YoU aRe MiNE SuKoR – part5


I came early this time ???with the next epi but its very short ??…I am sorry all of you for making you guys waiting and all my lovely friends thankyou soo much for the love ,support and care you given me.I hope I could live up to your expectation.
Soon let’s start!

She was shocked to see suraj there,by her side …tears started flowing down her cheeks! Her eyes were reflecting her pain! Suraj with his hands ,gently wiped her tears ,feeling his touch she closed her eyes…..When she opened her eyes,she found suraj know where… Chakor started crying badly realizing the fact that suraj would disaaper from her life like this forever!
Mean while Suraj was Resting his head on the steering ,he was thinking about the recent happenings in his life!
Surajs POV

I have no words to express ,what I am feeling now …I am feeling soo much relieved! I became lifeless when you were lost ! I am soo sorry chakor? for leaving you alone! I hope you reach home safely ! I promise you I won’t leave you ever again ,I will always, be there for you as a shoulder for you to rest your pain and as a shadow to protect you from all bad eye he said determined …..
He started the jeep to aazadhgangh and also started thinking about each and every moment they spend together yesterday!

He rembered their disasterous dance with steps including pushing and pulling, a big smile appeared on his face….he can’t stop himself from laughing and blushing … hitted his head …then rembered their challenge and her nonstop bak-bak ,asking him to dance & sing!! Suraj in mind “ I think I am missing your bak-bak wild cat”he said while taking a turn and driving swiftly,he was smiling all way thinking about her their unending fights,her irritated look, all things related to her was driving him more crazy……he became restless…he was having a fresh feeling in him. .. He speaks,think & see only chakor !
He stops the jeep aside and came out and sits on the front top of jeep
Suraj : urghhh !!! Now no more I can’t hold it .. I can’t tolerate this feeling anymore and I only know one thing all these feeling are happening because of you wildcat,he said while pouting cutely! What have you done to me !! ( the song pehla nasha plays in the BG). I can only see you ,feel you & think about you! You know you nearly killed me when you left without informing …you know how much I was worried for you.For a moment I thought I lost my love again!….he was numb but he still repeated the word again…L…o..v..e!!

Suraj: what ?…… my love?….. Really !!….nahh he shook his head in disagreement ….but with a confused look he said yahhhh…..and shook his head in agreement.
He jumped from the jeep …he can’t believe it …he is moving to and fro in tension …for about half an hour he was moving like this…now he stopped and took a deep breath closing his eyes and he could see chakor face… suraj opened his eyes suddenly giving a 100V bulb smile showing all his teeth.. Like an idiot and said “ MY LOVE”
Suraj : my love really?? ohh manh and that too for wild cat!!
He now sits on ground and said “ hehee someone pinch me ,hit me because SURAJ RAJVASHI IS I N LOVE” he can’t control his happiness his happiness… was blossoming creating a volcano of emotions in him ….he has become crazy now….Crazy in love
He jumps and stood upon the jeep and yelled at top of his voice I LOVE YOU CHAKOR ……? I LOVE YOU MY WILD CAT ….yipeee

He just wanted to see her.. Hug her … make her his for ever ….he said in mind you are mine chakor …..he quickly get into the jeep and fled to village to meet his lady love
Suraj in jeep:
Suraj : its now 2hrs 63 minutes and 3sec that you are out of my sight , now no more he said while pouting cutely !! I am angry at you for leaving without informing but… in the mean time I love you for doing that !! If my wild cat didn’t left me how will I realize my love for you…..?wish I could reduce this waiting…but I started enjoying this waiting ..

Mean while chakor step out of the bus and is walking lifelessly towards her house….her life came to a dead end with her dreams and hopes scattered ….she took each step with a heavy & teary eyes…. her heart is filled with unbearable pain on the other hand suraj is going in jeep to meet chakor with his newly blossomed feelings for her …..with his heart filled with care,love and affection.

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  1. Finally, Suraj realized his feelings for Chakor. I hope when he confesses his feelings for her, all of their misunderstandings dissappear. Once again well done. Your writing is fantastic.

    1. Liya

      Yup finally that duffer realized his feelings.about misunderstanding Not so easy as you say dear?

  2. Your ff is awesome…. pls update the next part soon….waiting eagerly….

    1. Liya

      I try best dear too post early .next week I am having university exam , I try my best !

  3. Ur ff is awsm.but what about the precap

    1. Liya

      Precap ?? Sorry I also don’t know .Not yet decided lol! I write randomly anything at that time …from next I will try to add precap!

  4. It’s awsm. Well written, don’t know when this will hpn in serial. Great work. Plz update next part soon. Eagerly waiting

    1. Liya

      Ya I am also eagerly waiting for that moment ….I but now i am eagerly waiting for today’s episode ….I love this yogesh guy ?and his punishments?

  5. This was short. Bt it’s awsm. Hw r u ? Update next part as soon as u cn

    1. Liya

      Shot yaa ??sorry for that dear! I am much better now I am having study leave now so getting time to rest!

  6. Hi dear!
    H r u?
    Short & awsm part!
    Waiting to know what is going to happen when they will come face to face!

    1. Liya

      Hai mitha? .I am fine dear?..most probably ,next part will witness their face off.Glad that you liked this epi

  7. AMkideewani

    Superb dear❤️❤️❤️❤️

    1. Liya

      Crazygirl thankyou soon much ??

  8. Komaljanu

    Sorry dear for posting late but I loved it and yup what about ur health r u fine now……our prayers is always with u….and ya ur ff is just the best…

    1. Liya

      You commented ,I am happy dear! I am getting fine now ,I am having study leave this week ..hope to take proper rest & get well soon!Thankyou for your love & prayers dear tc

  9. Komaljanu

    I mean I commented late…

  10. It wasn’t that short i luvd it,well how r u now?

  11. Hi liya….
    Ur ff is soo good…
    Plz update soon ok!!!
    Hey komal what happenned to ur ff
    These 2 sukor ff are my fav…
    Eagerly waiting for the update…
    And also for todays episod..
    He he!!!

    1. Liya

      Thankyou sooo much aaradhy?……komal may be busy! Don’t know what happend she is regular in updates?!

  12. awesome ???

    1. Liya

      Thankyou sooo much warisha???

  13. Really awesome……

    1. Liya

      Thankyou nishi dear?

  14. Nice one

    Thank God early realization

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