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Silent Whisper with a Devil (1st chapter)

RishiiiiBy RishiiiiJuly 8, 2021Updated:July 10, 202152 Comments5 Mins Read
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” Madam , sir…. your daughter is really unfortunate …. her future seems really cursed….      if you don’t want to destroy your business and your wealth then you will have to keep her away from you….  ” 

”mumma noooo please mumma ….. please don’t leave me…mumma please…papa please …papaaa”

” Beep…beep…wake up baby…wake up baby…. it’s morning… it’s morning…..” ahh this alarm….. …… oh god…… I don’t know why my night is this much short…. I just sleep…. ahh…. I took a hot bath and wear my black jeans and a white short t-shirt and put my black leather jacket…. and put on my white sneakers…. I don’t like to wear those make up and those fancy dresses…. so this is how my life goes…. now I am full ready to go to the medical collage… oh yes I am in the last year of my collage life ……

” Hello Sejal … wait for me at the main gate of collage… I will be there by 10 minutes…” I told to my bestie who is the better half of me…. we are best friends since I was 10 years old… since my family kept me away from them Sejal was my family …. that’s a long story….

little by little I was at the gate of collage…… I waved my hand to Sejal and went there after parking my scooter at the parking area….

”Hey… Sejal….”

”Hey cute pie…. for god sake your on the time… ”

”for god sake let’s eat something before we go the seminar…. ”

” your name should be foodie not Riddima”

yes… she is absolutely correct…. my first priority is food… we went to the canteen to full fill my craving for instant foods….

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” Please don’t kill me …. I promise I promise I will never do that again….  I promise I will change…please spare me for the last time… please..please have mercy on us lord….”

”you don’t have to change yourself for anyone and neither do I ….”

”please lord … please have mercy on us…”

”I am a devil of my world…. so you have to pay for your sins on earth… Good bye…” saying this he throw that man in to a boiling oil and laughed saying ” I am the devil…. I am the ruler of hell… no one can run away from me…”

Then a man came there saying ” Lord, will you go to the earth ?”…. He looked at him and smirked saying ” yes indeed I have to look after the demons there…” His eyes began to shin in red colour like heated fire proving he is the real devil who is the ruler of hell….

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” Cute pie next week we have to start our training time in a nearest hospital…. ”

”hmm even I was thinking about it…. though I want to be a doctor soon , I can’t help loving this collage life”

”hmm hey Ridz will you come to the party tonight”

”ah which party?”

”oh god don’t you know? there is a fare well party of a student who go to study aboard …. so will you go?”

”I love such club parties but don’t know why today my mood is not good so Seju you go… ”

”But cute pie you will have to go alone after the last seminar…”

”It’s okay… I am not a baby so don’t worry”

Time passed~~~~~~~

Sejal went to the club party without attending to the last seminar so as I told I had too go alone today… I am not afraid of anyone but don’t know why my heart beat raised a little when I thought about going home alone as it was around 6 .30 p.m…..  I took my bag and put on my helmet …. I was on the way to my apartment …. yes I live in an apartment without anyone…. My family kept me away from them since I was ten because of a crazy talk of a fortune teller… I don’t think my family loved me ever as if they did they never abandoned me trusting such a fortune teller….

I was lost in the memories of the past through the way to home …. I suddenly stopped my scooter as a result of the incident I witnessed in front of my eyes…..

”There was a tall man who was wearing a black suit starring at a man who lies on the middle of road ….. that man….that man who lies on the road was unconscious and he…he was on his own blood river…. ”

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This story is something different like something kind of supernatural… It’s the life story of a ordinary human girl and the lord of hell… Through out this story you will have to understand the character by yourselves … So ,I hope you all will be enjoy the story ahead…..😋😋😋😋😋

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    52 Comments

    1. Thebhooth18 on July 9, 2021 12:26 am

      hello Rishi i am new means new to read ur ff i really like this one slience whisper w devil are u a girl bcoz Rishi is a boy name or is ur nickname
      so the lord of hell is Vansh😅
      and Riddhima will b the fairy?😅
      ok its take time bt i will defently read this

      • Akshara on July 9, 2021 8:16 am

        Awesome

      • Rishiiii on July 9, 2021 9:45 am

        Hello dear! 😋😋😋 yes Vansh is the lord of the hell and let’s see what riddima will be😁 and thank you for choosing this to read❤❤❤

    2. Nia on July 9, 2021 12:43 am

      The concept sounds really interesting! Good luck!

