YEH KASOOR MERA HAI (TWINJ FF) Episode 1

Halloo my lovelies..surprise.. Dekho apki sabki chatter box ayage,๐Ÿ˜‚ but ab nai karungi wo end mai hai n ajke liye meri bate bardst karo next time se yh ni hoga but prmise nai hai yeh,๐Ÿ˜‚.. And sry also 4 late posting.. Guy’s its my 1st so pls bear with this.. So let’s start…

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EPISODE_1..

PLACE AMRITSAR…

We can see a mansion it is Taneja mansion and it was decorated seems like some function will going to be happen..In inside the living room there was a man he is continuously scolding at his every servant to do there work fast as his elder daughters engagement will be happen tonight with his friends only son..and that time only his office PA sohel come to discuss a matter but he to are also scolded by this man who was none other then Ramindar taneja..(bechara sab uski hath mai sahid.๐Ÿ˜‚).. And in inside the kitchen there was a lady who is none other then Leela taneja Rt ki wife..then she come and told him not to wry as everything will be finish at time but yh Rt kisiki sune tab na,๐Ÿ˜”accha usko leave it..

At Night… Now everything was looking perfect nd is Rt ka dimag thanda hehe, nd its looking like so amazing with this beautiful decoration.. Now guest are also coming…nd Rt said leela to check his daughter that she is ready or not coz in sometime is engagement will be happen…

And now in upstair there was a big beautiful room nd in there was 2 beautiful girl’s is shown near dressing table 1 is sitting n 1 is standing nd the beautifull girl’s was none other then our Panjabi patakka twinkle and her elder sister Chinki..

Nd she is helping Chinki doing her make-up nd getting to ready coz tonight is her engagement nd it will be happen in few hour’s only.. but our twinkle is helping Chinki nd teasing her also about her to be fiance..nd chinki was blushing all time but now can’t control it anymore she also start teasing twinkle to telling her that her time also will come in 1 day then she will also get chance to tease her now twinkle also start blushing to but soon thinking of some1 she get teary eyed which was noticed by chinky but just she will about talk then that time Leela come nd told them to do their work hurryup coz her to be in-laws are already come nd leela told that her daughters looking very beautiful..and trio shares a mother-daughter hug..

They both looking very beautiful in lehengas n sooo stunning with their breath taking looks..๐Ÿ˜
Now they all went down in living room where their engagement will happen..soon it’s happened with perfectly..now after dinner all guest are gone now they end their function end later they all end up with there tiring sleep..๐Ÿ˜ด..

To be continued…

Guy’s next epi mai hero ki entry jarur hoga..so stay tuned..nd waiting till don no..๐Ÿ˜‚

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Hayoo rabba finally mene likh dia muje toh yakin hi nai horaha, ab sunlo meri baten,๐Ÿ˜‚ Well u knw guy’s mai na tum sabki cmnt dekhke shocked nai hui thi infect mai toh behosh hi ho gyi thi,๐Ÿ˜‚ Iske bad mai toh epi likhna bhul hi gyi isliye late hua,๐Ÿ˜‚ Seriously yrr muje laga tha ki sirf sandal’s hi aynge cmnt ki badle mai as expectd,๐Ÿ˜‚ but itna sara pyari pyari cmnt its unxpected, ufff meri toh lat lag gyi,๐Ÿ˜‚ Thank you sooo much guy’s 4 ur lovely dovely cmnts,๐Ÿ˜˜ n also m so sry 4 not replying to ur cmnts as m not well.. Guy’s plzz tell me if u all like it or not and agar kuch galatiya ho bhi gyi ho toh plsss muje bata do..I’ll rectify it..tabhi toh shikungi or ap sabki tarah banungi..๐Ÿ˜..

KEEP CLAM N SMILING..๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
STAY HAPPY ALWAYS..๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€
TAKE CARE ALL..โ˜บโ˜บ
LOAD’S OF LOVE..๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜
LAST SABKO TATA..๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

49 comments

  1. Presha

    Presha

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    Hey januuuu…
    Its awesome….
    Just loved it…๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜
    Too good…
    Post soon…
    Love u….๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

    • Mia12

      Mia12

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      Yaye janu m happy ki u like it,๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€..or ha tu teri janu ka toh janti hai ki mai kab post kaungi muje pata nai,,๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

  2. Twinjfan.tamanna

    Twinjfan.tamanna

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    Wowww meri comment queen kya likha hai! Woooowwww! I just loved it! Sorry for the short comment but kya karu tujhe tho patha hi hai mai bohot busy hun! ๐Ÿ˜ฃ๐Ÿ˜ฃ love you so much
    Post soon
    See you

