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Home»Fan Fiction»DESTINY UNITES – Part 8 (Strange feeling)
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DESTINY UNITES – Part 8 (Strange feeling)

Avneil fanBy Avneil fanSeptember 16, 202115 Comments14 Mins Read
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hi friends!!..iam back with 8 th episode and hope you all like it ๐Ÿค—..

OLD FACTORY:

Someone hits Richard and that person comes and lifts sirat and he takes out and makes her sit on his car and sprinkles water on her…

Someone: excuse me mam..please wake up.

He again sprinkles water and she wakes up and sees him..

Sirat:wh..what is happening here?

Stranger: don’t worry mam..the person who you met is a womenizer.actually this is an old factory and I used to often visit here as I want to buy this land and when I came here I found that you was in trouble and so I bet him…


Sirat gets shocked hearing this..

Sirat in mind: if he is a womenizer then why did my mumma chose him?..or did she unawarenessly told me?

Sirat: thanks for saving me.

Stranger: it’s okay. Why did you met him?

Sirat: actually I thought he is a coach for boxing and so I came to him unawarenessly.

Stranger: ohh..so you are a boxer?

Sirat: yeah..

Stranger: then I have an idea..there is a best boxing coach whom one of my friend’s dad knows..so can I approach him to get you that coach?

Sirat gets suprised but..

Sirat: no..it’s okay. You don’t waste your time by helping me.

Stranger: it’s not like that. I like to help people so..

Sirat smiles..


Sirat: ok..your so nice person.

Stranger smiles and he forwards his hands and..

Stranger: by the way..iam Ranveer chauhan. So you can approach me in anything if you need help.

Sirat smiles and shakes hands with him.

Sirat: and iam sirat shekhawat. I aim for reaching national’s in boxing..so you can just help me to reach that coach.

Ranveer: sure..then come with me now.

Sirat goes with Ranveer in a car and reaches mehra mansion..

Sirat: did we reach?

Ranveer: actually my friend Simar is here and her father knows that coach so come let’s go and talk with him.

Sirat: okay..

Sirat and Ranveer gets downย  and sirat sees the mehra mansion and feels heavy on her heart which shocks her….


Sirat in mind: what is happening with me? Why do iam feeling strange seeing this house?..

Ranveer: sirat..

Sirat doesn’t respond as she isย  busy in her thoughts while Ranveer jerks her…

Ranveer: what happened?

Sirat fakely smiles and..

Sirat: nothing..

Sirat’s heart starts beating faster while Ranveer rings the bell and disha opens the door and sirat sees disha and gets flashback of her and disha’s moments in childhood…


Sirat holds her head and thinks..


Sirat in mind: what is happening to me? Am I having any wake up dream diseases? When I was small..I never met these people then why they are coming along with meย  in my childhood in my mind as if iam possessed?

Disha sees sirat holding her head and comes to her..

Disha: excuse me..do you have any headache?

Sirat looks her and she controls..

Sirat: no..no iam fine.

Disha comes to Ranveer and..

Disha: hi..Ranveer. I think you came to meet Simar..am I right?

Ranveer: no..I came to meet king uncle.

Disha: ohh..by the way who is this girl(pointing towards sirat)?.

Ranveer: she is sirat shekhawat..a boxer.

Disha smiles..

Disha: woww..it’s great.

Ranveer: I came to talk about the coach for sirat to king uncle as he knows one of the best coach.

Disha: ok.. wait here. I will go and call him..

Ranveer: ok.

Disha goes and calls king while king comes down and sirat sees him and again she gets flashes of her childhood with king and she gets more tensed and holds her head….


Sirat in mind: ohhh goddd.. what is happening with me? Do I have any brain disorder? Why am am I getting my childhood images along with these unknown people’s?..

King looks at Ranveer and sirat and greets them.

Ranveer: uncle.. this is sirat shekhawat (pointing towards sirat). A boxer..

King gets suprised..

King: ohh..

King forwards his hand towards sirat and..


King: hello..miss.shekhawat.

Sirat controls herself and she shakes hands with him and again she gets more flashes of her and king’s moment in childhood…

She leaves his hand in shock and she starts sweating in fear..

Sirat in mind: this is strange..iam getting repeated hallucinations of my childhood with these unknown persons. Do I got possessed with any ghosts??

Suddenly aliya comes down and sirat sees her and again she gets flashbacks of her and aliya in childhood..


Sirat gets scared and shouts..


Sirat: what the hell is happening with me? Iam really having a disorder or maybe iam possessed with some ghosts..

Sirat holds her head and runs out of the house which shocks everyone…

King: what happened to her?

Ranveer: actually she is a boxer and I came to ask for a coach for sirat as you know some good coach but I don’t know what happened to her suddenly…I will go and find out and I will talk about this matter later.


King: okay..

