YOU’VE COMPLETED ME… RAGSAN! FEW SHOTS.. SHOT 4

Hii guys… Ik I’m very late but u all know my condition na…. Now I’m feeling better and I’m back home still doc has told me to bed rest for next one week.. So please I may not be able to update…. Hope u all will understand. …. I really didn’t knew that so many people care about me and love me and I’m important for them… I’m blessed to hv u all in my life…. Thank you so much for this support love affection n ur kind wishes….. Thanks!!! N big hugs from me to you all……………..

So here is a very long exciting and very interesting chappy… I hope u all will like it……..

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Recap: ragini in ” happy home “…

The boy sits beside ragini and ragini reads the letter…

Letter..

Hi I’m sanskaar.. I’m… No no.. I was from Delhi… In accident I lost my voice so I’m here….. .. Its been 2 months …. There were days when, when not for even a second I was quite…. And now…. Now I can’t even utter a word….. ( ragini feels bad for him and feels guilty that she called him dumb…. and looked towards him with teary eyes…. But he was smiling…) ik.. U might be thinking y I’m smiling… Then let me tell u…. After that accident I never wanted to smile.. Let alone smile I didn’t wanted to live…. But then I thought that if God has done this then there might be some reason na…. ( ragini smiles.. As their thoughts were same…) I don’t have friends here as everyone is smaller than me… But when I saw u I thought that you could be my friend.. Thats y I smiled at u…. N abt those kids who were laughing at you… Don’t mind them.. They are mentally retarded.. They just know how to smile and laugh… ( ragini thinks how he knew y I was crying?? Sanskaar nudges her and ask her to read further…) I knew that u were crying thinking abt them bcoz when I came here for the first time I also felt that they were laughing at me.. I was also very sad… I didn’t have any one beside me… Any friend.. Like you have…… ( ragini look towards him with a ” really “look.. And he winks… She blushes a Lil…) then the warden told me that they are not well…and when they see new ppl they behave like that only …….. N don’t even think that I can’t understand your pain… I can very well understand coz I hv also gone through this….. So just keep smiling….. And at least tell me mujhse dosti karoge???

End..

Ragini looks at him with her perfect cute and real smile…..

He also smiles….

Ragini: when u hv already declared yourself as my friend.. Then y r u asking???

Sanskaar rubs his hair and blushes…

Ragini: aww.. U look so cute… Sanskaar…..

She pulls his cheeks…

Sanskaar: u r also cute ragini… ( he signs her 👌👌)

He also pulls her cheeks…

Sanskaar forwards his hand… Asking for friendship…

Ragini smiles and shakes hands with him…

They do that friendship step.. Making the index and the small finger of right hand touch then joining the thumb, rotating it and shaking hands. …..

Both smiles through their tears as they got a friend, a support system in this unknown place….

Sanskaar hugs ragini….. Ragini first shocked but then too reciprocate……

They break the hug…

Sanskaar thanks her for coming in his life….

He writes on the paper….

Ragini also thanks him for his friendship and support…

Now after a Lil emotional scene…

They both goes down and have their lunch.. Bcoz they were really hungry….

The warden was happy to see all the children happy especially sanskaar and ragini….

Sanskaar bcoz in these two months he has never smiled.. N now he was smiling and laughing with everyone…..
Ragini bcoz it was her first day here n she was quite happy Bcoz no one is happy after coming here.. At least not on the first day itself…

The warden blesses all the children…

Two weeks have passes……..

Ragini and sanskaar’s bond has grown strong… Now sanskaar is ragini’s ears and ragini is sanskaar’s voice…. They both understand each other well and help each other…….

Ragini has made many friends… As she knew how to deal with kids she was able to mingle with everyone… She also asked sanskaar to be friends with everyone…..

They used to make handmade articles to sell and earn some money.. It was optional….. the school ran on donations and govt money……….

Ragini used sing while sanskaar used to play instruments… He was a very good musician….