    With love,
    Urs Tamanna

    • Mia12

      Mia12

      |Author

      Areh tu sry kyu bol rai hai infect m happy ki tune cmnt toh kia pagal,โ˜บ and m soooo happy ki u like it,๐Ÿ˜Š. thank you soo much 4 reading it my nakhre queen,,๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜. Load’s of love,โคโค

  3. Aamna_2690

    Aamna_2690

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    Haye meri jaan๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
    ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’šโค๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’šโค๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’šโค
    Finally mein teri FF read kar pa rahi hun๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€
    I am so happy๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
    Jaan kya plot has yaar๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ
    loved it to the End of timesโคโค
    Yaar kya Likha tune๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„
    Tu toh mujhse bhi zyada Acchi writer nikli yaar๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
    Pata hai mein buhat din baad comment kar rahi hun Aur koi FF parh rahi hun๐Ÿ˜ค๐Ÿ˜ค
    lekin sabse pehli apni jaan ki parhi meine โ˜บโ˜บ
    Subha paper n college se pehle itna Accha suprise Mila na๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
    I am so HAPPY Yaar โ˜บโ˜บ
    Teri FF parhne ko mili na jaan๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜ŠMeine Bf se pehle yeh paraโ˜บโ˜บ
    N Episode ki baat karun tohโ˜บโ˜บ
    I am speechless jaan(yehi soch rahi haina ke itni bakbak karke yeh speechless hai๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚)
    Well Yaar it was superb๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ
    Awsum๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
    Fabulous ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜
    Marvellousโ˜บโ˜บ
    Lovely๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ n what not๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
    Just loved it yaarโคโค
    Hero ki Entry agle Episode mein Pakka karana๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…
    Aur Han Ab behosh mat hona๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ kyunki na….
    Mujhe na….
    Woh na….
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    TERA NEXT EPISODE JALDI CHAHIYE๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚
    JALDI POST KARNAโ˜บโ˜บ
    ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’šโค๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’™โค๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’™โค
    ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜
    LOVE U MERI JAAN๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜
    LOVE U BUHAT SAARA๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜
    TAKE CARE โ˜บโ˜บโ˜บ
    KEEP SMILING๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
    ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜
    โค๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’œโค๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’œโค๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’œ

    • Mia12

      Mia12

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      OMG M I DREAMING,๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜ฑ Meri jaaaaan tune cmnt kia kahi mai sapna toh nai dekh rai omg omg m sooooooooooooo much happy ki tu soch bhi nai sakti jaan,๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿ˜‹ ki teri yh lovely cmnt mere liye kya matter karti hai coz ur sooo much special 4 me๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ or tune bf se pehle yh read kia omg, or tu speecless nai hui jaan kyuki teri cmnt dekhke mai hi speechless ho gayi meri neend se uthke dekhna ke bad,๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ or tere liye to mai esehi surprise so ka phar na bana dun meri jaan, ๐Ÿ˜ sacchi mai itni special feel kar rai hun na ab ki bata no sakti tuje mai,๐Ÿ˜ tuje accha laga isse jeyada muje or kya cahiye jaan,๐Ÿ˜Šor haan mai behosh to ab bilkul nai hongi kyuki meri jaan jo parna chati h meri ff,๐Ÿ˜€ or haan mai jaldhi post karungi jaan, thank u 4 this cmnt jaan,๐Ÿ˜‹.. I LOVE U SO MUCH beyond of ur imagination jaan,โค๐Ÿ˜˜โค๐Ÿ˜˜โค๐Ÿ˜˜โค๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ’๐Ÿ’โคโค๐Ÿ’๐Ÿ’๐Ÿ’โคโค๐Ÿ’๐Ÿ’๐Ÿ’

  4. Viratian_wattoholic

    Viratian_wattoholic

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    Oyiiiiiiiiii itna acha..baap re mujhe bolts h main acha likhti hun..aur tu apne itna jhakkas likhti uska kya..acha tu toh janti h na main ajj kal bht bzy hun isiliye ajj chota comment se kaam chala le..episode was superb..aur next episode mein mere kunj yani mere sid ki entry kr dena…samjhi..

