YOU’VE COMPLETED ME… RAGSAN! FEW SHOTS…. SHOT 15

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Recap: ragsan’s bitter break up!!

The episode starts with the mehndi function being held in BAADI! The girls are dancing while the ladies are playing the dholak and singing folk songs. Swara is sitting in the middle with her cute smile. Ragini is sitting beside her pasting a fake smile with lots of sadness and guilt in her eyes which no one can see. Ap and some other relatives of Laksh comes there with ” shagun ki mehndi “. Swara takes their blessings.

Ap notice ragini….

Ap’s Pov

Ragini is sad here n there sanskaar… Something is happened between them I’m very sure… But what?? What is bothering them?? I hv to find out otherwise they’ll do something wrong with themselves.

Outside the baadi, laksh comes there with sanskaar covering themselves with a shawl.

Laksh: sansky… If u want u can go back.. There’s no need for u to come..

Sanskaar shows him thumbs up saying he’s fine.

SANSKAAAR’S POV

Let me also see how she’s enjoying with her long lost friend without me….

His heart ached even thinking abt it but then composed himself as they both went inside covering their face from the back door.

They both comes upstairs where swara and ragini’s rooms are there. Sanskar looks at ragini’s room and he chokes as he remembers the night where he saw her with nikhil. They both look down where the girls are dancing ? and swara ragini ap and shomi with dadi and relatives are watching them when few girls ? take ragini with them. She resisted at first but then gave in as all requests her to do…

Mehndi Hai Rachnewaali, Haathon Mein Gehri Laali

( she dances with the girls)

Kahe Sakhiyaan, Ab Kaliyaan
Haathon Mein Khilnewaali Hain
Tere Mann Ko, Jeevan Ko
Nayi Khushiyaan Milnewaali Hai
Mehndi Hai Rachnewaali, Haathon Mein Gehri Laali
Kahe Sakhiyaan, Ab Kaliyaan
Haathon Mein Khilnewaali Hain
Tere Mann Ko, Jeevan Ko
Nayi Khushiyaan Milnewaali Hai

( she comes behind swara and hugs her while the girls are applying mehndi on her hands and legs)

O Hariyali Banno
Le Jaana Tujhko Guiyyaan Aane Waale Hai Saiyyaan
Thaamenge Aake Baiyyaan, Goonjegi Shehnaayi
Angnaayi, Angnaayi

( she dances beautifully and points towards the door while swara blushes and their upstairs laksh blushes… Sanskaar is lost in the innocence of ragini’s face and his eyes welled up…..)

Mehndi Hai Rachnewaali, Haathon Mein Gehri Laali
Kahe Sakhiyaan, Ab Kaliyaan
Haathon Mein Khilnewaali Hain
Tere Mann Ko, Jeevan Ko
Nayi Khushiyaan Milnewaali Hai

( she does some steps like she did in serial.. Everyone claps…)

Gaaye Maiya Aur Mausi, Gaaye Behna Aur Bhabhi
Ke Mehndi Khil Jaaye, Rang Laaye Hariyaali Banni
Gaaye Phoofi Aur Chaachi, Gaaye Naani Aur Daadi
Ke Mehndi Mann Bhaaye, Saj Jaaye Hariyaali Banni

( ragini drags her dadi nani chachi mami and cousins and they together dance making a circle around swara.. She smiles…. The boys looks at their love with love…. While laksh’s eyes are filled with happiness… Sanskaar ‘s eyes are filled with tears and sadness…..)

Mehndi Roop Sanwaare, O Mehndi Rang Nikhaare, Ho
Hariyaali Banni Ke Aanchal Mein Utrenge Taarein
Mehndi Hai Rachnewaali, Haathon Mein Gehri Laali
Kahe Sakhiyaan, Ab Kaliyaan
Haathon Mein Khilnewaali Hain
Tere Mann Ko, Jeevan Ko
Nayi Khushiyaan Milnewaali Hai

( the cousins hold each other’s hand and played kikli… Ragini remembers sanskaar and her dream to get married to him when he proposed her….. She looks up to control her tears when her gaze falls on the two boys standing there… She blinks her eyes to clear the tears and sees laksh and sanskaar… Seeing laksh she smiles as he came to meet her sister whereas seeing sanskaar her face paled….)