Ranveer too goes out and gets shocked sirat missing..

Ranveer in mind: what happened to her suddenly? Why did she blabbered something? Now where did she go??

Ranveer searches her for sometime and gets tired.

Ranveer in mind: now iam tired of searching her…better I will find her whereabouts tomorrow.

Ranveer goes back to his house.

THE SCENE FREEZES.

MEHRA HOUSE:

it’s next day…

Prachi gets up early in the morning and gets ready and comes down which shocks pragya…

Pragya: Prachi.. what happened to you? Now the time is only 6 am but you got ready?did college opened for you alone at 6am?


Prachi makes a face..

Prachi: maa..you are asking too many questions in a single sentence then how will I answer?

Pragya: fine..tell me why did you got ready early?

Prachi: because mr.mehra sir is conducting rehersal’s at 7 am atself and that’s why I got ready to go.

Pragya:ohh.. then what about college?

Prachi: I will soon finish my singing and then I will go and attend college.

Pragya: ok ..

Prachi hugs pragya and ..

Prachi: ok bye maa..

Pragya: bye.. all the best for your rehersal. I hope mr.mehra selects you..

Prachi: don’t worry..I will get selected as I have self confidence more like you.

Pragya smiles.. while Prachi turns to go but suddenly stops and sees pragya..


Prachi: maa.. don’t forget to wake rhea. I have kept cold water there..so you can pour it on her and wake her up.

Pragya: I’ll surely wake her up when the time comes.

Prachi: ok I’ll go..

Pragya: fine.. show your powerful talent of singing which makes mr.mehra choose you at first itself.

Prachi: I’ll surely do it.

Prachi goes to the area where me.mehra is conducting rehersal’s and she gives her name in the participant’s list and she waits…

While ranbir and Aryan are seen walking inside the same venue..

Aryan sleepingly: ranbir mad..why did you wake and bring me here at midnight?

Ranbir: see how sun is shining but you are still in sleepy mode.

Aryan yawns and..

Aryan: yes.. ofcourse this is my sleeping time only as i used to wake only 8 am but because of you..I woke up at 6 am atself.

Ranbir: yes..even I used to wake at 8am only but today chief is conducting rehersal’s then how can I not attend it?that too I like hearing songs so it will be fun here…


Aryan: if you want you should have attended it but you disturbed my sleep too.

Ranbir: because I have no other partner except you..you are the best partner in my life.

Aryan makes a face and suddenly laughs..

Ranbir: why are you laughing like mad? Are you in half a sleep?

Aryan: no..as you said I may be your best partner but when you get married then who will you select as best partner..is it me or your wife?

Ranbir makes a face..

Ranbir: if I get a chance I will make you a girl and will marry you because I can’t lose your partnership as I can enjoy only with you like freebird as you don’t give any rules but if I marry some other girl then she will make rules chart first which I hate…

Aryan:hoo.. interesting.many girls are running behind you but you are running behind me..how cheap?

Ranbir makes a face..

Ranbir: I just joked. But that doesn’t mean I will marry a girl who makes her husband a devdas.

Aryan laughs..

Aryan: what do you mean?

Ranbir: I mean I will marry a girl who doesn’t object my drinking, and who accepts me with my habit of partying, pub dancing and so on..

Aryan: you are mad. One day you are going to fall for a girl who changes you completely.

Ranbir: that is never possible. Iam Ranbir kohli..ranbir can never fall for anyone and only the girls falls for him due to his handsome style.


Aryan makes a face..

Aryaan: don’t praise yourself too much then one day you will fall for a girl like Prachi.

Ranbir make a confused way..

Ranbir: who is Prachi?

Aryan : the girl who you fought yesterday in college..

Ranbir: shut up.. don’t talk about her then I will kill you. But how do you know her name?

Aryan smiles and..

Aryan: because she is studying in my class and I became her friend.

Ranbir makes a shocked face..

Ranbir: whaaatttt?? You befriended that chikchiki?

Aryan: yes..are you feeling jealous?

Ranbir: shut up..why should I feel jealous?


Suddenly the Prachi is called on stage while Abhi and purab sits near the stage to watch their performances and abhi get shocked seeing Prachi…

Abhi whispers: fuggi..

Purab gets shocked..

Purab: bhai ..what happened?

Abhi: she..she is exactly like my fuggi. Her eyes are like same as my fuggi.

Purab gets worried..

Purab: bhai..she is someone.maybe you just felt like her as human’s have tendency to look like someone.so..dont get into your past again. Pragya have left you..so don’t think about it now.


Abhi nods but his heart is filled with pragya and he looks Prachi’s eyes very keenly and feels something..

Abhi in mind: why this girl is looking like my fuggi?her eyes are exactly like her…

Prachi begins to sing..

