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Yeh dooriyan (Episode 6) (portrait)

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Yeh dooriyan

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Previous part
Yeh dooriyan Episode 5
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Recap: Swara’s first day at job

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It has been almost a monthly since she has started working in mm… She is sharing a good bond with ragini… Here sanskar too started feeling something new with her presence … No itz not love.. But a unique peace.. A unique positivity he feels whenever she is around…
Her habbit of coming early and waiting till 8 doesn’t change… As soon as clock strikes 8 she bells the door..

Sanskar was walking to and fro in his room he was reading a file.. As soon As she steps in MM he stopped walking and an smile appeared on his face unknowingly

(( Dehleez pe mere dil ki
Jo rakhe hain tune kadam
Tere naam pe meri zindagi
Likh di mere humdum

Haan seekha maine jeena jeena kaise jeena
Haan seekha maine jeena mere humdum
Na seekha kabhi jeena jeena kaise jeena
Na seekha jeena tere bina humdum
Dehleez pe merey dil ki
Jo rakhe hain tune kadam
Tere naam pe meri zindagi
Likh di mere humdum
Haan sikha maine jeena jeena kaise jeena
Haan sikha maine jeena, mere humdum
Na sikha kabhi jeena jeena kaise jeena
Na sikha jeena tere bina humdum))

She came in n saw ragini in tension “ragini mam what happened”

“swara thank god u came.. Come n help me”ragini drags swara

“mam.. Just a min mai Annapurna mam ko medicine de ke aati hoon” swara said

“beta u go with her vese b laksh has already given me medicine “ap said

Here swara was confused…
Ragini took her to room.. N handed her a packet

“swara plz wear this” ragini said

Swara look at the dress and her eyes pop out “no mam.. I can’t” swara denies

This dress
https://www.google.co.in/imgres?imgurl=http%3A%2F%2Fdzasv7x7a867v.cloudfront.net%2Fproduct_photos%2F36681879%2FXX13_original.jpg&imgrefurl=http%3A%2F%2Fmeetdresses.storenvy.com%2Fcollections%2F896118-prom-dresses&docid=Pyy-GTluKQmQUM&tbnid=hyL_rcV2otceLM%3A&w=640&h=640&bih=460&biw=320&ved=0ahUKEwiezMfkiu7MAhUGvo8KHXF4D_wQMwgoKAYwBg&iact=mrc&uact=8

“swara I hv designed this specially for you and u are saying like this “ragini pouts

” mam Plz.. I.. I don’t wear these dresses ” swara says..

” if you can’t wear this.. Then I hv no more option” ragini said n left

“sanskar!!! Sanskar!!! ” ragini shouts

” what happened ragini.. Why are you shouting “sanskar asked

By the time swara too came there

” sanskar pay her salary and fire her from job.. ” ragini said

” what” sanskar was shocked

Ap n laksh were smiling secretly… N tears starts to flow from Swara’s eyes…

“are u insane ragini ” sanskar said

” nopes.. . “she said

” but mam.. Mne kia kya hai.. “she ask while sobbing

” u r not taking that dress which I have designed for you” ragini said

Sanskar gives her “are u serious” look

“u hv two options either take that dress or leave the job” ragini said

“I will take the dress” she finally agrees

“swara beta go and bring breakfast “ap orders her

Swara left

“ragini are you crazy… U know na she needs a job badly.. N u were asking me to fire her just cz she denies to take ur dress” sanskar frowned

“actually bhai.. Ragini has listened her talks with her friend ” laksh said

****FLASHBACK ****

A week earlier

Swara was dusting ap’s room.. Then she got a call she puts the call on speaker as her hands were dirty

” hello janvi”

“hi swara.. swara meri engagement hai ek week baad n u hv to come”

“wow yaar congrats.. Achha who is my jiju.. ”

” vo.. Sharad roy.. That diamond merchant ”

” oh wow.. Achha I will try to come.. As my mum is not well”

“okay swara take care n plz try to come ”

Swara hung up the call n says to herself” sry bhagwan ji I lied to her but what to do.. She is getting married to a diamond merchant there must be very rich people with expensive clothes.. N I don’t have any such cloths.. U know na bhagwan ji.. I don’t want her to he embarrassed cz of me”

Ragini listen to this.. N decides to design a dress for swara

****FLASHBACK ENDS ****

“oh m sry ragini… N thanks for helping her ” sanskar apologizes..

