the social networking sites….if ur not comfortable im perfectly fine….I just asked casually hope u don’t mind

    • Shanaya on February 28, 2016 10:54 pm

      I would love to become your friend! 🙂 But i’m not there in any of the social networking sites 🙁
      My mum has an FB account but then she only allows me to read the FF’s and see my friends’ posts
      I would love to know you more! We can chat in TU!

    • Aakanksha on February 28, 2016 11:08 pm

      cool I don’t mind we can chat on my ffs

    • Shanaya on February 28, 2016 11:25 pm

      Yeah sure! 🙂

    • Aakanksha on February 29, 2016 1:45 am

      heyyy how did ur icon change…????

    • Shanaya on February 29, 2016 5:03 pm

      I don’t know. I guess because I wrote the comment from my Computer or maybe because my changed my email.

  17. Aarush on February 28, 2016 9:33 pm

    Wow! It’s amazing aakanksha aj tunea mar he dala merea dil ko..,… Make fine twinkle and marraige is also their na…..

    • Aakanksha on February 28, 2016 9:52 pm

      tysm aarush….twinkle will get fine very soon and marriage functions will also start in no time

  18. chandra on February 28, 2016 9:35 pm

    do u know arundhati ?

    • Aakanksha on February 28, 2016 9:49 pm

      no I don’t think so…I don’t remember knowing any1 named arundhati

  19. Simi on February 28, 2016 9:39 pm

    Awwww kunj is sooooo imotional . di I think u should be a dialogue writer . I love d dialogues in dis episode. N. M eagerly waiting for the next episode. R u post in it tomorrow?

  20. Aakanksha on February 28, 2016 9:50 pm

    thankyou sooo muchhh simi that’s a really big complement for me dear…I will post it by tomorrow evening or 1st march early morning

  21. Chandra on February 28, 2016 9:51 pm

    di the request is not going . i thinl u ll have to send request . in my profile pic there are some pebbles and colourful insects

  22. SMC on February 28, 2016 9:55 pm

    Aakanksha……what a fabulous,outstanding,awesum,mind blowing,superb,beautiful, and amazing episode…it has touched my heart what an episode Aakansha..hats off to u..????

    • Aakanksha on February 28, 2016 10:04 pm

      and there u go once again u hav put me on cloud 9…..smc u make me feel blessed yar I srsly don’t hav words to thank u…al I can say is luve u from the core of my heart

  23. tara on February 28, 2016 10:08 pm

    omg aakanksha..what an epi..so heart wrenching..the way u described kunj’s behaviour was out of the world….btw sorry for late comment i was bit busy..bt u r superb..love u muahh!!

    • Aakanksha on February 28, 2016 10:18 pm

      no regrets tara yaar plzz don’t say sry….ur such a good friend of mine and what matters is ur comment and not how quick or late…im glad u liked it…luv u tara

  24. Sanu on February 28, 2016 10:14 pm

    Wow aakansha superb episode it was heart touching episode rlly awesome….

  25. Sanu on February 28, 2016 10:17 pm

    And yes aakansha u also agreed fr watsapp …….. But how ??? I think u understood my doubt

    • Aakanksha on February 28, 2016 10:50 pm

      see rakshit has told us to send her our name and contact number on her gmail account…and then she will make a group but as she is busy with her exams she said she will be making it after 18th march..su either u email ur number to her or u giv us ur email id and we will email it to u

  26. Sunaina on February 28, 2016 10:17 pm

    Aakanksha u’re superbbbbbbbb….. Vry heart touchingg epii.. Bored not at all. Everytime when i read ur ff i love it more nd more nd i becomemore big fan of u nd ur ff.. Really luv u yaar…

    • Aakanksha on February 28, 2016 10:52 pm

      sunaina thankyou sooo sooo sooo much….im srsly extremely happy that all of ull liked my ff…thanx for all the support….luv u….btw wud u mind me calling u SUU…sry han if u don’t like it actualy I hav a frnd of this name and that’s what I call her…plzz don’t mind

    • Sunaina on February 28, 2016 11:05 pm

      Plzz don’t say sorry . U re my frnd nd u can call me what u want ☺???

