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Home»Fan Fiction»A Mesmerizing Love Story Of Those Golden Days – Episode 10
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A Mesmerizing Love Story Of Those Golden Days – Episode 10

Shanaya1234By Shanaya1234May 15, 202014 Comments6 Mins Read
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THE EPISODE STARTS WHEN THE THREE GIRLS LAUGH AND WISH EACH OTHER GOODNIGHT.

AT SAMEER’S HOUSE IN THE MORNING

“Mummy!! Mummy!!” calls out Sameer from the washroom. “What is it?” asks Vishakha standing outside the washroom. “You can come inside. I still have my clothes on.” laughs Sameer and Vishakha comes inside. “There is no toothpaste. Please bring a new one.” he requests. “How come is it finished? I just bought it a month ago!!! And I won’t be going outside to buy a new one until I take a bath and get dressed.” says Vishakha curiously. “You are a drama queen, mummy. What should I do? I will not go to school without brushing my teeth.” tells Sameer and thinks worriedly, “What if Naina comes to talk to me by any chance, I will smell bad and she will never talk to me again.” Vishakha sees him lost and claps in front of his eyes to get him back into his senses. “Please do something. Papa has gone for a walk but how will we tell him to buy a toothpaste? I wish there was a phone which we could take anywhere along and talk to each other.” he says. “Don’t dream in the day. There is no such phone. Anyways let me try.” she says and brings a scissor along to cut open the toothpaste and says “SEE, MIDDLE- CLASS JUGAAD(tricks)!! There is some toothpaste left in there. Use it and I will buy a new one today” Sameer laughs and takes it.

 

IN NAINA’S ROOM

“Oh no!!!” Naina shouts and Preeti asks what is wrong. “We did not buy the stuff we need for the plan. How will we execute it?” Naina asks. Preeti smiles and asks her to relax. “Just wait and watch.” says Preeti and walks in the hall followed by Naina. “Chacha Ji, please help us. We are in deep trouble.” requests Preeti being kind. “Sure. What do you need?” asks Anand. “Actually, we needed some things for a school project but we forgot to buy them. Can we leave right now and buy those?” she asks and Naina stares at her thinking, “What is wrong with her? She will spoil everything.” “Ok. Bela, give them the breakfast and they can eat in the car.” Anand says and Bela agrees.

Preeti thanks them and they leave. “What are you doing?” whispers Naina. “Just trust me and if you love me, you will not say a word until I ask you to, please.” requests Preeti and as soon as Naina hears it, she shuts her mouth. While Preeti buys all the stuff, Anand asks, “What will you do with these things? And which teacher asked you to bring these?” “It is for an experiment. I don’t know the name of the teacher but he teaches CHEMISTRY.” Preeti informs and Naina lightly slaps on her own forehead and gets more worried. “But there is still one hour left for school. What will you two do till then? There will be no one in the school.” asks Anand and Preeti replies, “That’s ok Chacha Ji. We will sit in the class and study. Anyways, we don’t want to waste money on petrol going back to home and coming again.” Anand smiles hearing that.

As soon as Anand drops them to the school, they both keep all the stuff they bought in their school bags and meet Swati. “Hey we have brought everything. And there is no one except us here. But to have more security, do you know a place where no one usually comes?” asks Preeti and Swati takes them to the store room and they finish all the planning and get ready to execute. “Naina, I am sure this will work. But still, all the best.” says Swati and Naina gives her a thumbs up. Swati says,“I did not know that you were so serious about this that you are on a MAUN VRAT!” “Oops!! I totally forgot. She is not on any Maun Vrat. I just asked her to stay quiet. Sorry Naina, you can speak now.” says Preeti and Naina speaks in single breath, “Finally!!! Are you crazy, Preeti? Why did you buy all the stuff in front of Chacha Ji? He will surely know once we execute the plan and then he will definitely…” she suddenly stops while Preeti continues, “And then he will definitely throw us out of the school AND THE HOME TOO.” “I thought you were dumb but you turned out to be smarter than me.” Naina says and Preeti speaks rolling her eyes, “Was that a compliment or a taunt?” “It’s up to you. However you want to take it.” tells Swati and the three laugh. “Now we just have to hang this in such a way that nobody sees it and it will work only once we pull the rope. We will have to sit in the corner next to the door today.” informs Naina. “But Sameer, Munna, and Pandit sit there. Naina, you could talk to Sameer and ask if we three could sit there today.” mocks Preeti. “Why me? We will decide then only. Now focus on hanging this up.” answers Naina.

