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ACLS HERO’S POV part -4 ThE common connecting link

administratorBy administratorFebruary 11, 201617 Comments3 Mins Read
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“Naa jane , kab kisi se koi rishta sa jud jaata hai, naa jaane kab dosti sa meetha rishta , pyaar ban jaata hai”
“Aankhon mei nami thee,
Aur vitamin C kee kami thee,
Wah wah!
Aankhon mei nami thee,
Aur vitamin C kee kami thee,
Jisse saari raat chatting kee,
Wo girlfriend kee mummy thee!”
? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?
That undemanded, piece of explanation gave me a suspicion , and their behavior was already suspicious,
Not suspicious actually irritating, and criminal minded,
I just tried being polite with them, as they left, I followed them,
And they led me to, a wet damp place which was full of moss and slippery,
YUKS!! Only freaks would hangout in this place,
I hid behind the dripping tank and listened to their conversation,
OMG!! WHAT?? SERIOUSLY……………..
Seriously they did it , how………….
Well now I knew that everyone rides the same…………….may be……….
But I was sure that plaster girl was, the same state as me and was being tricked by her friends……
I heard them scolding, the specky girl who enquired her state, as they never ever wanted to…. Give me her number………………….
Why ?? why was it so?? Weren’t they her best friends??
As the convo went further I came to know that they were jealous of her………..
Why?? She wasn’t so….
Well they were jealous because <3 she <3 dares to sit in front, and is hyper active in class and activities , soo she receives teachers love……..
Well I haven’t seen her like that? actually never noticed…………..
Hmm………… jealousy jealousy JeAlOuSy …………..
It can turn friends to foes and destroy everything…. Which was the same with me..,…….
And also it keeps you tensed, your mind is heavy with those bad thoughts , and you yourself aren’t happy and you wanna snatch others happiness…..
You become what you aren’t , what you hate the most……
You end up as criminal even though small crimes you really drive yourself into darkness expecting light from your actions………..

AHH!!! Leave it
But I now knew that they were jealous of her because of her kindness, hardwork and her reception of the fruit for her work…………..
Be it if they would have worked harder they would have been in <3 her<3 place …
Also they wanted to degrade/spoil her result for just putting her down in teachers eyes,
Also they made silly excuses , for not giving her the notes……..
Huff!…………. I let out a breadth , how could someone be soo….
Well the plaster girl chose the wrong company indeed………………
Well they heard that sound and I hurried out…
But I was able to hear some more …………….
Hmm……….
That selfish cameo even wanted to stop me from………….
Pathetic…………..

