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Yeh dooriyan (Episode 10) ( fear)

administratorBy administratorMay 29, 201655 Comments7 Mins Read
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Yeh dooriyan

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Previous part

Episode 9

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Recap : laksh sent swara n sanskar to faridabad fir arranging small party for ragini… Sanskar panics seeing swara missing

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She starts to walk but each step was difficult for her…. Suddenly a car stopped infront of her n she got shocked…. And starts to sweat… She was afraid of the person sitting in car….

The person step out of car n swara starts to move back.. She wants to scream but couldn’t.. His face was covered with a mask and had a knife in hand

“w-what u want” swara hardly say

Finally she fell on road… That man was about to stab her n she screamed “aaaaaahhhhhhh ???”
But suddenly someone pulled her… And they both roll down the road…
After that both get up n swara said “sanskar sir”

And hugged him tightly..” sshhh don’t cry m here na.. Kuch nhi hua..”

“u know how much I was scared “she said while sobbing

” mera bachha m here stop crying u r safe Now ” sanskar cares her hair n tried to calm her down

After a while she was sound… He shouts” are u crazy who told u to go home alone at this point of time.. U know itz not safe ”

” I want to go home.. “she said innocently

” why… Are we vampires who will suck ur blood if u stayed at our farmhouse for one night ” he continues

” sir a night matters alot.. My mum is not at home… U don’t know our society they will not take even a minute to bad mouth about my Character “she said calmly

Sanskar too found her talks sensible and agreed to drops her at home..

@car

Swara was still scared of that moment she was shivering (like someone has putted her on vibration mode??)

” swara everything is fine Now ” sanskar said

” hmm ” that all she can say

” do u know him”he asked

“obviously yes… He was my hubby “swara said in irritation

” swara “he said Lil bit angrily

” ok fine.. Sir obviously I don’t know who was he and why he wants to kill me… “swara said to him

Sanskar kept on thinking about that incident n soon they reached her home” lo tumhara ghar aa gya ” he said

” thanku sir”she said n left.
“swara ” he shouts

” yes sir”she asked in gesture

“take care… “he said

Swara smile n left

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NEXT DAY

@KOLKATA

Sumi reached a bungalow… She took a deep breath and rang the bell

” yes whom do u wanna meet” servent asked her

“I wanna meet ur badi malkin “sumi said

” aap kon ” servant again enquired

” tell her that sharmishtha wants to meet Her ” sumi said

Servant went in n inform an old lady about sumi’s arrival
” tell her that I don’t want to meet Her ” that old lady said..

Servant nods n told sumi that she is denieng to meet her

” I am not going anywhere until u meet me… And itz final ” sumi shouts and sat at the door

Itz noon n still no one has came to sumi n she is sitting at door… Then a car stopped infront of her… A tall man of 27 stepped out of the car… And Removes his shades and looked at sumi.. He touched her feet… With his sudden action sumi got shocked

“beta m sry I didn’t recognize you ” sumi said

” aapne aapne golu ko nahi pehchana” he said

“golu.. U r my golu.. U hv grown up smartly “sumi’s eyes welled with tears and she hugged him

” but u r still killing beautiful chachi “he winks

” naughty ” sumi hits him playfully

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@MM

Sanskar came home in evening as ap n dp are leaving for jaipur to attend a family wedding… His eyes scans the house n found swara no where

” mom where is swara “he asked

” she didn’t come today Beta ” ap said

” what!!! ” sanskar asked in shock.. Then round of bad thoughts go throw his mind

” any problem sanskar “dp asked

” no dad nothing ” sanskar said

Then dp n ap bid goodbye to all and as soon as they left
Sanskar panics” laksh m going to see swara… Something is nt well ”

“are are wait… WHat happened bhai… Y r u so tensed… Hoga koi kaam use.. Don’t worry she will come tmrw “laksh said casually

” no lucky u r not getting me.. Vo ” he explains about that incident

” what!!! ” both raglak were shocked

” sanskar wait.. Even I will come with u” ragini said

Sanskar nods n both left

@SWARA’S HOME

The door was locked from inside.. Sanskar somehow manages to enter in her room from back window… Then he open the gate n ragini too went in…

“where is swara… Kaha ja sakti hai “ragini said

” no no ragini.. She will be here only Door was locked from in” sanskar said

Both searches the room n kitchen n even bathroom but swara was no where to be found…

“Damn.. Where she is “he bang his fist on cupboard

With the shock the door of cupboard opened n both got shocked to see swara there..

