WISH (ISHQBAAZ STORY ) SHOT 4

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HI GUYS…I AM CHANDINI BACK WITH WISH THIS TIME….THANK YOU ALL FOR THE WONDERFUL SUPPORT FOR THIS FIVE SHOT STORY……
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SHOT 4
20th December 2013
@OBEROI MANSION
Anika and Shivaay were arguing….
Annika : let me speak Shivaay…so hugging unnecessarily….and giving kisses in my cheeks…holding my hands everytime some sensitive talk is being touched….asking me numerous questions when some guy speaks with me….coming to my house when I am ill…taking care of me by cancelling your meetings…lifting me and walking if I say my leg is paining…last but not the least promising me that you will always be there for me like a mother and father….is this all a deal for you…don’t tell me that you will do this to your friends…I know you are not that type….let me see so you thought me as a gold digger and now backing of…..

Shivaay shouted at the peak of his voice….annika…stop it don’t say a word…
They almost forgot that om was standing beside them and the entire family is in the hall along with press and guests….
Rudra too rushed out hearing Shivaay….
Shivaay : don’t say a word….I agree I did all this…you want to know why…today I will answer all the questions…
He went inside like a storm…
Annika was trying hard to control her eyes……
After 5 minutes of restlessness finally Shivaay came out of the room but now he looked more calmer…infact the calmness is his face is even new to om and rudra….
Annika was giving a blank look….
Shivaay went near both heartbeats were synchronised and the beat thundered in their heads….
Annika : Shivaay….

Shivaay : you have spoken a lot annika…now it’s my turn to speak….
Annika….the girl…a girl full of self respect who became the reason for the change in me….yes annika you changed me….the day when I saw you itself I know I lost something but at that time I didn’t know the thing I lost was so big…..you know what till this day I couldn’t find it….Shivaay singh oberoi couldn’t find a thing that he lost….
Want to what I lost….a part of my heart…I lost it to you and don’t expect me to say that I lost my whole heart to you because I want there are already two people occupied in it…my brothers and no one can take their places….

Shivaay passed a wink at om and rudra who were lost in shivaay’s words….
So annika the mystery girl….who always doesn’t leave a chance to raise my head and look at you with pride and respect…will you be the permanent resident of the small part of my heart….
He bent down and sat on his knees….and took a ring from his packet….
There was no reply from annika infact no reaction she was standing like a pillar….all the guests who came for rudy’s birthday part were waiting for her answer…..
Om gave a push to annika to revive her….

Annika : Shivaay….you…you are not joking right….or you are doing this because I questioned about your ideology….
Shivaay in his husky voice….no annika definitely not…I am hurt that you thought me as a rich spoilt brat but I didn’t grow up like that….I know to respect a girl because I have a lovely sister…..and ya about my ideology it is one of my personal things you broke….
Anika chuckled slightly hearing him….a drop of tear….escaped from her eyes which directly found it’s place on shivaay’s eyes…that one drop triggered more drops of tears from shivaay’s eyes….
Rudra whispered to om: o where is my camera….I will record the falling of the great Shivaay singh oberoi…
Om : duffer shut up I am already recording it how will I miss this wonderful moment….to pull my brother’s leg…
Rudra : vaah…not bad…

Ishana : guys shut up…
Shivaay : annika….
Annika : I don’t want that place in your heart….
All were shocked hearing her….
Shivaay rose to his feet…his eyes starring directly into annika’s…..
Annika : why are you shocked Shivaay….I don’t want that place in your heart I know it’s only for your brothers so don’t try to expand it…..I just want to be in your kanji eyes forever….
Rudra : oh my god…what is this are we dividing our bhaiya’s body parts….so choti ma and papa will ask for his hands….

Ishana : no you are wrong rudra pinky aunty will take Shivaay bhaiya’s throat…
Om : why is it?
Ishana : then only “oh my maata “ can echo whenever Shivaay bhaiya opens his mouth….
The three chuckled….
Shivaay : so….
Annika : Shivaay…you kept the ring inside your packet again….
Shivaay : oh…I …I…
Rudra: bhaiya…I thought you became somewhat romantic but….
Annika : Shivaay ring…
Shivaay took the ring and put that on annika’s finger…..

Shivaay : will you marry me….
Annika’s heartbeat doubled…she looked at omru who were happily signing her to accept proposal….other family members were shocked but at the same time they were happy……
Shivaay : annika this is too much….I am kneeling before you like an hour….and…and my legs are paining like anything….
Annika smilingly said yes….
Shivaay : why are you crying?
Annika : for the same reason you are crying….

