You Are My EverYtHiNg (shot~1)

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Haii Friends…. I hope u guessed who am i…. If not scroll down nd check it ….
Am really sorry friends for disappointing in my last ff final shot,, niha sry for disappointing u…. I really dono know that it hurted u dat much,, nd sryy fr wasting ua time for that…u said u hate my last part,, but u also said dat u liked my befre shots,, soo thanks fr commenting what u felt nd I dnt think this as a critisism bcz this is a very gud suggestion soo far I have got,, tqqq fr dat Niha..…. I dnt know whether u like this one are not… but I thought to try it once… nd thanx for saying it frankly niha… I really appreciate u…. I need like this suggestion to improve my writing skills… plzz,, I kindly reqiest u all to tell me whether I should continue my writings or not…. Thank you all….

Character sketch……

Abhisheik prem mehra: a big business tycon…. He had two sisters one is tanu prem mehra nd another one is bulbul prem mehra….. He loves his dadi very much.. Abhi had a brother akash,, who is also taking care of mehra groups…. Archana akash,, shez bhabi to abhi,, but he always treats her like his mother….
Apart from this he had another world,, none other than his fiance…. Yes pragya abhisheik prem mehra(soon to be) ….. She is his life… his day starts with her nd ends with her thoughts only…. This is his family….

Pragya arora:: oops sryyyy… pragya abhisheik prem mehra…. Younger Sis of archana…. Doing fashion designing with bul…. They are besties…. To her abhi is everythng…. She traets purab nd nikhil as her brothers… they too treat archana nd pragya as sisters…. She hates her parents a lot,, reasons will be reavealed later…. Soo shez staying in hostel….abhi wants to her marry soon so dat she wont stay in hostel as he doesn’t like pragya staying in hostel…. Soo he thinks to do tanu nd nikhil marriage first nd next them….

Sarla nd aanjya arora: parents of pragya nd archana….. They are feeling bad as pragya is not at all treating them as her parents their only hope is archana….

Tanu prem mehra: completed her studies Nd engaged to nikhil khanna… nd soon they are gonna marry…. Loves her sister bul a lot…..

Bulbul prem mehra: doing Fashion designing…. Shez sweetheart to evryone in her family… No one say No to whatever she says,, even abhi too… Shez eagerly waiting fr abhigya nd tanikhil marriages… she treats purab as her friend… nd teases him soo Much….

Nikhil khanna: he takes care of khanna group of industries..… he had his choti purab khanna,, whoz is childish in attitude…. But good at heart….

Purab khanna: completed his studies nd working as journalist….. He loves his work at d same time he love bul a lot…. He too eagerly waiting fr tankhil marriage,, bczz soon tanu gonna come to his home,as his bhabi as hez eagerly waiting his house to fill with love nd hapiness( their parents died in an accident)

Scene 1::
Episode starts with MM fully decorated nd many of people are rushing here nd there…. Seems some marriage function is going to happen…
Screen shift to a room..

A beautiful bubbly girl is shown with pink outfit sitting infront of mirror nd getting ready for function…. Her face is revealed,, shez non other than,, our bubbly girl bulbul prem mehra……
Person behind d screen(Person): haiii….. Bulbul prem mehra….
Bul:haiiii…. Yes I am bulbul prem mehra…. Princes of mehra family????….
Person: hooo… dats great… U look soo cute…..

Bul:awwww… tqqqq…. But soon there gonna come compitetion for me….
Person:compitetion??? Fr u ah?????…. Whoz dat???
Bul:U dnt know who is that……

Person nods as noo…..
Bul:wait…. I will tell u…
She looks around nd asks don’t tell to anyone….
Bul:pragya…. Yes shez gonna come to this house as bahu… but what to do I too love her a lot… she attracts evryone with her friendly nd smiling nature… shez my bestest bestest friend in d world….
Person:hmmm…. Soo shez is ua soon to be bhabi…. Ryt???
Bul:yess… nd by da way… u dnt know about my family ryt??? …. Let me introduce them…… come…… nd they both levaes…. Bul goes down….
There we sees a old lady is shown who is ordering to maids Nd a young lady is giving juice to her…..

Bul: dadi What ua doing her??? Take some rest na… bhabi u can say to her na…
There face is revealed,, she our dadi nd archana….dadi. With smiling face enjoying her grand daughter marriage…..
Bul: shez my dadi nd my bhabi… nooo,, shez not my bhabi shez my mom….. Hey na Maaa…..
Aracha: ua are always correct…. Nd kisses on her forhead….

