Zid (kanchi )Episode 5

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Helo my lovely sweeties. Thank you for your comments. Lots of huggs and kisses to u and luv loads.

PARTY BANTI HAI BECZ THIS IS MY 105 POSTS. I CAN’T BELIEVE THIS ISN’T IT.

Yeah I know i have to take rest and etc wat to do when I know this. But u guys don’t worry I have a doctor with me.He everytime scolds me.

So u guys forget about that and Just enjoy this chapter. And sorry for boring

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Let’s start

Kabir takes sanchi with him and they went directly to hostel.

Kabir -oh god wat to do now if they will saw sanchi like this than she will gone. Where to take her.

Sanchi -in ur house so follow me

Kabir -i think u r right i dnt have other choice let’s go.

Sanchi -ok

She sits on the road .(she imagines car is there )

Sanchi -kabir let’s go

Kabir – ok

Kabir lifts sanchi and took her.

In Malhotra Mantion

Kanchi steatly enters Malhotra mantion and directly went to kabir room.

In Kabir room

Sanchi shouts -wowwww wat a room.

Kabir puts his finger on her lips

Kabir -shhh mum and dad is here

Sanchi -ok

Kabir went to freshen up. After sometime he cums out. And saw sanchi dancing on aao raja. Kabir gets shocked to see her like this. Just then they hear knock on door.

Kabir opens door and sanchi quickly hid behind it. Kabir saw malhotra standing.

Kabir -dad

Malhotra -wats happening here

Kabir -nthing

Malhotra – r u alright son

Kabir -yes dad

Malhotra -so y u listening this song .

Kabir – where is maa

Malhotra -she went to ur aunts house.

Kabir pov – thank God I diverted this topic.

Malhotra was leaving just then sanchi coughs and Malhotra stopped.He turns back and saw Kabir coughing (acting )

Malhotra -Kabir i need that file

Kabir -ok dad

Malhotra came inside and Kabir went to bring file. Kabir brings file and gets shocked to see sanchi was about hit Malhotra head.

Kabir -no

Sanchi hides

Malhotra -Kabir kya hua

Kabir – aapka file

Kabir gave file and Malhotra went . Kabir closes the door.

Sanchi -u lier u told ur mum is here.

Kabir -i didn’t know that mum is not here.

Sanchi cries

Kabir -kya hua

Sanchi -i want to hear songs

Kabir -no

Sanchi -ok so u sing for me

Kabir – me

Sanchi -yes sing or else I shout

Kabir -no dnt shout I’ll sing

Kabir looks at sanchi

Song tu hi shab hai (from Ganster )

Tu hi meri shab hai
Subah hai
Tu hi din hai mera
Tu hi mera rab hai
Jahaan hai
Tu hi meri duniya
Tu Waqt mere liye
Main hoon tera lambha
Kaise rahega bhala hoke mujhse judaa
Ho ho ooo
(Γ—2)

Ankhon se padhke tujhe
Dil pe maine likha
Tu ban gaye mere jeene ke ek waja

Sanchi smiling and Kabir staring lovingly

Teri hasi teri adaa
Aaron se hai bhikul judaa

Ankhen teri shabnami
Chera tera aaina
Tu hai udasi bhari koi
Haseen dastaan
(Γ—2)

Tu hi meri shab hai
Subah hai
Tu hi din hai mera
Tu hi mera rab hai Jahaan hai
Tu hi meri duniya
Tu Waqt mere liye
Main hoon tera lambha
Kaise rahega bhala hoke mujhse judaa
Ho ho ooo

Sanchi slept and Kabir went downstairs.Malhotra cums to Kabir.

Malhotra -Kabir I’m going to hospital it’s emengency.

Kabir -ok dad.

Malhotra went. Kabir went in the kitchen.

In kitchen

Kabir was drinking water just then someone hits him. He turns back and saw sanchi with radio and cums dancing

Song plays

Hey Daddy mummy hain nahi gar pe
Pichehle kamre mein gus ke
Kuch karenge chup ke.
Mil zara

Kabir cums in hall and sit on sofa. Sanchi follows him and sits on top of him.

Hey denge English filmein
Honge jab love scene jinme
Armaan jaga le dil mein
Mil zara.

Kabir pushes sanchi and stand up just then sanchi puts her hands on his shoulders.

Aye naa pabandi
Kar batein tu gandi
Curtain sharam ka ab tu de hataa
Chipkenge aise ke chingam hon Jaise
Jappi se teri aayenga maza

Kabir went to his room and again sanchi follows him.

Daddy mummy. .. daddy mummy
Daddy mummy hain nahi gar pe
Pichehle kamre mein gus ke
Kuch karenge chup ke
Mil zara

Sanchi lying on bed Kabir was going just then sanchi pulls him. Kabir on top of sanchi. And he looks at her scared.

Pyar kar le, shikar kar le
Are bina ticket saari limit Paar kar le
Ho goor goor ke dekne laga
Ye Nain heat body wali sekhne laga.

