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Riansh Os- worst experience by attractiveuser

AttractiveuserBy AttractiveuserJune 17, 202190 Comments7 Mins Read
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I am not in mood to upload any ff today or second part of my ff so thought to write this one.

This is real life experience of mine🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺. My role is of Vanya. Let’s start:

A small girl of around 7 years is running here and there in the house. It’s evening time and she is looking outside the window as if waiting for someone to arrive. A lady comes to her.

Lady: Vanya!!

Vanya turns to her. The lady is Riddhima.

Vanya: mumma where is papa!!

Riddhima: he must be coming.

Vanya: but he comes after 6 pm na!

Riddhima: baby he must be busy today.

Vanya: but today is your and papa’s anniversary. He should have come early.

Riddhima: he must be planning something.

Vanya nods. Riddhima leaves. Vanya was still walking here and there waiting for her father. She was continuasly looking outside the window. She was running to the window every minute she hear a car’s sound. But to his disappointment his father didn’t come. She went to her mother and chachi Sejal.

Vanya: mom,chachi why has papa and Aryan chachu not come yet! It’s 9:30.

Sejal and Riddhima assured Vanya that they might be busy and would come but they themselves were worried because it’s too late. And after half an hour,i.e,10 p.m. they got the most shocking news. It was a call from hospital. Riddhima picked up and her world collapsed. It was aryan’s call. He was trying to speak.

Aryan: bha.. bhi..me and vansh bhai met with a dangerous accident.. please come to XYZ hospital!

Riddhima burst into tears.  Her love met with an accident on the day of their anniversary. Sejal and Vanya came to her and she told about the call. Vanya was standing there numb while Sejal and Riddhima were crying continuasly. They took a neighbour’s help and rushed to hospital. (I would never forget those neighbours of ours who helped us to reach the hospital that day. Thanks is such a small world for what they have done for us). On the way they saw vansh and aryan’s car. It was crushed like something dangerous has happened. Riddhima and Sejal were crying alot seeing the car’s condition. They reached the hospital and they were guided to Aryan and vansh’s ward. Vanya and Riddhima went to vansh while Sejal to Aryan. Riddhima and Vanya burst into tears seeing vansh’s condition. He was lying there full of blood. Riddhima held vansh’s hand.

Riddhima(crying): vansh..

Vansh(stammering): Riddhima..so..rry..we couldn’t celebrate our anniversary.

Riddhima was crying badly. Vanya was taken out. Riddhima was with vansh. Sejal came to vanya. Vanya hugged her tight and started crying.

Sejal: baby calm down. You have to be strong otherwise how will your papa be strong. He will be hurt if he sees you crying like this.

Vanya was still crying.

Sejal: Vanya..do you want your papa to cry in this condition for you??

Vanya: no.

She wiped her tears and looked at her father who was being shifted to another room. She had pain in her eyes. She went close to the strecher where her father was lying with full blood. His shirt was full of blood. She controlled her tears because she has to be strong.

Pitah se hai naam tera
Pitah pehchaan teri
Jiye jis sahaare pe tu
Pitah se woh saans mili
Hai pitah, Rab tera

Ho Ishwar Allah, Jitne bhi Rab hain
Noor tera tujh mein hi sab hai (x2)

Rab hai hai
Tu hi sab hai hai
Rab hai hai
Tu hi sab hai hai

Pitah ka mol hai kya
Paas reh ke jaana nahi
Pyar pita se karein
Ye keh na paayein kabhi
Hai pita sab tera

Ho Ishwar Allah, Jitne bhi Rab hain
Noor tera tujh mein hi sab hai (x2)

Pita ke aashirwad se
Tune sab kuch paya hai
Kya lekar tu aaya jag mein
Aur kya tune kamaaya hai (x2)

Pita ka rutba sab se ooncha
Rab ke roop samaan hai
Pita ki ungli thaam ke chal toh
Rastaa bhi aasaan hai
Pita ka saaya sar pe ho toh
Kadmon mein aakaash hai
Pita hai poonji, Kho jaaye toh
Phir kya tere paas hai

Pita bina na hasti teri
Naa koi tera thikana hai
Pita ke naam se aana jag mein
Pita ke naam se jaana hai (x2)

Ishwar Allah, Jitne bhi Rab hain
Noor tera tujh mein hi sab hai (x2)

Vansh was taken to the other room and treatment was started. Aryan was not hurt much so after dressing he came out.