Ragini couldn’t hear him but still she felt from heart that he’s a gem of a person……

Then they used to dance with everyone……

Side by side their sign language classes were also going on…. They learnt knew things and how to communicate with ech other…….. …

After six months…

{ in these six months, sanskaar and ragini have completed their studies and now very well know how to converse through signs…… Ragini has developed some feelings for sanskaar but was afraid to admit as she thought she was incomplete now…….. The trio used to come and meet ragini… But have not met sanskaar…. N the other trio ( ap dp and laksh) used to come and meet sanskaar…. ( yes…. Sanskaar is ap and dp’s younger son abt whom they have told to the trio…) They knew that ragini is also here but they didn’t want her feel uncomfortable as they hardly knew each other…….. }

One beautiful night…..

Ragini: Sanskaar where are u taking me?? Tell na…..
Sanskaar signs her to wait and come with him..

Ragini shrugs and keep moving with him…

Then after few minutes they reached the garden.., hostel garden… It was empty as it was night and everyone was sleeping…..

It was. A full moon night….. Stars were twinkling up in the sky…….

Ragini is wearing her night suit and has done two plaits.. Looking very cute….
Sanskaar is in his shorts and mickey mouse shirt……..

Ragini: sanskaar y hv u brought me here?? U know I’m feeling very sleepy……

She said rubbing her eyes….. Sanskaar stares at her and smiles cutely….

Ragini: now will u say or I should leave…….

She starts to leave when sanskaar holds her hand and twirls her towards him such that she gets hits on his front…..

They are so close to each other…. Only few inches gap between them….. Both are breathing heavily…….

They have an intense eye lock…..

Ragini ( shivering): sans…..

Sanskaar cuts her by keeping his finger on her lips and slowly moving his thumb on her cheek bones which made her shiver…….

At the same time rain started….

They both get drenched…. Sanskaar tightly holds her waist and brings her closer to him……

She looks deep into his eyes, finding nothing but just immense love for her……..

She felt happy… She smiled a bit….

Sanskaar moves away from her and bends on his knees….

Ragini looks at him…..

Sanskaar ( in sign language): I love you very much… will you marry me ??

Ragini’s so happy….. ( she remembers her dream of getting love from her prince charming and loving him madly….) She is about to hug him but stops…….

Sanskaar looks ar her confused….. He gets up and turns her towards him….. And ask what happened??

Ragini: sanskaar… How can u love me?? I’m not complete….. I can’t even hear your heartbeat which beats for me….. Sanskaar…….

She cries…. Sanskaar hugs her and then moves apart…..

Sanskaar ( actions): do you love me??? Yes or no….

Ragini nods yes….

Sanskaar: then no need to worry.. i also can’t speak….. I can’t say u that how much I love you…… In these 6 months you hv again made me live my life happily…… In these 6 months u hv become my voice and I hv become your ears…. You’ve completed me ragini…..

Ragini hugs him tightly….

Ragini: no you hv completed me sanskaar…… I love you too…….

They both smiles through their tears and hugged each other for half an hour which felt like infinity to them…………

Sanskaar breaks the hug and looks lovingly in her eyes…. Then he looks at her rosy lips which are covered with rain drops. …… He again look in her eyes……. She closes her eyes….

He bends forward and touches her lips with his…… making her weak in her knees……. She held his shirt as tight as he could…… He held her waist to prevent her from falling………..

He sucked her lower lips while sensuously moving his hand on her back and caressing her cheeks………

She was tasting his upper lip and has one hand in is hair behind his head……… And one hand on his chest.. Feeling the heartbeat which was moving faster than the bullet train………………

” It was a kiss to level mountains and shake stars from the sky. It was a kiss to make angels faint and demons weep…a passionate, demanding, soul-searing kiss that nearly knocked the earth off its axis……”

They both continued till 15 more minutes but them parted ways due to lack of oxygen……

Ragini looked at him…… Sanskaar looked at her………… An eye lock………… Then both blushes and hugged each other near their hearts and thanked god for that accident which made them meet their soul mates………

Ragsan: thank you god!!