” kya sanskar I luv her.. That’s why I does this” ragini said…

Swara came with breakfast and tea.. And sanskar as usual left some food in his plate… Swara was noticing his habbit since long but today she can’t stop herself from pointing out him

“sanskar sir u should not disrespect food ” she said politely

” what do u mean.. Mne kab disrespect kia” sanskar Ask in shock

“now.. Look at ur plate u left so much food… This is disrespecting sir ” swara says

” are but I hvnt throw this.. So hw I disrespected this” he is still confused

“sir leaving unfinished food in plate is itself disrespecting the food” swara said

“really ” he confirmed

” Yup.. Look by the almighty’s grace u are leading a prosperous life.. But there are many people who doesn’t even know when will they eat next” swara recalls a past incident

****FLASHBACK ****
Swara was 8 yrs old… She along with shekhar n sumi came to Delhi…

They were sitting at a dhabha as they hv just came here n hv no accommodation.. Shekhar checked money in his pocket and orders 4 rotis…

2 were eaten by swara and 1- 1 each by sumi n shekhar

“shekhar buy some rotis for swara.. So that she can hv that in evening “sumi says

” ya u are right ” shekhar checks that he hv only money to buy two rotis..

He was about to buy but swara stopped him” papa.. Don’t buy.. I am full I don’t need any chapati ”

Shekhar n sumi’s eyes filled with tears seeing this much maturity in their 8yr old daughter

” m sry shona.. Ur papa can’t even give u a good LIFE ” he hugs swara n cries

” I don’t need anything papa.. I just need u n mumma” little swara said while wiping his tears

****FLASHBACK ENDS ****

“swara where you lost ” laksh said

” no where sir” swara saya with a smile..

It was noon.. Sanskar came home early and shouts “maa.. Maa.. Where are u..”

Swara came listening to his shouts..

“sir shh mam is sleeping.. Tell me aapko kya chahiye ” swara asked him

” kya!! Ragini ya laksh koi hai”sanskar ask with puppy face

” ji nhi sir” swara said

“now what to do ” sanskar said childishly

” may I help you sir “she offers help

” do u know how to tie a tie “he said in low voice

Swara looks at him shockingly

” tie bandhna aata hai tumhe” he shouts

She nodded

“c.A.N . Y.O.U t.H.E.N” he ask hesitantly

“sir dp is is also at home.. He must kno”she tries to avoid

“aree meri ma. Dad ko mat bol.. He would literally kill me.. If he comes to know that abhi tak mujhe tie bandhna nhi ata” he pleads

She giggles seeing n finally agrees

@sanskar’s room

She was tieing the tye around his neck.. Very carefully that her hands doesn’t touch his face or neck… Sanskar keeps on looking at her face..

Then Annapurna calls her

“swara u go.. N thnku” sanskar said with smile

She nodded and left

“ji mam.. U called. Me”sera ask

“ha beta.. Can u take this portrait to study ” ap said

” sure mam” she took the portrait

She was thinking “I hv seen this portrait but where…”

She entered study and give that to dp… She was going but she stopped and asked” sir may I ask you something ”

” of course swara ” dp says

” who has made this portrait ” swara ask

” me n my best friend… When we were in college we made two portraits exactly like this.. One for him n one for me” dp says with teary eyes

“oh.. U must be very good friends na.. Where he is now” swara asked with curiosity