Sejal: you are fine na?

Aryan: yes I am fine but bhai’s condition is not good. He was hurt very badly.

Then came Manish,son of Aryan and Sejal. He hugged his father tightly. Vanya looked at them and felt the pain that she could not hug her father at the moment.

Manish: papa lets go to have food.

Aryan nodded.

Aryan: vanya come to have food.

Vanya: no chachu..I am no mood to have food.

Aryan: beta if you will not have food then you will fall weak.

Vanya again disagreed. After a while Riddhima came and feeded Vanya. She with tears ate the food.

Riddhima: Vanya go to home with chachu and chachi. Mumma and papa will be back very soon.

Vanya: no I will not go anywhere mumma(tears)

Riddhima: Vanya please.

After much pleads Vanya agreed to go. But she couldn’t sleep whole night. She was missing her parents. There was no one to console her. Days passed Riddhima met Vanya only one or two times in these days. She used to call her and Vanya just used to cry over the call. She couldn’t tell her what she was going through. She was missing her parents. She was missing her father,her superhero. Sejal used to take care of manish but not Vanya. She would serve her the worst and left over food.(it’s the worst feeling ever,my chachi treated me like this when my parents were not there🙂). Vanya didn’t argue too because she was in mood to eat too during these days. After some days there was a operation of vansh. Vanya was restless. She was praying to God continuasly. After 2 hours she got to know that surgery was successful. She was happy that her parents would come home now. Vansh and Riddhima returned home after 15 days. Vanya hugged Riddhima tightly and started crying. She could not hug vansh because his body ,hands,shoulders were plastered. She just kissed him and cried. Vansh was happy to see his daughter who was strong enough these days without him. She lived without her parents at such a small age. Now her mother treated her as her Princess. She used to get everything but still she was missing her father’s hugs. He was on bed rest for 3 months. And when he recovered after 3 months she spent all her time with her.

.                        THE END!!

~Father is the most precious person for a daughter. She could do anything for her father.

You all may find it boring and sorry for that but I just wanted to convey my feelings. Those memories still haunt me and I am crying while writing this and remembering all that. I acted to be strong but I was broken from inside.

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    Myself gauri 😉.A huge fan of immj2 ❤️

    90 Comments

    1. Akshara on June 17, 2021 9:06 pm

      Nice

      • Attractiveuser on June 17, 2021 9:11 pm

        Thankyou!!

    2. Prabhleen 😊 on June 17, 2021 9:10 pm

      Amazing😍. Loved it 😘. Post soon 🥺🥺

      • Attractiveuser on June 17, 2021 9:12 pm

        Thankyou ❤️❤️!!

    3. Aditi on June 17, 2021 9:17 pm

      🥺🥺🥺i was in tears dhii🥺🥺

      • Attractiveuser on June 17, 2021 9:55 pm

        🥺🥺🥺🥺🤧🤧🤧🤧

    4. Tanya K on June 17, 2021 9:18 pm

      Amazing and emotional too. Loved it.🤧🤧🤧🤧❤❤❤

      • Attractiveuser on June 17, 2021 9:55 pm

        Thankyou ❤️❤️🥺🥺🥺.

    5. Mennahussein55 on June 17, 2021 9:18 pm

      Awesome episode

      • Attractiveuser on June 17, 2021 9:56 pm

        Thankyou ❤️!!

    6. 1234Aayu on June 17, 2021 9:32 pm

      You made me cry!!🥺🤧
      I can feel that pain 😣
      Now I can’t sleep at night
      I should have not read this at night 🤦
      It was Amazing!! Gauri you wrote it so beautifully..
      Take care ✨

      • Attractiveuser on June 17, 2021 9:57 pm

        🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺sorry🥺🥺🥺🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧.
        Thankyou so much❤️❤️.

    7. Palak on June 17, 2021 9:35 pm

      Awesome episode 🐱

      • Attractiveuser on June 17, 2021 9:57 pm

        Thankyou ❤️❤️.

    8. Amyra on June 17, 2021 9:36 pm

      It was just damn emotional!
      You depicted it well!
      And i could just feel it and imagine the scenes in front of my eyes!
      I really am getting short of words for your marvellous writing!
      I really loved it, you r a fighter! And dont worry sharing your feeling is never boring! 😊😇😘😍😍😍😍
      And yea never feel it bore to depict your tragic memories….
      Loved it!!!!!!!!

