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the unknown truth…Episode 5

administratorBy administratorFebruary 19, 2016Updated:February 19, 201615 Comments4 Mins Read
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hi guys, I m happy with your comments. and bisha, I m your classmate and happy for that.

here’s the horror story…..

we were searching for the mansion. the island is small but dense. we felt like were in a complete abandoned area.

and this idiot Mahi, he’s behaving like bear grylls. he wanted me to enjoy there. there’s no fault in him. I bet I wanted to hit him in the same iron rod in his stupid dream.

I m going crazy over the mystery.

“Mahi, who are the people left in Vincent family?”

“sadly, only his son Sam.”

“so, I doubt Sam. he might had done something that …”

before I could complete my sentence, the winds blew weird, we felt strange. its really strange.

we again started to search. and at last we found it. it was awesome. I can describe it like huge, dark, unique , and mysterious. it was like some fantasy movies.

we moved closely to the door. I slowly unlocked the door. the door was squeaky with some noise.

it was dark but fully furnished. we entered in. it was big. very big.

” Mahi”

my words echoed.

“give me the camera Mahi” I whispered because I don’t want the stupid echo to scare me. I took some clicks of the place. on the corner, there was stairs, which was dusty. I went upstairs holding the handle of the stairs. the first floor had a grand decoration. it was beautifully organised. I can sense the place very odd because it gave me a feel that there is something unknown to us. I opened a room.

“achu… achu… akchu….”

I began to sneeze because of the dust. I closed my nose with my sleeve. I saw a huge portrait of Mr. and Mrs. Vincent. they were happy. I smiled at that.

suddenly I felt a hand on my shoulder. I didn’t shout because I know it was my stupid husband. I turned and began to laugh at him. he was all covered with dust and spider webs.. I was laughing like hell. he didn’t know why. how innocent?…

I searched for a mirror. and I saw it covered with dust. I wiped the dust and pulled him closer to me. I was standing close to him. I cleared the mess on his hair. he was smiling at me?

“.Mahi, from which dustbin you’re from?”

“what? but I was searching for my Sherlock Holmes. she left me alone in this scary mansion. I m afraid you know”

“how can I leave you alone? god, I should at least have some pity on these poor ghosts. I m sorry Mahi. I’ll never leave you alone. ”

he made his face like ‘he’s a ghost’ and chased me. I ran escaping from his grip. ha ha ha. it was fun.

suddenly I skipped down and that poor fellow fell down. but I don’t know how but I was above him.

“hey, how can you top me? but I fell after you” he complained.

“that’s my fast move sweetheart.” …

he caught me in my hip. I placed my hands around his neck and blackmailed him to leave me.

then we got up. so, now we are inside the mansion.

I kept the bags in the room near the balcony. we need a place where sunlight is available. that’s because our system needs power and we get it from solar panels. I took the antenna in which we can communicate and access signals for our wireless camera.

I m good at mechanical works like fixing the equipments. he’s good at technologies like the data and functions of machines.

I fixed the antenna near the balcony grill. then I was searching for Mahi. he was sleeping. I went near him. he lightly smiled. so he’s acting. I then began to tickle him and we had a nice time enjoying there ..

suddenly I felt the environment cold. its the first symptom of the ghosts.

we were shocked. we didn’t fix the cameras as we were playing.

Mahi placed his hands in mine. I was hugging his arms.

Mahi hugged me more tightly. I took a deep breath and I gently pushed him. I slowly walked towards the door and opened it. there was no one. I mean nothing.
suddenly I heard the voice

“BRAVE GIRL”

echoing in the hallway …

I turned to look at Mahi but I’m shocked to see him. behind him was a mirror and I can see a blurred figure standing before me.

I felt the same strange touch in my hand. but it was strong now
………………………………..

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15 Comments

  1. arshi on February 19, 2016 5:04 pm

    omg… tooooooo gooood

  2. arshi on February 19, 2016 5:06 pm

    like seriously….i expected somethnng which will be a normal ghost story has… like… i thought.. maha after takin gwith mahi she will go an ind him outside… she will get scared as who is inside …. but this twist u gave.. really nice

  3. sanju on February 19, 2016 5:22 pm

    fantastic

  4. swara on February 19, 2016 5:23 pm

    semma suspense anura i like it very much

  5. swathi on February 19, 2016 5:25 pm

    wow…superb yaar..your explaination is very gud…its difficult to write horror ff ryt???but u nailed it….

  6. ived anura on February 19, 2016 7:05 pm

    hey guys, arshi, sanju, swara and swathi ….. I m on cloud nine because I got regular readers. but the sad part is I can’t share this with my family and friends. they think that I m passing time and of course , fit for nothing. so, I m thanking you from heart for giving me this happiness. I m happy happy ….. 🙂 🙂 😉

    • Arshi on February 20, 2016 11:05 am

      Hey anurag.. U r not wasting time… May be ur future has this track.. U can try…. Also.. A bachpan jismein time waste nahi kiya hai.. Vo bhi kya bachpan hoti… Lol… Purijincha.. Romba Romba nalla future iruku unnaku… Utilize panniko

  7. Aliya on February 19, 2016 7:56 pm

    Fantastic no words 2 explain ur story is getting awesome day by day

  8. Sita on February 19, 2016 8:19 pm

    Nice,continue yr

  9. deeva on February 19, 2016 10:51 pm

    Omg…. Nice episode really enjoyed it

  10. Devga on February 19, 2016 11:26 pm

    Hi aruna …. Superb ….. I felt its difficult write ghost stories as it needs more imaginary skills and more suspense … U r grt in this….
    U knw evn I am unlucky to share all my happiness I get in tu like frnds and u r so near to me ( I can’t share it to my parents as evn they feel I am wasting time and not focusing on studies ) and wat I feel abt evry ff ….
    V r just kms away … Hope one day V can meet …..
    Love ya …. Continue …. Will meet once for sure …

  11. Ananya on February 20, 2016 12:27 am

    Its interesting and suspense filled. Love it..

  12. Bisha on February 20, 2016 2:42 am

    Evn i supprt this…however..as usual todays one was equally fantastic..snc m reading it alone in my room..i m sayn truth..i was really feeling quite awkward…as if the atomosphere hr in my soo known room chngd to a colder n awkwrd one…lots of claps for u talented girl..:-)

  13. Lakshmi on February 22, 2016 2:42 pm

    Superb episode dear. Who’s behind those murders.luv u..tc..

  14. Roma on February 23, 2016 3:53 pm

    Awesome episode. .

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