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Home»Fan Fiction»Swasan – I dreamed a dream – *First meeting* Episode 1
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Swasan – I dreamed a dream – *First meeting* Episode 1

administratorBy administratorDecember 13, 201555 Comments3 Mins Read
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Hi friends!!!

It’s Sindhuja… Till now I am a reader… Now I penned down my imagination here… It’s just swasan’s first meeting for now… I can’t promise an excellent plot… but try to maintain a good plot to impress you… hope you will like this…and I am also a writer with the thirst of comments and feedback of yours… the progression of story is in your hands… a single word comment, critics also will be accepted warm-heartedly… now enjoy it…

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“when we first met I honestly had no idea that you would be so important to me”

At Mumbai beach,

A man who is wearing a black vest and cream color trousers with messy wavy hair, stands keeping 30 feet distance from the water, holding a brush in one hand and a color panel in another hand to capture the blazing lady, who is peeked from the blue blanket after having a long 11 hours sleep and stretched her orange hued rays shyly. The birds are chirped seeing the shyness of her. The wind blows and pushes the dark clouds away. He is satisfied after seeing the painting of that blazing beauty and a smile spread across his face which is went away within a minute. The paints which placed near the board are now on the painting, creating its own pattern, without leaving a trace of that beautiful blazing lady, making his temper to increase. He turns and his anger subsides in a second.

He holds his breath for a moment. There, a golden beauty who is wearing black jogger pants and pink sleeveless t-shirt, tying the black jacket around her waist. Her face glows and so the brownish eyes shine with the early morning sun rays. The wind touches her soft cheek via the few strands fell from the high pony of her beautiful silky mid length wavy hair. Her sharp nose has some sweat drops like raindrops on a rose bud. Those thin rosy lips of her moves up and down, conveying, her apologize for the mishap while holding one of her lotus petal like ears. She comes towards him and picks up her ball. Before, she walk away, she turns and again mouthed a sorry. His trance breaks when he hears one of her friend calling her, ‘swara… come fast…’. The chocolate brown orbs of him gleams and a wide smile spread across his face.

He picks up his phone at the fifth ring, ‘hello mom’. ‘sanskar, where are you?? Why didn’t you inform me where you are going???’, asks Annapurna with disappointment. ‘I am in the beach mom… you were in deep sleep… how can I disturb my angel from her beautiful sleep???’, sanskar replies. ‘you learned how to pacify me… Come to home soon… ’, says Annapurna. ‘yeah mom… coming…’, says sanskar and cuts the call. He looks at the direction swara went and utters, ‘swara… my golden beauty…’

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55 Comments

  1. Sree harini on December 13, 2015 11:13 pm

    You have good skills dear. Go ahead

    • sindhuja on December 14, 2015 3:24 pm

      thank you…

  2. swara on December 13, 2015 11:16 pm

    sounds like interesting

    • sindhuja on December 14, 2015 3:25 pm

      will try to make you feel the same til the end… thank you for commenting…

  3. bhagi on December 13, 2015 11:16 pm

    nice

    • sindhuja on December 14, 2015 3:25 pm

      thank you bhagi

  4. fransi on December 13, 2015 11:19 pm

    Nice try this is really good keep it up

    • sindhuja on December 14, 2015 3:26 pm

      thank you fransi…

  5. angel on December 13, 2015 11:21 pm

    nice start and awesome thought…….

    • sindhuja on December 14, 2015 3:26 pm

      thank you so much for your comment…

  6. Lateef on December 13, 2015 11:23 pm

    love this keep it up

    • sindhuja on December 14, 2015 3:27 pm

      i am glad that you loved it, lateef…

  7. Hayathi on December 13, 2015 11:25 pm

    Cool yaar

    • sindhuja on December 14, 2015 3:27 pm

      thanks for your cool comment…

  8. akku on December 13, 2015 11:30 pm

    nice

    • sindhuja on December 14, 2015 3:28 pm

      thanks, akku…

  9. Tara on December 13, 2015 11:32 pm

    I’m vry sure ur plot ll b vry interesting. Ur writing amazingly dear. Seriously the way u described and d way u personified is superbbbbbbbb. Make it long from nxt epi dear. U r wer in TN ??

