Yeh Vaada Raha- It’s a promise Episode 1

PLEASE TAKE NOTE THIS IS A FAN-FICTION NOT THE UPDATE OF THE ACTUAL EPISODE.

You can read the introduction of this fan-fiction by this link:
http://www.tellyupdates.com/yeh-vaada-raha-promise-introduction/

I have made some mistakes in the introduction, Karthik’s sister’s name is Shanti and Tai’s other daughter’s name is Hema.

The episode begins with Karthik persuading Survi to come back with him home .
SCENE 1: AT THE TRAIN
Survi: Karthik, you better alight at the next station.
Karthik: Okay, sure.
Survi: I already told you that I am not coming with you.
Karthik: Did I ask you to come with me?
Survi gets surprised.
Karthik: You are the one who are saying so, not me.
Survi: I am not coming
Karthik: Okay, your wish.
Karthik and Survi look at opposite directions.
Karthik: (in his mind) How do I persuade Survi to come back with me. Think something, Karthik. Think something.
Meanwhile, the ticket collecter comes to collect ticket from passangers.
Karthik: (in his mind) What an idea you have gave me, Bappu (Kya mast idea diya tumne bappu)
Karthik goes to Survi.
Karthik: Do you have ticket with you?
Survi: Yes
Karthik: Show me.
Survi: Okay, look here’s the ticket.
Karthik takes the ticket and tears them. Survi gets surprised.
Survi: What did you do Karthik?

Karthik: My wish.
Karthik throws the torn ticket pieces out of the window and Survi stops him, as Survi tries to stop him, they look at each other and share an eyelock. Yeh Vaada Raha plays.
Just then the Ticket collecter comes to them.
Train collector: Please show the ticket.
But they are lost in each othet.
Ticket collector: It’s a humble request that please show me the ticket.
Karthik and Survi gets worried, as they don’t have the ticket.
Survi: Look bhaisaab, I had the ticket but he tore and threw away them.
Ticket collector: What an excuse, madam ji, you called me bhaisaab , and now you don’t have ticket with you. Give me your ticket.
Ticket collector asks ticket from Karthik.
Ticket collector: Ticket?
Karthik: I wasn’t supposed to come here, I came here to persuade her but she doesn’t listen to me at all.
Ticket collector: I want ticket. Ticket?
Karthik: We don’t have any ticket. Now what will you do?
Survi: Karthik.
Ticket collector: I won’t do anything, whatever will be done will be done by the police.
Karthik: Po….Po…..Police

Ticket collector: Yes, Police.
Survi: Bhaisaab, please don’t call the police.
Ticket collector: No use of pleading to me, I will call the police.
Karthik: Wait, how much money do you need?
Ticket collector: Now, you have understood, I need 5000 as a fine.
Survi: But ticket is 600, so we should pay 1200, why 5000?
Ticket collector: I will call police.
Karthik: okay okay we will give you the money.
As Karthik touches his pocket, he is surprised.
Survi: What happened?
Karthik: I left my wallet in the car.
Survi hits her forehead with her hand.
Survi: What? Now what we will do?
Karthik: You don’t have any money?
Survi: Wait, I will check
Survi checks her bag and wallet.
Survi: Karthik, I only have 1000.
Karthik: 1000? Who carries 1000 in today’s time?
Survi: Me, you have any problem?
Train collecter: You don’t even have the actual fare. I will call the police now.
Survi and Karthik looks at each other. Just then, one lady shouts that her husband got heart-attack. The couple is the same couple who asked Survi if Karthik is her husband?
Train collector asks them.
Karthik gestures them thank you and Survi smiles.
Karthik: Let’s go.
Survi: Where?
Karthik: Home.

Survi: How many times will I say that I am not coming with you?
Karthik: Okay, we will get locked up in the jail. Happy?
Survi: It’s all because of you we are in this problem, who told you to tear my ticket? And I could have used money, for your ticket at least.
Karthik: Wow, your brain always work at the wrong time how would I know all these will happen, it’s your fault, you didn’t listen to me.
Survi: Your fault.
Karthik: Your fault.
Survi-Karthik start their nok-jhok just then they realize that the ticket collector is coming to them.
Karthik holds Survi’s hand.
Karthik: Survi, run.
Survi doesn’t do anything, Karthik holds her hand and they start running.
Survi: Karthik.
Ticket collector sees them.
Ticket collector: Look, they are running away.
As they start running, the ticket collector chases them and they suddenly reach near the train door which is open. And Karthik survi starts breathing heavily.
Karthik: Oh no, what will we do now?
He sees the ticket collector coming to them nearer.
Karthik: Survi, give me hand.
Survi looks down from the train.

Survi: But Karthik?
Karthik: Give me your hand.
Survi: But, I am very scared.
Karthik: I won’t leave your hand, yeh vaada raha.
Survi finally holds Karthik’s hand and they jump out of the train together. The ticket collector looks at them jumping out.
As Survi and Karthik jump out of the train, they roll out and out until Survi’s dupatta falls on Karthik. Yeh Vaada Raha plays and they share an eyelock.

