You Are The One (Chapter 28)


It’s the day of reception, after 2 days of marriage. Her eyes searched for someone desperately, as soon as she entered inside the small crowd n found him at the corner, conversing with someone. She moved towards him n reached there with her small steps but instead of speaking a word, her eyes widened in shock.

“Hey gorgeous! whats up?”

“Jared! U, here?” She, dazed.

“Oh god! show some decency to welcome ur guest first.”

He hugged her warmly n she too respond back, tensed, looking at the man, standing right there.

But to her surprise, he stood still, avoiding gazes.

“Hey guys, u carry on, I’ve something important, so excuse me.” He left the place, hastily.

She was confused by his sudden unexpected act.

‘Is he ignoring me? He didn’t even talked to me once.’ Her mind buzzed up.

“I’m here in front of u, then where r u lost, beautiful?” Jared’s tacky words pulled her back.

“No..” She stammered for the suitable excuse, “Actually, I want to know, when did u reach here? U didn’t informed me? N here?”

“OK, then let me tell u, I called u for, god knows, how many times but ur no. wasn’t reachable n I got ur call at last, a week back but then realized the caller was Mr. Maheswari. I was shocked at first but he talked to me nicely n invited me for a visit, too. I reached here today morning n he invited me here, so I’m here. Anything else?” He gave her a questioning look.

“Oh.” She, surprised.

“Is there something going on between u two?” He, inquisitively.

“Lets talk about something else.” She, slyly.

“So, I’m right. hfff” He huffed, placing his hand on the left side of chest, “Finally, u broke my heart, gorgeous.” in a low voice n chuckled.

“Stop acting.” She smacked on his biceps, lightly.

“Well, u r looking awesome as always in this, what it calls?” He, curiously.

“Saree.” She.

“Yeah, n well I thought that green suits u more but orange is killer.” He, playfully.

“Stop it.” She, whined n left the place.

She was on her way to find him but someone grabbed her hand n she was joined by the epitome of the party, the newly wedded lovebirds.

“Oh..y r u trying to beat the speed of Rajdhani Express hmm? R u searching for someone very special?” Swara, in a teasing tone.

“Don’t get busy with me, ur husband is feeling jealous of me.” Ragini, in the same tone.

“Oh please, don’t give such silly excuses, we also know who is here feeling something..” Lucky, playfully.

“So husband-wife ganged here to trouble this innocent soul, hmm?” Ragini, cutely.

“What an observation?” Swara, giggled.

“What to do..’dost, dost naa raha..'” Ragini sang a little dramatically.

Suddenly sparkling lights turned into a dim light n a milky beam of light focused on her. She closed her eyes n covered the light with her hand.

“U like classic songs, right?” She heard him, “U entered into my life through ur voice n made me mad. ‘Meri aawaaz hi pehchaan hai..’ the song u sang, at our first encounter n then vanished in a thin air making me restless. After 2 months, u entered into my life, again with an unknown identity n then created a lot of mess in my life. U destruct everything inside of me but that was a need, for my betterment. I’ve changed, a lot, I’m also surprised looking at myself now. It’s me, thanks to u. I was a stupid, idiot to not recognized u before. I took a lot of time to fix the face n voice of the angel, I’m deeply in love with. But now, I want to confess, in front of everyone that, I love u very much, more than anything n I’ve prepared something for u. It’s not that awesome like urs but please go with it’s emotions more than other..” He composed himself.

“Climb on board
We’ll go slow and high tempo
Light and dark
Hold me hard and mellow
I’m seeing the pain, seeing the pleasure
Nobody but you, ‘body but me ‘body but us, bodies together
I’d love to hold you close
tonight and always
I’d love to wake up next to you
I’d love to hold you close
Tonight and always
I’d love to wake up next to you
So we’ll piss off the neighbors
In the place that feels the tears
The place to lose your fears
Yeah, reckless behavior
A place that is so pure
So dirty and raw
Be in your ‘bed all day’³
****ing you, and fighting on
It’s our paradise and it’s our war zone…”
(Pillotalk by Zayn Malik)

She was dumbstruck. He sang the song, really. Her heart fluttered inside n she felt uncountable butterflies in her belly witnessing his awestruck confession. She wished to run to him n hug him tightly.