They gave me wrong number which belonged to one of them and was always switched off!!!
HEIGHTS OF…..
Well somehow I got the right number, and called her, and she was quite shy to talk and, stammered a bit….
But l her voice changed to happy and I was happy, making ♥her♥ HAPPY……..
** TO BE CONTINUED…..
HOPE YOU ENJOYED IT . DO COMMENT
Also here are links of the same vid with different BG song enjoy…..
https://youtu.be/-DwMvyGUcLs
https://youtu.be/stdvLavp5Js

~~~~~~~~~THANK YOU~~~~~~~~~~~~

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17 Comments

  1. Ruby on February 11, 2016 10:33 am

    nice dr

  2. Ruby on February 11, 2016 10:34 am

    shayari was awesome and funny. .

  3. Lakshmi on February 11, 2016 11:03 am

    Nice richa n that video is superb.

  4. Devga on February 11, 2016 12:56 pm

    I was happy making her happy …. This lovly line is awesome b…..
    Thank y u richu

  5. richa on February 11, 2016 4:54 pm

    LOL SORRY FOR LATE REPLY was just a bit busy
    thank u ♥ for reading rubi lakshmi nd minnal Lol
    keep reading ♥ u tc c u soon nd i womt b able to update tomo as a bit busy lol
    mis u manha (>.<)
    lol by tc nd nisha maate kya hua aaj aapke vichar nahi aaye? Naraz h kya?
    ऽ ऽ ॐ ्‌ ॥॰

  6. dia on February 11, 2016 5:55 pm

    Hriday ka sparsh lene vala adhyay tha yah

  7. Jwala on February 11, 2016 7:44 pm

    Hey. …hmm..this is not a philosophy
    Hope u will like it ..100% my own creation ……..
    Different types of fb likes
     *Deserved
    Like frm the bottom of my heart ….for a wonderful post ?
     *Returning
    Since he liked my post ..i will also like it
     *Expectation
    If i like his post ..he might like mine too
     *Trying to impress
    Omg……it’s her post ..the girl who i have a crush on ….if i like her post she will be impressed not fully impressed but sure a little …..
     *Showing respect
    My boss’s post ….no time checking the post …… .liked it
     *Family
    He is my realtive ..so i like his post ..and that’s wht family is for in fb ?
     *True love
    Best friends , mom’s or dad’s post no need to check wht the post is abt before liking it ….just like it coz u luv them …..then check wht the post is abt …..
     *Bf and gf
    My girlfriend’s post if don’t like it then this relationship is over ..and i will soon dead …so liked the post .
     *Contract
    If u like my post i will also like ur’s…….mostly applicable in the case of siblings……..
     *Forced
    Forced to like a post or else within seconds ….will be getting phone call
    “Hey man ……,like my post the one i posted just 5mins before. ”
     *Sympathy
    Ohh ..soo less likes ..feeling bad for him …so ..liked it
      *Simply
    Sitting infront of pc and not having any1 to chat in fb ..,so simply liking almost all the posts
     *Blackmailed …
    (True story …my cousin bro’s experience…..)
    It was a friday ngt frnd1 was sleeping peacefully..suddenly phone ……..rings. ..
    Frnd1 : whose is this
    Frnd2 : it’s me idiot …where is ur like i have been waiting the whole day for it… ..but u stupid u didn’t
    Frnd1 : Wht’s ur problem man calling midngt for a like ..and that to for ur stupid post
    Frnd2 : yes…now make it fast
    Frnd1 : now r u mad ..i will like it tomrow ….
    Frnd2 : get up and like it now itself…..or else u know me naa …i will never ever like , share , or comment on ur post
    Make it fast and share it too and comment something awesome
    Frnd1: ok whatever……..
    Frnd2: oh how sweet thanks a lot man ..luv u loadzz …bye take care sweet dreams……
    Frnd1: (irritated ) haa….gud ngt .
    And while liking and commenting accidentally mom sees this …..
    Mom 😕 wht the hell…u r always in front of fb ..wait ..i am gonna tell this to ur dad ….
    Frnd1: ???
    This type of like is only applicable in the case of crazy frnds not in the case of normal ones

    And ur ff dear …u should see how my face lights up seeing ur new updates

  8. dia on February 11, 2016 9:02 pm

    Balike jwala chehra kitaab ke baare m apku yah rachna atyadhik hasyadayi h

    • Jwala on February 11, 2016 10:53 pm

      Mujhe kuch bhi understand nahi hua pls translate….mein hindi mein poor hoon
      (Grammar mistakes )……my hindi ..is such a terrible disaster dia…..

    • dia on February 12, 2016 6:21 am

      Jwaloo dr ur creation abt fb is just humourous

    • Jwala on February 12, 2016 6:20 am

      now i understood ..no neeed of translation ….i was reading it many times chehra kitab at first i didn,t undearstsnd …………….and thanku ……..for the lovely comment……….feeling happy …………… 😉
      i have decided that i will now onwards comment only in hinglish (hindi+english) …………i know it’s goona be worse but still and moreover grammar mistakes will be there ………

  9. nisha on February 12, 2016 5:26 pm

    3 times my comment get deleted dear in fever nothing can worse than this.

    I just loved it dear hero point of view is amazing video is fantastic and I loved the shayeri smiling in even fever.

    jwar se pedeet kanya ka aap sabhi ko pradaam.

    Aasha hai ki aap sabhi yahaan mangal karya ke liye ekatreet hue hai

    yahaan aake parmanand ki anubhutee hue

    are kumari richa google baba ji ki asim kripa see yahaan sab theek hai unhe kasht dene ki awashyakta nahi padi

    hindi ka gyaan shikshako ne chadi see bade namr vyavhaar ke saath pratyek suksham anuwaad ka path padhaaya wahi yahaan prayog me laya ja raha hai

    Abhyaas karne ka yeh vichaar bhi achambhneeye hai .

    Kasht dene ke liye shama prarthi hu.

    kumar nisha

    Pradaam priya saathiyoon, meri priya sehTu waasiyo , ko nisha ka pradaam.

    Yaahan sab kushal mangal hai

    Suksham sa jwar hai parantu iske liye bechone liya hua hai aur tum sabhi ko ek zor ka aalingan meri aor se.

    tumhari pyaari
    nisha

    • richa on February 12, 2016 10:20 pm

      KYAA??? JWAR KA MAAP KITNA HAI KUMARI NISHA?? MERIII PYAARI SHELI AAP SHEEGHR AARAM KAREN AAPKE VICHAAR APKE POORNTEH SVASTH HONE K BAAD SUNEGE…………..
      HAAN SACCHI MAIN ABHYAAS KA TAREEKA NEERALA HAI…..
      AUR PRANAAM HOTA HAIN SAKHI AAPSE EK MAMULI SI GALTI/BHOOL AUR HUI HAI KUKARI KO KUMAR LIKHA HAI… 😛 LOL(BHUT SA PYAAR) KUMAR TOH YAHAN KOI NAHI 😛
      KRIPYA KHYAAL RAKHNA AUR POORNTEH SWASTH HONA SHHEGARTEH…
      AAPKI SHAITAAN SAKHI
      RICHA

  10. richa on February 12, 2016 9:58 pm

    loovvvvvv u dia waloo nd and jwaloo srry was busy lol srrty 4 late reply nd lol maine lots of laugh haina ji awsemmm and truuueeeeee philosophy jwaaloo
    (  )
    \ ..\
    /…\

  11. richa on February 12, 2016 10:34 pm

    andd nishhhhhh my pleasure if i could make anyone smile sply if in ilness 🙂 u knw y i write4 less serious things bcoz i think 4 din ki hai zindagi hasloo jitnaa samet sako aachi yaadon ko samet lo0….. ;0 lol

  12. Roma on February 15, 2016 8:08 pm

    Awesome update, loved it very much. Nishaaaaaaa dear n richaaaaa my sweeeeeethearts you both so cute n naughty, hilarious. …keep it up. ..n nisha please take a very good care of yourself. …love you loads my sweeeeeet friends……

    • richa on February 22, 2016 10:48 pm

      thanxx a lot dr LOL keep reading and laugh out aloud

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