      • Attractiveuser on June 17, 2021 9:58 pm

        Thankyou so much amyra🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️.
        😍😍😍😍😍.

    9. Tanvi_5117 on June 17, 2021 9:37 pm

      Thank god he is alright😭😭😭
      I have nothing to say just that I love this song and Happy for you that he is back your hero💚
      Why did god never returned him to me?😭

      • Attractiveuser on June 17, 2021 10:00 pm

        God is unfair 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺he do this with good people only😭😭😭😭.
        Be strong🥺🥺🥺🥺

      • Tanvi_5117 on June 17, 2021 10:20 pm

        Yup trying to🥺

      • Stuti Abigail Tyagi on June 17, 2021 10:35 pm

        That’s so heartbreaking 🥺🥺
        I can’t even imagine ur situation!

      • Attractiveuser on June 18, 2021 8:58 am

        🥺🥺🥺🥺

    10. Varshini on June 17, 2021 9:38 pm

      Mujhe pata voh Kitna mushkil hai kyunki MERI Zindagi mein yeh situation two times hogayi. That too with my hero and my partner in crime. Nice episode. Keep posting 🤗

      • Attractiveuser on June 17, 2021 10:01 pm

        🥺🥺🥺🥺I could understand your feelings..🥺🥺. Thankyou ❤️

    11. RiansHLoveR on June 17, 2021 9:41 pm

      Plz yr aese os ko boring mat bolo, this is the best os i have ever read in my life. My eyes are moist reading this. Yes there r persons like os wala sejal. I just can’t believe you have gone through this. It is unbelievable for me. How gauri how? Really a daughter can do anything for his father. My father also met with an accident in 2014 when i was in cls 4. It was day after poila boishak means after bengali’s new year. He had head injury. He was is hospital for 15days. Even one day he don’t remember my mom. Those days were worst of us. But my masi helped us a lot. She was by our side all the time. I remembered those incidents after reading this os. 🥺🥺🥺🥺. I don’t have words to say anything more. This os is shows a daughter’s love for his father. ❤❤❤❤❤❤

      • Attractiveuser on June 17, 2021 10:04 pm

        🥺🥺🥺🥺 thankyou so much yaar🥺🥺🥺❤️❤️.
        Oh god that was worst..when he didn’t remember..🥺🥺🥺. I was in class 2 when this happened 🥺🥺🥺. You had your maasi but I had no one🤧🤧🥺🥺. I can just feel how you would have felt during that time 😭🥺.
        ❤️❤️🥺

      • Tanvi_5117 on June 17, 2021 10:21 pm

        You re right there are many people in my life too like OS waali sejal…. How can people be so heartless? This hurts yaar💔

      • 1234Aayu on June 17, 2021 10:29 pm

        Because they don’t have heart…#experiance
        Selfish people..
        It really hurts 🤧

      • RiansHLoveR on June 17, 2021 11:48 pm

        🤧🤧🥺🥺🥺

      • AarushiSoni on June 18, 2021 6:56 am

        @Radhika, it’s true.. there are so many people! I have experienced too .. right living in my house🙂..
        @Tanvi, they are selfish and always talk about his child my child.. u know na that tera mera, tera baccha mera baccha, this I what the worst and creates fights! And I have the worst and very much experience in this!
        @Aayu, correct!

      • Attractiveuser on June 18, 2021 10:26 am

        Exactly 🤧🤧tera mera🙂🙂..

    12. Anannya07 on June 17, 2021 9:41 pm

      Amazing os Gauri. I also went through same thing I can understand your feeling but my Masi was very good and supportive and I was living with her. You are very strong girl. Take care and lots of love.

      • Attractiveuser on June 17, 2021 10:11 pm

        Thankyou ❤️❤️. I can understand your feelings 🥺more power to you❤️🥺. You had your maasi but I had no one 🤧🥺.

    13. Aishwarya Wanjari on June 17, 2021 9:57 pm

      Emotional di 😭😭

      • Attractiveuser on June 17, 2021 10:15 pm

        🥺🥺🤧🤧❤️❤️❤️

    14. Cutuuu on June 17, 2021 10:00 pm

      Emotional one 🤧🤧 The bitter truth is that no one in the world give a damn to you without your parents…If someone is good with you just because you have the support of them otherwise they don’t care

      • Attractiveuser on June 17, 2021 10:15 pm

        🤧🥺❤️. True🙂🙂🥺.