She came back to her sense hearing a roaring clapping sound n then saw him on his knees, right in front of her.

“Though I’m not a perfect person for u n u can get a far better person than me but I can guarantee u, no one can love u like I do n will do forever. I promise u I’ll trust u always, I’ll never leave u in any condition n I’ll always love u like a mad. I know it’s not easy to forget all happenings easily but I want to help u in it. U want to go away for some time but I want to confess today that, I’m too weak to even think my life without u, I cant take it. I’ll not come in between ur decision but it’ll take my breathe away n I don’t want to die this early because I want to live rest of my life with u n have our babies. I want to create our little world. I want to become a family man n my all wishes, my life n my everything gets it’s sanity only in u, because You Are The One, who breathed into my sleeping desires. Please, let me in ur life. Give me a small place in ur heart. I know I’m confusing u a lot but…” He huffed in nervousness, “OK, please MARRY ME..”He opened a blue velvet box n a beautiful diamond ring gleamed into its reign.

She was on the cloud 9, surprise after surprise.

“Come on, grab the ring, say yes.” The crowd went mad.

She broke into tears n cupped his face.

” U know what, I hate u, for everything, u did with me. U r very bad.” She hugged him tight n he wrapped her in protective cocoon, “But I cant lie more, I cant go away from u n pretend to be angry with u because I love u, very much n cant live without u. I want to be urs in every sense because You Are The One n will always be the one who rules in my heart.”

He placed the ring in her ring finger. The hall filled with a roaring claps again but they remained like that, lost in their hug.

“Uhh..hmm.” Sekhar Gadodia coughed a little to bring them back n it did work, which the roaring claps couldn’t do.

Ragini was embarrassed n blushing all the while where Sanskar brushed his hair avoiding the teasing gazes.

“I’m jealous of u guys, u stole our spotlight.” Swara, with a cute pout.

“I also agree with her.” Laksh crossed his hand in front.

“What to do guys, without stealing ur spotlight I couldn’t get the glow in my life. So forgive us n be happy for friendship sake.” Sanskar, diplomatically, while wrapping his arms around his amused angel.

“Bro, You Are Really The One, she needed badly, in her life, a mad, word weber n stubborn lover. Well, we can also become a good friends.” Lucky forwarded his hand.

“Y not, n thanks for the compliment.” Sanskar shook his hand with his, while looking at the delighted, heavenly soul in his arms.

“Hey guys, come join the dance floor.” Mrs Gadodia exclaimed on the dance floor.

They joined the dance floor n moved slowly on the romantic background music, in a dim light.

“I want my strawberry.” He, huskily.

“Uhh..hmm, wait man u can have the buckets of strawberry but after marriage.” Swara, chuckled with Lucky, near them.

Ragini dipped into the red shade.

“Yeah, yeah.” Sanskar smiled.

“Now, keep quiet.” Ragini, softly, resting her head on his chest, eyes closed, hearing his thumping heartbeats, a soothing lullaby to hers, with a winning smile.

Thank u so much for reading guys.

I don’t know what to say but I’m happy as well as sad. Its an important piece of my writing, my first uploaded creation. Thank u so…much for all the love n support guys. I was thinking of ending it on my birthday but it couldn’t happen. Anyways I’m thinking of giving u guys a new treat then, n about pairs I’m thinking of switching it for that one. Let me know ur view also.

“The Untold Story” my next treat, on 13th May.


Credit to: RSR

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  1. superb… eagrly waitng fr ur nxt ff… u r such a awesome wrtr…. hats off to u…. lov u

    1. just wait a little n love u too dea…

  2. Hey RSR FEELIng sad.You are such a good writer . WILL miss this ff very much.pls upload someone somewhere.I love that ff also.I know it will be your decision about the pairs but an earnesr request dont switch the pairs.Because ragsan ff are lessening day by day.Most of the writers had stopped writing their ff in mid way.
    But i will not pressurize you,just requesting you.

    1. Thank u so… much for the appreciation Sara, it really means a lot.

      I’ll try to update SomeOne, SomeWhere, within 24 hours.

      N about the warm request of urs, I’ll, definitely, not let u down. Just wait for a little dea…

      N love u a lot…..