IN THE CLASSROOM

The girls sit on the desk in the corner as they hide the rope beside them and when the boys come, the first thing Sameer does is look for Naina all around without noticing that she is sitting on his desk. “Where is Naina…I mean where are Naina, Preeti and Swati?” asks Sameer looking around and Munna tells pointing at their bench, “TU POORE MOHALLE MEIN DHOOND RAHA HAI AUR WO HAMARE GHAR MEIN BAITHI HAIN (YOU ARE SEARCHING THE WHOLE SOCIETY AND THEY ARE SITTING IN OUR HOME)” Finally, Sameer sees Naina who unknowingly asks him, “Can we PLEASE sit here for today?” and Sameer doesn’t take a second to reply, “Of course. We will sit on your place. That’s totally fine and you don’t need to request because…” Munna interrupts, “Alright. She understood. Now let’s go.” and pulls Sameer away along with Pandit. Naina thinks, “I was not supposed to ask him. We had to decide first but why did I?” while Preeti and Swati smile seeing her so confused. “Get ready. The first lecture is going to start in a minute.” whispers Swati.

 

AS SOON AS THE CHEMISTRY TEACHER ENTERS THE CLASS, THE GIRLS PULL THE ROPE AND A BUCKET FILLED WITH A MIXTURE OF WHEAT FLOUR, WATER, GLUE, AND ROTTEN EGGS FALL ON THE TEACHER’S HEAD!!!

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    A seventeen year old who loves commenting on fan fictions n now is trying to write herself. Hope you guys like it!!!

    14 Comments

    1. Petal on May 16, 2020 7:25 am

      @Shanaya
      Superb??,this episode is amazingly awesome . At Sameer’s house,the conversation between Sameer and his mom was really nice and funny. Really love that part where sameer worriedly thinks ,What if Naina comes to talk to me by any chance, I will smell bad and she will never talk to me again??.And their middle class jugaad was nice.
      In Naina’s room love the whole conversation between naina and preeti and love the part where preeti say that if you love me you don’t utter a singal word.
      And in the school when swati,naina and preeti goes to store room and start preparing to execute the plan was really exciting, after reading that part really I really wanted to know that what will they do????
      And loved that part where naina gives swati a thumbs up and swati says I don’t know that you are on a maun vrat, and then preeti remembered and says I ask her to say quite and then later says you can speak now, and then naina finally speaks, the conversation among them was really nice.
      And in the classroom when the girls sat on sameer desk and sameer is looking for Naina and then, the way munna pointed out that “Tu POORE MOHALLE MEIN DHOOND RAHA HAI AUR WO HAMARE GHAR MEIN BAITHI HAIN” ,really loved that dialogue of Munna. And when naina ask him if they can sit here today ,the way sameer reply was really worth watching ,it was kinda funny.
      And the very last part where teacher enter the classroom and the girls pull the rope and the bucket full of various mixture fall on the teacher’s head was really worth watching.
      Now I am really excited to know what gonna happen in the next update. Thnx for the update ,really enjoyed reading this update and Waiting for the next update????.

      • Shanaya on May 16, 2020 10:00 am

        I am so grateful that I have a reader like u. U are super awesome ????. Thanks a million for the comment. Munna’s dialogue just came into my head while writing and I just added it with the hope to entertain ?? and it’s so nice to know it did work. Will be updating soon ????. Love your comments ??

      • Petal on May 16, 2020 6:05 pm

        @Shanaya
        ??.