“in my heart ” dp says with a heavy heart

” m sry sir mujhe aapse se nahi puchna chahiye tha ” and she left

To be continued…

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57 Comments

  1. Pammy on May 23, 2016 11:27 am

    Hey its nice dear….nd i thnk dp’s frnd z non other than shekar

    • Meher on May 24, 2016 1:51 pm

      Let’s see who is his friend

  2. sriya on May 23, 2016 11:28 am

    awesome meher loved it

    • Meher on May 24, 2016 1:51 pm

      Tysm baby

  3. stoneheart on May 23, 2016 11:35 am

    tie wala scene mast tha.. don’t tell me dp and shekhar were frnds.. really ??
    that dress was too pretty..!
    love you meher..u noe I was thinking of keeping a pet name for u like meheru..bt then dropped it ..u know I realised it sounded like meru cab.. uhhgghh.. weird me..
    anyways waiting for next ..

    • Meher on May 24, 2016 1:53 pm

      No m mt telling u anything ??

      Ya that dress was ??

      U can call me meheru there is no meru cab ??? u r not weird than me… ??

      Luv u loads

  4. swarna on May 23, 2016 11:54 am

    I think dat man must b shekhar

    • Meher on May 24, 2016 1:53 pm

      Let’s see kon hai

  5. Sree on May 23, 2016 11:56 am

    Very sweet ep di. Ragini’s love for swara was very nice but i am not able to open the link di 🙁 tie scene was very cute actually i am thinking about that scene still now cuz the sanky asked was veryyy cute. Aapka pati jo hai. I daily read ur sautan vs sautan talks and i am loving it. 😉 i think dp and shekar r friends,am i r8? Love u di

    • Meher on May 24, 2016 1:55 pm

      https://www.google.co.in/imgres?imgurl=http%3A%2F%2Fdzasv7x7a867v.cloudfront.net%2Fproduct_photos%2F36681879%2FXX13_original.jpg&imgrefurl=http%3A%2F%2Fmeetdresses.storenvy.com%2Fcollections%2F896118-prom-dresses&docid=Pyy-GTluKQmQUM&tbnid=hyL_rcV2otceLM%3A&w=640&h=640&bih=460&biw=320&ved=0ahUKEwiezMfkiu7MAhUGvo8KHXF4D_wQMwgoKAYwBg&iact=mrc&uact=8

      Le Ab dekh le… Yup mere pati ko nazar mt laga ?

    • Sree on May 24, 2016 2:08 pm

      That dress is very pretty. Nice choice di. Aakir di kiski ho 😉

    • Meher on May 24, 2016 2:12 pm

      Thnku n kiski di hoon… Mujhe nhi pta ?????

  6. Kittu on May 23, 2016 12:08 pm

    Its means dp n shekher r frnds wow dats gud.. Waiting fr nxt

    • Meher on May 24, 2016 1:55 pm

      No it doesn’t mean that ???

  7. JANVI on May 23, 2016 12:09 pm

    tie wala scene was awsm meher…
    u made my day by ur updates….
    n cherry on d cake is u ysed my name fr swaras frnd…..
    i knw tht was a sheer coincidence bt i really luvd it….
    thanks fr d updates dear…
    keep smiling….

    • Meher on May 24, 2016 1:56 pm

      Aww tysm
      That was the first name which came to my mind… ???

      Keep reading

  8. Haai(sree) on May 23, 2016 12:14 pm

    I think dp nd shekhar were frnds
    Sanskar doesn’t knw he 2 tie a tie(lol)

    • Meher on May 24, 2016 1:57 pm

      Nopes even I too don’t know how to tie a tie ??

  9. Serena on May 23, 2016 12:25 pm

    Fantastic it was…???…swara has really faced very bad time…n I think friend is non other than shekhar…and today first time I admired ragini..which can only happen in fictional world????

    • Meher on May 24, 2016 1:58 pm

      Why so ?
      I luv ragini alot… N more than that I luv teju ???

  10. anu on May 23, 2016 12:33 pm

    awesome… dp friend is shekar i think…

    • Meher on May 24, 2016 1:58 pm

      Thnku let’s see who is his friend

  11. Purvi on May 23, 2016 12:50 pm

    So Dp and shekhar are frnds….. Tie wala scene was superb…… Continue soon…….

