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Home»Colors»Bekaboo»Bekaaboo…Uncontrolled love… Zain Shivangi Karan Jotwani Mohsin PreeJun SS Part 1
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Bekaaboo…Uncontrolled love… Zain Shivangi Karan Jotwani Mohsin PreeJun SS Part 1

JasminerahulBy JasminerahulMay 18, 20237 Comments6 Mins Read
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Bekaaboo…Uncontrolled love… Part 1

I dedicate this story to my friend _ingenuity_phoenix who suggested me to write a story taking inspiration from the malayalam movie ‘Kappela’.Thank you for suggesting 3 male actors who are apt for playing the male lead roles in this SS.

I thank my dearest friend ingenuity_phoenix for the beautiful cover pages.

 


2 twin babies were born.Their parents Arjun and Preeta became very happy and pampered them.

Arjun and Preeta looked at their babies cutely.

Arjun:They both are so cute.

Arjun:Thank you so much for giving me 2 sweet daughters.

Preeta:Thank you so much to you too.

They smiled.

Naming ceremony of the babies….

Arjun and Preeta were holding each baby in their hands.

Arjun:She will be known as Kavya.

Preeta:She will be known as Pihu.

Everyone smiled.

 

 

 

After 6 years…

Arjun and Preeta were very happy with their daughters.

Arjun went near Preeta with a naughty smile.

Arjun:Give me a kiss Preeta.

Preeta stared at Arjun:What?

Suddenly Kavya went near them.

Kavya:Mr.Handsome…why are you asking mumma for a kiss?

Arjun smiled at her frank question while Preeta gave shocking expression.

Arjun:Nothing Kavya…you go and play.

Kavya:Ok.

Kavya went to play.

Preeta:Arjun…why did you ask me for a kiss?Kavya heard it and she asked you about it.Today’s generation has no shame.

Arjun chuckled.

Arjun:Now give me a kiss Preeta.

Preeta:Stupid!

Preeta pretended to be angry and pushed him.Arjun laughed.

 

 

Kavya ran towards Arjun.

Kavya:Mr.Handsome!Are you sad that mumma did’nt kiss you?

Arjun felt shy.

He thought:Preeta is right.The new generation has no shame.

Kavya:You don’t worry.I will give you a kiss.

Arjun smiled.

Arjun:Then kiss me doll.

Arjun bent down and Kavya kissed his forehead.

Arjun kissed her cheek back.

Preeta and Pihu smiled at them.

Pihu:Papa!

Arjun turned back and he understood what Pihu is longing for.

Arjun:Can I not kiss my Pihu baby?

He kissed her cheek.All the 4 had a family hug.

 

 

Preeta was chopping vegetables.Her finger got pricked.

Preeta:Ahhh!

Kavya went near her and looked at her finger.

Kavya:Mumma,do you feel pain?

Preeta:No Kavya.I am alright.

Kavya:Show me.

Kavya held her finger and blew air at the wound.

 

 

 

Arjun came back from his office.He saw Preeta looking very upset.

Arjun:What happened Preeta?Why are you looking sad?

Preeta started crying making him more shocked.

Arjun:What happened Preeta?Why are you crying?

Preeta told him something.Arjun was shocked.

Preeta:I did’nt want this Arjun.I did’nt expect this to happen.

Arjun embraced her from behind to comfort her.

Arjun:Preeta….don’t be upset.Be positive.What if it’s happening for better.Because it’s a blessing from God.

Preeta:I don’t know Arjun.But I feel disturbed.

Arjun:No…no need Preeta.

Arjun wiped her tears.

 

 

 

After 20 years….

 

A party….

Kavya and Pihu came downstairs.

Pihu:We are so glad to welcome you all to be a part of our celebration.

Kavya:Let us welcome the most beautiful,the most adorable and the most loving couple-Arjun Suryavanshi and Preeta Suryavanshi.

Arjun and Preeta came.

Kavya and Pihu hugged them and said:Happy wedding anniversary dad and mom.

Arjun and Preeta smiled:Thank you.We both are lucky to get such lovely daughters.

Kavya and Pihu smiled.

A guy arrived there with a cake.It was Adarsh who is their neighbour.

Adarsh:Here is the cake.It’s from my own bakery.

Arjun:Wow!Then it will be yummy.

Preeta:Yes.After all Adarsh is the main baker in the bakery.

Adarsh smiled.

Arjun and Preeta cut the cake and fed each other.Then they fed the cake to Pihu and Kavya.

Kavya played music.

 

Arjun and Preeta started dancing.