” swara ” sanskar immediately took her in his embrace

” oh god ragini she Is burning in fear “sanskar said in concern

” sanskar we should take her with us.. We can’t leave her here “ragini said

Both with lots of hardwork took swara to the car without get noticed by anyone.

@MM

Swara was lying on bed n sanskar was holding her hand…

” it seems she is scared of something… N thats the only reason of this fever ” doc said

” doctor… Nothing is serious na.. She… She is fine na “sanskar asked him

” no.. Nothing is serious but the she will face weakness for few days take care of her and give her proper rest… And these medicines “doctor handed a prescription and left

” bhai i’ll take medicines “laksh said n left…

” ragini plz bring cold water… Putting wet bandages would affect more ” sanskar said to ragini n she left

Ragini give him waters n he puts wet bandages on her forehead…

She got her senses in midnight… N as soon as she open her eyes she got scared seeing new place.. But she found a grip on her hands and found sanskar sleeping peacefully on her hand…. She immediately removes her hand resulting in waking him up

“swara hwz u feeling now… U scared me like Like hell ” he said and put a hand on her forehead to check fever

” sir please “she shove his hand

Sanskar was confused… She immediately get up from bed… ” swara u need rest.. Plz ” he said

” no sir I hv to go to home.. “she said

” swara stop… Whats your problem haan… U were burning in fever so I took u here for ur betterment Only ” sanskar shouts

Listening his voice Raglak to came there

” for god sake.. Please stop thinking about my betterment sir” she fold her hands infront of him.

“swara behave urself… Atlest don’t shout on bhai… U were i’ll that’s why he brought u here” laksh said

“I didn’t ask him to take care of me laksh sir… Sanskar sir ko kya farak padta hai ke main maru ya jiyu or pdta bhi hai toh nahi padna chahiye “she said

” swaraaa!!! Don’t you dare to say like that again…. Samjhi ” sanskar held her shoulder tightly and shouts…

A fear.. A pain is evident in his eyes… But the feeling is still new for both of them….

To be continued…

Sry for short update as I hv relatives at my place…

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55 Comments

  1. kumu on May 29, 2016 4:31 pm

    nyc epi..:)

    • Meher on May 29, 2016 4:48 pm

      Thnku

  2. Shagun on May 29, 2016 4:36 pm

    Awesome

    • Meher on May 29, 2016 8:52 pm

      Thnku

  3. soujanya on May 29, 2016 4:43 pm

    awesome….update soon

    • Meher on May 29, 2016 8:52 pm

      Thnku… Will try to update soon

  4. Hope on May 29, 2016 4:45 pm

    Suspence pe chod diya?!! Not fair…

    • Meher on May 29, 2016 8:53 pm

      Hehehe… Itz first suspense of this ff na

  5. Nita on May 29, 2016 4:47 pm

    babu its awesome…… i just loved it…… the way sanky is caring for swara n falling for her….. lovely…..
    wase, is swara going away from sanky because of Ap in today’s episode also or some other reason??? n who is this person who wants to kill swara?? usne kisi ka kya bigada hoga??? pase wali bhi nahi hai…
    n that old lady seems to be MIL of sumi….
    n in last episode y did laksh say ke swati ka asli chehra pata jalega????

    omg so many question….. but u have to answer each one of them…..

    • Meher on May 29, 2016 9:04 pm

      Reason will soon be reviled…

      Kya bigada hai ye bhi jaldi pta chalega…

      Old lady kon hai ye kl pta chalega.. Dhamake ke sath…

      Swati ka bhi scene theek nhi hai ????

    • Nita on May 30, 2016 6:06 am

      in short tum kuch nahi bata rahi….

  6. Sree on May 29, 2016 4:54 pm

    Bhabhi seems like a new twist . Konsa bhi twist ho agar swasan pas athe hai toh main bohot kush hun. BTW vibrating mood was very nice?? poor sanky apne feelings ko bhi samaj nahi paraha hai?? try to post nxt soon

    • Meher on May 29, 2016 9:05 pm

      Dekhte hai kya hota hai… Devar ji…

      Will try to update soon

  7. Shipra on May 29, 2016 5:01 pm

    Hi di. Episode was nice. But I have a question in this FF Ap & Dp is in Positive or Negative role..Love U lots Di and Happy Birthday Eva Di.. May God Bless you. And U write more ff. BTW when is your birthday Di…

    • Meher on May 29, 2016 9:06 pm

      Hello smriti ??

