Hello frnds…..m new here…. Dis is my frst fanfic….i suppose u all will like it….sry if it is nt upto ur expectations bt i ll try my best…
Intro is nt required fr ny character….. Its all d way same frm d serial……
My story starts after the truth revelation of ragini….( after d vedio showing ragini accepting d truth) so guys here i go
Ragini stands still….everybody is in shock…dadi comes to swara…..she folds her hand and collapses on floor…..swara gets shocked…….dadi is unconscious……..
Shekhr: call d ambulance…..fast
Scene 2
Hospital
Doctor comes after checking dadi…..
Doc: she has gone through lots of stress….her bp suddenly fall….she s fine…we ve given her sleeping meds…she needs to b in hospital fr two days….
Shekhar: thank you doc
Doctor: as per rules only two people cn stay here.
Swara says…maa baba..aap log jaiye….i ll take care of dadi here
Sumi: beta bt u r alone here
sanskar an lakshya(together) can i….
Swara: ok sanskar u can stay wid me
Lakshya looks on
Everybody goes home
Swara sits on bench….sanky comes…. Sees swara crying…
Sanky: swara y r u crying
Swara: i did not knw dat my own sister will do dis….y….. Y god is doing all this….she hugs sanky….sanky consoles her…( mai tenu samjhawa ki…)
Suddenly swara realises their proximity…. She frees herself frm d hug…
Sanky in heart says..swara i knw..u ll b away frm me after sometimes….u belong to lakshya i knw….bt plz explain my heart….it belongs to u only…….
Sanky goes frm der…..standing near a window….he remembers moments he spent wid swara….he sees lord krishna idol…in his heart he says plz god….jisme meri swara khush usme mai khush….usko uski zindgi ki hr khushi se rubaru kra do….use uske sachhe chahne wale se milwa do…his eyes start tearing up
2 days pass
Dadi discharged…..
Lakshya packs ragini’s begs…
Ragini: laksh ek mouka bs ek…. Plz hm hath jodte h plz….
Laksh: i dnt want to see ur face ever ragini….
He packs her bags n throws her out of house…co incidently swara comes jst den…she falls on her feet…screen freezes on their face…..
Precap: ragini planning to kill laksh
Guys hope u all liked it
16 Comments
Nice nice nice pls read my ff ” raglak ki ek kahani”
Thnk u 4 sawsan I jst lv thm nd raginis plan 2 kll laksh nt a gd idea
Nice start I like negative cute ragini
More swasan scene plz
hey… nice start… but don’t turn any of the four to negative… we all like those two pairs as protagonist… it’s my suggestion…
Dnt wry u all…ragini will b negative jst fr 4 to 5 chaps…after dat she ll become our cute ragini again…dnt wry
Its Nice Soumya
nice. .
swasan. ..
nice start…. plz don’t show ragini as negative…..
nyc going, s i lyk cute ragini s antagonist. Sry if hrt any1. Waitin for nxt prt
plz make it a lil long otherwise it is a very nice ff…
nice yaar
nice..
Dnt wry u all….ragini’s charecter has been turned positive in my nxt part….dnt wry…it was all to bring swasan closer….it all will b something vry gud….swara will realise her love fr sanky….bt at d same tym…bears some pain…bt everything will b fyn….hope u all will lyk it….waise thx a lot u all fr ur beautiful comments
Nice dr plz write little bit long
superb..
Superb