Yuvraj Luthra Ki Dulhania (OS)

Hey I think most of u have read the promo , sooooo this is my first os, on twiraj, hope u guyzz like it, n if yes n I’ll surely post next on twinj.
Soooooo let’s start……………
Yuvraj Luthra Ki Dulhania………………………begins!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
A girl is shown she is sleeping…………………..girl2 comes and is trying to wake her up!!!!!!!!
Girl 2 – twinkle wake up… twinkle……twinkle……….. dekh abhi papa bhi breakfast k liye aane waale h, jaldi uth, varna papa chale jayege………
( yes it’s our drama queen twinkle………..n girl2 is pragya ( shriti jha )her sissie )
Tw- ohh hooo dii, thank yrr uthane k liye, varna aaj fir me late ho jaati…
Pragya -acha theek hain, ab jaldi ja aur tayaar ho kr aa…………
Tw- ok dii
N after sometime she comes at the dining table………………
Dadi- are beta, aaj tu bht jaldi tayaar ho gyi…., akhir baat kya h………
Tw- dadi aap toh jaanti h hu,
Just then mr.lingwal ( rt ) comes………n is having breakfast……….
Dadi- tw beta, eat bf, kis soch me khoi hui he
Tw- kch nhi dadi, woh…woh papa mujhe aapse kuch puchna h… nhi nhi btana h…..
Mr.singh ( ms ) – ha toh bol…….
Tw- papa, mujhe meri shaadi me alia bhat wala lehenga pehena h…………
Mayank ( tw’s elder bro )- tujhe toh bas pehena h , pta bhi h kitne ka h…………
Ms- mayank……hold on….ha toh twinkle mujhe bata who kitna ka he
Tw- papa bas 5 lakh ka
Mayank – lekin kal tak toh 2.5 lakh ka hi tha aaj double kesse ho gya
Tw- bhai , voh chinki he na, meri frd joh dilli me rehti he na , uske papa ne use 2.5 lakh ka lehenga dilwaaya toh mera 5 lakh ka toh bnata h n
Ms- tujhe pata bhi pesse kamane me kitni mehnat lgti h…..
Tw- papa plzzz ladka toh apne choose krne nhi diya kam se kam lehenga toh meri pasand ka lene do….
Ms- beta 5 lakh koi pedh ( tree ) par nhi ugte he
Tw( angrily )- mein shaadi karungi toh alia bhat wala desingner lehenga pehen kar hi krugi varna dulhee ko tata bye bye kr dugi……….
Ms- tujhe joh krna he kar na toh mein pesse dene wala hu aur shaadi toh teri angat (imagine naman shaw ) se hi hogi…..
Tw ( with full attitude )- toh theek he me ja rhi hu dilli mama k yha , meri frd ki shaadi h 2 haftoo baad hum dono aa jayege
Ms- dono
Tw- me aur mera lehenga, yeh twinkle lingwal ka promise he aapse nhi apne aap se………..
N she lefts………………
Ms- ufff!!!!!!! Yeh ldki bechara ldka jisse isski shaadi hodi………….
Scene shifts…
Boy knocking at the washroom door……….
Boy- bhai , come fast yrrr, it’s time for exam…………
Boy2- bhai dnt take too much stress , otherwise pressure will come………
Boy1- u shut up…….!!!!! Uv!!!!!
Just then a girl comes out n blushes then goes then comes our hero, uv, Yuvraaj Luthra…..!!!!