      • RiansHLoveR on June 17, 2021 11:49 pm

        Very true❤❤🥺🥺

    15. Real@kriti on June 17, 2021 10:00 pm

      Di this is very emotional😢🤧🤧 and I am just thinking that how you were living that days but don’t worry it is a past , it is a experience and every bad time teaches us something, I think you could have learnt something from this incident , just forget it and you have to be strong always , and amazing one ❤️

      • Attractiveuser on June 17, 2021 10:17 pm

        🥺🥺❤️❤️. Yes it was past but I am not just able to forget those things🥺🥺🤧😭. Yes I have learnt so much from the incident!! Thankyou ❤️🤧

    16. prapti0809 on June 17, 2021 10:23 pm

      emotional one gauri. always be strong gauri.

      • Attractiveuser on June 18, 2021 10:27 am

        🤧🤧❤️.

    17. Stuti Abigail Tyagi on June 17, 2021 10:34 pm

      The only thing that can make me weakest and strongest at the same time is my Father. Most precious to me! This os touched me dear ❤️❤️❤️❤️
      Wonderful ☺️💋

      • Attractiveuser on June 18, 2021 10:27 am

        Not you it’s for every daughter 🥺🥺. ❤️❤️❤️❤️🥺🥺 Thankyou ❤️

    18. Scarlet Flower on June 17, 2021 10:36 pm

      Awesome di I was in tears reading this

      • Attractiveuser on June 18, 2021 10:28 am

        Thankyou ❤️🤧🥺.

    19. Priyanshi_13 on June 17, 2021 10:43 pm

      You made me cry …you are really strong ….😍

      • Attractiveuser on June 18, 2021 10:28 am

        🥺🥺🥺🤧🤧. ❤️❤️🥺.

    20. Annoyinguser on June 17, 2021 10:49 pm

      🤧🤧first thanks to the neighbor for helping you. Thanks to god. Thanks to doctor and salute to you that you was strong at that time. Parents are the best gift from god no one can afford to loss them. Chachi was so bad.

      • Attractiveuser on June 18, 2021 10:29 am

        I could never thank any of them in words for what they did for us in such a difficult time🤧🥺. Yes true🤧🤧. 🥺🥺

    21. Aisha08 on June 17, 2021 10:52 pm

      Amazing

      • Attractiveuser on June 18, 2021 10:30 am

        Thankyou!!

    22. @Mj on June 17, 2021 11:02 pm

      I have never been in this type of situation but I can feel the pain you had gone through while reading this. You are very strong di. Amazing❤❤

      • Attractiveuser on June 18, 2021 10:33 am

        🤧🤧🥺🥺🥺🥺. Thankyou ❤️❤️

    23. Dr. on June 17, 2021 11:10 pm

      Dear this was something so emotional you are very strong..
      Take care….

      • Attractiveuser on June 18, 2021 10:34 am

        🥺🤧🤧❤️.

    24. Diya on June 17, 2021 11:26 pm

      Awesome

      • Attractiveuser on June 18, 2021 10:34 am

        Thankyou!!

    25. Aishuzz369 on June 18, 2021 2:04 am

      Awesome di

      • Attractiveuser on June 18, 2021 10:34 am

        Thankyou ❤️!!

    26. jaskiranarora0605 on June 18, 2021 5:24 am

      Such an emotional story…I could truly feel the pain when someone doesn’t treat you well enough…Beautiful 😍❤😢😭

      • Attractiveuser on June 18, 2021 10:35 am

        🤧🤧🤧🥺🥺🥺🥺❤️❤️.
        Thankyou ❤️🥺

    27. N Ayesha on June 18, 2021 6:33 am

      Gauri u portray it very wonderfully .
      I am literally numb right now what to say about this os .I have also small incident that my father used to come at 6 : 30 nowadays but yesterday he got late I and my mom was so worried later I got to know that there’s some work in site so he come at 7 : 30 . Ya gauri u write every father is superhero for her daughter ❤.
      Same dear I am not have chachi but have tai (badimummy usually people also called) . She also do with me but we got separated 7 years ago and I did not go tai house and occasionally I went but not go for timeless but she treated her brother children very nicely now I have habit of this .
      U are wonderful ❤

      • Attractiveuser on June 18, 2021 10:37 am

        Thankyou so much 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️🥺.
        You got the news that he is busy..but we didn’t even get that we were just assuming 🤧🤧. Thank god he is fine.
        Yes now I also don’t go to mu chachi..we are seperated from them now..