  3. You r just an awesome writer dear…..this was a grt ff….I hope or next one is also on rags

    1. Without any doubt, the next one will also be on Rags but Swara will be also there, equally as Rags. Don’t worry I’ll make both the stars to twinkle in the ff, equally.

      Thanks for the head spinning compliment n Love u dea…

  4. pls start another ff on raglak

    1. I’ll definitely do that dea..

  5. Awesome yeah switch the pairs big fan of raglak but please keep Ragini as main

    1. I’ll definitely come up with ur wish because u r really special for me. Just wait a little dea…

  6. Too good dear…will miss ur ff a lot…it was one of the splendid ffs l have read till now and with each epi, u made me fall in love with it more…come back soon with another ff soon?
    And regarding switching pairs in ur next ff, it is ur decision dear as u r the writer so u know the best…but l would still vouch for RagSan but keeping an open mind l ll surely read ur next ff too whatever be the pairs…

    1. adu, oh my goodness! ur comment gave me a real satisfaction with my work. I’m really glad to have ur heartwarming comment.

      About the pairs, I’ll never let u down, just wait a little n love u load dea…

  7. Yar jst awesome…. heart winning confession by sanskar nd so romantic…
    Nd eagerly waiting for your next ff… nd plzz don’t swap pairs…?

    1. Thank u so much n don’t worry, I value ur wish dea…

  8. awesome yaar we will miss it ur ff awesome love story waiting for ur next ff

    1. poonam, dea I’ll not leave u guys this easily, I’ll surely come back again with the new one n thanks for ur love n support. I really love u dea…

  9. Ohhh….cute one…Nd I miss this story….Nd come soon with another one…Nd make it also ragsan…or theju as a lead…this is awsme ending..really feeling sad…

    1. faima, ur comment means a lot dea n I’ll come again with ur hearty wish for sure…

  10. Ooo this was a really goof.ff.. Will.miss this one.. Waiting for ur next ff.. I dnt mind abt pairs.. BT ragini shud b der.. DTS all..:)

    1. Wow!!! I mean how straight u r girl. It’ll be really come up with ur wish, the next ff. love u dea…

  11. Awesome as usual…………
    I like u so much because You r the one who gave a beautiful story to us……..
    I m buttering u bcz You r the one who is writer of some1 somewhere also………..

    Bdw dis is reallly beautiful………..thank you so much………….

    About pairs…’s all depend on u my dear…..i willl defiantly read ur next story….

    1. Oh! heaven!! this much butter!!! U know what girl, I’m slipping on the surface right now n my full posture is dripping into the pool of butter u have used on me…LOL…

      Thank u so much for buttering me, I’m also feeling contented with this. He..he..

      Thanks for ur view on the next one. Love u girl, u really made me slipped into ur buttery, beautiful world. Thanks a lot…

  12. Wonderfull dear will miss your ff

    1. Don’t worry dea, I’ll not give u any chance to miss this devil, I’ll come back soon, for sure. Love u dea…

  13. Will miss it a lot.

    1. Me too dea. Thank u so much for loving it. I just want to give u a hug, just keep smiling n always remember this ff n me.

  14. I wont comment often.. bt trust me i ll read all ur episode without fail.. yu are really amazing… all his emotions are well defined… even hers.. and a beautiful end… the most liked part was confronting each other.. a brilliant part… no words.. and in waiting fr ur next treat… coming to the pairs… pls keep as ragsan.. thy are many ff revoling round them.. bt urs must tel definitely a unique one.. and looking forward… love yu…

    1. I know dea, u r a reagular reader of this ff. I never go for the no.s of comments because I knew that there r many real regular reader of this ff. I believe it because I’m also a silent reader of many ff, so no expectations based on comments but love to read all, always.

      I’ll come up with ur wish, don’t worry dea n love u too…

  15. Girl ,u gave me the best morning treat ever.It’s really beauriful ,studded with lot of charm and elegancy.A perfect ending.I loved it would be an understatement .I am a kind of obssessed with your ff ,would suit tge situation most.
    Bingo !! U r coming with another ff.I would be highly privlaged , if u do so.I am ok with whatever u decide about pairs.
    HAPPY BIRTHDAY in advance.
    Would u mind having a friend like me ??? Let me tell u , i am dying to be your friend.
    May god bless u with every kind of happiness in this world and cherish u with great care and love.
    Will miss u a lot.

