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Piya Rangrezz (Twisty) Part 24

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Bhavri sits on bed and cries.she says wts happening to me.no this cant be.am I in love with aditya.she smiles at the thought and says YES.i m in love with him.she admits her love for adi.
After the party is over sherdha go into the room and spend dome romantic moments.they dose off.in the middle of the night shraddha wakes up and hold her tummy.she tries to wake up sher.he is in half sleep.
Sher:wt happened shraddha ji??
Shraddha:I want to eat gol gappas.
Sher:ok I will bring in the morning.
Shraddha:no way I want it now.go to kitchen and make it.
Sher:not now plz.
Shraddha takes the water jug and throws on him.
He wakes up and says oho wt u did.
Shraddha:I need gol gapps right now.go!!!
Sher:ok ok relax don’t get angry I will just go and make it.
He heads to leave shraddha calls him.
Shraddha:sher ji.make the puri crispy,
Sher ok.he moves but shraddha again stops him.
Shraddha:sher ji,make the material spicy.
Sher:ok.he again is about to leave.shraddha stops him.
Shraddha:sher ji.dont forget to add some chatni.
Sher:ok madam ji.
he is about to leave but shraddha stops him again.
Shraddha:sher ji.bring fast.
Sher:ok
Shraddha:go now.
Sher:I m waiting for u to call again if sth is left.
Shraddha:no nothing go and come back soon.
Sher:sure.
Shraddha:yes.
Sher is about to leave but shraddha stops him again.he is irritated.
Shraddha:sher ji.i forgot one thing.
Sher:wt is it now???
Shraddha:I love you!!!
Sher smiles and says I know.i will take my gift for ur slavery after I return.he gives her a flying kiss and winks at her.she smiles.
Sher reaches kitchen and sees vikas.
Sher:oye wt r u doing here??
Vikas:bhaiya ji!sunheri has made my night hell.she wants to eat chaat.
Sher:even your bhabhi is not sparing me.she needs gol gappas.lets try or else their mood swings will kill us.
They try to make it but create a mess.otherside both sunehri and shraddha are calling out their respective husbands to come fast.neha gears the noise and comes to kitchen and sees them in a dishevelled state and bursts into laugh.
Sher:plz don’t laugh.
Neha:u look like jokers.
Vikas:wt should we do??our wives are so dangerous in this pregnancy phase.
Sher:God!their mood swings are so severe.if I go bare handed shraddha ji will kill me.
Neha:dnt wry.let me help.
Neha prepares chaat and gol gappas as demanded.they thank her and leave.Adi was standing at the stairs and watched her smilingly.
He comes to her and tries to talk and says thnk u for doing this.
Neha:thnks for what?shraddha and sunehri are now my friends too and they are pregnant.i felt hapoy to do this.
Adi:u r as good as before.how come u change ur looks??
Neha smiles.
Adi:I mean u were so jhalli type.and had no sense of fashion but now u r an Angel.
Neha smiles at him and says time changes everything.she heads to go but he holds her hand and pulls her back.he whispers in her ears that yes u r right time really changes everything.time is changing my feelings for u too.be careful.cuz I m being drawn towards u.
She shys and shuts her eyes.
He caresses her hairs and moves his finger on his his face.she breathes heavily and sets herself free and runs to her room.
He smiles and bhavri who had seen this from her room’s window is upset.
Sher makes shraddha eat with his own hands.
Shraddha:u should learn sth from neha.she had to work hard bcz of me.
Sher:she is our friend and she has full right to do this.
Shraddha:I no but.
Sher:no ifs and buts.eat and give me return gift.
Shraddha while eating:which gift.
Sher:shraddha ji!
Shraddha:ok ok.
She holds a gol Gappa and makes him eat.
Sher:not this but return kiss.
Shraddha:in the morning.
Sher:no plz.i made it in the middle if the night and u will gift me in the morning that’s not fair.
Shraddha:oh hello!neha made it.not you,and right now I m not in a romantic mood.my baby wants to rest as he is full now.
She hands over the rest if gol gappas to sher and asks him to sleep.she lays down.sher disappointingly puts the tray and doses off.
Sunehri is eating chaat and praises neha.
Vikas:plz dnt wake me again in the middle of the night.
Sunehri:why.its your duty to serve ur wife.
Vikas:but why??
Sunheri:cuz I m pregnant.
Vikas:so what??
Sunehri is surprised and eyes him
Vikas:I mean its so easy for you as you and bauji just rest and give orders like queens.
Sunehri angrily says that then you would have got pregnant and known how tough it is….
Vikas:I didn’t mean it.
Sunehri:just shut up.u spoiled my mood.
She angrily hands over the plate to him and sleeps.
Vikas starts eating chaat.
Neha while lying on bed thinks about adi and says I LOVE YOU so much adi.fimally u r also falling for me.
Other side bhavri says I LOVE you adi.i m still ur wife and will try to win your heart honestly.screen freezes on the split faces of bhavri and neha….

