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Eternal Love Story # Our Riansh (Chapter-13)

Niyati12By Niyati12May 2, 202147 Comments8 Mins Read
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Chapter-13

Inside the Mall:-

Riddhima was feeling dizzy, she somehow brought a necklace for her bhabhi a watch for her bhai and beautiful dress for their would be child, she was excited to see her nephew or niece but who knows what is in store for four of them

She thought to drop a message to Ishani that she had done her shopping and is in food court and till then sit in the food court as she was feeling nausea and like vomiting…….. She went there and sat on an empty chair with her hand on her head and eyes closed

After 15 minutes:-

She was still sitting in same position but suddenly someone tapped on her shoulder, she opened her eyes and saw a waitress standing there with a smile on her face she even reciprocated it and said

Riddhima- What happened?

Waitress- Ma’am do you need something?

Riddhima- No actually, I was done my shopping and was waiting for my friends and even wasn’t feeling well so came here.0

Waitress- Ma’am may I bring anything for you?

Riddhima- No actually I had (will tell later

Waitress- Ma’am still you’re looking pale at least have water

Riddhima- No no it’s ok….. I would be leaving within few minutes

Waitress- Ok ma’am

She left from there and Riddhima again sat back in the same position

Meanwhile outside mall:-

Angre and Aryan had brought another two cars and parked there only and all four was sitting in one of those car

Vansh- God knows why all the girls take so much time in shopping

Kabir- Vansh, it had been just 1 hour, why are you too desperate

Aryan- Even I am getting that feeling from you……..

Vansh- You don’t even dare to say a word in front of me……. I got to know from Angre….. What you were asking from Angre when I had send you both to bring those cars

Aryan (stammering) – Wha…What I had done? I asked a general question

Vansh- General Question?? I firstly thought to ignore it, but you……. That simply means you didn’t remember the plan…..

Aryan- I know that bhai…… but ek chota sa nanha sa doubt tha bas…. Wo tab mujhe neend aa rhi thi to hum so rahe the to pura plan nhi sun paye theĀ  (but there was just a small doubt…… wo actually at that time I was feeling sleepy so wasn’t able to hear the whole plan) But now it’s clear…. Promise

Vansh- It should be…..

After that they again sat while waiting for them

In Food Court:-

Riddhima’s POV starts:-

It had been almost 1 hour 15 minutes since I’m in the food court waiting for them but they aren’t here yet….. No phone call…. No message…. These three got knows at what time I had made them my friend…… Who take more than 1 hour just for shopping a gift……? God… My head…. I need to reach before baby shower…. Is done and no one should know…..

Riddhima’s POV ends-:

After 5 minutes:-

Someone tapped on her shoulder she thought that waitress must have again came to ask something

Riddhima- Ye…..

She saw three of them standing there with their shopping bags

Riddhima- Gosh!!!! Finally you three had arrived…… What you guys were shopping that you had taken more than 1 hour?

Sejal- Actually we ha………

Riddhima- Forget it…. Let’s go… it’s already too late… Dad might get angry on us…

They agreed and came out due to high sun rays Riddhima wasn’t able to stand on her knees and was feeling too dizzy but somehow was trying to walk till parking lot

In boy’s car:-

As they saw all four saw them coming out from their car and took their respective car and made their way to parking lot where they saw girls standing

They head of to their luck as there wasn’t anyone not even a single camera…..

They come behind all four girls but not as planned by Vansh they were like last night pairs i.e., Riansh, Anya, Ishan, Kajal and kept a handkerchief on their face and before any of those three could react they had already inhaled the chloroform and they fainted in their arms but the most awkward one was with Riddhima because before Vansh could put the handkerchief on her face, She had already fainted in his arms. All four were shocked

Aryan- Bro, She fainted before inhaling the chloroform

Angre- May be she was already feeling dizzy, it was just a coincidence that she fainted at the same time

Vansh- It’s ok…. Let’s go now… It’s already too late…. We need to cross Mumbai’s border before 1 hour otherwise their family will get to know

They kept all the girls but everything went wrong as they kept them as their pairs….

Kabir- Vansh, We need to go like this only and keep them beside each other like Angre and Siya will sit at the back and you and Riddhima at front and same goes with us

Angre- Yaa…. So that if police ask anything we can easily make a proper excuse

Vansh- And Yaa….. We won’t tell them the place as Darjeeling…. You guys tell as Shimla and I will tell As Kashmir….. But not even same and Yes…..

Kabir- Rest we will discuss in car

Aryan- How I mean we will be sitting in different cars

Angre- Duffer…… with phone and Bluetooth…..Let’s rush It’s already too much late

They rushed and kept the phone in conference with Bluetooth and moved out of the parking lot after removing all the proofs

In RV Mansion:-

As Sooraj was not feeling well, so Sandhya had asked him to take rest for some time until the function starts so he went to his room and was sleeping

Meanwhile in Car:-

On Call:-

Kabir- Say Vansh, What you were saying at that time?

Vansh- Was I saying something, Let me recall

Aryan- Bhai I guess you are turning old, that’s why you’re forgetting things

All three chuckled

Vansh (shouted) – Shut up Aryan, I’m not old

Angre- Vansh, Don’t say too loud,

Vansh- Why?

