without you i am nothing (part 1)

hello guys!!!i am starz from chennai but Malayali. i am a silent reader and a huge fan of manmarziyan.
i read all fanfiction and decided to write my own story on ardhika and nesam.this is my first time.
please do tell ur opinion. rotten tomatoes and eggs are acepted.

PLEASE FORGIVE ME FOR MY GRAMMATICAL MISTAKE

“SLAP!! SLAP!! ENOUGH IS ENOUGH SARAL!! today U CROSSED ALL LIMITS. you are not fit to be my boyfriend.i hate you. all these days i kept mum and
accepted all ur tortures.if are in a relationship this doesnt mean u can do whatever u want understood. till day i tried every mean to keep this relation but enough i am breaking it. ME RADHIKA MISHRA IS BREAKING ALL TIES WITH YOU MR. SARAL JOSHI. GOODBYE AND GET LOST . DONT DARE TO SHOW ME UR FACE IN FUTURE.”saying this radhika walked away leaving saral shocked. he had never seen this avatar of hers….. TO BE CONTINUED

precap: radhika in pub… rads meeting samaira.. and many more

SO GUYS DO TELL HOW IT IS. I AM WAITING….

17 comments

  1. Sweetie

    |Registered Member

    Another one on MMZ..Oh!! I’m jumping out of happiness now..Nice plot dear..Please continue.. πŸ˜€ Why do you want rotten tomatoes and eggs??Hehe..Just kidding..Stay blessed and keep smiling.. πŸ™‚

  2. Jessie

    |Registered Member

    Hi Starz… what a start!! Superb.. Rads seems to be a bold girl here.. is it so.. y u want eggs n tomatoes..4 making omlette??πŸ˜‰lol do continue d story yaar..

    • Ritu

      Awesome start and it is more awesome coz Rads slapped Saral..πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ sounds interesting dear..do continue and post nxt one soon…and rotten eggs and tomato are for Saral not for u.😜😜😜 take care

  3. alna ashok

    hey i’m also a malayali.i like it very much,pls updte nxt part soooon.in my home cheenja thakaali&mutta is not available

  4. Myra

    |Registered Member

    starz……it was a sheer delight to read it…..loved it…..nice concept….please update soon πŸ™‚

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