Boy 2- bhai, wt a bomb she was……….uffffff!!!!!!!!!!! how s*xy……….
Boy1- tum dono ka ho gya ho toh chale uv, we r already late ..
Uv- ohhooo buntu tub hi na, bt let’s leave…………
After sometime uv gives paper to sir.
Invigilator – uv wt’s this.
Uv- sir paper
Invigilator – that I can also see, but u have not written a single thing except ur name………. wt mask will u get uv!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Uv- sir u dnt worry about that, babaji is there na, he will handle everything…… n if he’s with me then I’ll surely pass!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Invigilator – but uv…….
Uv- no buts n vuts sir, u just wait till the results then I’ll myself come n giv u sweet in my passing happiness n then he leaves……
At night………
Uv- bhai pakki khabar h na ki professor yhi rehta h…..
Bunto- ha yrrr, aaj tak kabhi glat khabar di he kya.
Poplu- ek baar fir soch le, budha ayega night walk krne…..
Bunto- are ayega na, just wait.!!!!!!!!!!!! Just then professor kaintura comes………….
Uv- aa gya, aa gya, come now….
Poplu – budha mane ga kya ???
Uv ( smirks ) – Joh kaam Gandhigiri se na ho na … woh kaam gundagardi se do minute mein ho jaata hai
After some time they hang them to a tree ……………..
Poplu- challo master jee , plzzz paas karwado humare uv ko…
Bunto- pure 50,000 denge…..
Professor- par me rishwat nhi leta, mujhe chod do..plzzzz me tumhare saamne haath jodta hu….
Uv- are professor jee aap mujhse bde hein plzz haath mat jodiye , tabhi toh haath bandhe hein, bas mujhe paas kr di jiye…. Oor mujhe koi aera gera mat samjhana , meine kbhi cheating nhi kri , na life mein aur na hi test mein…..
Poplu- ha humara uv kabhi cheating nhi krta…
Professor- vesse hi me bribes nhi leta…
Uv- ohhh hoo sir, dekho mujhe aur kissi me paas nhi hona bas history me paas kr wa do , dekho ab history me akbar ka b’day , akbar k beta ka naam , akbar kab mara , aree mujhe kya krna akbar se , mera kounsa rishtedaar lgta h , agr mujhe birth date yaad krni hi hogi toh apni family ki karunga na, akbar ki yaad krk kounsa who mujhe mughal sultanate ka shahensha bna dega………sir aapko jitney pesse chahiye utne de dunga.
Professor – par beta , sawaal pesoo ka nhi h , values ka.
Uv – ohhooo acha sir aapk liye special poem….suniyga
My daddy cry if I fail … then I hit you and go to jail … but don’t worry I get easy bail … then I again hit you, again jail, again bail … then jail bail, jail bail, jail bail … and one day your heart fail
Just then a girl comes.., yes our desi-modern pahadi patakka twinkle………..
Tw – ohhh vaanar sena , mere mama ki kyo baja rhe ho………
Uv turns n see tw n gets memerized…………….
Uv – tujhe pehle toh kabhi iss budde k saath dekha nhi , aaj kha se aa gyi…..
Tw – tujhse matlab jitna pucha h , utna bol…
Uv – teek he toh sun and tells everything……….
Tw – acha.!!!!!! Theek hein tera kaam ho jayega……
Uv – tu kregi..
Tw- koi shak
Uv- nahi matlab kesse……….
Tw – mama raat ko peeke tun ho jaate hein, aadhe papers mein hi check krti hu……roll no. de aur tera kaam ho gya.
Uv- hai , tut oh mast hein yr…………….
Tw- muh band rakh apna aur chup chap 20,000 nikaal
Uv- bees hazaar..
Tw – tujhe bhaw- tol krna h na , toh fir sabji mandi ja, mein challi…….
Uv- are ruk toh le pesse, vesse naam kya h…………
Tw – twinkle, Twinkle Lingwal….
Scene shifts…….!!!!!!!!
Result…
Bunto – are bhai mubaarak ho, tu paas ho gya………!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Poplu – hmmm, akhir twinkle iski zindagi me chamakta hua sitara bnk joh aayi hein………
Uv – ha yrrr. , akhir thxx toh bnta h……………….par usk bare mein patta kesse lagao…………..
Uv n poplu see each other n then see bunto n smirks…
Bunto- dekho nahi ha… nahi….
Uv jumped on bunto making him fall n poplu lay down on bunto…. Uv- bhai dekh maan ja , aaj tera bhai paas ho gya , atleat bas usk liye………!!!!!!!!!!
Bunto – acha..theek hain…pehle iss motte ko utha………………
Scene shifts………..to a book store
Uv – papa…papa…………papa………………
Raj – ha bol kya hua.!!!!!!!!!!!
Poplu – uncle jee badhai ho, aapka beta paas ho gya……………..
Raj – kiski nakal mari…
Uv – papa , mein kabhi cheating nhi krta……akhir aapka beta hun……………!!!!!!!!!!!
Raj – ha bhai , akhir nakal krne k liye bhi toh akal ki zarurat hoti he…
Just then the invigilator ( IN) came….
Uv – are sir jee aap , lo mitayi , me paas ho gya, bola than a babaji sab sambhal lenge n winks , the IN is abt say something bt uv puts sweets in his mouth………………
Scene shifts………
Bunto – bhai saari info laaye hu , ladki Dehradun me rehti he , modern he but sanskari bhi he , yha apni dost chinki ki shaadi me aayi he aur apni shaadi ka lehenga lene…….. ek mahine baad shaadi he uski…….
After hearing this uv gets sad…………..
Next morning
At a garden………..
Tw was jogging , she was wearing black tights , pink tee with head phones over her ears…. Uv on the other hand was driving his bike n then suddenly saw tw in bike’s mirror n turned n found tw was jogging n uv gets off n went to her n starts jogging!!!!!!
Uv- are hlo….ohhhh madam….are ohhh mama ki bhanji…. ( bt tw had head phones so couldn’t hear anything……. Then uv patted her shoulder and as she was jogging and even uv was running behind her so their legs got entagled and tw fell in uv’s arm and both of them had a tashan – e eye lock …….. tw was glaring at him……… and later uv also loosed his balance and both fall dowm , tw was above uv……….
Uv – ohh God yrr tu ldki ho ya fir kya he
Tw – wt the hell do u mean……
Uv – I mean ki tune romantic movie nhi dekhi kya…….
Tw – kyo …., dekhi he , meri favourite h.
Uv – tujhe dekh k lgta toh he nhi , dekh pura movie wala scene that u giri , mein gira , dono gire , sab kuch theek chal rha tha , yha tak ki aanke bhi milli , lekin teri aankho me pyaar nhi gussa tha…..
Tw ( angrily ) – tu kuch zyada hi movies nhi dekhta aur vesse bhi ek mahine baad shaadi hein meri , try bhi mat krna…
Uv – mujhe krna bhi nhi he , vesse bhi shaadi wali party par me try nhi krta…..
Tw – chal ab uthega , ya yha dusra scene chal jayega…….
Uv – yeh mujhe tujhe kehna chaiye , tu mere upar he , aur vesse tum pahadi ldkiyaan kya khaati hu , dikhti bilkul shraddha par ho……..
Tw – ohhh mr ….., apni limit me rho …….
Uv – ab saari baate aesehi krege kya n winks
Tw gets up and is about to go just then stops
Uv – aakhir palat hi gyi…. Toh mohatarma humare bina do pal bhi na reh paayi aap…..
Tw – oye !! apne yeh wahiyaat dialogue apne paas hi rakh mujhe toh yeh bta tujhe kisne btaya ki me pahadi hu ….
Uv – issme kya mujhe toh yeh bhi pta he ki tu Dehradun me rehti he aur woh tera mama he , tu yha apni dost……….. ( just then he realizes what he said )……..
Tw was glaring
Tw – meri puri information nikaali he na tune… ( angrily )
Uv ( in mind ) – hey babaji ab toh me gya , isko dekh kr lag rha he jesse koi junglee billi abhi aa ke kha jaye…..
Tw – kis soch me doob gya ab……
Uv – junglee billi…..
Tw – wt…
Uv – nhi nhi mera matlab he……. Tu voh sab chod na , aaj college me party he freshners se rhe he, tub hi aa ja…
Tw – ohhhh hlloo ek mahine baad shaadi he meri…
Uv – ohhh hlo party itni lambi nhi chalne waali…. Sham tak khatm ho jayegi….
Tw – chal dekhti hu , tub hi kya yaad rakhega!!!!!
Uv – yaad toh me humesha rakhuga ( smiling )
Tw – kya bola……
Uv – kuch nhi , tera wait karunga , aa jana……………..
Scene shifts………..
Bunto – bhai who aayegi…….!!!!!!!
Uv – ha yrr zarur ayegi…..
Poplu – lekin usee aana hta toh kabh ki aa chuki hoti…..
Just then a boy comes………………..
Boy – uv she has come with her frd.
Uv ( smilingly ) – dekha bachu aa gyi na , ab uv bulayga toh kyo nhi aayegi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Tw is shown coming she is wearing a knee length dress , with black top and red skirt type and our uv was wearing a black jeans with
just then music starts

