Zindgi Bitaungi tere saaye mein..(Episode 4)

guyzz…actually i updated this episode on 3rd may but don’t know why it is not published…hope this time it would be…..

Thank you for those wonderful comments for the previous update
Abhi hugged pragya tightly and called her name..but there was no response..finally they reached the hospital…Abhi carried pragya in his hand and then run to the hospital…he then shouted…doctor…..by caring pragya in his hand…The hospital staffs rushed towards him…they bring the structure and Abhi placed pragya in it…he was still holding her hand…they rushed her to the OT(I don’t know whether they would take her icu or ot..so sorry if there us mistake) They took her to the OT..their hand get separated when she is taken inside the OT.
He looked at her with teary eyes…(bg hamari adhuri kahani…) He then holds doctor’s hand and said: plz save her…she is my life….if anything happened to her..then..i can’t …..doctor plz…he folded hands in front him…plz do whatever you want..call whoever you want…but promise that you will save her…you should save her…
Doctor: we will try our level best…

The operation was going on…Abhi was sitting outside … Dadi…bulbul..saralaji..everyone reached there…everyone rushed towards the OT… they saw abhi standing in front of the OT…
Dadi: beta what happen where is pragya??? He remained silent… everyone asked him the same question…With a heavy heart he pointed his hand towards the OT and starts to cry….

Saralaji shouts…pragya..she sit on the floor,…dadi was also completely shattered…all were completely shattered by this news…all asked him what happened but he didn’t replied anything and went from there silently… Purab reached there after finishing the hospital formalities and explained them everything….all sits in front of the OT all were praying for pragya… Abhi went outside he was sitting in the bench (outside the hospital) and thinking about pragya…he remembers their first meeting..their fight..how pragya used to care him and his family…then how she saved him from death..he couldn’t control his emotions tears falls from his eyes and he starts to cry bitterly…then he sensed the touch of someones hand in his shoulder..it was his dadi…he couldn’t control himself so he hugged her suddenly and starts to cry

dadi cared his hair and said: beta..control urself…nothing will happen to her our prayers will bring her back…and moreover ur love will defnitly bring her back to life..god is not that much cruel he won’t seprate both of you..

Abhi: why…dadi why all these happens with me…All those who loves me..whom I love will get seprated from me..first my parents..now pragya..dadi if anything happen to her then I can’t forgive myself… she did this to save me…dadi I need her..i can’t live without her…
Dadi: enrything will become alright..ur pragya needs u..so come inside..if you become weak then who will manage saralaji…and others..and beta if you become wek like this the ur fuggy will also become sad…so come..
They went inside..when they reached OT..doctor was coming out sfter the surgery..abhi rushed towards him and asked about pragya…
Doctor: operatn was completed and it is almost success but…
Abhi: then what ..what is the problem..
Doctor: pragya is still unconscious..it is important that she should gain conscious..if she didn’t respond…if she didn’t come back to sense within an hour…then there is a chance that she fall to coma…so the next one hour is so important…. All were shocked to hear this…abhi sat on the bench in shock…he seems to be a lifeless body…then dadi went towards him
Dadi: see what happen…doctor said that operatn is success then what is the problem…??
Abhi: dadi…but she is still unconscious ..don’t to hear what doctor said…
Dadi: yes I heard..but what is the problem in that..

Abhi: what is the problem….she should gain sense in an hour else….
By this time sarlaji came and sit near abhi ..she put her hand in his shoulder and said: yes she should come back to sense within an hour..but beta..she would gain conscious only if someone call her…someone should call her…should ask her to open her eyes…someone should do that…if you are sitting like this here then who would call her who would bring her back to life..so go beta…
Abhi looks at dadi….
Dadi: belive in ur love…ur love will defnitly bring her back..and she also don’t want to go away from you …and I know that you also won’t allow her to go..so go and call her..go and call ur fuggy and bring back her to ur life….
Hearing this abhi went to the OT…
He slowly opens the door and step inside…he looks at pragya and tears falls from his eyes..he went towards her and sit near to her bed….he kept his hand on her head and then slowly cared her hair…he then slowly hold her hand with both of his hand..he then slowly brushed her hand with his..all these time he was looking at pragya with teary eyes…

He then very slowly called her name..pragya…but there was no response..he once again called her name…but still there was no response…he then went some more closer to her…and called but still she remained silent..he became restless…a fear of losing her came to his mind..he then shouted..pragya..plz open ur eyes..plz look at me…am ur abhi…rockstar is here..plz look at me…plz talk to me…ok..u r angry at me na…then okk..atleast scold me..plz don’t remain silent…fuggy am afraid of ur silence fuggy plz…open ur eyes..he cared her cheeks..rubbed his hand through her head and was continuously called her name..at one stage he lost all his control shouts at her..: enough pragya enough..i know that I tortured you..i fought with you…a had done a lot of mistakes…you can punish me for all that..but this..this silence in too much…don’t punish me like this…wake up pragya wake..up…tears roll down from his eyes… pragya you told ur love to me…don’t you want to hear my reply…once you wake up then I will give u ur reply..so wake up…see everyone is waiting for you..all are afraid of losing you..so u have to wake up…

