I wish u to be mine …episode 1

Hey guys I’m back … I’m overwhelmed by ur response guys n one thing I would like to mention is that don’t worry guys I wouldn’t make it a teenage love story.. There is suspense u guys will get knw abt that as the story proceeds. Now enough of my bakbak …

One fine sunny morng two lil cute children r getting ready for their first day at sckll ( pre kg) off course their parents r going mad at them for their funny cute antics … They screen is separated into two one side a girl of age 4 yrs with a lot of attitude n cuteness ,not to mention her eyes honey brown orbs ..

On the other side a boy of same age with full tashan n tadi is getting ready,but one seeing his bluish green orbs anybody believe he is a cute n innocent boy…At last these two cutiepies landed up into their class.. N as expected they started fighting n it landed by shiv breaking his box n ani throwing water on his ( offu in childhood itself has..). The pity class teacher she has been trying to came them for last 1 hour..so here is their punishment that is by saying sry n making frnds .. V all only knw how this shiv gonna apologize to her.

Last but not the least they bonded together so well with their own tadi .They have last become they the best buddies of their class. Then years passed the classes were shuffled hence their frndship broke ,but not their bond n understanding .They waited for coming in the same as the other n luckily the came when they were in 5 th std like 10 yrs .But unfortunately they were not able to regain their frndship as something or the other stops them. Hence that year also passed. Destiny always unites them in every possible way.Again they were in the same class in the 9 th std n tis time no shuffling due to pre board exams.

So here starts our new phrase that is the childhood frndship turning into a cute lil crush story. N guys that’s all for today. N plz bear me for tis .Actually I thought of giving a whole epi for their childhood. But u guys asked me to finish childhood track fast so I ended up writing this one. Actually I didn’t like the way I presented .So plz if u guys don’t like it say it I will try again something new ..I tnk this time chapals n chamelis will be in huge amount.
Even healthy criticism is accepted.

With love
Hari
Bye

46 comments

  1. |Registered Member

    wow i was expecting this one and it came thanks fr postingg and post next asap and its a good story line keep writin my frnd

  2. Haridhra

    Haridhra

    |Author

    Ohh my god I’m really sry guys there r lots of typo errors n grammatical mistakes …. Offu its a lil embarrassing.. Plz bear with that.

  3. Sumitha

    Sumitha

    |Registered Member

    Really like ur ff post next eagerly waiting๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Šโ˜บโ˜บโ˜บโ˜บโ˜บ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

  4. Vivikhta

    Very nice update dear. Don’t worry about the typos and all….Ithappens with every author.Update sSOO!n!

    • Haridhra

      Haridhra

      |Author

      Ohh so sweet of u vivi di ( can I call u so ).. Tnq so much for u motivations .. On seeing ur comments I get my energy to write next one ..

  5. AditiB

    AditiB

    |Registered Member

    Cutam cute…super duper super se bhi ooper…..love your ff and the cuteness in every line makes me believe again and again that no one’s more cute than my ShivIka in your ff…

    • Haridhra

      Haridhra

      |Author

      Tnq so much yaar..If I’m ain’t wrong u r the author of oberoi memories.. I’m super excited u have commented on my ff .. I’m a follower of ur ff..but I have rarely commented ..I’m sorry abt that.

  6. Haridhra

    Haridhra

    |Author

    Ohh tnq so much eve .. It means a lot to me ,I’m overwhelmed by ur comments,also elated to knw u find originality / novelty in my ff.. Tnq so so much yaar.

  7. Neha-17

    Neha-17

    |Registered Member

    Obviously no chappals and chameli dont say this next time…It was a cute description..aweesomeee…Waiting for grown up ones!

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