      • Rishiiii on July 9, 2021 9:45 am

        Thanks dear❤❤❤

    3. Priya Singh on July 9, 2021 6:03 am

      ❤️

      • Rishiiii on July 9, 2021 9:46 am

        😍❤😍

    4. AarushiSoni on July 9, 2021 6:32 am

      Wow super

      • Rishiiii on July 9, 2021 9:46 am

        Thanks dear❤

    5. Anannya07 on July 9, 2021 6:35 am

      Amazing episode dear post soon.

      • Rishiiii on July 9, 2021 9:46 am

        Thanks dear❤

    6. Aisha08 on July 9, 2021 8:34 am

      Amazing

      • Rishiiii on July 9, 2021 9:47 am

        Thanks di ❤

    7. Attractiveuser on July 9, 2021 9:12 am

      Oh wow this is something really very interesting ❤️!!
      Wonderful ❤️.
      Lord of hell vansh?

      • Rishiiii on July 9, 2021 9:47 am

        Thank you so much dear… Yes Vansh is the lord of the hell❤

    8. Rianshlover. 13 on July 9, 2021 9:35 am

      Awesome rishi really loved it and you write it very nice

      • Rishiiii on July 9, 2021 9:48 am

        Thank you so much dear❤❤❤

    9. Tanvi_5117 on July 9, 2021 9:38 am

      Wow rishi!!! I am very excited for this story😌😊

      • Rishiiii on July 9, 2021 9:48 am

        Thanks a lot dear😍❤😍

    10. Mennahussein55 on July 9, 2021 9:53 am

      It is awesome

      • Rishiiii on July 9, 2021 12:31 pm

        Thanks a lot Merra ❤❤❤

    11. Niyati12 on July 9, 2021 10:25 am

      Awesome Rishiii loved it………..

      • Rishiiii on July 9, 2021 12:32 pm

        Thanks dear❤❤❤

    12. Aishwarya Wanjari on July 9, 2021 10:36 am

      Awesome

      • Rishiiii on July 9, 2021 12:32 pm

        Thanks dear❤❤

    13. Sumisha on July 9, 2021 11:19 am

      Awesome 👌

      • Rishiiii on July 9, 2021 12:33 pm

        Thanks dear❤

    14. Abigail on July 9, 2021 11:40 am

      Nice one…so vansh will be kind of like lucifer the lord of hell??

      • Rishiiii on July 9, 2021 12:33 pm

        Thanks dear … Yes he is like lucifer ❤

    15. Priyanshi_13 on July 9, 2021 12:06 pm

      Amazing 😍

      • Rishiiii on July 9, 2021 12:33 pm

        Thanks dear❤

    16. @Mj on July 9, 2021 12:18 pm

      Awesome…seems interesting
      Post asap💞

      • Rishiiii on July 9, 2021 12:34 pm

        Thanks dear❤❤❤

      • Mary on July 9, 2021 5:14 pm

        Amazing finally
        Something different
        Magnificent start

    17. Priyanka Thakur on July 9, 2021 1:35 pm

      Awesome episode Rishii eagerly waiting for next update

      • Rishiiii on July 9, 2021 2:53 pm

        Thanks dear❤❤

    18. Jay on July 9, 2021 2:31 pm

      Wow amazing 😍😻😻❤️😻
      Thanks for updates 😊❤️
      Keep rocking 🔥🔥🔥

      • Rishiiii on July 9, 2021 2:53 pm

        Thanks dear😍❤😍

    19. Priyadarshini on July 9, 2021 2:31 pm

      Super 💞💞

      • Rishiiii on July 9, 2021 2:53 pm

        Thanks dear❤❤❤

    20. JJ on July 9, 2021 2:31 pm

      Wonderful 💗💖💖💕💕💕

      • Rishiiii on July 9, 2021 2:54 pm

        Thanks dear❤❤❤

    21. Vkjhp on July 9, 2021 2:32 pm

      Wow fabulous 🤩🤩❤️🤩🤩

      • Rishiiii on July 9, 2021 2:54 pm

        Thanks dear❤❤❤

    22. Sree on July 9, 2021 2:32 pm

      Fantastic episode 😍😍😍😍

      • Rishiiii on July 9, 2021 2:54 pm

        Thanks dear❤❤❤

    23. Qt on July 9, 2021 3:49 pm

      Super episode..

      • Rishiiii on July 9, 2021 5:46 pm

        Thanks dear

    24. Parita on July 9, 2021 3:53 pm

      Amazing one!!
      Wow this was great….i’m really looking forward for the next one!
      Pls post soon❤️

      • Rishiiii on July 9, 2021 5:47 pm

        Thanks a lot dear❤❤❤

    25. Varshini on July 9, 2021 5:23 pm

      Amazing 😍❤️. Eagerly waiting for next part. Post soon

      • Rishiiii on July 9, 2021 5:47 pm

        Thanks dear❤

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