      Both will be positive…

      My b’day??!

  8. Nita on May 29, 2016 5:09 pm

    happy birthday Eva….. enjoy ur day…..

  9. aanya on May 29, 2016 5:10 pm

    Superb

    • Meher on May 29, 2016 9:06 pm

      Thnku

  10. Purvi on May 29, 2016 5:21 pm

    Why is swara scared????? Where is sumi????? Continue soon……

    • Meher on May 29, 2016 9:06 pm

      Sumi is in Kolkata ??

  11. kaynat khan on May 29, 2016 5:24 pm

    awesome dear loved it

    • Meher on May 29, 2016 9:07 pm

      Thnku so much

  12. anu on May 29, 2016 5:25 pm

    awesome..

    • Meher on May 29, 2016 9:07 pm

      Thnku

  13. jasmine on May 29, 2016 5:54 pm

    Awesome episode di…..loved it.post the next epi soon.
    Happy bday eve

    • Meher on May 29, 2016 9:07 pm

      Thnku dear…

      Will try to post soon

  14. stoneheart on May 29, 2016 6:44 pm

    ahem ahem… new feeling and all …badiya hai

    • Meher on May 29, 2016 9:08 pm

      Haanjiii ??

  15. L Khan on May 29, 2016 6:47 pm

    Loved it ❤

    • Meher on May 29, 2016 9:08 pm

      Tysm

  16. Aditi Singh on May 29, 2016 6:57 pm

    Plzzz@ give the next part soon… .?
    ?
    ??Great!
    ?

    • Meher on May 29, 2016 9:08 pm

      Thnku.. Will try to update soon

  17. Abdul hafiz(uma). on May 29, 2016 6:59 pm

    Aww, cho cute chappy.Sanky ne shona ko ‘mera baccha’bulaya, aww, loved it.Idiot sanky abhi tak usne apna feelings samaz nehi paya.Waiting for nxt.

    • Meher on May 29, 2016 9:09 pm

      Yup that was so adorable….

      Whenever laksh calls ragini mera bachha.. I go crazy ????

  18. Dhara on May 29, 2016 7:30 pm

    Superb ?

    • Meher on May 29, 2016 9:10 pm

      Thnku di

  19. Dharsha on May 29, 2016 8:24 pm

    Fear is the only word I am afraid of???
    Ya…but to say truly I am reading this chappy with fear and shivering really?
    I must say it’s a really good good chappy….
    Enjoyed with fear…..the unknown fear?

    • Meher on May 29, 2016 9:11 pm

      Thnku so much…
      For having fear ???

  20. Niku on May 29, 2016 8:32 pm

    update d next part soon..

    • Meher on May 29, 2016 9:11 pm

      Thnku.. Will try soon

  21. MM( Menaz) on May 29, 2016 8:57 pm

    Nice.

    • Meher on May 29, 2016 9:11 pm

      Thnku

  22. Neha on May 29, 2016 9:13 pm

    Just one word amazing…. Fabulous now who’s this golu ahhh again suspense

    • Meher on May 29, 2016 11:11 pm

      U will soon to know about that golu

  23. Anu Ann on May 29, 2016 9:28 pm

    Nice dear

    • Meher on May 29, 2016 11:12 pm

      Thnku

  24. Ankita on May 29, 2016 10:09 pm

    Hi Meher I m silent reader of ur all ff …..but I can’t stop myself to comment …..I think swara father n dp are friend…..n swara belongs to rich family she don’t have any idea that’s way someone try to kill her bcoz of property…sumi go to meet family members

    • Meher on May 29, 2016 11:13 pm

      Hello ankita

      M glad that you lyk it….

      N soon u will get to know about that man ?

      Keep reading

  25. sonu on May 29, 2016 11:35 pm

    its really awsome ur both ff r fabulous … just waiting fr swasan.. update nxt part asap

    • Meher on May 30, 2016 4:39 pm

      Thnku so much dear

  26. Serena on May 30, 2016 8:24 am

    Hi Di,sorry for late comment…actually now days m bit lazy…coming to chappy …I don’t think I need to say….????asUsual AWESOME…

    • Meher on May 30, 2016 4:40 pm

      Thnku so much shukla ji?

  27. shan on May 30, 2016 8:49 am

    awesome…..loved it

    • Meher on May 30, 2016 4:40 pm

      Thnku

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