Bach-kaniyaan, thodi thodi aaj hogi
Zara bachh ke dikha
Man-maaniyaan, phir bhi nahi chalegi
Chahe hoja tu khafa
Jaana hai toh jaa, tujhe bhi hai pata
Saari raat hogi chedd-khaniyaan
( uv dances while gesturing twinkle )

Banda main bachelor, tu kanya kanwari
Aaja ho jaaye thoda, lucky tu lucky me
Banda main bachelor, tu kanya kanwari
Aaja ho jaaye thoda, lucky tu lucky me
Haathon mein haath ki hai baat puraani
Aaja ho jaaye thoda, lucky tu lucky me

Aaj raat, aaj raat, Lucky tu lucky me
Aaj raat, aaj raat, Lucky tu lucky me
( uv and twinkle dances and twinkle walks while showing her style )

Committent ke naam pe tu roz kare waar
Tere aage peeche ghoomun
driver bann ke main car
Co co.. college ka hero tha main
Tha main superstar baby
Pad gaya mujhpe bhaari
Tera pyaar pyaar pyaar
Break-up hua toh main dedh ghante roya
Phir pehli baar raat ko main chain se soya
Bed pe lete lete jal gayi light
Socha main hoon Macho Man
So lets get lucky tonight

Tera luck luck luck, aaj naiyyo chalna
(chalna, chalna, chalna…)
Saare zamaane mein
Laakho deewaano ne
Roki raahi meri badi hi ummeed se
Dilon ki baimaani
Se nahi mein anjaani
Mauko pe dhoke diye maine bhi kareeb se
Na main rokun
Na na main tokun
Na na main teri in chaalon pe fida
Aa sikha doon
Aa aa dikha doon
Na na na bhoolegi tu meri ye adaa

( uv sings this rap while twinkle does moves )
Banda main bachelor tu kanya kunwari
Aaja ho jaye thoda lucky tu lucky me
Banda main bachelor tu kanya kunwari
Aaja ho jaye thoda lucky tu lucky me
Haathon mein haath ki hai baat purani
Aaja ho jaye thoda lucky tu lucky me
Banda main bachelor tu kanya kunwari
Aaja ho jaye thoda lucky tu lucky me

Aaj raat, aaj raat … lucky tu lucky me (x3)

