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Home»Fan Fiction Original»A common love story-VIII
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A common love story-VIII

administratorBy administratorNovember 13, 201511 Comments4 Mins Read
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*****A Cheap Trick*******
I was now not on my feet, I was just happy, happy and happy,
In between I thought that why to be so selfish and give some peace to those not at peace, desiring, foolish, idiotic, selfish and wandering souls these words are very less for them
If you are confused I’ll tell you it’s my lovely friend circle I am referring to and using these wonderful words for describing them ………. Which are very low standard according to some of their doings….
(Means these words aren’t enough to describe what they did)
Ok so to grant these souls some internal peace, I asked him to come with the group during the recess time………
He thought a little and agreed ……
During recess time I took him to our ADDA where our group spent time during recess time, free classes etc…. we spent a lot of time there and had an effect I mean that place was our I mean my selfish friend circle’s…….
No one ever came there for the reason that place was spooky, damp and sometimes invaded by wild animals………………
That day I had a nice day because I saw my true friend circle ……..
Now I knew them better, I really knew them better than anyone,
But I was wrong I have just started knowing about them…
SIGH……………
I took him there and he questioned me a lot about our ADDA /hangout place on our way,
As usual I was unable to answer any of his questions and just got lost in my fantacy world ……..
As we reached the boundary line of our ADDA…..
HEART ATTACK …………..
SHOCKK………….
CONFUSION ……………………
I was shell shocked by the change of color by my friends………
All rushed towards us and the friends who were extra worried about my plaster and leg pushed me …..Forgot all about me and plaster and surrounded him ……..
Well surprisingly even his own friend group was there surrounding him……
Something was fishy…… and I soon learned that his friend group didn’t exist at all…..
WHAT??? WHAT IS THIS?? WERE MY EARS ALRIGHT??
Those boys were just his fans who followed him everywhere but weren’t his friends and the roumers I heard about him were true…….
He had no friends……….
He was a loner………..
At one side it made me happy that I was his only friend he talked to at other side I was sad thinking about his loneliness….
But he himself avoided making friends …………
Ok leave it but that day I was proud of my decision on not being selfish and helping him to make new friends…..
He looked at me and smiled and I didn’t realize I was on the floor I got lost again in his charming smile just to be woken up by the bell ringing indicating that the recess was over…..
I got up and dusted my clothes and left for the class room………

Now he was surrounded by friends…….
I was happy and proud of my decision though we got almost no time together now ……
But my pride didn’t last long as one of our friends out of jealousy played a cheap trick with him….

He was assigned with the teacher’s day preparations ……
And he was responsible for any mistakes or flaws in the function…..
That day we were supposed to dedicate/play songs as the teachers entered the auditorium which suited their personality……
He decided the songs and arranged them and it was a surprise for all of us……
We waited eagerly for that as his choice was undoubtedly the best………..
Everything went well during the rehearsal……
Unfortunately on the final day all got messed up …………
Someone fiddled with the playlist…
The songs played on teachers were vulgar and provoking……
The show should go on so the teachers ignored it but when it was time for the performances……..
The order for the performances got stolen and the host had a tough time as his speech have also gone missing!! Though he remember most of his lines giving relief…..
All songs had playback problems……….
Ok may be machine error……………
But the teacher insult couldn’t be ignored and…………
***To Be Continued
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sorry for a long delay in posting the chapter and any mistakes frndss.
Thank You-

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11 Comments

  1. Hayathi on November 13, 2015 6:15 am

    Its ok dr…. how mean friends naa

  2. dia on November 13, 2015 7:49 am

    1sttt i think

    nd awsmm diii

    lol xtra wrried fr plasterr

  3. Liya on November 13, 2015 8:17 am

    Luvd the stry. 🙂

  4. Farah on November 13, 2015 8:26 am

    It was good …
    But what are the name of the characters ??

    • Richa on November 13, 2015 9:09 am

      @ Farah dr this story charecters dont have any name just he and i (i is the main protagonist narrating the story and he is her love) so u can putanyone in their place ir give ur own names to them……….. 🙂

  5. Devga on November 13, 2015 8:49 am

    Wat is ADDA dear …??

    And I was not confused coz I was damn sure tht those words u used Wer only for tht so called frndship circle ….

    And it was a good decision by our heroine to make him but feel alone …. And I to felt good Wen our heroine thought tht she was his only first frnd …

    And these FRNDS my god…. It’s not a good thing to bully the teachers in name of fun …. Tht too to a boy whom they all admired and wanted to B frnd with …. Just hate those kind of fickle minded vicious idiots …..

    Lived it but had to wait for sooooooo long for ur update my dear sole ….

    Try updating next as soon as possible … LOVE u. …….. Do update EHT PLZ

  6. Richa on November 13, 2015 8:59 am

    heyyy thanx hayathi nd dia
    nd yeahh so mean friends they were worried about the plaster which have already been removed and when they got their desired item alll forgotten ..
    and that invisible plaster just vanished 😛

  7. Richa on November 13, 2015 9:05 am

    @ minnal adda is mainly reffered to a hideout specially for goons or bad ppl even in tappori lang the small accohol(wine shops) are reffred to as adda (daaru ka adda) and its a place where usuallly a group of people or someone spend time and have fun and it’s mainly temprarily built place aned here adda os their hangout place ………

  8. dia on November 13, 2015 12:35 pm

    Noooo
    m not frstt

  9. kirti on November 13, 2015 5:18 pm

    nice richa bt who did all this…will he get punished…i mean very curious to know …pls update asap….

  10. liza on November 14, 2015 2:25 pm

    Not bad but it’s not much good…….

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