Sun le o mahiya

Dil se sajda tera

Sun le o mahiya

Dil se sajda tera

 

Tere bina jee na lage

Tere bina jee na lage

Tere bina jee na lage

 

Sun le o mahiya

Dil se sajda tera

Sun le o mahiya

Dil se sajda tera

 

Tere bina jee na lage

Tere bina jee na lage

Tere bina jee na lage

 

Aaja re aaja re aaja re aaja re

Aaja re aaja re aaja re aaja re

 

 

Pihu imagined dancing with Adarsh.

Sun le o mahiya

Dil se sajda tera

Sun le o mahiya

Dil se sajda tera

Tere bina jee na lage

Tere bina jee na lage

Tere bina jee na lage

 

Aaja re aaja re aaja re aaja re

Aaja re aaja re aaja re aaja re

Sun le o mahiya

Dil se sajda tera

Sun le o mahiya

Dil se sajda tera

Adarsh imagined dancing with Kavya.

Tere bina jee na lage

Tere bina jee na lage

Tere bina jee na lage

(Kundali bhagya)

Pihu went near Adarsh and said:The cake was yummy.I know that you baked it specially for mumma papa.You are very sweet.

Adarsh smiled:Thank you very much.You all are special for me.So it’s my pleasure to bake cake for you all.

Pihu was lost in his cute smile.

 

 

While walking at the party,Kavya’s foot slipped and Adarsh caught her with his hand.

Adarsh was lost in her beautiful eyes.

Kavya:Thank you Adarsh.I would have fallen down.

Adarsh:It’s ok Kavya.By the way you are looking very pretty in this dress.

Kavya:Thank you.

Kavya walked away.

 

 

A young drummer was playing the drum.

All were clapping hands and cheering up for him:Pratham!Pratham!

Kavya walked through the crowd and reached in the front somehow to watch his performance.Suddenly in the wind her duppatta fell over her face.Only her eyes were visible.Pratham’s eyes fell over her shining eyes.

He thought:Her eyes are so magical that I am getting attracted towards them.I wish I could see her face.

Halchal Kahin
Dhadkan Nai
Ye Hai Galat Ya Sahi

Kavya removed her duppatta from her face.Pratham blinked his eyes seeing her beauty.

Bekaaboo
Bekaaboo

She was smiling seeing his performance while he was lost in her.

Bekaaboo Karti Hai Muje
Tu Jo Aise Ki
Bekaaboo(Bekaaboo webseries).

 

 

At night….

Kavya’s phone rang.She picked up the call.

Kavya:Hello!

It was a male voice:Hi..I am…

Kavya:You are..?

He:I can’t say my name now.What’s your name?

Kavya:You can’t tell your name and you don’t know me.Then why did you call me?

He:I simply dialed a random number and got you.

Kavya was surprised as he said that openly.

Kavya:I admire your honesty.But why did you call me?

He:Simply.I was feeling lonely as no none loves me.No one cares for me.So I felt like talking to someone.That’s why.

Kavya:Why do you think that nobody loves you?There maybe someone who loves you.

He:No one loves me.That’s the truth.My eldest sister always scold me.

Kavya:She maybe scolding you because she cares for you and wants you to be the best.

He:I don’t think so.

Kavya:You are seeing only her angry side.Try to look at her soft side also.Then you may know her real feelings for you.

He:I will see.

Kavya:Ok.Then I am ending this call.Bye!

He:Bye!

After cutting the call,Kavya thought:Strange guy!

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    7 Comments

    1. Jiya A on May 18, 2023 8:50 pm

      I really like the plot…. A love triangle or it’s a complete love square??… Is that caller pratham?… Waiting for next…

      • Jasminerahul on May 19, 2023 12:18 am

        Thanks a lot.You will know it in the next part.

    2. Ishita zoy on May 19, 2023 3:54 pm

      Very nice episode. Kavya’s kiss dialogue was 🤣😂. Surprised to see eisha as pihu. Pihu loves adarsh and Adarsh loves kavya right? And who is the hero? Who will Kavya pair up? Very amazing plot.. waiting for next episode..

      • Jasminerahul on May 19, 2023 6:03 pm

        Thanks a lot.why are you not uploading your one shots?missing them.

    3. Ishita zoy on May 19, 2023 7:54 pm

      @jasminerahul..iam sorry for making late and giving falso hope. I will upload them after a month..now iam just reading and commenting the story. And i thought to finish Mera pyaar FF first..so that i will be free more..

      • Jasminerahul on May 20, 2023 1:59 am

        But you already finished typing the one shots months back.you just need to post them. Right?

    4. Ishita zoy on May 20, 2023 9:37 am

      Yes..i lost pics. I’ll try to post it soon..

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