( all of them dances twinkle , uv , poplu , bunto , chinki and others ……….)
After dance………..
Uv – aur bta madam kessi lgi humari party
Tw – teri party , tune di he kya………..
Uv – nhi mera matlan he kessi lagi mere college ki party.
Tw – yrrr tune yeh college khareed rkha he , bt fir mujhse marks……
Uv – are yrrr ruk ja , I mean tujhe yeh party kesi lgi…
Tw – ha achi thi!!!!!!!! Theek thi
Uv – tum ladhkiyan bhi na , impossinle he tumhe samajhna.
Tw – toh mat samajh na………….
Chinki- are tum dono chup kro yrrr , vesse ab hum chalte hein itz late , so bye guyzz
Tw – ha let’s leave……
Uv – aree rukku toh abhi tak naam nhi btaya tune apna……..
Tw – puch toh aese rha he jesse pta hi nhi…. Vesse hii , I’m Twinkle , Twinkle Lingwal………….
Uv – hiii Yuvraj ….. Yuvraj Luthra , naam toh sunna hi hoga….
Tw – ha , just now………… aur tum dono
Poplu – he’s bunto
Bunto – n he’s poplu
Chinki – n I’m chinki , mujhe toh tum sab jaante hi honge…..
Poplu – ha yrrr , tujhe kyo nhi janege , issi college ki toh he…..
Tw – chinki tu janti he inko
Chinki – ha mere yr me hi tha , bt last year fail ho gya tha , toh iss saal phirse krni pdi………..
Uv – ha ha!!! Tu toh yeh bta teri shaadi kab ho rhi he….
Chinki – agle hafte he , vesse tum teen lafandar ho par mere dost bhi ho aur meri twinkle ka itna dhyaan jo rakh rhe ho , toh aa jana shaadi me , mujhse aur twinkle se milne
Poplu – chal tu toh apne patti k saath lekin bha…………
Just then bunto stamps on his foot
Poplu – oouch!!!!!!!!! I mean twinkle ko milne kyo , who kha ja hi he
Chinki – agle din who bhi dehradun wapis jar hi hein , shadi he uski ek mahine baad….. chalo ab chod toh do badtameezo!!!!
And the boyz left chinkle at their house n left!!!!!!!
In this 1 week twiraj became very closed, and uv was fallen for her bt was quiet only b’coz he thought she doesn’t love him and some where twinkle also started developing feelings for him , the both met many times , sometime fr twinkle’s lehenga toh sometym fr chinki’s wedding , then let’s see wt happened on chinki’s wedding
Chinki , tw , uv , poplu n bunto all were chatting with the groom rahul , and then twinkle and uv danced on “” D SE DANCE “”
Ho.. ho jattpure ki Jatti
Jo fashion ki hai patti
Hai aage peeche, aage peeche mere
O jaan-e-jaan tu dola
Mere dil mein chaahe cola
Hai aage peeche, aage peeche mere
Ha aa.. dil hi dil mein dekh raha hai
Jaane kiska sapna
Aish kare woh
Maine socha kya jaata hai apna
Aaho.. aaho..
Ho D se dance de de chance
Crazy hum bhi ho lenge (x3)
Twiraj were dancing then suddenly MUSIC STOPS and someone shouts “ TWINKLE!!! ”
TWINKLE IS SHOCKED TO LISTEN THAT VOICE AND TURNS , AND THAT IS HER FATHER , MR. SINGH……
Tw – pa….papa… aap yha…..
Ms – ha , kyo khushi nhi ho rhi
Tw – nhi papa , me toh bas aesehi…..
Ms – bas twinkle mene socha tujhe lehenga khareeda deta hu , tu khush ho jayegi , aur surprise bhi , par yha aa kr toh me shock ho gya hu , mene sapne me bhi nhi socha tha , tu aesa kregi………mene sab dekha joh kal sham ko hua……………
Tw is shocked FB is shown
Twiraj were walking down the street.
Uv – chal , bye ab toh kal aakhri mulakat he….
Tw – kyo tu parso mujhe drop krne nhi aayega
Uv – nhi…… and turns……………
Uv then kneel downs and takes a rose and gives to twinkle…..
Uv – twinkle jab se tujhe dekha dil me kch kch hone lga tha , pehle socha tujhse dosti karunga fir thode dinno me sab nrmal , par yarr dheere hi dheere pyaar ho gya , ab kya kru , pta nhi tu kya sochti hogi , isiliye abhi tak kch nhi bola par tu ab jar hi he toh socha jaate jaate toh iss dil ki baat ko lafso par la hi du!!!!!!!!! Toh twinkle lingwal…………. Kya tu YURAAJ LUTHRA KI DULHANIA BANEGI……………………… n smiles.
Tw hugged him very tightly…………….. and says ha uv me TWINKLE LUTHRA bnne k liye tayaar hu…..
Fb ends…..
Tw remembers and mr. singh is very angry and raises his hand and is about to slap tw bt uv comes in between and he slaps uv ( by mistake )
