BIDAI TIME…
Be chsey khaanmoj koor
Diy mey rukhsat myaney bhai-jaanβo
(Be chsey khaanmoj koor
Diy mey rukhsat myaney bhai-jaanβo)
Be chsey khaanmoj koorβ¦.
Meaning:
I am the darling/pampered daughter
Please bid me farewell, my darling brother
Ungli pakad ke tune
Chalna sikhaya tha na
Dehleez oonchi hai ye, paar karaa de
Baba main teri mallika
Tukda hoon tere dil ka
Ikk baar phir se dehleez paar karaa de
Mudke na dekho dilbaro
Dilbaroβ¦
Mudke na dekho dilbaro
Fasalein jo kaati jaayein
Ugti nahi hain
Betiyan jo byahi jaaye
Mudti nahi hainβ¦
Aisi bidaai ho toh
Lambi judaai ho toh
Dehleez dard ki bhi paar karaa de
Baba main teri mallika
Tukda hoon tere dil ka
Ikk baar phir se dehleez paar kara de
Mudke na dekho dilbaro
Dilbaroβ¦
Mudke na dekho dilbaro
Mere dilbaroβ¦
Barfein galengi phir se
Mere dilbaroβ¦
Fasalein pakengi phir se
Tere paaon ke tale
Meri dua chalein
Duaa meri chaleinβ¦
Ungli pakad ke tune
Chalna sikhaya tha na
Dehleez oochi hai ye, paar kara de
Baba main teri mallika
Tukda hoon tere dil ka
Ek baar phir se dehleez paar kara de
Mudke na dekho dilbaro
Dilbaroβ¦
Mudke na dekho dilbaro (x2)
[Kashmiri Vocals]
Be chsey khaanmoj koor
Diy mey rukhsat myaney bhai-jaanβo
Be chsey khaanmoj koor
Mudke na dekho dilbaro
Dilbaroβ¦
Mudke na dekho dilbaro
(My personal favourite!!β€οΈβ€οΈ)
Riddhima’s mom was crying..
She hugs her and said..
Riddhima’s mom:- I will miss you Riddhu π₯Ίπ₯Ί..
Riddhima:-but I will not ( she was having a blank expression…)
Riddhima’s mom was shocked she never saw her daughter in this state…
Kabir hugged Riddhima..
Kabir:- Riddhu now I will live like a prince…nothing to share with you..
Riddhu give a smile..(with her heavy heart..Kabir was the one who helped her to fulfill her dreams…he was the one who asked their father to buy a camera for Riddhu…he try to oppose this marriage but…)
She hugged him again and said..
Riddhima:- Bhai I will miss you!!
Kabir:- shh…I will miss you to.. don’t cry..if u will cry then who will make me laugh from her stupid emotional poems..Don’t forget me..I will be waiting for your next one..
He gave her a packet..
Riddhima gave her what-is-this? Look
Kabir:- see it afterwards π..
Riddhima tried to open that packet but was dragged by Vansh’s sister to car…
She sat there beside vansh..
Vansh was busy in his phone…
She gave a glance to him..and then at window..
Then the car started…
Her father and mother was crying..
She closed her eyes and a long tear escape…
She remembered how her brother Kabir and father celebrated her 20 birthday…
Yes she was daddy’s girl..her mother also love her..but infront of her grandma she couldn’t express(Riddhima’s mom mother in law) her grandma’s mind belongs to an orthodox time…
And due to her she is here…
She was a chirpy girl who wanted to achieve a lot in her life..but…..
Her thoughts were broken….she opened her eyes and saw Vansh was wiping her tears with his handkerchief..
He exclaimed”Don’t cry”…
She wiped her tears from her hands and ignored him….
She open the packet given by Kabir…
She was surprised, happy, emotional..mixed feelings…
Her diary..where she wrote all her emotions…her best friend..and her π· camera..
An unknown smile crept on her face…
She thought..
“Thank you Kabir bhai…dadi denied me to take This..you are the best”
(Don’t know why I am crying π₯Ίπ₯Ίππ)
Vansh notice this..
He also smiled…
After few hours they reached VR mansion..
It was a huge mansion.
It was decorated as a new bride…
Car stopped….
Vansh was busy in his phone..
When he realised they have reached..he looked towards Riddhima who was sleeping peacefully…
Vansh:- Beautiful…
He look around and blushed…
When there was a knock…
Siya:- Bhai you want to spend your whole night here.???
Aryan:- Idea is not that badπ..
Vansh:- Aryan shut up!!
Siya:- Bhabhi is sleeping..now what to do..
When Uma came towards..(Uma is Vansh’s mom)
Uma:- What you all are doing here?
Don’t you want to get inside..
Siya:- Mom bhabhi is sleeping..
Uma:- oh!! Lets do one thing..try to wake her if she then good if not..
Siya:- Mom first let me try…you can give your idea afterwards…
Vansh:- Mom is it necessary to wake her up…let it be..
