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Home»Fan Fiction Original»How long i shall wait for u (epi 23)
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How long i shall wait for u (epi 23)

administratorBy administratorJanuary 30, 201629 Comments5 Mins Read
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Heyyy friends this is 23rd part..thank u HAYATHI,SWARA,PRIYA KUMAR,HARINI,GEETHA,VARSHINI,VINI FAN,ANJALI-HAPPPPPPYYYYY BDAY DEAR.SOON I WILL GIVE U GIFT..SOON I WILL UNITE VINA…happy bday once again,NISHU,SESHA,RUPA,RISHI THANK U……

lets start epi 23 ..
sunaina priyas exam finishes..they both happy.priya insist sunaina to sing a song n sunaina sings

“ZAHENASEEB ZAHENASEEB TUZE CHAHU BETHASHA ZAHENASSEB
LENA DENA NAHI DUNIASE MERA BS TUZASE KAM HAI TERI AKHIYOKE SHEHER ME YARA SAB INTJAAM HAI
(she closes her eyes n reminds vinas happy moment)

screen shift to the beautifully decorated place it is filled with heart shaped ballons,teddies n roses…sunaina comes there shes wearing beautiful pink long gaun…she looks here n there but there is noone so she sees chocolate box n tedy.she take teday n start talking with it
sunaina-hmmm He is mr.parfect but late all the time..look he called me hear n he is (some 1 comes in that place sunaina terns n find viraj)
viraj-sorry!im late
sunaina(shows fake anger)-U r always late!!! n terns her head
viraj-sorry naa!! look what i brought for u! n shows chocolate..sunainas fev chocolate ….he give it to her..she smiles n then both shares chocolate…after that viraj brings guitar n start singing song sunaina is in shock as viraj is not singer but he started singing

TERE SANG BEETE HAR LAMHE
PE HAMAKO NAZ HAI TERE
JO NA BEETE USAPE EITRAJ
HAI……
N SUnaina starts laughing as viraj sings toooooo bad…n now viraj is angry n says-what????????
sunaina stops laughing n says-viraj!! the song was too GOOD,look the birds also go away hearing this n (viraj gets more angry)
but sunaina comes to him n says-but my angry bird!! i really like it no matter it is good or bad but its filled with love.. n i eagar to listen it again n again…its really special for me…..always special for me!!!!
she sees viraj seets on his knees n says-look sunaina! i dont know how to propose the girl its my 1st time..so i tried to shared my feeling with this song but…i jst wanted to say u
“I LOVE U”
sunainas eyes gets teary with happiness n she says-i love u tooo
suddenly viraj hear some sound “WAKE UP VIRAJ”…n viraj wake up n realised it was dream!!!

here sunaina finishes the song priya claps for her…..viraj msg sunaina to meet somewhere n he also sends a gift for her through his driver…priya went to meet her meera in her home…sunaina receives gift n open it she find beautifull desiner pink gaun(she was wearing this in viraj dreams)
she likes it…she goes to change
here viraj brough flowers n chocolates for sunaina…(Tere vaste mera ishq sufiyana songs plays inbg)…..sunaina gets ready
viraj comes early in that place n He saw karan there karan is hugging some1 actually a girl who is wearing same pink gaun…n she seems to be sunaina from backside(as viraj can see heronly from back) but he convince himself that she is not sunaina n walks towerds them but then karan says
karan(his eyes r close so he cant see viraj.he is pretend it but all his plan)-I LOVE U SUNAINA!! i waited soo much for this day
the girl(that viraj assumed his sunaina)- i love u too….i m also waited for this day
karan-but what about VIRAJ????
Girl(sunaina)-i will make understand him..he will definately understand! viraj is in compleat shock..
viraj can recognised its sunainas voice,same pink gaun,long black hair but she is with karan..she loves karan.so how can she play with my emotion???/…..he gets more angry he eyes beacomes red he throws chocolates,flowers there angrily ……gets in car n drive it fastly n says “I HATE U SUNAINA..HOW CAN U PLAY WITH MY EMOTIONS…I THOUGHT U ALSO LOVE ME BUT……

here karan breaks the hug …the girls face reveal she is not sunaina she is unknown girl..
karan gives her money n says
karan-u & this recorder help me lot(he record sunainas sound from collages play(Natak) where she acted)….n the girl goes away!!