    • sindhuja on December 14, 2015 3:30 pm

      Thank you so much tara… i will try to make it more interesting… sure… will give long updates…

  10. K S V on December 13, 2015 11:33 pm

    really very nice sindhuja..i love the way u wrote.

    • sindhuja on December 14, 2015 3:30 pm

      thank you so much, K S V…

  11. pavi on December 13, 2015 11:34 pm

    Super intro… Continue… Yo have very good writing skills..

    • sindhuja on December 14, 2015 3:31 pm

      thank you for the appreciation, pavi…

  12. meghs on December 13, 2015 11:37 pm

    its seems interesting..

    • sindhuja on December 14, 2015 3:32 pm

      way to go, meghs… keep reading… thank you for the comment…

  13. radhi on December 13, 2015 11:38 pm

    Good.. Keep writing…

    • sindhuja on December 14, 2015 3:32 pm

      if you keep commenting then i can keep writing like this, radhi… thanks for the comment…

  14. aqsa on December 14, 2015 12:22 am

    Amazing keep it up

    • sindhuja on December 14, 2015 3:33 pm

      thank you agsa… will try to make every episode with this amazingness…

    • sindhuja on December 14, 2015 3:40 pm

      sorry aqsa…. typing error… hope you won’t mind it…

  15. sri on December 14, 2015 12:30 am

    superb start dr

    • sindhuja on December 14, 2015 3:33 pm

      thank you so much, sri…

  16. Tania on December 14, 2015 12:48 am

    Hey sindhuja u write very well.plz make it long.story line is really very good

    • sindhuja on December 14, 2015 3:34 pm

      thank you for your appreciation, tania… will give long updates…

  17. Ashley on December 14, 2015 1:13 am

    Sweet… do continue

    • sindhuja on December 14, 2015 3:35 pm

      will continue if you always comment like this sweetly… thank you, Ashley….

  18. karthi on December 14, 2015 8:32 am

    Oh super dear,,,,,,keep rocking

    • sindhuja on December 14, 2015 3:36 pm

      i will rock with story if you support me… thank you, karthi…

  19. Honey on December 14, 2015 8:50 am

    Very good start dr. Ur way of writing is awesome..

    • sindhuja on December 14, 2015 3:37 pm

      thank you so much, honey…. i will try to maintain it…

  20. asha on December 14, 2015 11:17 am

    Amazing keeeeep writing………..
    Gooood one………,.

    • sindhuja on December 14, 2015 3:37 pm

      thank youuuu, asha…. keep commentinggg…

  21. Little angel on December 14, 2015 12:04 pm

    Very good make sure you carry on

    • sindhuja on December 14, 2015 3:38 pm

      thank you, little angel… please give your little support to carry the story forward…

  22. manu on December 14, 2015 2:20 pm

    That’s great start dear….loved ur description

    • sindhuja on December 14, 2015 3:38 pm

      i am glad you loved it, manu…. keep reading and commenting….

  23. surbhi on December 14, 2015 3:14 pm

    Superb keep writing

    • sindhuja on December 16, 2015 3:10 pm

      thanks, surbhi… keep commenting…

  24. tia on December 14, 2015 6:24 pm

    nice update loved the description of sun and our golden beauty continue soon but title is a lil ajeeb like it sounds like i walked a walk,

    • sindhuja on December 16, 2015 3:11 pm

      thank, tia… but i couldn’t get you… what’s weird in that title?? please can you tell it clearly???

  25. Harshi on December 14, 2015 7:16 pm

    Wonderful start dea..

    • sindhuja on December 16, 2015 3:11 pm

      thank you so much, harshi…

  26. Sonia on December 14, 2015 11:12 pm

    The way you compare the beauty of swara is soooo beautiful………..
    Please dear keep writing and make us happy……… You have a very good writing skills and the way you explain the situation of the particular moment is awesome……. I am totally impressed by ur ff…….

    • sindhuja on December 16, 2015 3:12 pm

      thank you so much, sonia.. i will make try to make you happy with the update… keep reading commenting..

  27. zella on December 18, 2015 7:08 pm

    I cannot express in words how excellent you ff is . I loved it sindhuja dear!!!!!!!!!!???????????please go ahead

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