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The 4 am phone call || ShraMan || EDKV (Chapter 1) New Phone

NikitaBy NikitaMarch 2, 201722 Comments3 Mins Read
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Heyy.. This was one of my most awaited ffs I guess.. Since its been hanging around for long. But yea, this ff is boring. Ik. It will be boring at peaks, but you have to bare up. This one is damn boring anyways.

“Life told me to move on, but I didn’t”

-Chapter 1-
My New Phone

I woke up, again. Third time this night. I checked the time. 3:12 am. The date was 13th March. It brought back sooo many memories. This was the day when she died. I killed her. Yes, I KILLED MY SISTER. Irony of life, no one believes me, when in fact in our so called Indian society, people blame, always blame the person who was present with that person during person died. That faint dream. She was shouting Sumo. I let go. I just let go. Today was the day. She died. Exactly at 4 in the evening. I was upset. So upset. I tried to sleep again, hopefully now no dreams.

—– Morning——
I dressed up and moved to my office. I have nothing in my life, except HIM. The Shravan Malhotra, whom I’ve been crushing on since he walked into our office. But he was obviously dating someone. Someone named .unhh.. What was her name? Yes, that Shivani. I was walking back home, looking at those cute little kids playing in the park. And the worst.. I bumped into my landlord.

‘Where have you been? My rent!’
‘Oh hello. Rent? Where do you live I’ve asked you a thousand times. I’ll come and pay you. You always call and tell me to meet here and there. And you never called this timee. How will I pay you?’
‘ I called you, your phone was not working’
‘ ugh.. Ye phone naa! Fine, I’ll pay your tmr here. Let me go buy a new phone.’

She goes to a nearby store.

‘ Mam, this is the latest phone. Airtel company. This has voice recording, voice mail, every new feature Ma’am!’

‘Bhaiya, kitne ka hai?’

She buys the phone accepting the price 870. (Idk the price of phones..sorry)

I walked back home thinking about HIM. Okay, so if you don’t know who’s HIM. Then I’m pretty sure you did not concentrate on my story anymore.

I slept dreaming about him and woke up with her dream.

And then the most astonishing thing happened.

Next Chapter- HER FIRST CALL.

—–
Ik this part is boring. But next ones are good. Hopefully. Love you all!
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Nikita

    Varun Dhawan and I are made EK DUJE KE VAASTE! Foodie,extroverrt,lazy, sleepy, hungry,and a filmyy bacchaa! ♥ xD

    22 Comments

    1. Prettypreeti on March 2, 2017 2:19 pm

      Nikkii ohhh girl oh my gosh..u wrote it too good.it was short but was good..oh i love the way u potrayed sumo..i feel it interesting…moving forward to read more…ok so shravan ke upar crush of sumo.cool.shravan already of someone.why???okokok i know demand of story but i liked it…
      Too good
      Loved it
      Love u
      Post soon

      • Nikita on March 8, 2017 1:45 pm

        Thankk youu soo much! Next wala lamba.pakaaaa
        Chill, ShraMan will end up together.
        Love you tooo!!

    2. RAOne on March 2, 2017 2:24 pm

      KCK HAAA…….don’t make hmmm…. haaaa

      • Nikita on March 8, 2017 1:45 pm

        What?

      • RAOne on March 8, 2017 1:50 pm

        Kartik calling Kartik, your first episode appeared like that, and that tasveer 8*11.
        Aisa mujhe laga sorry agar aap mere words upset ya gussa h to butfirst episode mujhe aaise appear hua.

      • Nikita on March 8, 2017 2:03 pm

        Oh! KCK. I never understood that. I told this before only, when I posted intro that it’s a remake of KCK. Relax. Im not mad 🙂

      • RAOne on March 8, 2017 3:10 pm

        sorry then I didn’t read intro I was just looking here there about ff so that I could improve my FF, I’m just learning from you all becuase I’m new bussiness.
        ONce again sorry keep wrirring and enjoy carry on……. and HAPPY WOMEN’s day, all the best and once sorry for that.

      • Nikita on March 8, 2017 10:19 pm

        Its okayy.. relaxx.. we’re all friends here.. thank you!

    3. RANdomfANCreationz on March 2, 2017 3:32 pm

      Areh wah Kya suspense vaise I love these kind of thrilling stories so sumo’s sis must have died because of her . Areh Sumo have a crush on Shravan and Shravan don’t give her a damm ? And that shivani reminds me of Shivani in Ghulaam drama ??? which I watch sometimes ????
      But ur ff is too good and interesting and jaw-dropping ???

      • Nikita on March 8, 2017 1:47 pm

        Thankk you.. well idk anything about that Shivani, I was thinking about a name in my school, and my classmate Shivani passed by, so here’s shivani! Loveee youu..

    4. WeirdSister on March 2, 2017 6:00 pm

      Hey Nishi..
      I am so damn happy that you finally are continuing with this story..
      I love mysteries and thrillers..
      And I am already loving your story..
      So keep writing..
      Keep posting..
      Love you loads..
      Post soon..
      ?

      • Nikita on March 8, 2017 1:48 pm

        Already in love with it? Thatss huge. Thankk you so much. I lovee youu!

    5. Sonai on March 2, 2017 6:01 pm

      It’s amazing Nishita !!!! Post soon !!!

      • Nikita on March 8, 2017 1:48 pm

        Thankk youu Diyaaaa

    6. christie123 on March 2, 2017 6:35 pm

      Hey nishita it’s fabulous like your every writings.. don’t you dare call it boring . I love the suspense… Loved it..???????????????
      Love you..
      Meher…

      • Nikita on March 8, 2017 1:49 pm

        Awww.. thankk you so much Christie. It means a lot. Okii baba its not boring!?
        Lovee you

    7. Love_forever on March 2, 2017 6:57 pm

      O.M.G.
      Mouth shut..lips zipped up..it’s just fantastic!!
      History paper tomorrow..wish me luck..no long comments!
      I love you!

      • Nikita on March 8, 2017 1:50 pm

        Thankk you. Dude msg me. I lost ur no.

    8. IME on March 2, 2017 10:18 pm

      Amazingggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg
      Atlast you posted it
      Post soon
      Love you ??????????
      take care
      Byee

      • Nikita on March 8, 2017 1:51 pm

        Thankkk youuuuuu
        Loveee youuuuuu

    9. Reema on March 3, 2017 1:58 pm

      hey Nikita nice episode. and not at all boring.
      post next epi soon.
      loads of love. tc bye.

      • Nikita on March 8, 2017 1:51 pm

        Awwiii thankk you so muchh, lovee u

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