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Home»Fan Fiction»Pyaar (Ragsan) Part 8 by Aliya
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Pyaar (Ragsan) Part 8 by Aliya

A12345By A12345March 29, 201826 Comments5 Mins Read
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Let’s begin…

Days passed….

Rag is tensed abt her growing feelings and desperations to see sanskar.. No matter how much she tried to hide her feelings she is getting lost in his thoughts… To make her more week sanskar calls her and talks to her

And Sanskar is asking for the address avni isn’t giving him the one and Ragini isn’t telling him…

Almost 25 days hv completed

Avni goes to colg for some work and there she gets to know abt sanskar is hvng exam

Avni:exams chodke mujhse address pooch raha tha..pagal

And after completing her work she goes and sits in canteen na she knew he would come there after exams

After sometime…

Sanskar comes there….
Avni smiles at him bt he glares her in return

San he goes towards her and sits
San: why hv you come here?
Avni:i thought to see me jeeeeeeejaji
San:bt you r the worst saali ever
Avni:i m the best u know..u had exams and how can i take chance on career
San:jhooti…yahan le aake pata chala hoga
Avni:ha par meine tho bhala kiya hai tumhara..bhalai ka tho zamaana hi nai raha

San:chal nikal yahan…dont show me your sada hua shaqal
Avi???: wat did you say
San:i know truth is bitter…

They both angrily moves in opposite direction

And finally Ragini is coming back after one month

Both avni and sanskar standing in opposite directions and passing glares to eachother in a Railway station

Rag comes and waves her hand to avni from far
Ani jumps on her.. And hugs
Rag Stumbles: avni..
Avni: i sooo misssed you???
Acni gets lil tears

San from behind:hawww…
Rag looks at him and she only remembers the thing distancing from him

San: she added glycerine don’t believe..i saw in my 2 eyes
Avni:ha tho tumhe kya

San??? hq thought she would protest ??

Rag: how did this journey of friends turned enemies

Avni: its all because of him

San: avni.. jhooti jhooti jhooti.. Its all bcs of me.. Now all blame on this innocent..leave it.. He goes to tag.. And all of a sudden he hugs her

Rag was feeling weak

Avni was smiling
He was still hugging her

Rag: now leave me sanskar..
San: arey..no…i hv to hug you until i feel to…

Avni: then we hv to do a home here

San; go and make..cant you do this for us.. for ur sister cum dosth and jeejaji cum dosth

Rag was feeling weak..
She pushes him lightly

Avni smiles: accha kiya

San:tum bhi na Ragoo…

They then goes….
And in a cafe

San: Ragini u didn’t tell..how was the trip…and u didnt tell us abt the family

Avni:ha Ragini…

Rag: ok.. So listen…my dad was in army
San: was in means
Rag smiles: now he is no more

San: sorry..i..
Rag: its ok..and nani..ma..2 bhai aur ek chotisi behen…i m the eldest of all
Avni: wow
Rag: and a cousin…i love him like my own brother Raj bhai and laksh my childhood friend and there’s some ppl who lives trusting on us
San: only friend ryte

Rag looks confused at him: ha

Avni burst into laughter

Rag: wat hpnd?

San:oh you don’t know…avni fell from stairs and hit her head..so this is the affect

Avni: should i tell her.. Why did i laugh!!

San:noo

Rag: wat???u both are making me confused..

San texts something to avni..

Avni nods in no

San signs plz…

Avni smiles: Ragini..i hv some work…here actually i hv to buy a bag..u both sit..i will go and come

Rag:i will too come

Avni: no no..u both talk.. here’s someone who is desperate to talk to you
Rag: wat?

Ani leaves from there

Rag feels his intense gaze on her

San:i missed you so much.. it’s like i got light of my life back

Rag looks at him somewhere she is scared

Then a man keeps the beautiful love shaped cake infront them

Rag was surprised

San: Ragini..