Thodi jagah de de mujhey

Tere paas kahi reh jau main

Khamoshiya teri sunu

Or door kahi na jai main

Apni khushi deke me tujhey

Tere dardse jud jau main..

Hearing her voice abhi gets impressed.

.

Abhi in mind: this girl have such a beautiful voice..why do I feel something special on her?i will select this girl for sure…

Mila jo tu yaha mujhe

Dilai main yakeen tujhey

Rahu hokey teri sada

Bas itna chahti humain

Thodi jagah de de mujhe

Tere paas kahi yeh jau main

Khamoshiya teri sunu

Or door kahi na jau main…

Ranbir hears her voice from outside and gets impressed and slowly he gets mesmerized…


Ranbir gets mesmerized and so he drenched in the voice completely while Aryan calls him..

Aryan: ranbir..

Ranbir doesn’t respond as he is listening to the voice mesmerizingly…

Aryan in mind: what is ranbir doing? He is so immersed in listening in music..

Aryan suddenly screams on ranbir which makes ranbir come out from his lost mind…

Ranbir: Aryan..why did you shout now? I was really enjoying this beautiful voice..

Aryan gets shocked..

Aryan: was you enjoying music or this voice?

Ranbir smiles and..

Ranbir: this beautiful voice..

Aryan: see..now atself you fallen for a girl’s voice and soon you will fall for a girl.

Ranbir gets angry..


Ranbir: you are irritating me too much..see what I do now.

He takes stones and chases Aryan…while Prachi finishes her song and abhi and purab discuss about her..

Purab: this voice is so magical..I think this girl can make our team win.


Abhi: yes..even I was impressed.

Abhi in mind: I liked her voice as well as her eyes as she reminds of my fuggi..

Abhi and purab declares Prachi as winner and Prachi gets happy..

Prachi in mind: thank you bappa for making my dream come true.

Abhi gets up and goes near Prachi and he forwards his hands and Prachi shakes hands with him happily..

Prachi: thank you sir..for selecting me.

Abhi: I really got impressed in your voice..you will really get successful in your path. Did you got training for singing?

Prachi: no sir..I was singing myself as a hobby and now it became my aim.

Abhi: ohh..I think you would have inherited from your mother or father’s habit…am I right?

Prachi becomes upset as she hears about father..


Prachi in mind: who knows about my father’s habit? I hate him..as he chased my mum out of his life and he never came in search of us.

Prachi sadly: maybe I would have inherited from my relatives..

Abhi: ohh..ok. you can come to my house for practicing songs along with your partner Simar.

Prachi gets suprised..

Prachi: is my partner is staying in your house atself sir?

Abhi: yes..she is my sister’s daughter.


Prachi: ohh ok..then I will come.

Abhi gives his address to Prachi..

Prachi: thank you so much sir.

Abhi: it’s okay. You can come from tomorrow..

Prachi: okay sir.

Prachi was about to leave but both of them feels some connection..

Abhi in mind: why am I feeling connected to this girl?

Prachi in mind: why do I feel good with this sir?

They look at each other and they go.


THE SCENE FREEZES.

After some hours..

Rhea is seen going to college..

Rhea in mind:this sahana became stupid. Atleast Prachi waits for me but this girl left me as it got time up..

Suddenly rhea sees a men troubling a girl and she gets shocked..

Rhea in mind: how dare he? He is misbehaving with a girl..I won’t spare him now.


Rhea goes fast to beat him but suddenly stops and remember’s sirat’s act..

Rhea in mind: sirat di makes everything fine. Even she changed a thief into good then why can’t I change this bad man into good like di?

Rhea comes near that men and calls him..

Rhea: excuse me mister..


That men sees Rhea and makes a face..

Men: what do you want? Did you came to save this girl? If you try then you will also be harassed like her understood? So better run away..

Rhea gets angry but she controls and thinks about sirat di..

Rhea in mind: I should calmly make him understand about his doings.

Rhea: hello mister..are you a ganster or a Raper?

That men gets angry..

Man: how dare you call me like that?better run away before I get hyper.

Rhea: I called you like that because you are doing such acts and if you do it before your family then you will be called in the same way by them like how I called you.

That man gets more angry and holds rhea’s cheeks angrily which shocks Rhea..

Man: do you think that I will melt with your sweet gesture? Iam not such a fool who listen to your sweet advice and leave this girl.

Rhea gets scared..


Rhea in mind: even sirat di did the same but he obeyed..but why is this man not obeying me? I lectured same like sirat di but why her tricks are not working with me..

Rhea: excuse me..iam just telling this for your good..just leave her.

Man laughs evilly..

Man: if I dint leave her then what you will do? Will you advise me harshly next time?

Rhea gets angry and slaps him..


Rhea angrily: see..I was polite till now but you crossed the limits. I will do anything for a women’s dignity.. so better run away before I call the police.