Dadi too kisses on jer forhead,, nd she hugs both of them….
Archana: but whr is my first daughtr???… Did she get ready or not????
Bul by keeping her hand on her head:ohhhhhh gooddddddd… I totallyyy forgot about her,, I have to go now… Nd rushes fastly…..
She goes to another room….
Where a lady is shown wearing red lehanga nd sitting ideal nd thinkng something….
Bul enters into that room nd sees her lost somewhere….
Bul comes nd sits beside her…

Bul Waves her hand… but she still lost in her thoughts….
Bul:diiii….……. By keeping hand on her shoulder….
Yes shez is tanu….
Tanu comes to her sense nd looks at bul with teary eyes…

Bul gets shocked to see her lovely di like dat…
Bul: dii… what hapend… is anything wrong,, don’t u like this dress,, or dnt u like this jewellery… hoo now I undrstood u dnt like that nikhil naa…. I know dii… u dnt wryy I will take care of him…. I will stop.this marriage…. When bul is hear no fear….
Tanu Gives a deadly glare…

Bul:oopss sryyyy… u only marry him….. I wont come in between u … I have purab naaa…. I will see him….
Tanu hugs her nd cries hard….

Bul undrstands her nd consoles her….
Tanu: with this stupid talks only,, u will attract evryone.. How can I leave my pyaari bulbul nd goo…. How can I leave this house nd all of u… I dnt want to leave u all bul…. I cant stay away from u…
Bul: ouuuuuufffffffffoooooo dii…. Who said ua leaving this house…. U will stay in this city only na… we will meet daily…. If not we will bring nikhil jiju also here…. Wat u say….
Tanu wipes her tears nd says then what about purab…..

Bul: that buddhu…… nd thinks fr sum time….
Bul: ideaaaa…….. I will marry dat buddhu… soo that we xan stay together fr life long….. What u say….
Tanu:woowww… that’s great idea….. Then u nd me,, together…. She becames dull…..
Bul:again what happnd dii…

Tanu: but bhai?????
Bul: u dnt wryyy… I will manage him……. They both smiles nd gives hifi….
At that “ very gooood idea… then what about ua bhai?????” a voice comes from entrance…

Screen freezes with tanu nd bul faces……..

Friends stopping here….. Hope u will supprt me….. If not tall me frankly… Niha I will be waiting fr ua comment….. Nd guys plzz doo comment… will b waiting fr urs tooo… Thank you…..
Samyusam…..

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28 Comments
  1. Lovelyb nice one dr waitng fr te nxt shot……..

    1. SamyuSam

      Tqqq krish….

  2. SamyuSam

    Sryy mistake its sanjay arora…..

  3. Saranya24

    Nice dear but hw archana is bhabhi iam confused she is pragya sis oly na love it anyway love u??????

    1. SamyuSam

      Sryy fr confusing dear… Its archana akash prem mehra…. Hope u got it now…. Nd thanks fr liking it

      1. Saranya24

        Ok dear tq love u????

  4. Abhigyalover

    Wow , nice shot dear

    1. SamyuSam

      Tqq dear… Just now got time to read ua ff… Hope u will be rocking by it…..

    1. SamyuSam

      Tqq Reshuu

  5. superrrrrrrrr cute dear

    love u n happy week end……..,,,,

    1. SamyuSam

      Tqqq dii…….????

  6. oh my god is it true ?
    samu you are back !
    my god the changing of relationships is very very interesting !
    waiting for your next update samu !

    1. SamyuSam

      Yes am back fr my cutieee frnds dear……. Tqq fr finding it intresting shabana…..?????

  7. Lopez

    it’s awesome dear but jux hate that tanu though she is positive but ekta did not give me a reason to love her ever????????

    1. SamyuSam

      Lol…. Thats true dear… Even i too hate her thats d reason i gave her positive char in this…. Anyways thanx fr ua lovely comment????

  8. Lovely and awesome starting but continue this and don’t end fastly.

    1. SamyuSam

      He he???… I undrstood sweety… I wont end this soo soon…. Nd sryy fr ending my other ff soon…. Forgive me for that dear…

  9. B_Ani

    nyc shot samu…nd tanu is abhi’s sis!!!!
    anyways, do continue…

    1. SamyuSam

      Tqqq Ani…. Sure i will dear

  10. Nice start. Awesome episode. Waiting for the next.

    1. SamyuSam

      Tqq shanaya… Will post it soon…

  11. Pls continue soon.glad u start a new 😉 🙁 🙁 ff sis

    1. SamyuSam

      Tqq sis…. Sure frm now i will post soon nd will try to b regular

  12. Awesome…..

    1. SamyuSam

      Tqqq sugan

  13. Hanna

    Nice and happy that you are back.
    Waiting for next one

    1. SamyuSam

      Yaaa back with new again… Tqqq for liking it…

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