    Aur han..apna dhyaan rakhna..plzzzzz aur na main tijhe bht miss kr rhi hun..kabhi kabhi TU vizit kr rhi hun..plzzz insta mein account bana le..meri jaan..aur ek baat tune meri morning good bana di..apna ff post krke..chal bieeeeeee mujhe thodi deer mein tuition Jana h…

    Luv u meri jaan…soutan..
    Byee

    • Mia12

      Mia12

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      Oyeh meri janeman tune kia to cmnt its enough,๐Ÿ˜˜nd m so hppy ki teri mrng ban gyi meri epi se๐Ÿ˜‚n ha mai bhi jeyda visit ni krti TU..n about insta I’ll se, n i to miss u very much n u to plz tc ok,๐Ÿ˜’n don wry hero ki entry to dhaml se hogi,๐Ÿ˜Œ n I’ll try to post soon, Load’s of love,๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

  5. Ramya

    Ramya

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    Jaan
    Awesome amazing Superb episode that

    Per twinkle ke ankhon mai aasu kyu

    Vaise ita superb awesome abhi l liye choti comment sry
    But it’s just superb
    Love u keep smiling

    • Mia12

      Mia12

      |Author

      Hey jantus, its ok tumne cmnt kia to its enough, nd m sooo happy ki u like it,โ˜บโ˜บ n twinkle ke anko par ansu kyu wo to pata chal jeyga jaldhi, till den wait, n Load’s of love,๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

  6. Sameera

    Sameera

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    Wow yaar priyaa finally u started ur own ff loveddddddd it yAAR SOOOO happy too see writing of urs ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜..
    Will be waiting for next cont do cont soon…

    • Mia12

      Mia12

      |Author

      Hey Samy ji, m soo happy to see ur cmnt in my ff,n m glad u like it,๐Ÿ˜€ n ha finally I started,๐Ÿ˜‚ keep reading, Loads of love,๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

  7. Sohi

    Sohi

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    Episode was amazing Priya
    Yaar tum kitni Bak Bak karti ho ๐Ÿ˜œ
    Finally u posted 1st episode
    Try to give dialogues
    Get well soon dear
    Do continue and post soon
    Bye

    • Mia12

      Mia12

      |Author

      Haa kya tuje abhi pata chala ki mai kitni bakbak karti hun,๐Ÿ˜‚ par kya kare tu no karti hai to muje hi karna parta h,๐Ÿ˜‚ n ha yh toh start h epi 1 ka or dialogue bhi dungi yrr, till den wait, Load’s of love,,๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

  8. Cp

    Yay๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ’•amazing for the first try๐Ÿ˜and exited for hero ke entry …and yaa please give monologues and dialogue๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰post soon ๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•

    • Mia12

      Mia12

      |Author

      Thank u so much 4 liking it Cp, n it was just start of 1st epi n yeah I’ll give dialogue also, keep reading,๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

    • Mia12

      Mia12

      |Author

      Aww my sweaty lovely di, m so much happy that u like it di, haa I’ll try to post soon, Load’s of love,๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

  9. Fatimaa.

    Fatimaa.

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    Hayeee sweetheart..
    Kya epi tha…matlab ekdam dhamakedar….
    Ab jaldi hero ki entry v karade….
    Aur zyada wait na karana…thik h…..post soon meri jaan…
    Love uโคโคโคโคโค๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜š

    • Mia12

      Mia12

      |Author

      Haye my fattu, m so glad ki u like it, n ovio hero ki entry to dhmal se hogi, till den wait, Load’s of love,๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

  10. Amaya Bhardwaj

    Hey priyaaaaa,
    It was soooooo amazing superb lovely episode yrrr…..
    Maine tera prologue Ni padha h MAAF Kr de Uske liye Tym Ni Mila…..Wo I HV a very busy schedule 3 Ttn and uspr SE cllg Tym Ni Milta….Or ufff uper SE ye Garmi….Band Baja Rakhi h meri….. Isliye Ni padh payi…TOH Kya Tu mujhe uska link provide Kr Sakti h …..
    I am so so happy that u r writing….
    Eagerly waiting for your next episode jaan….. and for our hero’s entry….
    Yiepee…. Finally next episode m hero ki entry hogi….
    Post Krna bhul mat Jaana next episode…..

    LOADS of loveeeee to u ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜
    Plz post soon
    Do continue
    Keep smiling
    ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

    • Mia12

      Mia12

      |Author

      Aww koi bat nai amaya tu sirf read karna ok yhi kafi hai mere liye,โ˜บ or ha re is garmi ne to meri bhi band baja rakhi hai yrr,๐Ÿ˜” Thank you soo much 4 liking it m soo hppy yrr,, n hero ki entry to dhmal se hoga,๐Ÿ˜Œ but i don no ki link kese dete h, but u can read it also tei page3,4 ok..n ha I’ll try to post soon till den wait, Load’s of love,,๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