    • Meher on May 24, 2016 1:58 pm

      Thnku so much dear

  12. sneha on May 23, 2016 1:11 pm

    Nice one…nd tie wala part ws too cute..

    • Meher on May 24, 2016 1:59 pm

      Thnku ??

  13. Priya tripathi on May 23, 2016 1:30 pm

    Awesome meher

    • Meher on May 24, 2016 1:59 pm

      Thnku

  14. Neha on May 23, 2016 1:35 pm

    Hey is shekhar and dp friends means I think swara might have seen the portrait in her house…. And ragini is really sweet she designed a dress for her but what a threatening yaar …..so sanskar has soft corner for swara… Lovely

    • Meher on May 24, 2016 2:00 pm

      May be may not be…

      Yup jhatkaaa tha… Threat se zada ??

  15. soujanya on May 23, 2016 1:49 pm

    awesome………..

    • Meher on May 24, 2016 2:02 pm

      Tysm

  16. kaynat khan on May 23, 2016 2:18 pm

    awesome dear

    • Meher on May 24, 2016 2:02 pm

      Thnku

  17. maya on May 23, 2016 2:34 pm

    nice yarrr

    • Meher on May 24, 2016 2:04 pm

      Tysm

  18. Dharsha on May 23, 2016 2:52 pm

    Well….I dunno what to say???
    Par how can u write so sweetly…..???
    Ya….really this was choco chweet and cute with the diary milk silk am having right now???…….
    Yummy…..not only chocy but also chappy???
    And I will not share with u now???coz I can’t na???……
    Loving ragini here…..such a dramabaaz?
    And sanky so ??…..
    Overall amazing chappy ???

    • Meher on May 24, 2016 2:06 pm

      U said this much when you don’t know what to say ????????

      I want chocy or else I will be katta ?

      Ragini is a dramebaz but not more than you ????

  19. shan on May 23, 2016 3:14 pm

    its awesome…..I think its shekar

    • Meher on May 24, 2016 2:07 pm

      Thnku n lets see kon h

  20. Rey on May 23, 2016 3:26 pm

    dp nd shekar r best frnds nyc 2 hear dis nd poor sanky… upload nxt part soon dear

    • Meher on May 24, 2016 2:08 pm

      Thnku n will upload soon

  21. Nita on May 23, 2016 4:10 pm

    awesome baby….. i likes swaragini’s bonding…. n tgat tie wala scene was so sweet….. n in the potrait that other man in the potrait with dp must be shekhar…..

    • Meher on May 24, 2016 2:08 pm

      Thnku n lets see???

  22. kumu. on May 23, 2016 4:37 pm

    nyc..:)

    • Meher on May 24, 2016 2:09 pm

      Thnku

  23. Abdul hafiz(uma). on May 23, 2016 4:39 pm

    Superb. Sanky ko tie banna nehi ata, lol.I guess shekar and dp are frnds( my guessing skill is very bad, lol).

    • Meher on May 24, 2016 2:12 pm

      Nhi ata to kya hua ? n let’s see ??

  24. Gowri on May 23, 2016 4:43 pm

    Awesome

    • Meher on May 24, 2016 2:13 pm

      Thnku

  25. Anu Ann on May 23, 2016 4:44 pm

    Awesome dear

    • Meher on May 24, 2016 2:13 pm

      Thnku

  26. Shagun on May 24, 2016 3:21 pm

    I think his friend is shekhar
    Sorry for not commenting in last ep
    Awesome

    • Meher on May 24, 2016 11:44 pm

      Don’t be sorry baby..

      Let’s see k kon hai friend

  27. Kavya on May 24, 2016 5:15 pm

    Loved it!? I think tht frnd is shekhar just guessing?

    • Meher on May 24, 2016 11:44 pm

      Thnku..
      Let’s see

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