YOU’VE COMPLETED ME… RAGSAN! FEW SHOTS.. SHOT 1

Hi guys… Richa here again… How are you all?? So I’m back with another ragsan / sangini few shots ….. i’ll update sangini and babul as soon as my phone is back…. So please support me like u always do…. I got an extra holiday before an exam so I’m writing this os… with ur good wishes my two exams went good… Hope you’ll wish me luck for my rest of the exams…………

So here is the os.. Hope you all will like it……..

So lets get started!!

An orphanage is shown ” Smile Orphanage “….. in the garden of the orphanage, many children are gathered around a girl whose hair are left loose with slight curls at the end…. She’s wearing a jeans, white top and a short jacket over it… And a beautiful bracelet on her hand which is complementing her ear rings………. She’s holding a guitar in her hand and adjusting it’s wires…………..

Ishita : hey di please do it fast na……
Sahil: yes di we are waiting from last 15 minutes…….

The girls lips are shown which has now taken the shape of a beautiful and cute smile………

Aman: common cutie … Now how much will u make us wait??? Can’t you start fast for your boyfriend at least……..
Muskaan : hey aman… Stop calling yourself her boyfriend…
Aman: y!! R u jealous??
Muskaan stamps his foot and moves away from him while aman smiles..

The girls eyes are shown… Which are twinkling in the sun light….

Then after the wait of 15 minutes the girl finally turns and smiles at the kids…….

Om: finally……
Ishana: what is this ragu di?? We are waiting from past 2 weeks for you… And when you finally returned you are again making us wait…..

The girl is our Ragini…. { ( screen freezes) … Ragini a beautiful middle class girl… Daughter of shekhar and shomi.. Younger sister of swara…. Works in a firm… A very lovely and polite girl…. Loves the children of orphanage… Mostly spends time with them because of which her family is Lil upset with her bcoz they don’t want her to spend her life between them… But she hardly cares…. She loves the children and think them as her own…. Kids also love her to the core……. }

Ragini smiles at them…

Ragini: look bacha party… I hv made you wait so much for that I’m sorry….. ( she holds her ears and makes a cute face….. Children smiles at her) and abt now… I need to sing special song for you na… So I was just setting all the things……
Aman: its ok gf…. We don’t have any problem…. Kyun muskaaaaan???
Muskaan gets irritated….

Muskaan: di see na he’s always irritating me…
Ragini: aman… She’s your best friend na….
Aman: exactly… If i’ll not irritate her then whom i’ll irritate??
Ragini: point….. n remember one thing bacho…… in life.. Someone stands by our side or not but our true and best friend will always be there for you… There will be one phase of life when you need someone’s support n it’ll be your friend who truly loves you who cares for you.. Who respects you and your feelings…. sometimes parents also leaves us but our best friends never leave us…… So remember not to hurt any of your best friend ever………
Aman: kya di?? U made us all senti……
He said while cleaning his fake / dry tears…..
Muskaan: nautanki…..
Everyone laughs.
Om: okay.. Chalo di you start…..
Ragini: sure om…..

Ragini closes her eyes and slowly plays the guitar 🎸……. And sings tapping her feet…..

Ragini: Suraj tera gardish mein hai
Dhalte huaa keh gaya
Phir laut ke aaunga main
Nazdeek hi hai subah

Gaaye jaa, gaaye jaa
Gham mein hai sargam
Gunguna ye dhun, gaaye jaa..
Gaaye ja, gaaye ja
Raat ke dhaagon se savera bun, gaaye ja..
Gaaye ja, gaaye ja
Gham mein hai sargam
Gunguna ye dhun, gaaye ja

( she bas her eyes closed and is feeling the song….)

Apna hi apna kyun kehlaaya hai
Kaise koi tay karta hai kaun paraaya hai
Ek wohi rishta teri kamaayi hai
Dard ke pal mein jisne tera saath nibhaya hai
Toota huaa to kya sitaara tu
Kisi ka bann sahara tu..

Mmm..
Gaaye ja, gaaye ja
Raat ke dhaagon se savera bun, gaaye ja…
Gaaye ja, gaaye ja
Gham mein hai sargam
Gunguna ye dhun gaaye ja

( the kids are mesmerised to listen to her after so many days…..)