That man gets more angry and he takes the wine bottle from his pocket and pours forcibly on rhea’s mouth…

Man: do you think that iam mad..I know how to handle such cases like you. Now soon you will forget everything what happened here and I will be tension free..

That man pushes Rhea and he goes taking that girl while Rhea gets drunken and feels some bhaang effect.


THE SCENE FREEZES.

PRECAP: rhea gets bhaang’s effect in middle of the class and starts misbehaving. Sahana irritates Aryan. Ranbir fights with Prachi again.abhigya’s hit and miss..

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    15 Comments

    1. Laksha on September 16, 2021 7:48 am

      Amazing I was waiting now how are you are you fine now Rhea misbehaving should not be noticed by abhi make it like when will be abhi and Rhea meet who is Simar in this why is didha in king house but amazing

      • Avniel fan on September 16, 2021 11:10 am

        Thank you so much ๐Ÿ˜Š.iam absolutely fine now.. actually Rhea will misbehave in college only so abhi will not notice it ๐Ÿค—. Abhi and rhea’s meet is coming soon.. Simar is aliya and king’s daughter.actually king is staying with Mehra’s only along with his wife aliya as aliya is sister of abhi and purab.

    2. VKB on September 16, 2021 9:17 am

      Awesome … much-needed Prachi and Rhea bond…!! ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

      • Avniel fan on September 16, 2021 11:10 am

        Thank you so much ๐Ÿ˜Š. Yeah..I will show Rhea and Prachi bond too ๐Ÿค—.

    3. Sneha on September 16, 2021 9:44 am

      My guess went wrong. Will create big problems.poor girl she tries to help but she herself get in problem. Ranbir dialogue to aryan about partner was funny. How are you now. Hope you get well. Waiting for next chapter. Update soon.

      • Avniel fan on September 16, 2021 11:12 am

        Ranvir is just cameo..yeah Rhea got herself Trapped๐Ÿ˜‘. Happy that you liked ranbir and aryan’s funny scene ๐Ÿ˜Š.iam absolutely fine now.. thank you for your concern ๐Ÿค—. I will upload next episode on Saturday โ˜บ๏ธ.sure..

    4. SKD on September 16, 2021 4:58 pm

      Firstly thanks dear for providing the link I was looking for it but didn’t find so I thought you didn’t post yet, but thanks for the link.. So talking about the episode my last guess was wrong โŒ I supposed it to be Sunny who would safe Sirat but no probs. The episode was amazingโค loved every scene. And it was really nice to see that Abhi correlated Prachi and Pragya, hope so he finds out the truth soon ๐Ÿคž๐Ÿคž. Ranbir getting mesmerized by Prachi’s voice was nice, Rhea trying to convince the man was good but her poor she failed.. Sad that Prachi hates her father but actually he somewhat deserves it.. Overall the episode was superb โค๐Ÿ˜โค.. Waiting for the next update.. Update soon ๐Ÿคž

      • Avniel fan on September 18, 2021 10:32 am

        It’s okay๐Ÿค—. thank you so much ๐Ÿ˜Š. happy that you loved every scenes ๐Ÿ˜Š. Soon abhi will find out the truth ๐Ÿ˜Š. Happy that you liked ranbir getting mesmerized by Prachi’s voice๐Ÿค—. Yeah..por Rhea, her plan failed. Thank u so much ๐Ÿ˜Š. I will upload next episode on Monday as I have some projects. Sorry for late reply๐Ÿ˜”

    5. Jasminerahul on September 17, 2021 5:32 pm

      Never thought that ranveer will be the saviour.ranveer taking sirat to mehras was unexpected. Sirat remembering her childhood with disha kinglia was surprising. Hope she remembers her identity soon.ranbir aryan conversation was funny.abhi reminded of pragya seeing prachi n ranbir impressed with her singing was nice.poor rhea.who is that guy?perfect pics.

      • Avniel fan on September 18, 2021 10:34 am

        Sirat will identify her identity soon ๐Ÿ˜Š. happy that you liked Aryan and ranbir funny conversation ๐Ÿค—. happy that you liked abhi getting reminded of pragya through Prachi and Ranbir getting mesmerized ๐Ÿค—. That guy is just for this episode โ˜บ๏ธ. Thank u so much ๐Ÿ˜Š.

    6. Sneha on September 20, 2021 7:05 pm

      You said you will upload it today
      But is no were seen . When will you update

      • Avneil fan on September 21, 2021 11:31 am

        Sorry..sorry yaar. I will surely upload tomorrow โ˜บ๏ธ.

    7. Sneha on September 22, 2021 2:14 pm

      Today when will you upload

    8. Laksha on September 26, 2021 5:26 pm

      When will you update please say and update soon if you have updated kindly say I will search

    9. Prachi on September 28, 2021 4:03 pm

      Please upload the next episode as fast as u can i have no control on myself please๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™

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