The Written Love To You-Part 5

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Hey there….I am really sorry as I couldn’t write more…I tried but the system rejected my story…so I shorten it….

Lets Begin…

At that moment Nirmala interrupted them.
Nirmala: I am so sorry..Tia..but Karan and Naina have to complete an important rasam…
She called out Naina who is in deep thinking…
Nirmala: Naina…Hello Naina
Naina still did not respond…so Nirmala slowly went to Karan and ask him what happen to Naina..
Nirmala: What happen to your beloved wife???

Karan gave a blurred look…
He slowly went to Naina and touch her shoulder while calling out her name loudly.
Karan: NAINA…NAINA
Naina: Hah…I am here…Why…What happen…did the sky fall down
Karan:No..my life is falling into pieces…
Naina did not respond still…
Karan: What’s wrong with you..always day dream…dreamer…
Khyati: Enough…faster go..Meghnal and Kunal went to their room already..what are you waiting for…huh…
Naina: Oh..ok…can I ask for what??
Khyati: Your first night…
Naina and Karan: WHAT… FIRST NIGHT!!!
Khayati(While showing the way of Karan ‘s room): Relax…Do not worry about anything…
Naina(In her heart):What shall I do…I am scared….Nevermind I shall try asking Meghna didi…but maybe she is busy…hmmm…why don’t I just try
She quickly took out her phone…

Naina quickly messaged her sister…
Naina: Didi…what must I do….I am feeling very scared..
Meghnal(after a few minutes):No worries….relax…bye…do not disturb me…i am busy…
Naina(while walking slowly with Karan):Why do I have to do this…Nevermind…Its Karan only what…
Karan(In his mind):What have I done in life…
They reached the door of Karan ‘s room….
Khyati: Good luck guys…
Karan and Naina looked at each and other….

TO BE CONTINUED….

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7 Comments
  1. Minerva

    Lovely episode.
    The awkwardness and doubts nurtured by naina give this story a truly realistic touch and feel. Her expressions, words and acts are sureshot successes in depicting her naive-ness in such situations. Meghna’s curt reply and karan’s looks complimented her anxiety in a great way. The story really has a refreshing feel to it which is seriously amazing.

  2. Minerva

    Dear jayshree,
    This is to state that the correct name of naina’s sister is meghna and not meghnal. I have been noticing this mistake since a couple of episodes and it has disturbed me. Therefore, it would be great if you could take attempts to rectify or avoid mistakes such as these in the future.
    I sincerely do not intend to hurt yoir sentiments in any way. Apologies for your being hurt in any way.
    In admiration forever,
    Shivani

  3. #nairanlover:-)

    Jayshree it was an awesome episode.Naina was feeling awkward and karan too but Khyati teasing them by saying relax and don’t worry type things made me laugh.And ya Naina messaging Meghna and Meghna saying I am busy was too funny.And at last karan and naina staring at each other.I can imagine everything.Your words and your way of writing the ff is really commendable.You also kept in mind our problems but the system rejected.Its ok but next time try write a bigger one and I know you will surely try.Loads of love.

  4. No problem dear..but if you cant write long then write more updates in one day???superb scenes dear..waiting for next

  5. nice,l loved Kyathi ‘s part.and of course the sister’s part??waiting for the next part….

  6. lovly epi too short..lved it

  7. Nila

    hi jayshree just now i read ur all previous works i am really enjoyed ur story its amazing but make it longer or post two parts in ek din i hope u consider my wish and which state u belongs?(I hope u don’t mind) and this part was really amazing I like Nairan scenes without skin allergy seems good( i think i am right?) anyways post next part soon JAI

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