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Home»Fan Fiction Original»You are Mine Ch. 8
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You are Mine Ch. 8

administratorBy administratorFebruary 11, 201620 Comments3 Mins Read
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I feel comfortable with Aisha and Nivin. Nivin always acts like my own brother.he often visits my appartment. Sometimes Aisha too comes with him.I was enjoying my life with them.

Today we are going to Bangalore. I prefered flight bt Aisha and Nivin prefered train. I never traveled in a train.Nivin was too funny. He flirts with the girls who travels with us.but he wasn’t over..the girls also talked to him but they are looking at me surprised. .coz I didn’t noticed any of them I was busy in staring Aisha. ..and Aisha was scolding Nivin for flirting.

“Hey Zayn. . Why are u so silent man” Nivin hited in my shoulder.

I spoke with my attitude” being the Zayn Mansuri. .I don’t like to talk with girls”

“Ans u aishu…” He turned to Aisha

“Being the Aisha Rahman. .I don’t like to talk to boys” lol she is too good in mimicking me.

“Being the Nivin Iyyer I ‘love’ to talk to girl and boys. .he air quoted the word love..

I promised myself that from now I never say being the Zayn mansuri..man they both teases me lot.

We reached Bangalore.we went to the hotel.but the receptionist said that there is no room.

“Our company booked three rooms for us already” Aisha said.

“Sorry sir..actually CM and his family staying here..they want extra three rooms so we had to give them ur rooms” receptionist apologize to us

“What the f**k u r talking woman???if CM wants room then arrange another. ..why did u gave our room. .?” I was suprr angry..

“Calm down Zayn. .this is India. .it is common here.” Aisha gave me a calm down look.I melt down seeing her calm face.

“Atleast can u give us 2 bedrooms” Nivin asked to receptionist.

“Sir we have only one bedroom” she informed

We three looked at each other.if we three were boy it is not a problem. .but here Aisha is a girl..how can we three in onr room?

“Okey..give mr the key” Aisha spoke.

I looked at her worg eyes widened. .
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We went to the room. I and Nivingot ready amd we left the room for Aisha. .after getting ready she came.we had our dinner from the hotel.when we returned to the hotel room.

We three decided to watch movie. ..it was a horror movie.

While watching movie, Aisha hide her face behind Nivin and hugged his hand in fear.I laughed at her childish behavior.
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If I say I love u to anyone…i really meant it…so I LOVE YOU my besties

Credit to: Ruby

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20 Comments

  1. Jwala on February 11, 2016 8:44 am

    Ishtamayi othiri othiri ishtamayi …. ……ur ff

    • Ruby on February 11, 2016 9:51 am

      thnq so much dr 🙂

  2. Rishi on February 11, 2016 9:00 am

    Its intresting yaar nice

    • Ruby on February 11, 2016 9:52 am

      thnx Rishi dr

  3. Hayathi on February 11, 2016 9:39 am

    I like bangalore days movie yaar it was sk nice ….zyan is in deeply live with aisha heina

    • Ruby on February 11, 2016 9:53 am

      yeah dr…thnq

  4. Lakshmi on February 11, 2016 9:44 am

    Superb episode dear.

    • Ruby on February 11, 2016 9:53 am

      thnx dr

  5. Ananya on February 11, 2016 10:53 am

    Ruby so nic episode.. Cute frndship between the 3..Loved the pics dear… Just love that movie and happy to see all three together… You are going gud dear.. Love you…

    • Ruby on February 11, 2016 11:28 am

      bangalore dats ethra thavana kandalum enik madukarilla dr..I just love the movie..enik arjunte life anu asil etavum ishtayad…love u too

  6. Nive on February 11, 2016 11:27 am

    superb epi… nivin is really nice…

    • Ruby on February 11, 2016 12:45 pm

      thnx dr

  7. Devga on February 11, 2016 2:52 pm

    Thank you sooooooo much Ruby dear …. LOVE YOU TOO….
    Being the Devga, I mean it from heart ..
    Zyan mansoori is so cute funny and lovable person…. Nivin also Aisha is lucky to have such a frnd ….

    Bangalore days wat to say my god I have literally gone mad …. I have seen it some wat 20+ times …. But still have curiosity to watch it …. The more I watch the more I want to see it again ….

    Those three chubby actors have done their role very perfectly …
    Specially one person’s role and acting touched my heart is Sara a very natural acting and emotions …. Parvathi aka Sara

    It’s remade in Tamil as Bangalore Natkal …. As I have seen the original version I don’t want to see the remade one as I knw I myself WIL not B able to compromise….
    But fact is I like the three leads of Tamil version very much …

    • Ruby on February 11, 2016 4:31 pm

      u r ryt parvathy’s acting is so natural…my favorite characters arjun and sera..I wish I were a boy I would like to be like Arjun 😉

  8. Devga on February 11, 2016 2:53 pm

    Adipoli … Vallera ishtamayi …. Lol not gud in malu English spellings ….

    • Ruby on February 11, 2016 4:29 pm

      devu dr.. me too love the movie very much..as u said the more I watch the more I want to watch it again..ur malayalam is too good dr 🙂 don’t mind the spelling mistakes

  9. Devga on February 11, 2016 6:06 pm

    I too many times had thought I wish I was a boy …. Lol

  10. zayn on February 11, 2016 7:10 pm

    It was awsome dear …

  11. rose(hafsi) on February 11, 2016 9:31 pm

    Hai ruby
    whats up?sharikkum iyalde veet evideya.njan kazhinja divasam veliyencode vannirunnu.

  12. Roma on February 15, 2016 7:32 pm

    I love you tooooooooo ruby my dearrr friend and this update was so cuteeeee….Happy Valentine’s Day my sweeeeeetu. …love you loads

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