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Home»Fan Fiction»The Game Of Life….An Avneil Ss….(Part 9)
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The Game Of Life….An Avneil Ss….(Part 9)

sreenandana.sureshBy sreenandana.sureshSeptember 30, 20186 Comments5 Mins Read
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Hii frndzz….i am sreenandana back with ûmy ‘game of life’…..i am sooo sorry…i was not able 2 publish my ff for past 1 1/2 weeks….extremely sorry….

I had already told that i am in 10th and have a lot 2 study…i am having half yearly exam and plz do pray 4 me….i am really tensed regarding my studies…..

So i inform i that i will b publishing my next part of ff only after next 2 week….extremely sorry….as u all know xms r really important…..

So the present part:

Riya – so guyzzz……me and adi will go together……and u both wil

Avni cuts her..

Avni – but riyaa….

Riya – plz avneil..

Avneil – AVNEIL?????

Riya – haan….avni + neil = avneil…..

Avneil – nonsense……

Riya – whatever…..

Adi – guyzz…so its final….RiDi and AvNeil will b the 2 pairs…

Finally avneil agrees….avneil feels happy somewhere in theor heart after being teamed up with each other……

Riya gives them the map that is used for trekking…..

Riya – this map will help u….

Avni takes the map from her….

Adi – so guyz…we will leave by sharp 3 pm….

Avneil – okay…

Later all of them leave 2 theor  respective rooms….

Avni was packing her things when came to her room……

Avni – neil??

Neil – avni…do fast yaar…..

Avni – okay…

Even she packs her things….

RiDi and Avneil leaves by sharp 3pm…..

In Avneil’s Route:

Avni – neil….yaar….i am not able 2 identify anything from this map….

Neil – give me….

He clears her doubt regarding the route….

Avni and neil was walking suddenly avni stops….

Neil – avni….chalo yaar…

Avni – neil…neill…look that….

She points towards something…..neil looks 2wards the direction…he finda a snake there….

Abni was about 2 shout….neil suddenly covers her mouth…..he holds her closer….

The snake goes in its own way…avni and neil looks at each other…..they share an eyelock…they both comes 2 their sense after some time…..they both moves back….

Avni and neil goes as per the map…..

At night:

Avni – neil….i cant walk more….

Neil – haan….u r ry8…even i cant….then i will fix thwtent….

Avni – okay…..

They both together fixes the tent…

Avni – gud ny8….

Neil – gud ny8….

Avni dozes off to sleep……neil looks at her….

Neil – omg….she is damn cute…look how innocent she is looking….and if she wakes up she will again bcom a sherni….i like this innocent avni…..

He kisses her forehead…

Neil – hey yaar…what u have done….amd.what u were saying…..my heart is going out of control….god….plz.save me…

Even he dozes off to sleep…..

Later in morning:

Avni wakes up….

Avni – neil…neil wake up…..

She tries 2 wake him up…suddenly he drages her towards him in his sleep….he pulls her even more closer…..avni struggles 2 get freed….after a lot of struggle she gets freed….

Avni – chalo….he is not waking up….anyway thats better….i will wake him up after changing my dress…

She was putting her shirt when neil wakes up….

Avni gets shocked and even neil gets shocked….he covers his eyes….

Neil – i didnt see anything….

Avni – wo….i thought 2 wake u up after changing dress…

Neil suddenly slips and falls on avni…they share an eyelock….

Neil – again sorry…

He goes out…avni comes out after changing her dress…even neil changes his dress and they leave for their trekking…..

In the evening aveil reaches their destination ….but unfortunately ridi had already reached there…..

The next day they return 2 their respective house….

Avneil starts to get closer day by day…..

Flashback ends…..

Present:

A tear escapes from neil’s eyes….mitali comes 2 him….

Mitali – neil…..kya hua??

Neil – nothing….certain things affect our life very much that they still haunt us….

Mitali – neil…be strong…

Suddenly avni and ali enters…

Piyali – mitali…look who’s here????

Mitali – come neil….looks like ali is here…..

Avni was facing the opposite side when neil amd mitali entered…..

Neil – hello ali….

Avni gets shocked hearing neil’s voice….

Avni turns……neil gets shoxked 2 see her …..

Neil – avni….avni where were u all these years???

He hugs her….he cups her face…..

Neil – u know how mich i missed u….i was dying each second after u went……avni…avni say something…..

Avni – leave me neil…..

Neil – avni….

Avni (shouts) – i said leave me neil…..

Neil – what r u saying avni….

Avni – aint u done even now….y r u hurting me every now and then???

Ali – avni….what r u saying???

Avni doesnt aswer him instead runs inside the house..

Ali – avni…..stop….

He runs after her….she goes 2 a corner and cries a lot….

Ali tries 2 console her….

Ali – who’s he avni???

Avni – neil…

Ali – what??

Avni – ali….i am sorry…. i cant stay here…..plz ali….

Ali – how much will u run away??u have 2 face the reality one day….u have 2 b strong…..u have 2 prove him that u r strong…..

Avni wipes her tears….

Avni – u r ry8 ali…i am not weak…..i will face him…..

Precap: Avneil confrontation…..

Tnq 4 reading…..

By sreenandana…..

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sreenandana.suresh

    i am a happy-go-lucky type.....loves watching serialz....preeran, avneil, rikara, ruvya and nairan r my favourite couples...

    6 Comments

    1. Tazzy on October 6, 2018 2:16 am

      Oh no I don’t know how I’m gonna wait 2 weeks for the next update but good luck with your exams hope you do extremely good

      • sreenandana.suresh on October 6, 2018 8:47 pm

        Tnq…..’

    2. No name on October 7, 2018 8:46 am

      Hii…Sreenandhanaa….i am also a fan of avn kerala

      • sreenandana.suresh on October 11, 2018 11:39 pm

        Ohh…gud 2 meet u….

    3. No name on October 7, 2018 9:01 am

      Hii…sreenandhana…My last comment became a flop coz i was not able to type due to my phone…
      I am also a fan of avneil from Kerala…Your ff is great….I think u are also from Kerala..right..??…Pls update part 10 asap coz now i am not getting sleep without this….I think ur xams are going on…same here…but I am only in 9th std…..plx post nxt epiosde soon…All the best for ur xams…Do well…love you yaar??

      • sreenandana.suresh on October 11, 2018 11:41 pm

        Ohh…gud 2 meet u….yaar . .i will surely try 2 post it sooner ….tnq 4 reading….all d bst 4 ur xms…

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