Angre- Riddhima just fainted due to weakness, she hadn’t fainted by chloroform…… She might wake up by your high voice

Kabir- Yaa… Vansh try to be calm

Vansh- Ask this Aryan to keep his mouth shut

Aryan- Ok…. I’ll not say anything

Kabir- Now tell………

Vansh- So listen problem is just with Riddhima, as it takes 43 hour to reach Darjeeling from Mumbai boarders we need to give them the dose twice of chloroform but don’t know when Riddhima gets up as she fainted without inhaling chloroform and Yeah….. After we cross this border nobody will stop us until and unless….. (Stops the car with a jerk) oh shit…… Had we taken out their phone…? They may track them …..

Angre- Oh shit… no we hadn’t

Aryan- But how we will take out…. For that we need to check them…..

Vansh- We have to Aryan… Let’s take out…

Riansh-

Vansh goes close to Riddhima and removes her seat belt and checks her shirts pocket……but it’s not their then he sees her face and gets lost in its glow and touches her face with his forefinger slowly moves to her jawline and then to her plump lips before he could go more close to her face he wakes up from his dreamland but was still mentally lost in her he then by his one hand took her towards him due to sudden pull she falls in his arms and his face touches her neck he inhales her scent and again gets lost somehow he tries to control his burning desires and he checks her jeans front pocket still inhaling her fragrance and then checks her back pocket and found her phone, he slowly took her off his arms and placed her back on the seat but not able to control himself he places a small kiss on her cheek and turns back on his seat but still watching her while smiling and waits for other

Anya:-

Angre smiles and watches Siya and then directly took her in his arms and feels her face in his neck and inhales her scent which can make anyone mad for her, he started to genuinely like her front the first time he had seen her picture…… He checks her white jeans and found the phone in her front pocket, he slowly places her back to her place and silently give her a small forehead kiss…… and smiling gets back to his place waiting for others and meanwhile stealing glances of her cute eyes, nose, face and lips…..

Precap- couples moments and chaos

Do comment and tell me your views on the chapter

Sorry for any grammatical mistake………..

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    47 Comments

    1. prapti0809 on May 2, 2021 8:56 pm

      niyati awesome update post soon

      • Niyati12 on May 3, 2021 10:03 am

        Thank you @Prapti…….will post ASAP

    2. Mennahussein55 on May 2, 2021 9:00 pm

      So lovely enjoyable episode.
      Keep rocking dear.

      • Niyati12 on May 3, 2021 10:04 am

        Thank You Myni… It’s my pleasure that you liked it
        keep supporting me

      • Niyati12 on May 3, 2021 10:19 am

        Take care……………Loads of love ….. Will be waiting for your even

    3. AarushiSoni on May 2, 2021 9:04 pm

      So cute yaar!! Pls post soon.. waiting..

      • Niyati12 on May 3, 2021 10:05 am

        Thank you soo much Aarushi……..I’m glad you liked it…….will post soon

    4. Amyra on May 2, 2021 9:05 pm

      Amazing

      • Niyati12 on May 3, 2021 10:06 am

        Thank you @Amyra…………. I’m Glad you liked it

    5. Ravneet on May 2, 2021 9:10 pm

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      • Niyati12 on May 3, 2021 10:06 am

        Thank you dear…….. It’s my pleasure that you liked it

    6. Tanvi_5117 on May 2, 2021 9:17 pm

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      • Niyati12 on May 3, 2021 10:08 am

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      • Niyati12 on May 3, 2021 10:09 am

        Thank you soo much……… Finally but abhi aur kuch baccha hai iss so called honeymoon pe

    8. RiansHLoveR on May 2, 2021 9:37 pm

      Nice update niyatii. Post soon…take carešŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰

      • Niyati12 on May 3, 2021 10:09 am

        Thank you soo much……..I’m glad you liked it…….will post soon

    9. Arthika on May 2, 2021 9:44 pm

      Awesome update. But why riddhima fainted?

      • Niyati12 on May 3, 2021 10:09 am

        Thank you @Arthika………Let’s see….

    10. Shivangi on May 2, 2021 10:32 pm

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      • Niyati12 on May 3, 2021 10:10 am

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    11. Akshiiii on May 2, 2021 10:40 pm

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      • Niyati12 on May 3, 2021 10:10 am

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      Nice episode

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      • Niyati12 on May 3, 2021 10:13 am

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    16. Annoyinguser on May 2, 2021 11:34 pm

      Vansh you are not doing right. Helpless girls. Anyways nice episode post soon

      • Niyati12 on May 3, 2021 10:14 am

        Thank you……. Yup she helpless just because she is sleeping otherwise she is a tigress……… will try to post soon

    17. Pomu on May 2, 2021 11:35 pm

      Amazing episode Niyu…waiting for tomorrow’s episode eagerly. But why did Riddhu fainted ? Her symptoms tells something else…

      • Niyati12 on May 3, 2021 10:16 am

        Thank you so much….. will post soon….. Symptoms are šŸ™ˆšŸ™ˆ, bina kuch huešŸ˜‚

    18. Parita on May 3, 2021 12:33 am

      Great one, looking forward for the next one!!šŸ’•

      • Niyati12 on May 3, 2021 10:17 am

        Thank you soo much…… Will post soon

    19. Guneeet on May 3, 2021 8:28 am

      Is riddhima pregnant ??

      • Niyati12 on May 3, 2021 10:18 am

        Thank you soo much @Guneeet
        No…… bina kuch huye šŸ™ˆšŸ™ˆšŸ˜‚, abhi time hai

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      • Niyati12 on May 3, 2021 7:14 pm

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      • Niyati12 on May 3, 2021 7:15 pm

        Thank you dear…….. It’s my pleasure that you liked it

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      • Niyati12 on May 3, 2021 7:16 pm

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