SCENE 2: TAI’S RESIDENCE
Kamla tai is talking about Survi to Pyaare Mohan and badmouthing her when Lata comes and confronts her.
Kamla: By now, Survi must have left the city.
Mohan: No, you are wrong.
Kamla: What?
Mohan: Survi left the house yesterday, so she left the city itself yesterday.
Kamla: Yes, yes, I know I know she left the house yesterday no need to tell me.
Mohan: Just say that you are wrong?
Kamla gives him an angry look.
Mohan: Okay, okay you are correct.
Kamla smiles.
Kamla: Whatever it is, I am happy that Survi has left from my family’s life forever, and my truth will never be out.

Lata: You are wrong, kamla.
Kamla looks surprised.
Kamla: I forgot that you know my truth.
Mohan: Sasu ma, eat peanuts you will never forget anything.
Kamla gives him an angry look again.
Mohan: Okay, okay I will have some.
Just then Karthik calls Lata,
Karthik: Mom, Survi is coming with me,
Lata: That’s a great news.
Kamla looks at Lata.
Karthik: I will keep the phone now.
Lata: Okay.
Lata keeps the phone.
Lata: Good news is that Survi is coming along with Karthik.
Kamla: What?
Lata: Why are you having problems with Survi what has she done?
Kamla: Because of her father, my husband died and my Ani got shot in his leg.
Lata: But all the problems were sorted out later, Shrikant ji was not at fault.
Kamla: Whatever it is, I won’t spare Shrikant and his daughter Survi.
Lata: Kamla, if you dare to harm Survi I will reveal the truth to everyone, even if you have to kill me for that
Kamla: You will die before revealing the truth.
Kamla takes the knife and tries to kill Lata.
Lata: Kill me, carry on kill me.
Kamla throws the knife.
Kamla: No, I can’t
Lata: Why didn’t you kill me?
Kamla starts crying.

Kamla: I cant kill you Lata, you are like my sister.
Lata looks on. And Kamla starts laughing.
Kamla: I won’t kill you very easily.
Lata is surprised.
Kamla: I will show you and prove you that Kamla can do anything and I will do all I can to harm Survi. I will forget everything.
Lata: Please forget about the anger you have for Survi and Shrikant and accept Survi as a member in this house.
Kamla: This will never happen.
Lata: This will happen.
Kamla: Let’s see what happens, who will be proved right me or you? Let me see how you can protect Survi.
Lata leaves from there.
Mohan: You killed Kishore without a thought, but you didn’t kill Lata why Sasu ma?
Kamla: Looks like you are in a mood to see me killing people.
Mohan: No.
Kamla: Okay, I will kill you.
Mohan: No, sasu ma no
And he immediately falls on her leg
Mohan: Please spare me Sasu ma, you are great.
Kamla: Okay, I have spared you.
And she holds Mohan’s mouth.
Kamla: If you dare to spill out the beans, you will see the worst of me.
Mohan: Okay
She leaves him and he runs away.
Kamla: Foolish boy

Scene 3: OUTSIDE THE STATION

Karthik and Survi is out of the train station, where Karthik asks forgiveness from Survi but she denies.
SurvI: Don’t think that I came with you because I have forgiven you, I am going with you only for Lata ma.
Karthik: I know, please forgive me, I have done a big mistake.
Survi: No, I won’t.
Karthik: Okay, fine.
Just then due to injuiry, Karthik feels dizzy, and Survi holds him.
Survi: Karthik, are you okay?
Karthik: No,
Survi: I told you so many times to take care of yourself, but you never listen to me, you were very sick few days ago, you still haven’t recover, why you never take care of yourself?
Karthik: I have done many bad things with you. I have insulted you a lot. But,you were mum you never said anything. I deserve death.
Survi closes his mouth with her finger on his lip.
Yeh Vaada Raha plays.
Survi: Never dare to say anything like that.

Karthik smiles.
Survi gets angry.
Survi: You are smiling?
Karthik: I am happy that you care for me.
Karthik: Please forgive me, pleaseeee
And he holds his head.
Survi: Keep quiet, I have forgiven you.
Karthik: No, you have not.
Survi: Yes, I have
Karthik: You have forgiven me for the sake of me saying to forgive me not from the heart.
Survi: You will never change.
Karthik: Okay, lets go
Survi: Where?
Karthik: Home and where else?
Survi: By?
Karthik: By my car and where else, I already informed someone to bring my car at this station.
Survi: So, he will drive the car?
Karthik: Survi, its my car who else will drive the car I will just take the keys from him and drive the car.
Survi: Not at all.
Karthik: Why?
Survi: Look at yourself, you are unwell and you want to drive the car. Don’t you remember what happened last time?
Karthik: Now, he’s not here he gave me the keys and went away so who will drive the car now? Please don’t tell me its you?
Survi: Are you crazy Karthik, why will I drive the car?
Karthik: Exactly. Then how will we go home?
Survi: Auto and what else?