Ms ( shouted ) – how dare u caome in between us , tumhari itni himmat , acha toh wo tum hi toh ho na , jisse meri beti ko apni dulhania bnana he , tut oh tu lekin twinkle tune bhi mujhe dhoka du=iya , ek beti toh pehle hi pachta rhi he , dusri ko barbaad hote huye nhi dekh skta.
Uv – uncle bas, aap tab se usko sunae jar he he , ek baar uski aankho me dekhiye aap ko lgta he aapki beti aesa kuch kr sakti he ( tw was crying ) aapne ussi ko sach man liya joh apne dekha , lekin shayad uske baad bhi kuch hua tha…………….
Fb starts
Twiraj were hugging bt just then twinkle broke the hug
Tw – nhi uv , nhi… meri shaadi hone waali he , aur papa issk liye kabhi tayaar nhi honge, aur di k saath joh hua usk baad toh bilkul bhi nhi ( same reason that was in the movie ) me papa ko dhoka nhi de skti , papa ne mujh par trust krk mujhe yha bheja tha , me unka bharosa nhi tod skti……..
Uv – sre meri tragedy queen dekh ab tu mujhe explain rna chod me jaanta hut u apne papa ko dhoka nhi degi yarrr aur na hi me yeh chahta hu, me tere papa se baat karunga , aur apne bhagwan par bharossa rakh , sab theek hoga…….
Both hugged and tw was crying , uv was consoling her while hugging but tears were coming out of his eyes too!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Fb ends.
Uv – aapne joh dekha wo sach tha magar adha sach uske aage ka yeh he, joh aapne dekha hi nhi
Ms – ho gya , bol liya joh bolna tha , ab twinkle chal hum kal ki train se wapis dehradun jar he he………….
Tw pleading – papa plzzz papa uv bht acha he , who mujhe humesha khush rakhega…….plzzz papa ………….plzzzz ……………. Plzzz.ek baar usko chance toh do………….
Ms ( shouts ) – bas bht ho gya , ek ko chance dekh kr dekh liya………
Tw – pr papa uv uske jessa…………………….
Ms – twinkle mene kha bas , ab chup chap wapis chal aur hum kal kin hi aaj abhi issi wakt raat ki train se jar he he…………..
Uv – uncle plzzz ek chance do mujhe , sab ek jesse nhi hote…………………… plzzz uncle………….
Ms takes twinkle forcefully and leaves tw was pleading him to leave her bt he took her and uv was running like mad behind them , poplu n bunto also followed him…………. Tw n ms reached the station and they sat , uv came running at saw twinkle and shouted TWINKLE , she heard him and looked at back from the window with swollen eyes due to crying and uv was running and both had a painful , tearful eyelock…………
Nahi jeena tere baaju
Nahi jeena, nahi jeena
Nahi jeena tere baaju
Nahi jeena, nahi jeena (x2)
( tw is applying mehendi on her hands and by mistake when the lady asked the groom’s name she said yuvi and the lady wrote that when tw saw it she became happy n smiled with tears coming out )
Main tenu samjhawan ki
Na tere bina lagda jee
Main tenu samjhawan ki
Na tere bina lagda jee
Tu ki jaane pyaar mera
Main karoon intezar tera
Tu dil tui-yon jaan meri
( on the other hand uv is looking at her and twinkle’s photos and remembering their fights and her love and care towards him )
Main tenu samjhava ki
Na tere bina lagda jee
Tu ki jaane pyaar mera
Main karoon intezar tera
Tu dil tui yon jaan meri
Main tenu samjhawa ki
Na tere bina lagda jee
( tw’s sadness is observed by all , even mr. singh and he thinks something and goes )
Mere dil ne chun laiyaa ne
Tere dil diyaan raahan
Tu jo mere naal tu rehta
Turpe meriyaan saaha
Jeena mera.. hoye
Hun hai tera, ki main karaan
Tu kar aitbaar mera
Main karoon intezar tera
Tu dil tui-yon jaan meri
Main tenu samjhawan kee
Na tere bina lagda jee
( both tw and uv r remembering each other and sobbing , haldi is being applied to twinkle and then suddenly some haldi by mistake from an aunty it fell on uv’s cheek , hand and nose )
Ve changa nahion keeta beeba
Ve changa nahion keeta beeba
Dil mera tod ke
Ve bada pachhtaiyaan akhaan
Ve bada pachhtaiyaan akhaan
Naal tere jod ke

