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Home»Fan Fiction»You are my perfect papa (shot-1)
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You are my perfect papa (shot-1)

Sree1603By Sree1603March 14, 20184 Comments5 Mins Read
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Ziva dhoni as abhi’s daughter)

A bright morning…….. Mr.sun?? is keep on kissing our earth with much love………..but he doesn’t know that actually he is burning us with his love…….??

But somewhere in this big city among the big crowd……….a man is sweating a lot and continuously banging his horn……but much to displeasure…… No one is minding his bang ….instead they are fighting for some reason………..

The person furiously came out of the car and shouting…….

“Can’t you all see……more than 15 minutes I am banging my horn….please let me go…….my wife is suffering from labour pain……… Please move away…..I am begging you all………please she is suffering a lot……….”

At last the crowd started to move and one lady came to help him…….

Lady:sir I am a doctor……..our hospital is nearby only…… Come we will go ..

Man:OK ma!just get in the car……

The lady got in the car and shocked to see his wife…….the single word escaped from her is didi…….

The man was shocked equally to hear that…..but in tension he drove the car fast than before as someone is there to look after his wife…….

The lady was continuously patting her di…….not to close her eyes………and the lady tried to say something to her by holding her hands tightly ….but we can’t……!!!

Lady’s POV…..

Dii…..I am so happy today atlast I saw you after 3 years .but not in state………why you eloped di …without even saying a word to me…!!!!and I am sure you are damn lucky to have him as your husband…. I can see his love for you……!!!

Her trail thought came to halt when they reached the hospital……instantly the pregnant lady closed her eye’s due to tired ness……..

In hospital…….

The man is waiting restlessly…….. Outside the labour ward……

Again the same lady doctor came and sat near him…..

LD: jeeju…..

He was shocked to the core to hear this word…….

Man:what????jeeju………whi….which means…..you….you.are……..disha………

Disha:haan….i am her sister…..don’t be afraid she will be soon……

Man:hope so…….

By then they heard chirpy sound of cry……..and doctor arrived with worry stricken face……

Doctor: Mr.that is a baby girl……..and…..

Man:doctor can I meet my wife……

Disha was indeed happy to see his care instead of asking about child he is asking about his wife

Doctor: Sorry Mr. We can save your wife……she is no more……..

That’s it……..the word she is no more took their soul out…….

The man shouted……….

“PRAGYA……………. PRAGYA……..”

(Ya it’s our abhi and pragya….disha is pragya’s sister…. .  before 3 years pragya eloped with a bhi to lead a beautiful life but the destiny decided something different……)

Abhi without minding anything……. Went inside the ward…..and saw his wife who lying without a soul on the other he saw a beautiful scenery…… Which is his daughter…… He was happy that at least he got a reason to live his life………..

And kissed both their forehead.. ……his girl giggled…….

After the formalities abhi got pragya’s body….and informed disha to say to their parents that pragya is dead…..and also said that he will return once he achieved as a father…….

According to him…..,

Pragya gave him a big responsibility….. And he want to fulfill on his own….if her parents cane to know about their whereabouts…. Surely they will claim his daughter as theirs……..and it is easy for them to take the custody too as pragya’s father was a big lawyer….

So he thought to move out from the country….. To the place where his wife desired to live……..

He left the place after biding to disha…..his saali…….

After one month.

Pragya’s funeral…………

Why you left us fuggi?????how could you do this to us……you only said me that we three have to live happily na……then why you left us..????

If nivetha (abhigya’s child)wasn’t with me…I would
Have died on the same day you left me……..

I know from somewhere you are watching us an…….why you left her…..she need you fuggi……this is the same situation I faced……..

Even though I can bring her no one can replace mother’s love especially you a great mother……….

Finally I am going fuggi to the place where you loved to live……..

Paris……city of love…we will live there with your memories….. Don’t worry we will come here to see twice a year…….bye……fuggi……..

Small rose fell down from her photo!!!as a sign of acceptance……

????????????????????????

After three years………..

The city of Paris welcome us…….



W

e can hear a voice……

“Arrey meri bachu….nivi wakeup na….!!!see it is gettilate….first day of your school baby…..wake up…….”

Ya it is our abhi only………

“Papa let me sleep……please 5 minutes more”

“Meri princess…. Your mumma won’t like to be late……and…..

Before he complete she got up and ran away to bathroom and abhi chuckled and followed her to get ready



Abhi:how cute meri princess!!!!!!!just like your mom……

Sh e giggled………..

Abhi carried her in his embrace……and made her to sit in car…….

He ignited the car…….

????????????????????????

I am stopping here guys……will update another part within tomorrow…… Please….!!!!

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    4 Comments

    1. Shanaya on March 15, 2018 2:45 pm

      Nice update. It was so sweet. Waiting for the next.

      • Sree1603 on March 15, 2018 7:18 pm

        Will do tomorrow dear……thanks……

    2. vidhushi on March 15, 2018 8:30 pm

      loved the update!!! ?

    3. Saranya24 on March 26, 2018 1:55 pm

      Tats so cute loved it????

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