      • Shanaya on May 17, 2020 7:22 am

        ????

    2. Shesha485 on May 16, 2020 8:58 am

      Oh wow, What a episode. Its just awesome. I loved each and every scene here. Especially Naina’s Maun vrat. ?? Sameer’s toothpaste drama reminds me in the original version that Naina’s hair is full of lice because of Preeti and Sameer gifts him lice removal shampoo. There Naina thinks if Sameer talks to her, her lice will spread on his hair and here Sameer thinks what if Naina talks to her. Just realistic middle class tricks
      And the three girls plans are so mischievous and the climax is just shockingly amazing. Naina asking Sameer to sit near him is so nice and Preeti and Swati too smiles.
      Are you in thought of bring Shefali, Arjun’s ex in real version? I liked the pair.

      • Shanaya on May 16, 2020 10:06 am

        Loved your comment ❤️❤️ Thankyou so much for giving so much appreciation to the ff ??. Thanks for relating Sameer’s toothpaste scene to Naina’s lice scene, though honestly, it was something not completely in my head to do ?? but that’s a great comparison??
        And Actually I might bring in Shefali and maybe focusing a little more on the brothers but it would happen later as right now, I am trying to build up the story and pull it off with the current characters. Hope you understand ??

      • Shesha485 on May 16, 2020 3:51 pm

        ?

      • Shanaya on May 16, 2020 5:35 pm

        ??

    3. Adhu on May 16, 2020 2:27 pm

      Nice episode. It was really funny. Sameer’s toothpaste scene is simply middle class thing ? and every middle class people can relate with, afterall there is no scope for wastage.
      Preeti was Smart. Naina’s Maun vrith ?. Sameer is completely smitten by Naina?. Best part I like in this FF is characters are behaving exactly according to their age. Their ideas , thinking , etc. Munna and Pandit was as good as always.

      • Shanaya on May 16, 2020 5:38 pm

        Thank you very much for that sweet message ??. I am so happy that you find the ff realistic as I try to bring both the 90s vibe and the teenage at the same time and hope I am doing it good??. Please keep supporting the same way. ??

      • Adhu on May 17, 2020 9:11 am

        Sure dear.???

      • Shanaya on May 17, 2020 7:43 pm

        Thanks a lot ????

    4. Mohita on May 17, 2020 9:39 am

      YOUR FF IS TRULY FABULOUS…. OMG TODAY’S LAST PART WAS SO HUMOROUS …. IT TRULY LOOKED REALISTIC…. NOW, SAMMER IS COMPLETELY LOST IN NAINA …. I HOPE HE CONTINUES TO BE THE TOPPER IN STUDIES …. PRETTI IS CLEVER …. NAINA LOVES HER SISTER A LOT …. THE MAUN VRATH …. SHE DID NOT EVEN SPEAK A WORD …. Munna tells pointing at their bench, “TU POORE MOHALLE MEIN DHOOND RAHA HAI AUR WO HAMARE GHAR MEIN BAITHI HAIN …. WAS VERY ENTERTAINING …. LOVE YOUR FF A LOT …. TOOTH PASTE SCENE WAS NICE …. SAMEER TELLING THAT HE HAS THE CLOTHES ON THE BODY AND VISHAKA CAN COME IN …. WAS FUNNY …. THE PLACE EXCHANGE AMONG THE GIRLS WAS NICE TOO …. SPECIALLY THE CONVERSATION BETWEEN SAMAINA …. VERY NICE …. KEEP IT UP …..
      AT LAST SORRY FOR COMMENTING LATE!!!

      • Shanaya on May 17, 2020 7:49 pm

        First of all, plz don’t be sorry for commenting late. That’s totally ok. I am relieved by seeing you’re comment. Actually I was just gonna send you a private message to check if everything is ok ??. But I am glad you commented ??. I love the fact that you could see the bond between the sisters as that’s what I wanted to portray. Honestly that is how I wish all the relations would be today too. That’s kind of my imagination about the world ??
        I am very happy that you all live the way I write. That’s so motivating ??

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