  27. Akansha on February 28, 2016 10:48 pm

    hey aakansha…i m a silent reader bt ur episode forced me to comment…u r such an amazing writer…plz update soon…waiting eagerly….n plz make twinkle fine soon…

    • Aakanksha on February 28, 2016 11:14 pm

      yaayyy u know what I always wanted a friend having the same name as mine but I never got 1…soo wud u mind being my friend akansha….and btw thanx a lot for the amazing comment

  28. sonal on February 28, 2016 10:49 pm

    No akanksha I’m not in any one of them my mother doesn’t allow me to use them even whatsupp bhi nhi she doesn’t allow me but I m in imo you are there and if you are not there then also please start imo so that I can talk to you plzzzzz anyways ..how old are you n where you leave

    • Aakanksha on February 28, 2016 11:10 pm

      what is imo idk about it im 17 years old and I stay in mumbai

  29. Sanu on February 28, 2016 10:52 pm

    Akansha i couldn’t find ur fb account so u plse snd me frnd request my profile pic is of kunj wearing white shirt and blue coat

    • Aakanksha on February 28, 2016 11:13 pm

      ohk sanu actually my netpack is over so as soon as I recharge it I will send you a request

  30. Preety sid bieber on February 28, 2016 10:56 pm

    Ooo akanksha mujhe toh rona aagaya..its realy a hrt touching epi..i jst hop twinkle is fine..kunj ki siyappa ko jaldi se thik kar do akanksha..
    Btw i lyk it..

    • Aakanksha on February 28, 2016 11:12 pm

      tysm preety…and don’t worry our twinkle will get fine very soon

  31. Nada on February 28, 2016 10:57 pm

    Entertaining keep it up I like it but what will happen to twinkle i am so curious to know can you please upload the next update as fast as possible
    Thankyou ?

    • Aakanksha on February 28, 2016 11:11 pm

      tysm nada for commenting…ill try to post d next epi asap…and chill nothing will happen t our twinkle

  32. loveleen on February 28, 2016 11:07 pm

    aakanksha i got goosebumps dear…..kunjs dialogue was so realistic that i started imagining the situation

    • Aakanksha on February 28, 2016 11:29 pm

      I am really glad that my feelings ie kunjs feelings cud reach till you…thanx a lot

  33. Akansha on February 28, 2016 11:49 pm

    hey….why would i mind being ur frnd…infact i will b proud having such an amazing n talented frnd…

    • Aakanksha on February 28, 2016 11:56 pm

      Wohhooo thankyou so much??

  34. sonal on February 29, 2016 12:14 am

    Akanksha in imo we can chat and send vedios n pics Dp n all its like what’s upp only plzz download that n let me know and akanksha there is n request I want to see you plzzzzzz

    • Aakanksha on February 29, 2016 1:44 am

      heyy sonal I will download it asap….same here even I want to see u….but that’s only possible after I download imo…does it hav any full form

  35. Simi on February 29, 2016 1:27 am

    Di congratulations u got d most comments in any ff . don consider ur comments still its more .

    • Aakanksha on February 29, 2016 6:56 am

      thanx a lot simi…im extremely happy for that

  36. Aakanksha on February 29, 2016 1:49 am

    guysss I cant believe the nimber of comments on my ff is more than that on tei original epi update….thou here my replies are many but still im very happy…thankyou so much to each and every one of you…luv all…thanx for supporting me and my ffs

  37. Aakanksha on February 29, 2016 1:50 am

    I mean ‘number of comments’

    • prapti on February 29, 2016 10:11 am

      hehe…u know what..I had a dream last night that I’ve sent u frnd req & in return u sent me an angry emoji….?

  38. Sanu on February 29, 2016 8:14 am

    Ok aakansha my profile pic is of kunj got it na

  39. sanvi on February 29, 2016 9:34 am

    nic epi….not boring at all/..#

  40. tina on February 29, 2016 12:41 pm

    omg what a emotional episode….and how many comments

  41. tara on February 29, 2016 1:59 pm

    wow akkanksha u got the highest no. of comment till now..congo..and ofcourse the credit is urs.u r a fab writer..

  42. Aakanksha on February 29, 2016 2:47 pm

    Thanx sanvi…tina…and my bff tara thanx for the love… I just posted the next Epi u will get to read it soon

  43. Tintu on February 29, 2016 5:30 pm

    Superb its really fantastic . Nxt epi update fast

    • Aakanksha on February 29, 2016 5:38 pm

      Sure tintu i hav already posted it u will get to read it Sooon..thanx

  44. Eki on February 29, 2016 7:28 pm

    Wow it was absolutely amazing one of the best fan fiction I’ve read of Tashan e ishq.❤️??

    • Aakanksha on February 29, 2016 9:37 pm

      thanx a lot eki…hope u like the next one aswell

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