  11. tania

    Really it’s so sweet,,, just loved it,,!! Well done priyaa,,, it’s superb,,, OK next epi per jorur hero ka entry korwana,,, post soon my dear,,!!!! And exactly jada wait nahi korwana hame,,,love youuuuu,,dear

    • Mia12

      Mia12

      |Author

      Thank you soooo much 4 liking it n also m happy happy that u cmnted,โ˜บ ha hero ki entry ho jayegi, till den wait, Load’s of love,๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

  12. Sidhanshi

    Wowww yaar priya… What an epi.. Loved it.. Maito teri fan bangai buddy… Next epi mey kunju ki entry jaroor karwana okay… Aur iss bar comment padhke behosh mat hona… Kiuki eisa hua to behosh hona tera daily routine ban jayega… Aur ham log rt ki tarha tension me ajayenge.. Love u yaar.. Keep writing like this.. Waiting for the next epi.. Aur iss bar vul mat jana.. Jaldi post karna okay… Bye..

    • Mia12

      Mia12

      |Author

      Haa areh bapareh sacchi esa kya tum meri fan wow,๐Ÿ˜ฑ well thank you soooo much that u like it m so happy,โ˜บn ha kunj ki entry to dhmal se hoga,or ha mai behosh he kese na hun tum log Jo itni pyar dete ho,๐Ÿ˜or ha ab nai bhulung or jaldhi post karungi,๐Ÿ˜‚till den wait, Load’s of love,๐Ÿ˜˜โ˜บ

  13. SidMin

    SidMin

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    Loved it … cute episode…
    Loved the bond Chinki Leela and Twinkle share
    Love you post soon โค

    • Mia12

      Mia12

      |Author

      Thank you soooo much Mili jii 4 liking it m soo happy,,๐Ÿ˜ yeah I’ll try to post soon,โ˜บ till den wait, Load’s of love,๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜โค

  14. Twinj

    Twinj

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    Oh god chocopie
    Tune tOH aagh lagadi…saach may it was mindblowing….
    Twinkle ki bhi barhe ahyegi woh toh hae….par hero kaha hae hamara bunny kaha hae…
    Uska entry agli epi may nai itna intazaar…gosh…aabh jaldi post karliyo warna teri kher nai…
    Tu likti hae lajawab…tujhe sandals deneka maan tha par teri writing pe may fida hogayi…
    KYA LIKTI HAE…POST VERY SOON…TAKE CARE..

    Loads of love
    Twinj

    • Mia12

      Mia12

      |Author

      Hayee meri akku mene agg lagadi seriously agg to tune lagadi meri ganda se ff par cmnt karke,,๐Ÿ˜Œ m so hppy yrr ki tune itni busy scheduled mai bhi hoke cmnt kia mere liye,,๐Ÿ˜€ n ha hero ki entry to dhaml se hoga n ok or ab dhmki mat de mai jadhi post karungi or long wala ok.๐Ÿ˜‚till den wait.. Load’s of love,,๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

  15. Shalini15

    Shalini15

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    Hi meri badmash CC dekh kaun aaya hai๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œ itna bakbak karti hai lekin episode itna chotu sa ๐Ÿ˜Œ๐Ÿ˜Œ so bad. Par koi nahi itna acha episode likha hai ki dil khush kar ditta tune mera. Loved it so much. It was awesome amazing fabulous episode. Next episode mein hero ki entry karwa diyo๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

    Chal ab bye
    Love you lots ๐Ÿ˜— ๐Ÿ˜— ๐Ÿ˜— ๐Ÿ˜— ๐Ÿ˜— ๐Ÿ˜— ๐Ÿ˜— ๐Ÿ˜— ๐Ÿ˜—

    • Mia12

      Mia12

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      Omgggg didu,๐Ÿ˜ƒ M very much happy didu to see ur cmnt in my ganda sa ff,,๐Ÿ˜€ or kya kare apki hi badmash nanhi hun na isliye itni bakbak karti hun,,๐Ÿ˜‚ n don wry hero ki entry dhmal se hoga๐Ÿ˜‰, n next epi bhtt long bhi hoga, till den wait n Load’s of love,,โค ur Cc..๐Ÿ˜˜

  16. Baby

    Baby

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    my jaan ohhooo my jaan…………..โ˜บ
    my angel……..my hubby……….mera shonaa….. hehe
    yrrr.r……kya likha tha apni is wifey apni biwi ko maaf krde srriee yrr….late hun…….I knw bhooottt……bt u knw d rsn ryt……….
    loved it……….it was sooooo sooooooooo cute………โ˜บโ˜บโ˜บ
    jst lovely n adorable……. ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ™‚

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