They parted ways and went inside the hostel……

Both went to their rooms, get changed and then sanskaar came in ragini’s room and knocked slowly… And then opened the door only to find ragini drying her hair…. He closed the door….

He was mesmerised seeing her and hugged her from the back….

With a sudden back hug.. Ragini turned and was abt to shout when sanskaar kept his hand on her mouth and signed her no…………..

Ragini then took a heavy breath and said…

Ragini: u scared me……
Sanskaar ( actions): n u killed me……

Ragini raise her hand to stop him….

Ragini: what r u saying sanskar?? U r my life n if something happens to you then I’ll also. ……

Sanskaar keeps his hand on her mouth and nods no….. And holds his ear from one hand and says sorry. ……..

Ragini then realises that his other hand is still on her waist…….

Ragini tries to go away but he pulls her more closer….. Their heartbeats rises…….

Sanskaar puts her hair behind the ears and cups her face……..

Ragini looks at him with love………

Sanskaar kisses her forehead….. Then eyes……. Ragini smiles………… He then bites her left ear…. She moans……. He kisses her left cheek…… She again smiles…….. Sanskaar then bites her right ear… She holds his shirt moree tightly….. He then sucks her right cheek…… Ragini buries her nails in his chest……… Sanskaar holds her waist and pulls her more closer and turn her around…….. He shifts her long hair to one side and slowly slides her shirt from the shoulder……. Ragini frees herself from her grip and moves ahead…….

Ragini: sanskaar this is not right……
Sanskaar makes her face him ask through actions!

Sanskaar: do u trust me???

Ragini nods………

Sanskaar switches off the lights… But they can still see each other in the moonlight…..

They are standing near the window……

Hum Tum title track plays in the background……..

Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dalne Do Zara

Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dalne Do Zara
Dheemi Si Dhadkan Ko Badne Do Zara
Lamho Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh Paas Aa Jaaye
Hum… Hum Tum…
Tum… Hum Tum…

Aankhon Mein Humko Utharne Do Zara
Baahon Mein Humko Pighalne Do Zara
Lamho Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh Paas Aa Jaaye
Hum… Hum Tum…
Tum… Hum Tum…

Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dalne Do Zara

{ Sanskaar pulls her shirt down from her shoulder and kisses there… From shoulder to her ear……… Same thing from the other side too…….. Ragini moans at his every action………. Both are enjoying the cool breeze in each others embrace………. }

Salvatein Kahin Karwatein Kahin
Phel Jaaye Kajal Bhi Tera
Nazron Mein Ho Guzar Tha Hua
Khwabon Ka Koi Khafila
Jismo Ko Ruho Ko Jale Do Zara
Sharmo Khaya Ko Machalne Do Zara
Lamho Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh Paas Aa Jaaye
Hum… Hum Tum…
Tum… Hum Tum…

Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dalne Do Zara

{ Sanskaar takes her to the bed and makes her lie down……….. Ragini is breathing heavily……… Sanskaar’s hand is on her tummy which he brings upwards by touching her arms…………… Ragini turns her side such that her back is facing him…………. Sanskaar smiles and waits for her to face him…………….. }

Choolon Badan Magar Iss Tarah
Jaisa Surila Saaz Ho
Hum Hai Re Chupe Tere Zulf Mein
Kholo Ke Raat Azaad Ho
Aanchal Ko Seene Se Dhalne Do Zara
Shabnam Ki Boondein Phisalne Do Zara
Lamho Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh Paas Aa Jaaye
Hum… Hum Tum…
Tum… Hum Tum…

{ Ragini turns to his side and sees him smiling…. She hugs him tightly as he respects her feelings and didn’t force himself on her………… She then breaks the hug and pushes sanskaar on his back and comes over him……….. Sanskaar is surprised at her actions…….. he gives her a naughty smile and she blushes………… And hides her face in his chest…….. Sanskaar caresses her hair and rolls to the other side such that now sanskaar is over her…………………….. }

Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dalne Do Zara
Bahon Mein Humko Pighalne Do Zara
Lamho Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh Paas Aa Jaaye
Hum… Hum Tum
Hum… Hum Tum
Hum… Hum Tum
Hum… Hum Tum
Hum… Hum Tum.