Ho.. aankhon mein rakhna sapne tu kal ke
Tujhko lekin un tak jana hoga khud chal ke
Majhdhaaron se tu, haar nahin jaana
Saahil tujhko paana hoga lehron mein dhalke
Hai zindagi wohi jo chalti hai
Yeh girke hi sambhalti hai

Aa…

( ragini finishes the song and opens her eyes and sees everyone is still……. She calls and everyone comes to their sense…..)

After the song is over everyone claps for her and hoots!!!!

Saumya: di u should be a singer……
Ishana: you sing so well….
Aman: that’s y I love you so much……
Muskaan: di u r the best!!!
Om: thank you di!! You are really special for us… You do so much for us… Whom their parents left like that only…. We don’t have anyone in this world.. No identity… Still u do so much for us.. Thank you di!!
All the children have tears in their eyes including ragini!!!

Ragini bends down to come to their level…

Ragini:.. This is correct.. First u call me your dii then say thank you and moreover u all say that u don’t have anyone….. I’m no one for you all na…..

She said by making a cute pout and turning her face to other side….

Om ( cupping her face and making her look towards him) : di I didn’t mean that…. Its just that…..
Ragini: what om??? Look.. You all r my life… Your parents don’t know what they hv lost….. So never say that u don’t have anyone… … I’ll always be there for you all……..
Ishana: promise??
Ragini: pakka promise…. Chalo now clean your face…. We won’t look good in selfie with crying faces……

All laugh and clean their faces and pose for a selfie!!!!!

Ragini: okay… bye now… Don’t disturb aunty okay!! We’ll meet soon….. Bye….
All: bye… Come soon…

They all hug her and bid her bye………

{ om, ishana, aman, muskaan, saumya, ishita and sahil are the kids living in orphanage }

Ragini goes to her house.. Its evening now…..

Shekhar: you have came beta…
Ragini: yes papa…
He said with a naughty smile…. : ragini.. Beta next sunday one family is coming to see swara so it’s your responsibility to make her ready… Okay??
Ragini: ji ma.. When are they coming,,??
Shomi: beta.. Its sunday na so we have called them in evening only….
Ragini: but ma.. In evening I hv to go to orphanage na.. U know every Sunday evening I go there….
Shekhar: beta.. For u, ur sister is imp or those orphan kids??
Ragini: but papa…
Shekhar: no more arguments….

Ragini doesn’t say anything and goes to her room and cries remembering shekhar calling them orphans and in morning she calling them her life………..

Swara feels a Lil bad seeing her like that but decides to leave her alone for some time….

Later ragini dozes off while crying…….

The night passes…..

Next day morning….

Ragini gets up and comes down after getting fresh…

Shomi: beta.. Please get these things from market na…..
Ragini: okay ma….

She sounded a Lil dull…

Shomi: beta r u ok??
Ragini: ji ma…
Shomi: beta ik u r upset with yesterday’s happenings….but beta…
Ragini ( cutting her): ma.. I think I should bring these.. Later I hv some work….
Shomi: okay.. Take care…

She blesses her and she leaves……

After taking the items, ragini was coming back, she was in her own thoughts, when suddenly a truck comes from no where and hits her and she goes on flying on the other side of the road…………

Everything went silent and blank for few minutes……………..

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The items he has purchased were now scattered here and there……

Some men were beating the truck driver and called the police……..

Some ladies and men came towards ragini who was now half unconscious…… Blood was flowing from her head, nose and hands…………. But our angel was still smiling thinking this as her last moments…. She remembered aman, muskaan, Om, ishana, saumya, ishita and sahil.. … Shekhar, shomi and swara…………. … And then she closed her eyes not letting the smile fade away from her face…………………

In a hospital…..

Kal Ho na ho’s HEARTBEAT is playing in the background……

Dhak dhak…

We see, ragini covered with blood taken on the stretcher to the operation theatre…………..

Dhak dhak…

The operation starts…….

Dhak dhak…….

Shekhar, shomi and swara comes there running and tears in their eyes are not stopping………………

Dhak dhak……..

The operation is still going on…… Everyone was praying for her…….