    1. YESSSSSSSSSS………..

      I’d love to jump to have a friend like u Nidhi. Its a huge pleasure for me having being asked for a friendship like this. Though, I consider everyone here as my friend but I’d love to begin this hearty, beautiful n sweet bond on this note, heartily, solely, completely.

      About ur comment, I think the line should be mine about making my day beautiful with ur beautiful comment n hearty proposal. Oh! I’m feeling like out of the world, don’t think me as an alien, it’s just my dear feeling, right now…LOL…

      I’ll definitely give u a token of gratitude for making my day beautiful n loving my work, just wait for a little dea…

  16. Amazing dear..i will miss ur ff a lot..u are really a fabulous writer..waiting for ur new ff..i want ragsan as a’s just a request.. but even if it will not be..i will still read ur ff as ur an awsm writer

    1. Finally, I got u girl. I was waiting for ur comment. It feels like something is missing without seeing ur comment, though I never bother for the comments but seriously ur comment is always a limit for me.

      I’ll definitely fulfill ur wish. Love u tons dea…

  17. Will miss u badly
    Bt rlly vry happy dat ull be bk!!!!!!
    N plz keep d pairs as ragsan only jst luv dem
    Luvd d ending :-* :-*

    1. ahana, thanks for the giving this ff a warm love n support.

      I’ll not let u down, just wait a little. Love u dea…

  18. Fantastic story
    thank u for this beautiful ff
    my wish to ragsan in ur new ff

    1. Thank u so much for giving ur valuable view regarding new ff n I’ll assure, U’ll not get disappointed by me dea, love u…

  19. awesome, start new ragsan/raglak ff….
    I’m fan of ur writing skills

    1. Yeah, I’ve submitted a post just now for my upcoming ff, do watch dea n love u a lot…

  20. That was such a beautiful update….u completely nailed that proposal……it was fantastic and apt and perfect in every way…..and what a way to culminate the work in this beautiful way

    1. Oh, thank u so much dea. I’m glad to know about ur liking of it’s ending. It really means a lot dea. Thanks for supporting this ff, loving this n boosting me, always with ur precious words. Love u dea…

  21. Waiting for ur next ff..

    1. I’ve posted the teaser little back. Have a look on that dea…

  22. It was awesome & this story very much.plz continue’some one some where ff’ also.i like ragsan more than raglak.but if it is raglak also i will read.all the best your bright future

    1. ammy, I’ll post SomeOne, SomeWhere.
      Thank u so much for the compliment n love u a lot…

  23. May b l m last 2 comment, don’t know how l missed it. Well it was too cute, emotional, lovely and much more. The whole series became one of my favourite. Wish u for d nxt 1 but l don’t think any story could take the craziness that l had for this one. Love u so so so much.???

    1. Aww…thank u so much for such a lovely comment dea. I’ll never forget this ever. This ff is really very close to me n ur comment for this, is really means a lot dea. Thank u so much n love u loads…

  24. Awesome yar will wait for ur next ff. N as m a big fan of ransan I hope the lead of ur Nxt ff will be ragsan ? will miss ur updates

    1. Thank u so much n I’ll come up with ur wish without fail dea…

  25. i love it. it was aesome. girl you have a real talent. keep it up. i will miss you

    1. Thank u so much for the appreciation dea n I’ll come again with ur wish. Don’t miss me too much because I’ll not leave u this early dea…

  26. definitely I will miss dis ff bt I m happy u r came up wid ur new ff I m so excited fr dat one…
    basically I m die hard fan of raglak bt dis s one of my fav ff
    I must say u r fabulous script writer
    I luv to read ur writing
    nd about ur new ff I don’t care about pairs bcoz I know I will definitely luv ur story so raglak or ragsan I m k wid it
    nd ha update someone somewhere also
    nd most importantly thank u so much fr dis wonderful ff….

    1. Aww…ur comment is really heart whelming dea. Thank u so much for this much love n support. I’m glad to have ur view on this ff as it’s the last chapter, every comment means a lot for me. Thank u so much for ur valuable view upon new ff. Thank u so much n love u loads dea…

  27. pavani darling

    I think iam commenting for the first time but I read this every time as it was last epi I.want to comment it was awsome nd u r a beautiful writer

    1. Thank u so much dea n love u loads…

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