{ Sanskaar looks deep into her eyes……. They both closes their eyes and have a blissful and passionate lip lock…. Expressing all their feelings, love and trust for each other……… }

They then both hug each tightly and dozes off……….. Smiling………………..

Sanskaar is sleeping on his back with one arm under ragini’s head…. Ragini’s one arm is around his tummy and one leg on his legs……..

Ragini’s pov…

U r so good sanskaar… U didn’t took advantage of me… Thats y I love u so much and trusted you… Coz I know you’ll never do something which will hurt me……… Thank you sanskaar thank you for coming in my life and completing me………..

Ragini smiles and hugs him more tightly and falls asleep….

Sanskaar’s pov….

Ragini u think that I hv Completed u.. But the truth is u hv completed me……… U hv brought that lost joy.. Lost smile again in my life… I also promise that I’ll also fill your life with joy and happiness…… Thank you ragini thank you for coming in my life………………..

He kisses her forehead and hugs her more tightly and sleeps…..

Episode ends on smiling, sleeping faces of ragsan………

So how was it?? I hope u all hv enjoyed it n I hv made up to ur expectations…… Do tell me thru ur comments how was it???

N friends, I need ur suggestions…… do u want that ragsan shld again become normal like ragini can hear n he can listen???? Please suggest.. I would ve waiting……. Till then bbye…

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With Love
Richa

70 comments

  1. Silent_writer

    |Registered Member

    Wooooow richa again u rockedddd loveddd alot💗💕💓 suprb chemistry btw ragsan 💜💛💚 awsme keep it up n hope soon u will bcm fit n f9 take rest n keep smiling💗💓

  2. Fairy

    |Registered Member

    Good to know dat u r recoverng dear…n as i already said dnt stress urself yaar…take proper rest 🙂 n hope u”ll get well completely very soon!!!
    Now about d update!!!it ws soooo emotional n amazngggg dear dat i cnt even tell u….i loved it….dey both complete eo….loved to see dem together….each n every scene ws fantastic richu …waitng impatiently for nxt part…n thnku so much for thinking about ur readers n gvng us such superb updates in dis condition also..love u dear 😉 keep rockng n stay blessed..
    N about d suggestion- my heart want dem to become normal bt accordng to ur title n dis story i want dem to b lyk dis nly!!!well its upto u dr..i”ll b happy in bth d situations .. take care of urself 😉

  3. Ragz_teju

    |Registered Member

    awesome… it is emotional at starting and lovely at middle finally romantic at end… loved it so much.. ragsan 😘😘😘😘

  4. SPP

    |Registered Member

    Awesome Superb Fantastic
    Ragsan were so cute and adorable
    Loved it alot
    After a long time
    Waiting for the next one……………

  5. j.

    superb dear take care of urself and rest properly and i think they should remain the same and become each other’s support like now

  6. fira

    Nice epi…I want ragsan should again become normal….take care of ur health…Waiting for next epi….

  7. Asra

    |Registered Member

    You Rocked it dear….ragsan r soo cute….
    want to become normal…..it’s soo emotional, love and romantic….i loved it…
    plz takecare of ur health and don’t stress urself….get well soon dear…god bless u dear…

  8. kiran

    Ragsan r too cute.. Loved every bit of it….. But feeling bad for them as well so make them normal…

  9. Aradhana

    Amazing!!
    What a lovely epi…. The proposal was too cute though I didn’t expect this but outstanding!!

  10. kirti

    Awwww… They are adorable… I agree with sree pls cast varun n tejuu in new show…. N some of tu writers shud be its writer including u Richa…. Lovely!!!

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