karan smirk n says-VIRAJ SINGHANIA! ur anger & ego is my main weopen in this race…the race is begine brow n goes towerds his car n says-poor sunaina!!!

sunaina comes there on her scooty she seats there n see her wach n thinks this is correct time …where is viraj????…he must be doing some work i have to wait here!!
n she seats on the chair..

and in car karan sees sunaina n smiles evily n goes…

after 2 hours sunaina calls viraj but viraj mobile switch off…she thinks hope viraj will be all right …i have to called mamiji /archu di so she calls but her no is also not reachable…………

its about 3 hours sunaina wait there…but now she have to go as its very late.she again n again calls viraj with worrid face but his mobile switch off n sometime he doesnt receive call…..
So sunaina starts going but she sees the flowers n on flaor…..she is confused n tensed…

she goes to hostel…she freshn up herself n think y viraj doesnt come?????
she ask priya to call viraj..priya does n he receive priyas call ….viraj priya talks n then priya says
PRIYA-Sunaina want to talk with u viraj!!..n then priya gives mobile to sunaina ….sunaina tensly tries to speack but viraj disconnect the call!!….sunaina is tensed

here viraj crise in his room n says-why sunaina???
how can u do this to me??..

friends plzzzzz give me feedback.

Credit to: TAMANNA

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29 Comments

  1. Hayathi on January 30, 2016 12:41 am

    No way it cant be happend plzzz reveal it yaar

    • TAMANNA on January 30, 2016 12:40 pm

      Hayathi i will reveal it soon dear!

  2. sawra on January 30, 2016 1:03 am

    Nice plzzzzzz unit them sooooooooOooonnnnnn

    • TAMANNA on January 30, 2016 12:41 pm

      i will soon.unite them dear

  3. prarthna on January 30, 2016 1:54 am

    So sad plz plz unite vina asap

    • TAMANNA on January 30, 2016 12:42 pm

      soon will unite them

  4. swara on January 30, 2016 1:57 am

    swara pls unite dr pls

    • TAMANNA on January 30, 2016 12:43 pm

      yeah swara dear! i wil unite them soon

  5. priya kumar on January 30, 2016 1:58 am

    bluddy karan go to hell

    • TAMANNA on January 30, 2016 12:43 pm

      yes he is an idiot..but soon he realise his mistake

  6. meera on January 30, 2016 1:59 am

    viraj pls trust sunaina she loves you very much

    • TAMANNA on January 30, 2016 12:44 pm

      yes dear! viraj will soon find truth

  7. anjali on January 30, 2016 2:00 am

    tamanna di this is not fair you me shock and you made cry

    • TAMANNA on January 30, 2016 12:45 pm

      sooooory dear! i will unite them soon!

  8. geetha on January 30, 2016 2:00 am

    so sad for vina

    • TAMANNA on January 30, 2016 12:46 pm

      soon.happyness will come in vinas life dear!

  9. harini on January 30, 2016 2:01 am

    karan idiot chepo i will kill you

  10. rupa on January 30, 2016 2:02 am

    emotional episode

  11. sesha on January 30, 2016 2:04 am

    Oh god tamanna di, you just take my breath away

  12. nishu on January 30, 2016 2:06 am

    pls tamanna don’t make viraj propose priya

  13. VINA FAN on January 30, 2016 2:08 am

    today onwards iam not give comment totally heart breaking episode

  14. Saranya on January 30, 2016 2:09 am

    plzzzz unite soon dr how long shall i wait for vina romance

  15. Devi on January 30, 2016 7:19 am

    Unite vina

  16. usha on January 30, 2016 10:50 am

    u made me emotional… pls unite them,cannot see them crying

  17. Rishi on January 30, 2016 12:15 pm

    Nice epid jyahogaya karanko ye sab kyun kiya ne usko

    • TAMANNA on January 30, 2016 12:48 pm

      Thank u harini,rupa,sesha,nishu,vina fan,usha,rishi

  18. Jay on January 30, 2016 1:43 pm

    Pls don,t make any nonsense like karan and sunaina and viraj and priya
    Pls unite vina and expose that karan and y that karan want separate vina

    • TAMANNA on January 30, 2016 3:43 pm

      I will unite vina soon…n karan will realised his mistake soon dear!

  19. Roma on February 1, 2016 10:28 am

    Ahhh, poor sunaina, I hate karan for doing this cheap act…but why is he behaving like this. ..plzzzz dear tamanna…unite vina soooooooon. ..eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads

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