YHM Dil toh Pagal hain (promo)

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How r u guys doing????

Rushi here friends I missed u all alot so am back with new series

Dil toh pagal hain

This ff is adapted from 1997’s Bollywood epic movie Dil toh pagal hain, I will add some spices n twist to the story.

This will be a romantic Ishra ff.

So today I will present a small promo

please let me know ur opinion of this ff

so here we goooooooooooooooooooo

A young boy is sleeping in some hall
He is dressed in denims n yellow t-shirt

Another boy throws water on him

Boy in yellow t-shirt wakes up with jerk

yellow t-shirt boy(still half sleepy)-Romi, what the hell is ur problem, I was about to hold
Dance Champion’s trophy Remo sir was giving it to me
n u idiot u woke me up that too by throwing water
u have actually spilled water on my dreams
Romi-ohhhhhhhhhhh Mr Raman Bhalla to make dreams turn to reality we need to work hard by just sleeping n dreaming nothing happens
Dance Championship is just 2 months away n we haven’t even started with practice

(so friends Another boy was Romi that is Aly Goni n the boy who was sleeping is Raman that is our Karan patel in this ff Raman n Romi aren’t brothers but are good friends)

Raman yawns
Raman-Romi relax everything will happen, I cannot let my dream break our troupe will win yes we will win dance championship
btw where is shagun
we need to start from today

Romi (irritated)-she might be busy with make up these girls I say are most most most

A beautiful lady dressed in pink long skirt n black top interrupts romi
Lady-are most hardworking n smart n intelligent n
Romi interrupts
Romi-ohhh just shut up shagun u are never on time I just dnt know what Raman saw in u that he made u part of this troupe

(Friends that young lady is our shagun )

An angry shagun holds romi’s collar
Raman comes in between n tries to stops shagun he holds her hands they have eye contact n shagun is lost in his eyes

Dil toh pagal hain dil deewana hain plays in bg

Scene 2

A southindian couple is shown
Man is reading newspaper
Lady is cutting vegetables
A gorgeous girl dressed in orange anarkali brings coffee
Girl-Aunty, uncle good morning wali good good hot hot coffee
Lady-Thank u ishu beta
man-Ishita beta u make best coffee in world
Girl-I have to make best coffee after all aunty has taught me

Girl hugs lady

Girl-I should wake up mihika orelse she will get late to college

Girl leaves

Lady-vishwa, my all responsibilities are taken up by Ishita so nicely, she is perfect sister to mihika
Man-yes madhvi u are right but I dnt know y god has been so
unfair to her, she was just five when he took away her parents
Lady-Because god wanted her to stay with us he wanted us to have privilege to adopt her n take care of her

(Friends that couple is Amma n Appa from original but in this ff they aren’t real parents of Ishita they have adopted Ishita n brought her up as Ishita had lost her parents in car accident when she was 5 years old
mihika is real daughter of Amma appa for this ff)

So did u all like it??
Any suggestions

I will eagerly wait for ur comments

Thank u

21 comments

  1. Lekha

    Nice one rushi…..dil to pagal hai is one of my favourite movies……I love sharukh and madhuri chemistry in it…..n songs of the movie are awesome………am expecting that u will include new scenes between ishra……waiting for next one……n yeah even I were missing you……

  2. Purna

    |Registered Member

    Hi…..Missed u Rushi!!!…….wonderful start……….loved it…….waiting eagerly for next updates………..

  3. anu

    I think karishma’s character is done by shagun and madhuri’s by ishita and srk raman and akshay’s probably by mani

  4. guru

    Wonderful starting but I did not see the movie (dil toh pagal hain)..but this is very different story line ..

    • RUSHI

      |Author

      Hii guru,
      was missing ur comments alot
      thanks no problems if u have nt watched the movie
      I will ensure that I write everything clearly πŸ™‚
      please kp reading πŸ™‚

  5. guru

    Yes friend rushi, I’m big fan of divyanka and karan also your ff…today I read your undying love story that is fabulous finished… I’m not able to read your story early because my exams…

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