Gaaje, Baaje, Baraati, Ghoda, Gaadi Aur Haathi Ko
Laayenge Saajan Tere Aangan, Hariyaali Banni

( with ragini in front and all the cousins behind her acts like they are the baratis and dances)

Teri Mehndi Woh Dekhenge
To Apna Dil Rakhdenge Woh
Pairon Mein Tere Chupke Se, Hariyaali Banni

( ragini with teary eyes comes to swara and sees her mehndi and. A drop of tears fall in her hands as she’ll b missing her sister after her marriage…. But she composed herself and dances)

Mehndi Roop Sanwaare, O Mehndi Rang Nikhaare, Ho
Hariyaali Banni Ke Aanchal Mein Utrenge Taarein
Mehndi Hai Rachnewaali, Haathon Mein Gehri Laali
Kahe Sakhiyaan, Ab Kaliyaan
Haathon Mein Khilnewaali Hain
Tere Mann Ko, Jeevan Ko
Nayi Khushiyaan Milnewaali Hai.

( all the family ladies dance together with ragini in between dancing round and round and all the other ladies moves around her… She looks up to find sanskaar staring at her with tears in his eyes. Her eyes also welled up but soon everything blurs and she falls down on the ground with a thud. )

Everyone stops dancing and panics seeing ragini unconscious.. Swara comes to pick her up but dadi stops her as her mehndi would b spoiled.

Sanskaar sees this and is about to run down but laksh stops him as he sees nikhil coming to help them. He tightens his fist and bang his hand on the railing. Laksh stopped him and took him aside.

Laksh: what r u doing sankyy???

Sanskaar , still angry nodded nothing and looked at ragini’s room where the doc ( swaragini’s chachi) was checking her up. He prayed for her well being.

After sometime everyone came out of her room….

Shomi: what happened to her kalpana???

Chachi: nothing to worry bhabhi.. She didn’t eat anything that’s y due to weakness she fainted.. I hv given her injection she’ll be fine. We should let her rest. …

They all went out after leaving the sleeping ragini in her room.

Laksh: I think we should go now…..

Sanskaar ( types in his phone): bhai when v hv come here then u should meet bhabhi for once. ……. U go to her room i’ll wait here…….

Laksh: but sankyy…..

Sanskaar: go bhai… She might also need u now. …

Laksh: but you…

Sanskaar: no worries bhai. U go i’ll wait…

Laksh went to swara’s room after much insistence of sanskaar. Sanskaar sighs after he left and went to ragini’s room and looks at her through window. His eyes welled up and heart ached seeing her like that. He slowly opened the door and went in and then closed the door.

He went near ragini and sat beside her on the bed holding her hand and slowly kissed it.

Sanskaar ( monologue) : I’m so sorry raginii.. Ik somewhere or the other I’m responsible for ur condition but what could I do….. I just can’t see with u anyone else. I got scared that u’ll leave. .. ( he cries closing his eyes and his tears fall on her hand disturbing her sleep) … I’m sorry raginii.. Please if possible forgive me and for…. Forget me coz I don’t deserve you… I don’t deserve anyone….. I’m sorry……

Without looking at her, he gets up and is about to leave but stops as his hand is pulled by her making him stumble but he stands straight still not facing her.

When the tears fell on her hand she opened her eyes and found sanskaar, her sans crying holding her hand and she knew what he was thinking… She held her hand as he was again going away from her.

Ragini ( crying): firse muh fer k jaa rahe ho???? ( again u r going??)

She asked him innocently tilting her head and looking at him for answer. tears flowed from his eyes hearing this and he immediately turned back and hugged her so tightly near his heart and cried his heart out. she patted his back and rested her head on his shoulder and tightly hugged him back and calmed him down…

Ragini: sans….

Sanskaar ( breaking the hug and wiping her tears and then says in sign language): raginii… I was angry on u coz u ignored me coz of that nikhil… I got scared raginii… I felt insecured that. That………

He broke down as he couldn’t say further. Ragini felt bad seeing him like that n cupped his face and wiped his flowing tears.

Ragini: sans.. Sans… Look at ne… Just look at me…….

She made him look at her with force.

Ragini: sans. U thought that I. Ur raginii will leave u for nikhil?? Really u thought that?? Common sans. He just came to apologize to me and then asked for friendship… N this is what I came to explain u but u……..

She sighed as he looked on feeling guilty.

Sanskaar: raginii.. I’m……

Raguni: no sans… Listen to me….. U know what this is the only problem u hv. .. U react without thinking without listening to the second person……. N now also u r not feeling sorry u r just feeling pity for me looking at my health…….. But sans I don’t need ur sympathy…. I don’t need..