( tw is shown crying vigorously then pragya comes and consoles her and she hugged her and cried her heart out , ms saw it )
Tenu chadd ke kitthe jawan
Tu mera parchhanvaa
Tere mukhde vich hi main taan
Rab nu apne pawaan
Meri duaa.. haaye
Sajda tera kardi sadaa
Tu sun iqraar mera
Main karoon intezar tera
Tu dil tui-yon jaan meri
Main tainu samjhawan ki
Na tere bina lagda jee
( uv is seen driving car rashly with a little smile and lots of tears in his eyes and tw is seen sitting in bridal dress whle looking at her and uv’s pic)
Ms enters tw hides the pic and wipes her tears n pretend to do her makeup..
Ms – bahar se shayad jitni bhi koshish kr le hasne ki , andar se tu ro hi rhi he
Tw – nhi aesa toh kch nhi he
Ms – acha toh fir tune alia bhat wala 5 lakh ka lehenga kyo nhi pehena
Tw – kya kru papa ab designer nhi local hi pasan aa gya
Ms – hmmm , ab lehenga local pehena he toh dulha bhi toh local hona chiye…
Tw was surprised n shocked – papa…
Ms nods – ha beta…
Tw understood n hugged him n then – papa then wt abt angat
Ms – beta meri use baat ho gyi who bhi kissi aur se pyaar krta he aur bht khush he , wo yeh shaadi nhi chahta
Tw smiles widely – pr papa uv itni jaldi kesse ayega
A voice – jaaneman tumne bulaya aur hum chale aye
Tw looked n it was none other than our uv
Tw ran and hugged him both hugged passionately!!!!!!!!!!!!11
Raj – beta yeh lo shagun
Tw – uncle……….
Raj – uncle nhi beta , papa.
Tw – jee papa aaj me bht khush hu…….. mujhe do do papa mille and hugged ms and raj
Twiraj marriage happened n all blessed them
After 12 years
Rohan ( twiraj son ) – wah papa kya love story thi, just awesome yrrr
Pia ( twiraj daughter ) – sach mein dad itni amazing love story , aakir nanu man hi gye…….
Uv – ha , manna hi tha , aakhir tumhari mummy ne itne moti joh bhegaye he apni inn aankho se and side hugged tw
Tw – tum toh aese bol rhe ho jesse khud toh bilkul roye hi nhi………………..
Uv – mene aese kab kaha ( n makes pout face )
Pia – chalo in the end humari mummy ban hi gyi…….
Pia and rohan shouted – YUVRAAJ LUTHRA KI DULHANIA…………………!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Pia n rohan – YIPPIEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Twiraj – Awwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
AND ALL FOUR OF THEM DAH A FAMILY GROUP HUG
THE END

HOPE U GUYZZ ENJOYED T!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I KNOW TOO LONG BT WT TO DO I THINK IT’S 1ST OS ON TWIRAJ SO THOUGHT 2 MAKE IT BETTER , HOPE U ALL ENJOYED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!1 N YA FORGIVE ME FR B=MY MISTAKES AS NY READ IT AFTER WRITING…………….. N YA IT’S MY 1ST OS SOO WHOSOEVER IS READING PLZZZZ DO COMMENT…………….. AND YA TELL ME SHOULD I WRITE ANOTHER OS , N IF YES THEN ON WHICH PAIR ???? I MEAN ONLY OF TWINJ N TWIRAJ OR SOME OTHER……..
N YA I CHANGED THE STORY KYOKI AGR PURA COPY KR DETI TOH MAZA KYA AATA…………………. N YA SORRY IF U DIDN’T LIKE IT…………………

GUYZZ IT’S MY 1ST EVER OS N IT’S 1ST TWIRAJ OS TOO SO DO COMMENT N YA THIS IS ALL A 12 AGED GIRL CAN PRESENT IN FRONT OF U ALL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

LOVE U ALL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MUAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!