Rag looks at him..
He forwards a rose…

She couldn’t resist but to smile

San: this is for accepting me as your friend

Rag takes it…

San again gives a rose: this is for your rude behaviour

Rag glares him with a smile

San: wch i love too

Rag smiles and takes

San again gives the rose…..
And her hand gets full of roses

Rag laughs: i don’t hv to open the florist shop

San tells her to look behind

Rag turns and sees and there was many flower bouquets

Rag smiles:u did it..
She stands surprised

Then she notices nobody r there in the cafe

San: so..

Rag: so..

San:i want to listen a truth from you

Rag: truth???

San: wat you feel for me?

Rag was shocked

San: i know you hv some insecurities..bt trust me i will be there for you..i will stand beside you….bt i want to know the truth

Rag was feeling more and more weak

She couldn’t utter a word

San holds her hand: tell me

Rag:plzz Sanskar

San:if you didnt felt anything for then you didnt hv said plzz sanskar instead you would hv slapped me or throwed these roses on my face….

Her heart is debating her to accept her feelings that she loves him by she was scared

Rag:i can’t

San: your eyes showed me the truth by i want to listen from you

Rag didn’t say anything

San turns to go seeing no reaction

Rag sees him going..

She couldn’t bare it

San felt pulled and he could feel her hand around his chest

Rag cries: why u make me weak everytime.. How much i tried to avoid you..bt u make something that i can’t stop myself.. Why r u like this….I Love you Sanskar

Sanskar smiles…..

To be continued…

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A12345

    Fan of drashti&gurmeet and obviously tevar my ragsan???i get new story on them everyday bt too busy to write?

    26 Comments

    1. aditi on March 29, 2018 7:56 pm

      Awesome yaar. Finally ragini confessed.

    2. Ragu fan on March 29, 2018 7:59 pm

      Lovely

    3. MKRS on March 29, 2018 8:04 pm

      Amazing dr

    4. Ishu on March 29, 2018 8:14 pm

      Superb. Sudden confession I thought sanskar will do so much work to gain ragini’s love but here simply she confessed.

    5. sug on March 29, 2018 8:39 pm

      Ossssooommmmmmmmmm funnnnnnyyyy

    6. Keerthi on March 29, 2018 8:47 pm

      Awesomeeeeeee. Ragini’s confession is beautiful. Update pyaar ki daastan.

    7. Rikashini on March 29, 2018 9:14 pm

      Beautiful

    8. Neethu on March 29, 2018 9:39 pm

      Awesome

    9. Ragsan on March 29, 2018 10:03 pm

      Superb confession.

    10. Shalini on March 29, 2018 10:23 pm

      Amazing update.

    11. Manisha on March 29, 2018 10:55 pm

      Nice

    12. nive on March 29, 2018 10:55 pm

      Sissssssy where were you ? I missed you and lahari sissy lot in these days. Damn cute confession sissy.

    13. Satya on March 29, 2018 10:56 pm

      Wow its really superb

    14. manu on March 30, 2018 12:43 am

      Amazing!!!

    15. Ammy on March 30, 2018 5:34 am

      Awesome

    16. vini on March 30, 2018 6:16 am

      awesome

    17. Ria on March 30, 2018 8:34 am

      Awesome di… Superb confession..

    18. PriyaS on March 30, 2018 9:25 am

      Wow what a confession. Simply superb.

    19. vani on March 30, 2018 10:20 am

      Superb dear. As usual unexpected love confession.

    20. Tara on March 30, 2018 10:54 am

      So cute ragsan.

    21. Egde Black on March 30, 2018 12:09 pm

      Soooo Cute…

    22. Pinky on March 30, 2018 12:22 pm

      Amazing

    23. geet on March 30, 2018 1:14 pm

      Cute

    24. RAGSANIAN on March 30, 2018 1:53 pm

      Amazingggg cutest proposal.

    25. moni on March 30, 2018 2:39 pm

      Aww cute.

    26. Rehna on April 2, 2018 12:27 pm

      Awesome dear

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