Kabir moves apart.

(Kabir sings )

Tere jalwe hain mujhpe bhari
Phir bhi loon zimedari
Tere jalwe hai mujhpe bhari
Phir Bhi loon zimedari

Sanchi

Daddy mummy hain nahi gar pe
Pichehle kamre mein gus ke
Kuch karenge chup ke
Mil zara

Koi bhi Mujkho excuse na Dena
Batti bujha de par tu mera fuse na Lena
Hai tujhse kami sab ishq ki baatein
Din busy hai tere liye free hain sab ratein

Kabir

Tu hai beautiful naari
Lagti hai tu chingari
Tu hai beautiful naari
Lagti hai Tu chingari.
Jal jaaun main, baahon se teri lipat ke.

Daddy mummy. ..daddy mummy
Daddy mummy hain nahi gar pe
Pichehle kamre mein gus ke
Kuch karenge chup ke
Mil zara.

Kabir brings some water and throws on her face.

Kabir -mil gaye

Sanchi -kabir i I

Kabir -wat

Sanchi -i love u

Kabir – r u alright

Just then sanchi puts her lips on his lips. And they share a passinate kiss.

After sometime they move apart This time Kabir was in shock. He fainted as well as sanchi.

(Kabir due to shock and sanchi due to side effects of alchohol. )

Precap : ????

Sorry for boring episode. Frankly I don’t know wat i wrote.

Bye take care

Regards
Ashnita

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17 Comments
  1. Whatever u wrote was amazing…keep writing n stay healthy

  2. Omg such a awesome super episode u wrote haa saanchi bhi na update soon can’t wait and take care of ur help dear

  3. Riyarocks

    Ashu yaar…..tune toh kamaal hi kardia……..tc & luv u dherrrrrrrrrr saaraaaaaaaa………

  4. Priyanshipp

    Ashu how dare u say this one boring. From next tym if u say this I will surely kill u …πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚just kidding yaar. This was fabulous episode dear. Nd last lines. ..πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚both fainted. …….kabir due to shock.
    Pls update soon coz I was eagerly waiting dear. This is one of my fav ff. In first shot only this became my fav. So please post asap.

    1. Priyanshipp

      Nd yaa congo dear for ur 105th post. Hats off to ur writings nd patience. U said right party to banti h boss. To batao kab de rhi ho. ….koi aaye ya nhi mai pakka aaungi πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

  5. Keep it up yaar please continue this story yaar……

  6. Aafiya

    Amazing and superb..
    Take care

  7. Dhruti

    ashu kya tha ye??? it was superb and comedy also i’m laughing during read your ff ki pet me dard ho raha medicine bhejo mere liye and giving shock on last part…………………….love you………”HAPPY DHANTERAS DEAR”…………..

  8. Dhruti

    i forget to congratulations for 105th post…………….party dena padega………………

  9. Congratulations on your 105th post….. Amazing story…. Loved the twist…. Update soon

  10. RuCh23

    Congratulations on your 105th post dear πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’ and god Ashu πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ this is an epic comedy πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ enjoyed it a lot 😊😊😊 please take care ok sweetie? 😘😘😘

  11. Very nice

  12. Niyaaa

    Ohhhh my god ashi ashi ashi this is ur 105 post congrts dearie nd party to banti h boss agar tumhari tabiyat thik hoti naa to m tumse dherr sare update karwati ittu sa raham nahi karti tum per ab jane do wo kya h naa ab mera mood nahi h ab bchche ki jaan to le nahi skti..hehehe..just kidding pehl hi itne ff likh rahi hats off to u for that.. bura mat manna tumhe pta h m kitni badi baklol hun meri bak bak kabhi khatam nahi hoti jab likhna bolna suru kar deti hun.. To jab tak samne wale k ankh kaan ki band na baj jaye chup nahi hoti..hehe.. Btw epi is jhakkas just like u.. Ab to sach me kanchi ko aise dance karte dekhna chahti hun.. Ab mujhe nahi pta kaise bhi mujhe dekhna h… Mummyyyyyy..hehe.. Or dear frankly kahun to tum aise hi likhti raho bina soche samjhe acc. To u kyunki hamare liye ye hi kisi treat se kam nahi aise hi likhne se ye haal h to soch kar likhogi to kya hoga.. Bye lovvv u tc nd do complete rest nd last apne doctor ko bolna meri taraf se tumhe thappad lagaye agar rest nahi karogi or medicine lete waqt nakhre kiye to.. Samjhi bye

  13. Riru

    Epi was fab and congrats for 105th post dear

  14. Khamoshi

    Congrats for above century achievement dear..and it was not at all boring..infact someparts were hilarious and some parts…uhhu uhhu (samajh gayi naaπŸ˜‰πŸ˜„) amzing article dear

  15. Congrats for century….I know I am late…so sorry….episode is awesome….loved it from bottom of the heart

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