Next epi:bhavri tries to be good with adi and everyone is confused.vikas tries to make sunehri happy.sherdha send sumra(sumer gajra) to honeymoon……

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66 Comments

  1. angel on November 22, 2015 9:52 am

    Hey guys ….it’s me in the ff pic…hope aysha now u r satisfied?…but yar its a humble request that if u r on fb or smwhere else dnt use it their…thnx…? sorry if u mind…

    • aysha on November 22, 2015 1:20 pm

      angle ….u r soooooo sweeeet …..love u….nd ur story ….by the way I have no fb ID. so tomhari photo ko waha use karne Karen koi saowal hi nehi uttha….but my sis have her ID …..I don’t know how to create a ID ….can u guide me?????

    • angel on November 22, 2015 2:16 pm

      Meri b fb id n hai…

    • aysha on November 22, 2015 1:21 pm

      angle ….u r soooooo sweeeet …..love u….nd ur story ….by the way I have no fb ID. so tomhari photo ko waha use karne Karen koi saowal hi nehi uttha….but my sis have her ID …..I don’t know how to create a ID ….can u guide me?????nd I don’t mind ….
      πŸ™‚

    • Jahnvi on November 23, 2015 4:49 pm

      Really Angel u r so cute nd yup don’t worry i’ll not put it on any social networking sites. Luv u nd ur writing.?

    • angel on November 23, 2015 9:12 pm

      Thnk u dear

  2. ? Sridevi on November 22, 2015 10:43 am

    Awesome episode Angel. Nyc love triangle bw BD n Adi n Neha. Good going. Waiting for next ff. Love u angel?

    • angel on November 22, 2015 12:37 pm

      Thnx sridevi?

  3. Jazz on November 22, 2015 1:57 pm

    Either Bhavri or Neha has to sacrifice their love..i think it would be Bhavri because Adi is of her son’s age and moreover adi and neha love each other..well…nice episode as usual…
    Angel…r u writing fan fiction for some other serials too…i mean you have great imagination nd know how to pen down a beautiful story…

    • angel on November 22, 2015 2:18 pm

      Right now I m writing 3 ffs
      1-swaragini(blossoming love)
      2-piya rangrezz(twisty)
      3-qubool hai “Forever love of AsYa”

    • Jazz on November 22, 2015 9:00 pm

      Ahmm… Unfortunately i am not watching any of these serials…!!
      Angel…do you even write fan fictions of any pakistani serials too???

    • angel on November 22, 2015 10:01 pm

      Nope

  4. Jazz on November 22, 2015 2:03 pm

    Ohh!!!!you are soo sweet!!!beautiful and attractive features…love you girl<3

    • aysha on November 22, 2015 2:14 pm

      u r a boy jazz……:-)

    • angel on November 22, 2015 4:27 pm

      No she z a girl

    • angel on November 22, 2015 2:17 pm

      Thank u jazz…love u 2??

    • aysha on November 22, 2015 5:10 pm

      oh …I see
      πŸ™‚

  5. aysha on November 22, 2015 2:11 pm

    :-p

  6. bulbul on November 22, 2015 3:40 pm

    You are so sweet angel..
    Good episode….

    • angel on November 22, 2015 4:28 pm

      Thnx

  7. aysha on November 22, 2015 4:27 pm

    oh..ho….. ok …I will ask it to my sis ….but don’t know that if she will teach me or not………

    • Jazz on November 22, 2015 7:47 pm

      Soo…what do you want to learn aysha??

    • aysha on November 22, 2015 10:17 pm

      nothing ….that devil didn’t teach me anything ….she was just acting like I m her….soutan…..Patagonia nehi Bo meri hi sis kiosk hai….kio merit parents meri name se uske name kio jod di????? ohhhh

    • Jazz on November 23, 2015 3:30 pm

      Hard luck!!

    • aysha on November 23, 2015 5:20 pm

      really :-/

  8. nanhi on November 22, 2015 7:10 pm

    Really angel u r writing so good.
    I’m loving ur episodes more than piya rangrezz real episodes……
    Angel u r so beautiful and sweet…..;-)

    • angel on November 22, 2015 10:02 pm

      Thnk u nanhi?

  9. aysha on November 22, 2015 10:24 pm

    of course bo beautiful Hoga ….because her writing s are beautiful …

    • angel on November 22, 2015 11:50 pm

      Thnk u?