He didn’t said anything coz he didn’t have words or courage to face the reality.

Ragini: I know sans I did a mistake n thats y I came to apologize to u but u didn’t wanted to listen and u broke my heart and trust….. N its my heart sanskaar not any toy that u first break it and then say sorry… It won’t fix that toy nor my heart…..

She said in a cracked voice controlling her tears. She moved away from him and stood beside the window taking support of the wall..

Somewhere deep in his heart sanskaar knew that she was telling the truth.. He didn’t came here to apologize to her but was feeling pity on her seeing her condition. He cried in his heart and moved out of her room.

Meanwhile laksh was consoling swara that ragini will b alright and made her smile by doing funny things and left from there.

Laksh: arre sankyy…. Chalo lets go…

Sanskaar nodded and they both went ro their house. Whole night sanskaar was busy in thinking abt ragini. Her words were echoing in his ears and making him feel more guilty and helpless. He dozed off thinking abt how to gain back her trust…

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So guys this was it for today…. Do tell me how was it?? Pls comment and all the positive and negative feed back are welcomed! ‘!! Take care guts!! Keep smiling ☺

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With Love
Richa

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54 Comments
  1. Lovely7

    Awesome

    1. Richa19

      Thank you lovely!!! ? ?

    1. Richa19

      Thank you mk!!! ? ?

  2. mindblowing i was waiting for ur ff

    1. Richa19

      Thank you aditi!!! Sorry to make you wait dear!!!! ? ?

  3. Jayanti

    loved it…..really eager to read what will sanskar do next

    1. Richa19

      Thank you jayanti!!! I’m sure u’ll love it…. ????

  4. awesome feeling bad for ragsan unite them soon

    1. Richa19

      Thank you vani!!! ? ? they’ll be together one day… ?

  5. Nice Story..

    1. Richa19

      Thank you egde black!!! ? ?

  6. Unite ragsan soon

    1. Richa19

      They’ll be together one day sinni…. Keep reading!!! ?

  7. Shrilatha

    Awesome richa…I know u won’t separate ragsan…so Iam not worried

    1. Richa19

      Thank you shri dii!!! ? ? awww u know me so well… Ni… ???

  8. Dharani

    awesome

    1. Richa19

      Thank you dharani di!!!! ? ?

  9. amazing

    1. Richa19

      Thank you maha!!! ? ?

  10. AWESOME

    1. Richa19

      Thank you nive!!! ? ?

  11. Rukhiya ruku

    Nice episode di. Waiting for ragsan unison.
    Update soon ??

    1. Richa19

      Thank you so much ruku!!!! ?

  12. Rakhi

    Nice

    1. Richa19

      Thank you rakhi dear!!! ? ?

  13. nice unite them soooon

    1. Richa19

      Thank you sug!!! ? ?

  14. Asra

    fabulous dear….loved it alot….feeling bad for ragsan….eagerly waiting for nxt one…tkcr dear…

    1. Richa19

      Thank you so much asra di!!! ? ?

  15. Asw

    Amazing keep going

    1. Richa19

      Thank you asw!!! ? ?

  16. awesomeeeee

    1. Richa19

      Thank you keerthi!!! ? ?

  17. Sreevijayan

    Awesome update dr

    1. Richa19

      Thank you so much sree di!!! ? ?

  18. Fabulous dear

    1. Richa19

      Thank you rehna!!! ? ?

  19. Adreen18

    Fabulous dear???…. feeling bad for RagSan ??…eagerly waiting for the next chappy

    1. Richa19

      Thank you so much adreen dear!!! ? ?

    1. Richa19

      Thank you ammy!! ?

  20. I can understand both RagSan’s pov.Both r correct in their place.Nikhil is seriously a problem,he just came broke RagSan’s relation :’-(
    His intention is not good,i donno why i feel he will do something so that RagSan will be angry on each other
    Mere RagSan ka Break up ho gaya :’-(
    Plsssssss post soon sis

    1. Richa19

      Ahaan… Anisha my intelligent girl ?? kya dimaag lagaya ha……. I hope u r correct!! ?? thank you for reading… ??

  21. Awesome

    1. Richa19

      Thank you alee!!! ? ?

    1. Richa19

      Thank you avika!! ? ?

  22. Awesome! ! Feeling very sad for ragsan… Unite them soon richu..

    1. Richa19

      Thank you mahima!! ?

  23. Superb… Update soon

    1. Richa19

      Thank you onny!!! ?

    1. Richa19

      Thank you dear!! ?

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