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Fan Fiction Swaragini

adhuri kahani-pain of love episode 1

administratorBy administratorJanuary 8, 201618 Comments4 Mins Read
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Hi friends,I am so sorry that I couldn’tpost my 1stchapter of ff past 2 days. And always want to tell u a lots of thanks to gave me support and comments. Especiall dolly,sahima,kritika,janvi,kiran,rohi,devika,sam,aditi,amy,hayathi,crazy girl,meena,Kuttu,surbhi,vaishnavi&maya. Also thanks to my dear silent readers. Friends I was in a bit confusion about the pairs bcoz I got somany msgs for the pairs.finally I selected my pairs.but now I will not reveal it.sorry to say that. Wait for that.

Scene:1
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Scene starts from the balcony. A beautiful girl sitting in a chair.she is reading a book.on her other hand she hava a tea cup. She wore a white coloe kurtha&blue jean with hair open.she have long hair.breeze shaking her hair a little.she have shining eyes&have a cute smile in her lips.(in background we can see a big flowerwase,filled with red roses)she took one of them and smell it.her face become more beautiful. The girl is Ragini!

Scene:2
In a room. A cute girl sleeping in the bed. She is laying in the bed,facing the window. The sunlight made her face red. Her cute face have a smile.we can’t see her beautiful red lips fully,bcoz her hair made a cover up on it. The little cute girl is Swara!
Ragini entered the room(they two in same room)she saw swara. Her face become happy&smile a little.she goes near to bed&removed swara’s hair from her face. Ragini looked at swara and think that she is still like a kid.she kissed in her forehead.
Ragini is about to turn.but swara grabed her hand. Ragini look at her. Swara is still closed her eyes but have a wide smile in her face.

Ragini:swara,are u not sleeeping?then y u laying on the bed?come on get up. It is already late.
Swara:meri pyaari ladoo,don’t get angry& don’t even think about that swara is not going to get up now.
Then she dragged Ragini to the bed.
Swara: come we will sleep together some more time.
Then she hugged ragini tightly.but Ragini break the hug &said.
Ragini:no swara I don’t want,&I will not let u too.
she draged swara out of the bed.
Swara:no,don’t pls I ….
Ragini not allow Swara to speak,she pushed swara in to the washroom&closed the door
Ragini(to herself):swara is always in her childhood
Then she hear a voice called out her name.
Ragini:ma I am coming.
Scene 3
A big hall. All are sitting in the dining table to have break fast. A beautiful women serving food to all.she is sumi.
Ragini: maa,today what is special?
Sumi:nothing special but I made some carrot halwa for u.
Ragini:what?carrot halwa,I love u maa love u so much.
She kissed sumi .sumi smiled &kissed her back.
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Shekher: what is thi?I told ur mother to make it&now u gave ur love only for her
Ragini:sorry papa,how I know that?
She hugged shekher and gave him also a kiss.
Sumi:shekher u r become a kid day by day. How u can?u r a father of two young girls.don’t forget that.
Ragini(in a teasing tone): not only he.some times u also forgot that.
Sumi looked ragini with a question look.ragini made a naughty face.(I hope u all understand that).
sumi become blush& grabed her ears.
Ragini: maa,leave me,ouch..it is really painful.
Daadi:Ladoo,we r also here,sirf tum theenom nahi.
Only after that Ragini think that.she make a sorry face&go to daadi.
Ragini:sorry daadi,I didn’t forgot u .how I can forgot my beautiful roses.?
Then she gave kisses to 3 of them,daadi l,daadaji&dida.
Dida:laado,where is shona,?

Suddenly heared swara’s voice.
Swara:I am here. Are u all finished ur kissing competition,then pls look at me also
every one look at her&start burst out of laughing. Swara become angry.
Swara:will u pls stop it.
all become silent. But,Ragini can’t control her laugh,she started laughing again. Swara get super angry.

Precap:swaragini’s funny fight&entry of heroes!!

How was my ff’s first chapter?if u like it pls comment me that.I need ur support for my next step.so my dears I hope u all will gave me ur valid comments. Thank u

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18 Comments

  1. Aditi Singh on January 8, 2016 3:54 am

    very nice …..

  2. kaps on January 8, 2016 4:55 am

    What are the pairs

  3. jaya on January 8, 2016 7:29 am

    Very nice. Keep it up

  4. akku on January 8, 2016 7:53 am

    nice..
    pls can u make it lengthy. .
    reveal pair’s pls.

  5. Anaita on January 8, 2016 7:57 am

    Very nyc plzz continue i hope it would be raglak and swasan..

  6. surbhi on January 8, 2016 8:38 am

    Nice

  7. khusubu on January 8, 2016 8:39 am

    very good starting keep it up

  8. keerthu on January 8, 2016 8:56 am

    Nice…

  9. Janvi on January 8, 2016 9:10 am

    Lovely…make it ragsan,swalak

  10. Lahari on January 8, 2016 9:20 am

    Nice make it swalak,ragsa plz

  11. Hayathi on January 8, 2016 9:54 am

    Ha ha ha so fun yaar

  12. swara on January 8, 2016 10:20 am

    nice

  13. Kittu on January 8, 2016 10:59 am

    Nice start bt pls make it long nd waiting fr next

  14. jenny on January 8, 2016 11:01 am

    Hope it swasan and raglak

  15. atiya on January 8, 2016 2:34 pm

    plz na swalak yaarrr

  16. aditi on January 8, 2016 2:45 pm

    Nice .. But make it swalak and ragsan ….plsss….

  17. Sahima on January 8, 2016 4:30 pm

    It’s very nice and interestING. But plz swasan and raglak.

  18. Kritika on January 8, 2016 6:57 pm

    Nice..bt hope its swasan

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