Aryan:- yes badi mom Vansh bhai want to spend whole night here only in this car…
Vansh gives angry glares to Aryan…
Uma:- Okay we can do the rest of the rituals tomorrow..do one thing..I will ask D’Souza to prepare room in outhouse…we can do the grahpravesh tomorrow..
Siya:- mom you are so nice..I also want a mother in law just like you….
Aryan:- badi mom see she is so excited..I am saying find a jiju for me fast…
Siya hits Aryan…
Siya:- Wait first I will ask chachi to find my bhabhi..
Vansh:- Stop!! both of you had gone nuts..not seeing the place..you both Started your Tom and Jerry fight here…
Siya:- sorry bhai..
Uma:- Acha vansh you can take Riddhima to Out house…
Vansh go towards Riddhima side..
She was holding the packet that Kabir gave her very tightly..
Vansh tried to take it but all in vain..
She mummurs in her sleep…
Riddhima:- No I will not give you..Kabir bhai gave me this..I can’t and will never..
Vansh replied..I am not taking it…I will keep this in a secured place..
Riddhima:- pakka??
Vansh smiles…
Vansh :- pakka..
She loosened the grip..
He place the packet nicely in cars seat and asked Siya to keep this nicely in his room…
He carried her and took her in out house…
He placed her very carefully like a delicate show piece in bed..
And said good night…π
Morning….
To be countinued..
I am liking this so thought to write more…so basically it’s now a three shot….
It’s not boring at all..mind it…who ever find it boring is there fault… Aarushi see I promised you..and I am writing this with my mind…my mind is also now happy…
Thank you so much…Your all lovely comments in the previous part made my day…keep supporting…
And I missed my poetry in this one..will add in last part pakkka.promise…
I really wrote this and after emotional part I will give you cute moments also so yay..Do comments…
Will be waiting…
I am glad you all like my poetry…All my poetries are just my feelings and emotions.It relate to me so much….
Thank you…..β€οΈ
Till then take care..
It’s raining here heavily…π±..I am scared…
Be safeβ‘…
Bhahut time waste kar diya….π
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83 Comments
I put wrong thumbnail sorry!! π
It’s ok no problem we read the titleπππ
Great!!
1st
amazing episode di
u know what I suggest u convert it into ff (plz your puppe eyes) π₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ί
puppy*
Thank you pragya..but I can’t..I am not able to handle two how will I three…
Ooh ok di no problem
Amazing os.
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Amazing episode β€οΈβ€οΈ! Yrr I don’t know why but I start crying when I listen or read dilbaro songπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπππ. I love that song…meri bidai nhi hui ππππbut I love this songπ₯Ίβ€οΈ! Yes here also rain is not stopping ππflood will comeπππ! Maybe this is because of Mumbai cylclones..
ππ well here also same but itna bhi nahi ki flood aajaye
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Yes it is..due to this only.. here also Same at my end
Thank you Gauri!!β€οΈ…me too you know I was crying while writing..and my brother was like why are you crying…π₯Ίπ₯Ί..ππππ..hmm this is because cyclone.. praying for thr best..
Outstanding episode
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No di it’s not boring it is outstanding , amazing and cuteπ€π
Thank you..glad you commented.. seeing you after a long time…π
Awesome aayu . You know you are having emotional itis disease in which people write very emotional ff and os
Disease..πππ. I also want that disease…I don’t know why I always end up writing humerous stories ππππ! Only 1-2 are emotional maybe πππ
stay with aayu you will also get emotional itis as it has a high transmission rateππππππ
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Thank you prapti.. emotional disease ππ…but parpti we live 696.54km away…I don’t think it has that much transmission rate…
It has long range transmission rate. Can also transmit if you live 2000 km away
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Name is prapti not parpti
Sorry!! Prapti…π
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Here also it’s raining a lott. Mumbai h Mumbai π. Amazing part. Purani soch ki vajah se career bigad diya bechari kaπ.
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Amazing and emotional π’π’π’π’the dilbaro songππππi don’t want tissues ππππpost soonπ π π
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Arre here we have lost the trees and electrical poles… Bht bure halat hai… From day before yesterday the rain isn’t stopping.. gosh .. so nice epi.. even my fav is dilbaro.. whenver my papa wants to tease and make me cry he plays thisπ€£π€£π€£π€£… These siya and Aryan ππππ amazing… Basically I wanted it to be a ts onlyππ.. but then k thought I am not only the one who asks u too write.. well u did nice by promising me.. good girlβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈtry to post soon
Thank you…..πglad you like it…now my hard word become successful..same here..my mother and father teases me like this poor mrππ..I am a good girl only β€οΈβ€οΈ..will post soon π
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Awesome one…the song always brings tears in my eyes. Loved it…(sorry i’m late)β€
Thank you…mine too ….its okay atleast you commentedβ‘….
I can never miss dear