    • aysha on November 24, 2015 5:00 pm

      welcome …. πŸ˜‰

  10. neha on November 22, 2015 11:19 pm

    grt ep… once again u did a grt job πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

    • angel on November 22, 2015 11:50 pm

      Thnx

  11. Hari on November 23, 2015 12:50 am

    You look too good dear…. And the story is awesome as usual…
    Guys the evergreen love story ipkknd is back on hotstar…. Arshi is back from 24th Nov onwards…..

    • angel on November 23, 2015 8:53 am

      Thnk u…?

    • sabiha on November 23, 2015 10:56 pm

      Hey ..what are u talking about..I mean do u want to say that ipkkndseason2 with Arshi on hotstar??pls tell me

  12. mammu nilam on November 23, 2015 10:44 am

    ur writing is superrrb angel….real story se bhi super h…..i love to read it..

    • angel on November 23, 2015 2:24 pm

      Thnk u…u commented after sooo long…misssed u….thnx for come back?

  13. Pooja on November 23, 2015 2:45 pm

    Angel i don’t have a word to say.just fabulous i love it

    • angel on November 23, 2015 9:14 pm

      Thnx

  14. aysha on November 23, 2015 2:46 pm

    πŸ™ why aren’t u updating…….

  15. aysha on November 23, 2015 9:44 pm

    πŸ™‚ πŸ™ πŸ˜› :-/ :-!

  16. sabiha on November 23, 2015 10:40 pm

    Whooooooo……I have seen u somewhere angel….I am nt able to remember where…but m sure I have definitely seen u …

    • angel on November 24, 2015 12:15 am

      Really?where r u from??where do u live?

    • sabiha on November 24, 2015 8:59 am

      Me at Surat…I am from surat ,Gujarat..

    • sabiha on November 24, 2015 9:18 am

      And what about u??where r u from??

    • angel on November 24, 2015 6:41 pm

      I m from daska

  17. sabiha on November 23, 2015 10:42 pm

    By the way nice episode ..???great talent???hats off

    • angel on November 24, 2015 8:35 am

      Thnk u

  18. nanhi on November 24, 2015 1:16 pm

    Plz update angel I’m waiting for new episode

  19. bulbul on November 24, 2015 4:28 pm

    Angel update kro yaar
    I am waiting….??

  20. Maha on November 24, 2015 5:35 pm

    Tell me one thing angel
    What i want to know from u ur other friends comment how u guys know about what i want to know?thats not fair naaaaahhhh!
    Well lv it angel lv u but ur not commenting on my ff as i have a sign of ur comment that u have read that
    llllllllllvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv uuuuuuuuuu dr. Take care lv u and u r alike swara(swaragini serial) u r soooo cccuuuttteeee

    • angel on November 24, 2015 6:40 pm

      Aww…thnk u so much…esp for comparing me with swara…honestly my behaviour and qualities also match her….and sooooo sorry I just completely forgot ur ff….i was relly busy plz tell me the name and I will read and surely comment my friend…plzzz sorry?…love u….

    • Maha on November 26, 2015 9:20 pm

      Daer angel u live in daska it is a city in Pakistan

  21. angel on November 24, 2015 6:42 pm

    I m sorry guys…the net is not working properly….its working on and off…i will try my best to update soon…but bulbul yar don’t cry plz…love u…

  22. sabiha on November 24, 2015 8:40 pm

    Daska??where is it??mean in which city or stat??

    • angel on November 25, 2015 2:16 am

      It is a city itself….

  23. sabiha on November 24, 2015 8:42 pm

    Waiting..for update pls do it as soon as possible..

  24. sabiha on November 24, 2015 8:44 pm

    And ya dear I have one request for u..pls if u can than write ff on pyar ki ye ek kahani on abhiya…only if u can..its a request..

    • angel on November 24, 2015 11:40 pm

      Sure sabiha I will try mu best…..u can read intro as I will post it tonight….?….anything for my friends…

    • sabiha on November 25, 2015 12:06 am

      Hey still waiting for ff ..where are u??

  25. Aalia on November 24, 2015 10:48 pm

    Your updates r too good Yar….love u n Ur updates!!!
    N continue with thisβ™ͺβ™ͺβ™ͺ

    • angel on November 25, 2015 2:17 am

      Thnk u alia?

  26. Simran Bhatt on November 25, 2015 12:39 am

    Please tell me one thing
    is these twisty parts are going to be telecasted or nt

    • angel on November 25, 2015 1:27 am

      No dear…its my self made strory…a fan fiction…

  27. angel on November 25, 2015 1:27 am

    Story*

    • Maha on November 26, 2015 9:22 pm

      Well after reading ur comments anyone can understand u.lv u

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