Hey guys dis is my first ff…
At leela’s residence
L- twinkle puttar uthja subah ho gyi hai kb tak soyegi tu.
T- Haan maa bss uth rhi 5min mai
L- tu bhool gyi kya aaj kunj aa rha h london se uth jaa Uv aur chink bhi aate hi honge bss.
t- thnk u maa , mai to bhool hi gyi thi agr aap nhi hote to mera kya hota
L- chl ab baate baad m krna jaldi se tayyar hoja
At the Airport
kunj arrives amritsar airport nd he found Uv nd Chinki dere
UV – Hey kunj kesa hai saale tu to bhul hi gya h hume
K-nhi yr aisa kuch nhi hai mai to humesha tum sab ko miss krta hu
C-kunj tum Uv ko ignore kro ye to kuch bhi bolta hai
K- Guys ye btao twinkle kaha h wo nhi aayi mjhse milne
C-Actually use nhi pta hai ki hum tumhe airport receive krne aaye hai
K-oh!
Okay guys mai tumse baad m milta hun maa se milna h mjhe abhi
(They all leave for there respective places)
Twinkle’s Place
T-maa mai kesi lg rhi hu
L- Twinkle puttar tu humesha ki tarah bahut sunder lg rhi hai
T-Thnx maa
At kunjs place
U-kunj puttar kesa hai tu??
K- maa mai ekdum badiya hu aap btao aap kese ho?
U- m bhi achchi hu
emotional maa-beta scene takes place
k-maa m aapse thodi der m milta hu …mjhe Twinkle se milne jaana hai chlta hu wrna wo mere se ladne lgegi…
U- okay beta,bye
k-bye maa… <3 U
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fan fiction Twinj 1 episode
21 Comments
nice..gd strt, bohutdino k baad meine ek hindi epi parha..btw iska koi intro hai kya? toh plz batao..
Good waiting for nwt
Lovely?????pls update soon????
Sherewath toh boath achi. Ham intezar kariou dusre episode ka
Nice good start:-) eagerly waiting for the next one…..
Ya sure…i’ll try to update soon the nxt epi…
Thnx guys for ur appreciation
welcome for another ff by ruchi and very gud start and next episode will be very nice as twinj going to meet
Thnx sudha… 🙂
Actually tara i did not thought about the intro as everyone knows about twinj story…but i’ll try to write it in the nxt epi… ^_^
yeah we know abt twinj..bt i wanna knw the background..like twinj is nt married in ur ff nd yuvi seems to be good..thts y
when i started my ff i dnt give ny intro coz i cond. 4m crnt trck..so i just wntd to knw..so if u can just introduce the char a bit..it wl b gd else np.
Good start. Waiting for the next epi
Ruchi very beautiful start and I am sure it will end with a beautiful end.
Ya I’ll try SMC…
thnx all for ur Appreciation…
Gud strt Ruchi nd i hope nxt part will be updated soon
This intro is on Tara’s Demand…
Leela ,Usha nd Anita who r bff & there children are also good friends…
From childhood they all were together…
Chinki is Twinkle’s best friend & kunj is UV’s bestiee…
They all were in same school & after schooling Kunj went to Abroad for his further studies nd UV also went to abroad but as his course completed month before that kunj so he came back to Amritsar before…
Twinkle nd Chinki completed there studies in Amritsar only… As Twinkle can’t leave her Mom alone…
Now in further it the journey of there friendship ,love, fight wid twists will be shown…
I hope that u all will like it…
thanks dear ruchi…i hope i didnt troubled u…m glad u posted it 4 me..luv u…waiting 4 ur nxt part…
Welcum Tara … <3 U 2.…
No no U did not troubled me…
I have posted the next part in the noon only …let see how much time it will take for review…
yup m waiting…
its soooooooo nice !!!!! i loved it please give the next episode written updates
Thnx xyz… ^_^