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Home»Fan Fiction»Being with my so called kidnapper # episode 53 # mission unsuccessful
Fan Fiction Ishq Mein Marjawan 2

Being with my so called kidnapper # episode 53 # mission unsuccessful

Aisha08By Aisha08September 17, 202128 Comments6 Mins Read
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Hello peepies aagyi me

The sudden dropaege in comments broke my heart but still i will post becoz of some honest readers..

Let’s start

Scene 1

Next day morning

Vansh’s pov

I was sleeping peacefully until my sleep broke due to some tinkle sound..

I opened my eyes lazily and my heart beat stopped for a sec..

My love my jaan was getting ready in a red color saree with wet hairs and water dripping from her bare back..

I gulped seeing her.. without any efforts she looks so tempting what if she started putting efforts

You will be doomed my subconscious mind mocked..

“Good morning love” i said hugging her from back..

Keeping my chin on her shoulder i licked the water from her shoulder..

“Can’t u think anything else than romance” she scoffed narrowing her eyes

“I can but only in my sane mind..and u made me go insane in your love my love” i said digging my head in the crook of her neck..

“Vanshu let me go na..plz..i have to go at maanyata’s place..” she said wriggling in my arms

“Give me a morning kiss and go” i said huskily in her ears..

Pov ends

Riddhima’s pov

Day by day this majnu raisinghania is becoming more pervert..

I turned and traced his face sensually by my fingers..

Pulling him by his hairs i leaned towards his lips..

More and..more …and “ufff..ridddhhuuu😫” he whinned as soon as my lips touched his cheek..

“Good morning jaan” i said and ran before he could even react..

” You will be severely punished for this Mrs.raisinghania..” he said stomping his foot on ground but I wasn’t there to laugh on his grumpy face .

Pov ends

Scene 2

Afternoon

Maanyata’s pov

“How was your first night bhabhi..oh sorry i forgot that was not your first night with bhai” i said teasing my sweet bhabhi..

“Is this even u Maanyata ..since when u started behaving like this..oh got it..kisi ki sangat ka asar hai” bhabhi  said smiling sheeply

Why i am feeling it was double meaning talk..

“It’s just i am more comfortable with u and bhai now” i said trying to divert the topic

But seems like she is upto something

“And what about angre.. aren’t u comfortable with him”  bhabhi asked not so casually

“Ab..ab wo.. it’s not like that..he is nice” i said trying to sound normal but failed miserably

” C’mon sweety.. accept you like him” she said and my eyes popped out in shock

Pov ends

Riddhima’s pov

I can see the  glint in her eyes after i mentioned about angre.

Although she hided that but it was like same glint which i used to find in my own eyes after just thinking about my teddy bear raisinghania..

“Who ..me..no bhabhi..he is good frnd of mine” she said stammering..

Vanshu ki behen hai kese maanegi itni jldi..😏

“Oh then it’s ok..i was thinking about getting him engaged with one of my frnd..” i said controlling my laughter

“What..nooooooo” she shouted and i laughed..hard

” Don’t supress your feelings..confess before u loose him” i said being serious holding her hand

” He is just good friend.. moreover i know he doesn’t have any feelings for me” she said and i huffed giving up..

It’s useless to give any preach to this bro sis duo😞..

“Think again before he vanishes from your sight” i said and left the house not before hugging her ..

Pulling out my cell phone from purse i pinged vanshu with a sad emoji

” Mission unsuccessful😞”

Pov ends

Vansh’s pov

My phone pinged and i know what’s in it

“Mission unsuccessful” her message popped up

“You are useless..dumbo..now look VR ka jaadu😎”i replied smirking

” If angre won’t confess his feelings today then you are not allow to enter in our room for whole week” she replied back and i gulped

Biwi se panga never changa ..my mind mocked me  and i walked towards study as fast as i could

“Hii dude.. whatsup” i asked keeping my hand on Angre’s shoulder

And he looked at me as if i am a ghost..

I tried to behave normal but his skeptical gaze was scaring the shit out of me..

I imagined my riddhu kicking me out of the room..this sole thought was enough to boost my morale..

“Boss you ok right.. should i call the doctor” angre asked and i rolled my eyes on his question..

Pov ends

Angre’s pov

” I don’t need doctor but u should send him to maanyata’s place she is quite ill today” boss said and several bad thoughts occupied my mind

“What..how ..when but she didn’t tell me ..we talked today morning” i said spilling the beans myself

Shit!you are trapped angre..

“U know I don’t appreciate beating around the bush.. let’s come to the point ..i know u like her” boss said and my heart popped out from my ribcage

“Ab..ab wo..no it’s nothing like that she is just my friend” i said trying to state the not so truthful fact

“The angre who used to run away from girls is now talking to a girl everyday.. taking care of her..and saying she is just frnd.. amazing bro..” boss said i bow down my head gazing at floor as if it was the most fascinating thing that time

“I am not supposed to add a person in my life..my life is full of danger and I can’t risk anyone else” i said stating the fact and this time a real one..