Karthik: Then what will happen about my car?
Survi: Never mind, someone else will come later and drive it home.
Karthik: Why so much trouble? I am fine now. I will drive the car.
Survi: You do whatever you want to, I am going to search for auto?
Survi goes and asks for auto.
Karthik: Survi! Survi! This girl will never change. She is so stubborn.
As Survi searches for auto, Karthik sees a truck approaching near Survi, while Survi is standing there and not moving at all.
Karthik: Survi! Move!
Survi doesn’t listen, and Karthik quickly jumps and saves Survi from being getting hit by the truck but gets a little injured in that process and falls unconscious.
Survi: Karthik!
Survi: Karthik, wake up please wake up. Someone call the ambulance.
Survi tries to wake him up but in vain.
Survi:I am sorry Karthik, I was angry with you, I am really sorry. I did so as I was really hurt that time. But you were really feeling guilty, I am sorry please wake up, I forgive you from my bottom of my heart.
Survi starts crying.
Karthik wakes up and smiles and then laughs.
Survi: Karthik?
Karthik: I knew you will forgive me, that’s why I pretended to faint so that I can know if you have forgiven me.
Survi: What kind of joke is this, you know how much worried I was for you?
Karthik: Sorry
Survi: I won’t talk to you.
Karthik: At least you have forgiven me.
Survi looks away from him just then she sees his hand bleeding a lot due to the accident.
Survi: What happened to you, Karthik?
Karthik: Nothing.
Survi: Give me your hand.
Karthik: Its okay,
Survi: No, its not.
Survi tears a pallu from her dupatta and ties Karthik’s hand for his wound.
Karthik: You care this much for me?
Survi: Why do you care so much for me?

Karthik: My wish.
Survi: If you thought that I killed Lata ma, your mom why you didn’t kill me that time when you came to know my truth?
Karthik is surprised.
Survi: You just tried to scare me, and threaten me indirectly, but whenever I was dying you saved me.
Karthik: Survi, why are you talking like this?
Survi: Tell me.
Karthik: I tried to harm you, but I didn’t know that you didn’t harm my mom, and I am sorry for that.
Survi: I didn’t ask you why you tried to harm me, I asked you why did you try to save me?
Karthik: Survi? I…..
Survi: Tell me.
Karthik: But?
Survi: No, I want an answer now, why why you didn’t kill me? why you saved me? Why were there tears in your eyes when Tai insulted me?
Karthik tries to say something.
Survi: Why did you save me when I was drowning? Why did you save me from the accident? What was the need of risking your own life? Why you didn’t let me die? What have you got to do with my death?
Karthik closes her mouth and gets angry.
Karthik: Enough! Enough is enough! I am going to say now and you will listen to me.
Survi removes Karthik’s hand from my mouth.
Survi: Why? Why do you care so much about me? Why
Karthik gets angry and shouts.

Karthik: Because I LOVE YOU, SURVI!
Survi gets shocked.
Karthik: Yes, I love you Survi. I loved you a lot. I loved you since 8 years ago, I hated you, I wanted to kill you, but my love didn’t let me kill you.
Survi tries to compose herself.
Karthik: My heart had a feeling that you couldn’t kil my mom, and I was right, my actual reason why I came to pick you was not because ma said so because I love you and I can’t see you go far away from me.
Survi is surprised and stunned and has tears in her eyes.
Karthik: I don’t know what is you answer. If it’s no let it be a no, as I deserve it, I didn’t trust you, that’s my punishment.
As Karthik is going away,
Survi: Wait, Karthik?
Karthik looks at Survi, as Survi comes to him, Survi slaps him. Karthik is shocked.
The episode ends.

Precap: Karthik asking Survi I know I deserve this slap. But I truly love you. Survi says stop it. Now, I know what to do. On the other hand, Aniket tells Tai that he loves Survi a lot. Tai is shocked. Aniket says he wants to marry Simmi . Tai says you mean Survi? Aniket says yes. Later, at night when Survi comes to Karthik’s house, Karthik asks if she is sure about the proposal, Survi says she accepts the proposal.Did Survi really reject Karthik’s love? Why did she do so? And will Survi really marry Aniket?

The next episode of Yeh Vaada Raha- It’s a promise will be published by this Monday, 18 Jan Night. The next episode has a very big twist so please stay tuned.

And yes do feel free to express ur opinions, as the fate of this ff and no.of episodes will depend on the no. Of comments so comment if possible and comment as much as u can 

Credit to: RANDOMFAN

6 comments

  1. Devil

    The successive questions of survi while confessing love of karthik was just amazing dear… Keep it up…

  2. Mariyah

    Omg …. This is amazing . Normally whenever I read fan fictions I think that they are just stupid but this was amazing

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