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My layered demeanour (Episode 6)

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Hi guys. First to everyone who supported me- love you all . XOXO

Now to those who are not liking this story- I know everyone is entitled to their opinions and i do respect your views. I just want to say that maybe you are not liking the plot or the way i have etched out Surbhi’s character. But in this ff, she is good, she is bad and some may feel that she is very bad. She is rude, harsh and short tempered but she does have a softness in her heart. About KVB, you will know as the story progress. So, in short if you are not liking it now then you would not like it in the future episodes and you’ll be disappointed only.

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(Himanshoo’s pov)

I had just returned from office when I joined her on the sofa. I opened my laptop as I decided to complete some pending work. She kept her head on my shoulder as she said, ‘Bhai, let’s go to watch a movie today.’ I just nodded my head as she excitedly hugged me and kissed me on the cheeks. ‘Thank you Bhai. You are the best,’ she almost screamed excitedly.

‘Yes Mr Khurana.’ I turned to see my father on the phone, speaking to Mr. Khurana. She nudged me as she heard “Mr. Khurana” from my dad’s mouth.

‘There’s definitely something fishy,’ she whispered into my ears with her one eyebrow raised.

Dad came to us after finishing his talk as he looked at her and said, ‘Today there is a party thrown by Mr. Khurana’s nephew and I want you to attend that party.’

‘But dad…’ She had tried resisting to this.

‘I have already said that you would attend the party’. This thing from dad was enough to ignite her anger as she said, ‘Then why do you take decisions on my behalf. I’m not like bhai who would listen to everything you say. You never wanted bhai to get involved in your business and so he started his own business. Bhai always do what you say but I won’t. So stop taking decisions of my life.’

Dad was enraged after hearing her and he lifted his hand… the first time ever that he did this. But I stopped dad’s hand by holding his wrist. I lowered my gaze as he looked into my eyes. I saw Sweety running away from there as I let go off dad’s hand.

‘Your love has spoiled her. Knock some sense into her.’

I assured him and he left the place. I dropped myself on the sofa as I rested my head on my hands.

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i don’t know how was it. Hope you all liked it.
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64 Comments

  1. Sunehri on

    Wow saya u r rocking. … I love the way u r writing. … hats off 🙂 …. waiting for the next episode friend 🙂

  2. angel on

    Awesome epi saya i am really enjoying your epi i mean the way u write is really good.IF u don’t mind can I ask how old are u?

  3. saya on

    Hi Roma. If you don’t mind then how old are you? And electrical and computer engineering… that’s interesting 🙂

    • saya on

      Hi Angel. yes I have finished school. I’m currently doing Bsc (H) in biomedical science… my final semester. and you?

  6. JANVI on

    hi saya… it was an amazing update dear… the plot is really nic n realastic….thanks a lot… keep writing… luv u loads…. n dear where r u from..

  8. angel on

    Saya I am only 16 but I finish school like 2 grades in one year so I am done basically till grade 11.So this year just chilling and next year I will be starting my matric through a montessori and getting a level 4 and 5 for teaching.

  10. angel on

    Hey saya there is a lot of people who do home schooling. I live in benoni and my mum started with me home schooling from grade 1 to grade 11 my smaller sister is 14 and we at the same grade…Janvi are u in school still or are u finished?

  16. angel on

    Tnx Saya.Do u have watsapp or bbm that we can talk on?I am often getting blocked from tellyupdates saying I can’t enter without a password…any idea why?

  19. angel on

    Really wow Janvi…I thought I was the only one…how about u do u have watsapp or bbm?Do u often get blocked by tellyupdates for a password?

  21. saya on

    Hi Angel. my comment has not yet been posted so I’m writing it again. Yes dear I’m on whatsapp but I don’t want to divulge contact details here. Regarding your second query, related to password, I don’t have any idea.

  22. saya on

    @Roma @Angel @Janvi @Sunehri You can suggest some other ideas to get in contact or I’ll tell my ideas after a few episodes. 🙂

    • saya on

      Angel, you should not share your contact details like this dear. Sorry if you felt bad but take this as an advice. Don’t do this again.

  24. angel on

    I am so sorry guys my cousin stayed over last night and I told her to type my message she read the above and she put down my number…saya is there any way to take of my comment because my number is on it?

    • Sunehri on

      Yes I think there is a way …. go to contact us page and leave them a message that you want to remove this comment. ..

  26. angel on

    Hey janvi and saya I am really sorry about it.My cousin is only 11 she does not understand not to give details but she finds it fun because she knows my number by heart.I told her what to comment but she wrote my number.I only seen it in the morning and i shouted at her … I am really sorry but is there any way we can delete a comment or something because my number is there?

  28. saya on

    Write it to telly updates. Mail them your problem and request them to remove your comment. Do it through “contact us”.

  31. angel on

    Thanks Saya,Janvi and sunehri yourl are the best… I did mail them so hopefully my comment will be removed…I am so annoyed with my cousin she got me all caught up in this mess… But tnx guys

  35. Sunehri on

    U guys are so sweet 🙂 … and angel don’t scold u sis she might not know what happens if we give our number on public websites. . So no worries bestie

  36. angel on

    Yep thanks…she is so cross with me for shouting at her she just won’t talk 2 me… But thanks for your support sunehri…Love u a lot

  39. angel on

    Hey guys…my comment has not been removed and somebody has my number also so I got my father to get me a new number so I will not be using that number that my cousin put on…so whoever got my number don’t message me at all because my number somebody else is using from now on…love yourl my dear friends and thanks for supporting me..

  43. angel on

    Yes I saw that saya thanks for mailing them for me..and thanks for supporting me sunehri and janvi…Love yourl 2 my besties

  44. angel on

    Hey guys thanks for everything yourl did for me… But maybe I won’t be able 2 comment again as things are getting hectic and we are having problems so don’t feel bad if I don’t comment…I will try but I am not sure…Love yourl a lot my dear friends..

  46. Roma on

    Hi Saya my sweeeeeet darling friend, it’s superbbbb episode…loved the sibling bond between surbhi n himanshu…surbhi so disheartened n angry at her father’s decision. ..but her bro protected her…he’s very mature n caring…loved the scene….I’m loving this story very much. ..survir just awesoooooome n the other cast also very good…Saya my dear thx for your comment, I’m in early 30’s….seems like older than all of you deariiiiiiieeess. ..but at heart I’m still same as you alllllll….you’re doing phenomenon job…keep it up….eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads and very tight hug