He become angry..he then stood up and said..: am keep on talking to you but u r not responding what is this fuggy….arey wajke up yaar…don’t leave me like this…fuggy plz…I can’t live without you..fuggy wake up..can’t you hear me…can’t you understand what am saying..then hear it once again…I LOVE YOU….yes..I LOVE …YOU…paagal…I can’t live without you… do you get that…I LOVE YOU…when where..i don’t know but I love you..when the bullet hits you…I felt as if the my world is going away from me…Everytime when you are around me I felt a special kind of happiness..but I couldn’t realize that it is love..but today when I saw you in blood..when I saw in pain…when I heard those 3 magical words from you I realized my feeling…I realized that am in love…fuggy my day begins with you and ends at you…we fought with eachother the whole day for silly things..but my day was incomplete without that silly fights… but today I could realize that was nothing else but love…you are always there with me…in my difficulties…failure.. problem..happiness…in everytime… but today when I realize my love for you are you going away from me…??? Plz fuggy wake…up…plz wake up for me…wake up to spend those beautiful moments with me…which you always wished for…plzzz………tears falls down from his eyes…plz..fuggy..don’t leave..me………….i can’t live without you…he collapsed completely..he sits near the bed with his hand on the bed and resting his head on his hand…he was crying bitterly…

All the time he is saying fuggy wake up i love you..plz….(hamari adhuri kahani bg)
Slowly he felt the presence of a hand in his head…someone is caring his hair..he slowly raised his head..it is none other than his fuggy….she has opened her eyes…she is looking at him with full of love…tears were falling from her eyes..he looked at her for sometime..(Alla waariya song in bg)
Background………………………..
Waapas toh aaja yaar
Seene se lagaa JA yaar
Dil toh hue hain zaar
Oh beloved come back to me
Oh beloved come and hug me

My heart has broken into pieces
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They shared a hug…he then kissed her all over her face…and then looked into her eyes…..he cared her hair..cheeks … kissed in her forehead ..and then once again hugged her… (All waariya bg)
Bg…………………………………………………….
Umra bhar ka intezaar
Ik pal bhi Na qaraar
Ungli pe nachaaye daastaan
It’s a lifelong waiting
Cannot a find a piece for a moment
The story is making me dance on fingers
(my favourite linse…)
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Pragya was about to say something

Pragya: aap….you…love….
but Abhi touched her nose and made her silent..then hugged her once again….And said…
Abhi: chup…be silent okk…and yes I love you fuggy…I really ..really love you..now promise me that you won’t leave me…He then break the hug and showed his hand towards and asked for promise…she simply keeps her hand on his..and gave him a wide smile….they once again shared a hug…and screen freezes here….

Precap: abhi is caring pragya..and he worried for her….their love care and romance….

Thank yopu for all the wonderful comments in the previos update ..it really made me happy….as my xams are near sometimes I won’t be able to update every weekends but whenever possible I will….
Plz..provide ur comments and suggestions…ur comments really makes me happy….so plz….

Credit to: Aarthi

18 comments

  1. somiya

    This is so amazing! Easy to visualise and when you visualise u can easily feel the pain of abhi and love of abhi… God you are damn amazing aarthi, everything is so perfect as i saw the tag Zindagi bitaoongy teray saye m, i just rushed and opend it lol first time so desperate but you are amazing!

  2. Surbhi

    OK Arthi I am.not going to.say anything about episode just want to say as I know what has happened here if I am right so please reply me 1. you visualised the whole sequence and then felt that too according to ur imagination
    2. when you was writing u was just imagining that situation only there was u and ur imagination.
    3.when u was writing u kept ur self in place of Abhi and wrote all that dialogues..
    4. when you was writing the dialogues u were imagining that how painful it would be the scene would be….
    don’t be scared yr just tell me am I right because your every scene is showing perfection only every scene that situation is described so clearly seriously girl your episode was the undescribable episode loved it a lot and I hope u will continue like this only ☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺

  3. sana

    Wow…really what an episode…I really became emotional by seeing abhi condition and after hearing his words….really superb yaar….u r awesome…I can’t express my feelings in words towards this episode….really iam waiting eagetly for ur ff from long back…pls update it daily…pls…pls….

  4. nasima

    wow..awesome…how many days i m waiting for ur epi…..i really very happy and xcitemnt to read ur fff…today very nice…u visuvalisd us..suprb..wondrful….keep goinggg…pls update regularly ma….i m eagrly waiting for nxt epi…if u hav time thn surly u update ..kk…

  5. Maya

    Really very emotional Aarthi always when reading ur ff I can visualize the scenes right in front of me!! And I think u really feel and write each n every line….which is y we all can connect to ur ff very easily!?

  6. akshaya kannan f

    It’s very nice yaar please continue soon dear please update daily this story is awesome

  7. Abhigya.........

    It’s superb arthi…it was really very emotional….I could visualise the scenes while reading……????

  8. Reshma Pradeep

    Wowwwwwww…….. Its Amazing yaar…….I really loved it……….Its Really Touching…….. We can Imagine each & Every scene in front of us through Ur words……………???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????☺☺☺☺☺☺???????????????????????????& BEST of LUCK for Ur Exams………….

  9. Nivethitha

    Wow it was fantastic yaar oh god while reading itself I can imagine each and every situation aarthi.. Hats off??? yaar and abhi’s love oh my gosh it was damn amazing…Really loved it yaar can u plss update the next part soon I am desperately waiting for ur episode because I am loving ???????it…

  10. vaishali

    awesome no word i should ask google to lend me perfect words fr ur perfect narration yaar loved it to the core

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