    28. AarushiSoni on June 18, 2021 6:51 am

      Gauri, you have suffered this much!!!!!!!!!! You are definitely a very best daughter and so strong! Ur father is blessed to have you as his daughter! I can’t even imagine! Oh god! How can a chachi do this yaar? First of all she was nice then what happened?! The last a/n was exact truth! We can do anything for our fathers! Our world, our superhero❤️❤️❤️❤️.. u made me cry, Already my father is not there at home, now what will I do🥺🥺🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧

      • Attractiveuser on June 18, 2021 10:40 am

        Thankyou so much ❤️❤️🥺🥺🥺🤧🤧🤧🤧. I was also shocked when she did this with me because she used to act good in front of my parents🤧🤧.
        Yes father is everything 🥺🤧🤧.
        I can understand your situation..when my father went on a trip I was crying a lot 🤧🤧🥺. Just call him when he is free you will feel better!

    29. Jasmine kaur on June 18, 2021 8:31 am

      We have have suffered from the similar condition hence I was a child but I know that feeling 🥺 hope your father is doing good

      • Attractiveuser on June 18, 2021 10:41 am

        🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺can understand your pain 🤧🥺.
        Yes he is good now! It’s the incident when I was 7 years old..now I am 15!

    30. Zara on June 18, 2021 10:52 am

      Nice..

      • Attractiveuser on June 18, 2021 1:25 pm

        Thankyou!

    31. Afrida on June 18, 2021 11:50 am

      It’s not boring yaar 😭 It’s damn emotional… You suffered a lot in that tender age. I can feel a bit of your emotions because I am the eldest child of my parents, and elder girls are more attached to parents… I hope you be happy always with your family ❤️💐

      • Attractiveuser on June 18, 2021 1:25 pm

        🥺🥺🥺🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧. Everyone is attached to our parents but it’s true that the eldest and smallest is the most attached one❤️!

    32. Niyati12 on June 18, 2021 1:22 pm

      It was the best dear…………. Amazing I was emotional while or should say I was crying….. Please don’t say sorry for making me cry….. post soon 💖💖

      • Attractiveuser on June 18, 2021 1:25 pm

        Thankyou 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺.

    33. Jayashree on June 18, 2021 2:36 pm

      Wow amazing 😍😍❤️😍
      Thanks for updates 😊😍❤️

      • Attractiveuser on June 18, 2021 10:41 pm

        Thankyou ❤️❤️

    34. Priyadharshini on June 18, 2021 2:36 pm

      Super 💓💓💓💓💓

      • Attractiveuser on June 18, 2021 10:42 pm

        Thankyou ❤️❤️.

    35. JJ on June 18, 2021 2:37 pm

      Wonderful 😊😍❤️😍❤️

      • Attractiveuser on June 18, 2021 10:42 pm

        Thankyou ❤️❤️❤️.

    36. Vkjhp on June 18, 2021 2:37 pm

      Wow fabulous ❣️😍😍😍

      • Attractiveuser on June 18, 2021 10:42 pm

        Thankyou ❤️!

    37. Sree on June 18, 2021 2:37 pm

      Fantastic 😊👏😍❤️😍❤️

      • Attractiveuser on June 18, 2021 10:43 pm

        Thankyou ❤️❤️.

    38. Cutie on June 18, 2021 2:57 pm

      Quite emotional 🥺😭😭
      Feel soory for u. Sis😭🥺

      • Attractiveuser on June 18, 2021 10:45 pm

        🤧🤧🤧🥺🥺🥺❤️❤️❤️.
        🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺.

    39. Cutie on June 18, 2021 2:57 pm

      Quite emotional 🥺😭😭
      Feel soory for u. Sis😭🥺😭

    40. Priyanka Thakur on June 18, 2021 3:39 pm

      Amazing OS Gauri

      • Attractiveuser on June 18, 2021 10:45 pm

        Thankyou!!

    41. Parita on June 18, 2021 10:29 pm

      That was so emotional Gauri!! 😭🤧🤧Your writing makes wonders yaar
      This was your story…i can’t imagine how you must have felt!! Loved it!!❤

      • Attractiveuser on June 18, 2021 10:49 pm

        🥺🥺🥺❤️❤️🥺. Thankyou so much yaar🥺🥺🥺.
        🤧🤧🤧🥺🥺🥺.
        Thankyou again❤️❤️

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