72 comments

  1. Sayeeda

    |Registered Member

    Well Yashu … after seeing ur title I found it so catchy that I can’t controlled myself to read it ….
    What a OS ….amazing …awesome …soooooo gooodd….
    Dear write one on Twinj also… I will be waiting for it…
    One more thing u r soooooo cute …u look fab in your dp just like chotu si cute si pyari si bacchi ….love u

    • Yashasvi

      |Author

      OMG Sayeeda u r making me blush yrrrrr , thankew shooooooo much fr liking my os n dp that much…………. ya will surely write an os on twinj too love u infinity!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! muahhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! dnt knw bt the one who coment on dp like u did i luve them to toooooo toooooooooo much ,hehehehe…………………..

    • Yashasvi

      |Author

      yups for sure maanvi even m a fan of mehbeer , thatswhy added them in my ff too n i think two writers started a ff on it bt didn’t cont. it, no worries dear!!! for sure will write on mehbeer , thxxxxxxx fr ur comment

    • Yashasvi

      |Author

      hey aliya thxxx n ya fr sure next os ( either twinj or twiraj ) will be in english , actually 1st i was writing in english bt then someone recommended me to write in hindi , so sorrry dear!!!!!!!

  2. Laddoo

    |Registered Member

    Yashu yashu yashu….meri pyari yashu….u r jus soooo amazing…..too good ya….jus too good….ammmazzzingg! Kya kehna yaar….tu ek din apni iss behej ka naam roshan karegi?? mazaak hai yaar. U r really too good…

  3. Risa

    |Registered Member

    Superb yaar….meri toh aakhen blink hi nahi kar rahi thi. Itna accha os. Aur yashu do read mera finite ff series on twinj k

    • Yashasvi

      |Author

      awwwwwww thankew risa………… thankew so much yya will do read ur ff bt actually really busy bt will surely read it do giv me links on msg n whenever i’ll be free i’ll read it

  4. Khushi

    |Registered Member

    Awesome yashu…loved it…so so nice…loved twinkle yaar this is the first OS on tei that I m ever reading but I loved it….yashu it was quite long…didn’t u get tired??.. ….
    Anyways it was just mind blowing… U r an amazing writer keep it up dear??

    • Yashasvi

      |Author

      OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WOWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! so happy that this is the 1st os that u read!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!even i loved twinkle….thx fr loving it that much……….ya i was o tired actually i just finished it today at 1 am n then slept, to tired bt happy getting such lovely comments

  5. madhvi

    Fab you are a all time lovely writer keep writing everybody will love you and your update

    • Yashasvi

      |Author

      hey halima dii thx fr ur comment bt i never saw u on tei page then how come today!!!! hope u remember i read ur ff , thankew fr ur coment , t.c , luv u!!!!!!!!!!

  6. Bhavika

    |Registered Member

    lovely but it was most like humpty sharma ki dulhania but thats the title right so its fine???
    do write a twinj os also i will be waiting till then good luck ??

  7. Zuha Fatima

    |Registered Member

    Simply Superb Yashu! JHAKAAS? Loved it and u 2! Aakhir tu ne bana hi diya na Twinkle ko YUVRAAJ LUTHRA KI DULHANIA??

    Love u sweetie??

    Yours,
    Zuha

    • Yashasvi

      |Author

      Yeah Zuha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ban hi gyi twinkle YURAAJ LUTHRA KI DULHANIA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 awwwww luv u too baby!!!!!!!!!!!!! thxxxxx fr ur comment darling!!!!!!!!!!!!

    • Yashasvi

      |Author

      thxxx sissie’s…………really happy that awesome writers like u loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! love u two infinity!!!!!!!11

  8. rochika

    Omggggggg!!! yashu yashu yashu….what an os yrr…fab!!!!! I didnt know that write sooo amazing!!!!! What connection u brought with the movie humpty sharma ki dulhania to yuvraj luthra ki dulhania…i am feeling like to salute u!!!!! Hats offf to u…keep going like this only….movie and tv serials writer should learn something from u….really it was soooooo sooooo fab!!!! Great job my bff!!!! I am proud to have a bff like u….luvvvv uuuuu a lot !!! Muaaaaahhhhh!!!!