“Nobody’s life is more dangerous than mine..but still i have my sweetheart with me.. because she is not my weakness she is my strength..

She keeps me motivated to come home safe and sound.. because i know she won’t sleep without my embrace” boss said triggering the hidden emotions in my heart..

” Nah.. it’s nothing like that..” i said and left the study to calm my racing heart

Pov ends

Scene 2 ( night)

Riddhima’s pov

“Weren’t u supposed to stay out of room for a week” i said crossing my arms over my chest..

“Ab..ab wo..baby..u know na i can’t stay away from u” vanshu said smiling sheeply

“But i am a useless dumbo right..

And where was that VR ka jaadu..🙄” i said shooting daggers at him..

“Ab..ab wo..i tried hard.. very hard..but angre is your brother afterall.. a stubborn jerk” he said throwing his hands in air

“I am jerk…🙄..you know..i was thinking to take u inside but seems like u don’t love your room much” i said pushing him outside the room..

“Are..aree..riddhu..baby listen to me na..where will this abla aadmi go..i can’t even sleep without you..plz baby” he said pleading like a kid..

I know i also can’t sleep without u..but u should get punished for messing with Mrs.VR..

We were literally arguing standing outside our room suddenly…

“Bachaooooooo!!!” A voice boomed in whole mansion making both of us rooted at our spot..

Pov ends

Done done dana done

Hope u all like it

Comments tapka dena

Lob u all

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Aisha08

    Well i m not so good at writing ff as i m shayar and i love to pen down my thoughts in shyri..and here i m exploring my writing skills

    28 Comments

    1. prapti0809 on September 17, 2021 9:13 am

      Awesome di. Loved it

    2. Japjot Kaur on September 17, 2021 9:15 am

      Wonderful di
      Loved it ❤️❤️
      Suspense chod diya

    3. Akshara on September 17, 2021 9:16 am

      Awesome

    4. TG on September 17, 2021 9:22 am

      Amazing

    5. RIVAN on September 17, 2021 9:23 am

      AMAZING

    6. Priyanshi_13 on September 17, 2021 9:28 am

      Amazing update dear 😍 loved it 💕

    7. Pure_love on September 17, 2021 9:29 am

      Loved it di 💕 plese post a loooonggg os 😚😛 soonn love your.posts ✌️

    8. diya on September 17, 2021 9:31 am

      awesomeee

    9. Sneha on September 17, 2021 9:35 am

      Amazing

    10. Prabhleen 😊 on September 17, 2021 9:52 am

      Amazing episode✨. Loved it😘. Last mein kon aaya 🤔. Suspense mein chod diya.

    11. Priyanka Thakur on September 17, 2021 9:59 am

      Awesome episode Aishu again ended the episode with suspense eagerly waiting for next update

    12. myraShaikh on September 17, 2021 10:18 am

      it’s amazing post soon 😇🥰😍

    13. Acchu on September 17, 2021 10:23 am

      Awesome EP 😍, and new entry is that be vansh Dadi🤔

    14. Sumisha on September 17, 2021 10:24 am

      Awesome dear ❤😘

    15. DDD on September 17, 2021 10:25 am

      Amazing update dear loved it 🥰❤️

    16. Anisha on September 17, 2021 10:31 am

      Amazing ep post asap

    17. Keerthi p on September 17, 2021 11:00 am

      Nice story ☺️

    18. Fatima on September 17, 2021 11:08 am

      Awesome episode Di loved it

    19. Nisha on September 17, 2021 11:16 am

      Loved it
      Please don’t ever separate riansh….
      Lots of love ❤

    20. Zara on September 17, 2021 1:06 pm

      Amazing ❤️

    21. Neetu on September 17, 2021 1:33 pm

      Nice

    22. Cutuuu on September 17, 2021 2:17 pm

      Awesome ❤ Loved it…

    23. Mahi sharma on September 17, 2021 2:18 pm

      Fantastic update 👏👌👍loved it 🥰🥰

    24. Varshini on September 17, 2021 5:16 pm

      Amazing 😍❤️

    25. Riansh🥰 on September 17, 2021 8:06 pm

      Wow
      Very beautiful episodes
      So they tried their level best to make maanayta and angre to confess their love but in vain

      Due to some personal reasons
      I won’t be able to comment but I tried to read full episodes
      Now I will read and comment regularly

    26. Parita on September 17, 2021 11:40 pm

      Amazing episode di!
      So cute and lovely❤

    27. AarushiSoni on September 18, 2021 6:32 am

      Superb di.. amazing ❤️

    28. Alisha Roy on September 18, 2021 6:58 am

      Amazing

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