Dhak dhak…..

Nurse comes out.. The trio runs to her and ask abt ragini….

Shekhar: nurse.. My daughter… Is she al right??
Nurse: we can’t say anything.. She has lost much blood.. We are still trying…..

Dhak dhak…..

Nurse goes and shekhar falls on the sofa kept there…. Swara and shomi support him……

Shomi: shekhar…. Please calm yourself and keep up the hopes……
Swara: yes papa.. She needs us now… We’ll pray for her…..

Dhak dhak…

Shekhar looks at them who nods…. They pray for her………..

Dhak dhak….

Inside the ot….

Ragini is lying unconscious and the doctors are doing their work……

After 3 hours the doctors come out….

Shomi: doctor my daughter.. Is she alright???
Doc: look we have done the operation.. Next 12 hours are crucial for her…. She’ll gain her conscious soon……. Now please excuse me….
Swara: doc can we meet her??
Ragini: yeah sure……

The doctor goes and the trio goes inside to see Ragini lying in unconscious state…
All feel bad……

Swara and shomi holds her hands… Shekhar caresses her hair…….

Now after 3 more hours ragini gains her conscious and is shocked to see herself in hospital in that state……..

The trio are happy to see her well again…… Swara goes to call the doc…..

Ragini: how come I’m here?? I went to market na!!
Shomi: beta u had an accident so that’s y u r here…. Don’t worry beta we’ll go home soon…. ( she said this while going to the table and fetching a glass of water for ragini such that ragini is not able to see her face)
Ragini: ma.. I’m asking something answer me…….
Shekhar: beta she just now told na that u had an accident……
Ragini is confused….. Swara comes with the doc….
Doc: how r u feeling now??

Ragini looks at him confused! She sees his lips moving but the y cant she hear anything???

Ragini holds her head and stars crying….

Ragini( shouts) : I’m not able to hear anything doc…..

All the 4 are shocked….

Ragini falls unconscious…..

Shekhar: doc.. What is all this??
Doc: u all come with me……. Nurse get her reports ready……

They all go to doc’s cabin…

Doc: have a seat…
Shomi: what has happened to her??
Doc: due to the accident her hearing nerves are destroyed… And um afraid that she might not be able to hear again…..
The trio are shocked…………..
Swara: but doc… There might be some surgery or something so that she can hear again…..
Doc: I’m sorry but we don’t have anything like that…….
Shekhar: how will mu daughter live like this??
Doc: look there are some special schools where the the ppl with these problems are there and are taught to talk in sign language… You can send her there……….
Shomi: but how can we send her there……. Look pls do something….. Please.. I beg u…….
Doc: we can’t do anything in it mam…… Now pls excuse me………….

The doc leaves and the trio also comes to ragini’s ward and sees her lying unconscious…………

Episode ends with ragini’s dull and sleeping face………………

Precap: the family has came to see swara and ragini is also sitting there when suddenly she gets up and runs to her room…………

So guys here was the first shot hope u all have liked it…. Pls comment below and tell me……… So that I can write the second part if you hv liked it……..

hope u all will like it……

Please drop your comments below…………

I’ll upload sangini and babul on 25th September most probably………

Keep reading
With Love
Richa

64 comments

  1. Anjali

    Ragini has a very pure heart and is she deaf. Feeling very bad for her. In first shot so much shock. Update soon. I really love that part when they bring ragini in hospital. Wow ep is marvellous

  2. SPP

    |Registered Member

    Awesome Superb Fantastic
    Last Part was emotional
    Hope Ragini manages herself
    Please continue DEAR
    Waiting for the next one……….

  3. sinzo

    Wow…..yaar no words to say……juz awesome……..superb…..u nailed it……all these words are small in front of ur First Shot……Hatts off Dear…..

  4. alia

    Awesome yaar… It was just too good… I was crying when I read the accident part…. Loved it.. N all the best for your exams dear..

  5. Pammy

    |Registered Member

    Awww…omg such an emotional part…its just fabulous…heart touching..i loved it and am missing ur ff….and ha ALL THE VERY BEST DEAR DO WELL…ROCK UR PAPERS AND COME BACK TO ROCK TU…and once again all d best tc

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