    • Yashasvi

      |Author

      OMG!!!!!!!!!! yrrr rochika u r making blush like heaven!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thankew thankew thankew soooo so much bff!!!!!!!!!!! awwww writers ko mujhse seekhna chahiye , u r awesome baby……………..u should be proud , aesi bff kismat waalo ko hi milte , one and only piece in this universe……..heheheh………… n salute krna he mujhe…….hey bhagwan aaj toh me mar hi jaugi itne sweet sweet comments pd k , by gos diabetes ho jayegi , koi ni kal school me kr lena salute….hahaha…..luv u too bff!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! muahhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  9. Sparkle

    |Registered Member

    Wow yashu,sweety you are awesome. I really liked it a lot. You are an amazing writer. Thank you that you pm me about this, otherwise I would have missed it. Your somu di loves you a lot. Keep writing.

    • Yashasvi

      |Author

      awwww somu dii i knew that u were busy thats why pm u. i love u a lot!!!!!!!!!!! thanks fr reading it………. thanxxx fr ur lovely comment!!!!!!!!!1 love u somu dii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  10. Manny

    |Registered Member

    I just read ur OS. Omg it’s amazing gurl,hatz off to you ? . Only thing is that this is in Hindi. I thought you would write in English heheh. But I could be able to understand what u wrote as I watched too many serials hahahah loool

    • Yashasvi

      |Author

      thx manny dear actually first i was writing in english only bt then some1 recommended to write in hindi , so wrote it , thank god there’s some benefit of watching serial that u learnt hindi n understood my os…..hehehe n thxxx x fr the lovely comment i think u r the 1st to say hats off to me…..thankew!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  11. Marie

    |Registered Member

    Yr it ws awesome !! i just read it i m nt frm this page actually…..m frm ek duje ke vaaste pahe bt yr it is d frst tym m cmmnting ruk hi nai paai…..itna mast tha…!! 😀
    yr tum sirf 12 years ki ho or itna acha likhti ho….. Hats of to u dear…..keep writing or han agar ho sake to shravan n suman also known as shraman frm ek duje ke vaaste un pr bhi zaroor likhna……again yr u r wonderful…..!!

    • Yashasvi

      |Author

      AWWWWWW OMG!!!!!!!!! Yrrrrrr so happy u r frm edkv pg , i cn see from ur dp n u read mine n commented to……!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thxxxxxxxxxxxx fr such a wonderful comment…………… mujhe pakka diabetes ho jayegi………………….!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thankew thankew marie dii n even when i get tym i watch that serial i’ll surely write it!!!!!!!!!!!

  12. Somona

    Yashasvi it was nice although I couldn’t understand so much , if you don’t mind can u write in english plz , I can’t understand it so well , its a request

    • Yashasvi

      |Author

      ya somona yrr actually was writing in english only bt some1 recommended to me to write in hindi , so wrote it , dnt worry i think few people asked me the same , alia , u n manny bt manny understood bt fr aliya n u i’ll translate it in english for sure bt need sometime as it’s too tooo long , thhxxxxx fr ur comment somona

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  14. Deeksha

    |Registered Member

    Wow… Dear just loved it……… I would have surely missed it….. If u didn’t tell me about it….Sorry dear I’m late……. But keep writing dear…. Hope next is on swaragini…….. Lots of love dear….. ?????

    • Yashasvi

      |Author

      awwwwww thanxx dear deeksha!!!!!!!!!!!!!……..no worries dear , no sorry in frdship , glad that u liked it!!!!!!!!!!! ya i have already thought swaragini’s os n will be posting this week……….. love u too dear!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    • Yashasvi

      |Author

      thxxx shruthis , n if i’m nt wrong then u r the writer of swaragini ff!!!!!! thanks dear!!!!!!!! vesse mene 2nd os on mehbeer post kr diya he , there’s pink bacj there so cn read if u want!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

  15. Mariah

    Its amazing yashasvi..eagerly waiting for upcoming episodes …cant believe how creative a 12 yr old can be …keep it up???

    • Yashasvi

      |Author

      OMG!!!!!!! OMG!!!!!!!!! gunjan is that u yr thanks fr reading it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! awwwww such a sweet comment!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thankew soo much

  16. gunjan yadav

    you are so creative and talented yashu…..I didn’t know yr……..how many qualities do you have???……..Mindblowing OS…..You must be the author of tashan e ishq

  17. sanjana (daddy's little princess)

    Hey yashuuu……..
    loved it …….
    and u na after finishing my ff I will write a ff on raglak …. so its a request plz read and …
    Thanks for os on twinraj … I am die heart fan of twinraj …..
    and whenever u right a os on twinraj give me the link on my episode ok ….

    • Yashasvi

      |Author

      thankss sanjana , mee too yrrr die heart fan of twiraj . glad u loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!

      ya yeh bhi koi kehne ki baat he will surely read ur ff dear!!!!!! and will surely give the links dear!!!!!!!!

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