Shivaay : will you hug me…
Annika : no….you hug me….
Shivaay rose to his feet and hugged her…
Rudra : aaahhhhhh….by superman will become paraya dhaan soon…
Om : rudra shut up….he isn’t married…
Ishana : I couldn’t believe that Shivaay bhaiya proposed annika…
Om: he is like that…totally unpredictable…..see what stunt he did today….I have been wondering for months how their relationship will go further…..but this Shivaay he proposes her suddenly…..
Ishana : I am waiting for that day when I will get my proposal…..
Om : what…
Rudra : ishu di…do you love somebody….
Rudra asked this with a tensed face…..

Ishana : yes I love someone….but till date I am not sure whether that guy loves me….
Rudra was about to speak but Shivaay anika came near them….after getting blessings from the elders….

Shivaay : rudra…do you have any idea of cutting cake…
Rudra : you two stole the spotlight…I myself have a doubt whether this my birthday party or your engagement ceremony…..
Annika : sorry rudra…
Rudra crushed Shivaay and annika with a hug……I love you guys…
Rudra : o join us….
He pulled om also into the hug…

Everyone became emotional seeing their bond…..
Ishu : rudra….cut the cake it’s time…
Rudra : but my sumo is not here yet…
Annika : your…sumo…
Shivaay : annika if rudra and saumya are together within seconds this house will be demolished my office is at the verge of dying hearing their shouts everyday….
Saumya : Shivaay sir….this is not right…how could you speak about an employee like this…
Shivaay : saumya….I am not your sir here…you are my brother’s close friend and ofcourse my om’s adopted sister so I am your bhaiya….
Saumya : bhaiya you are.awesome and what did I miss…
Rudra : sumo you know what we have a couple here….

Saumya : really….
She jumped like anything and went to om….bhaiya is this true you and ishu di….Oh my I know someday this will happen….
Om : saumya stop it’s not us….it’s Shivaay and annika…
And the same reaction came from saumya…..
Finally rudra was about to cut the cake….
Shivaay noticed some restlessness in om…. as rudra was in the middle he couldn’t ask him….
As usual the first piece of cake will be fed by rudra to his brothers who at the same time eat it….
Rudra then asked for a soul crushing hug from his brothers….
Shivaay and om crushed him….

Om closed is eyes…..
With a thud he fell down lying unconscious ……
Different thoughts were running through Shivaay and rudra’s mind…..
Had he taken drugs again….what happened to him….
He was rushed to the hospital…as there was no movement when they sprinkled water on his face….
Rudra was crying uncontrollably…and everyone where trying to pacify him…..fear was visible in his eyes….
Shivaay was walking like a pendulum not knowing what to do…..
Annika : Shivaay…..

He stopped at once…and looked at annika….never had she seen him trembling with fear…..
Annika : he has just fainted…why are you all so tensed….
Ishana was biting her nails like anything….
Annika : ishu stop that..I don’t know what’s the thing to be this tensed…..
Shivaay : annika…I am afraid I don’t want to loose my brother again…I should have been careful….
Rudra : bhaiya….it’s…it’s my fault too…
Anika and saumya were puzzled…
Saumya : rudra…he has just fainted nothing to worry about it…

Ishana went near the brothers….
Ishana : he…he..hasn’t taken drugs again right? Tell me bhaiya….
Annika : drugs?
Shivaay : I…I…don’t know ishana…I wish he hadn’t taken those that too after all the struggle me and rudra went in getting him out of that mess…
Saumya: bhaiya…is om bhaiya a drug addict?
Shivaay nodded while battling his inner turmoil….
Doctor came out just that second…
Everyone where so tensed…rudra and shivaay didn’t want to hear him telling that it’s due to drugs…

Doctor : nothing to worry it’s only dehydration….I think he has taken in less water content…he will up anytime now and after that you can take him home…give more liquid items for a week…he will be back to his full energy…
Rudra smiled widely….bhaiya did you hear….it’s not because of that….
All went in to see om….but he was still unconscious….Shivaay then asked all the family members to leave and asked annika to take care of them….
While going saumya did something which she hadn’t done before….she hugged rudra and kissed him on his forehead…and ensured him everything will be alright….

Rudra too reciprocated….annika Shivaay and ishana passed a smile seeing them….
After sometime Shivaay and rudra were sitting near om….
Om slowly opened is eyes to see his brothers caressing his hair….
Om : take you hands guys my hair will spoil…..
With the sudden voice rudra gave a jump….
And kissed him continuously on forehead….

Om : Shivaay…ask this duffer to stop….rudra I am not your girlfriend….
Shivaay….Shivaay….
He was starring at om with concern….
Om : Shivaay….I am ok…
Shivaay walked near om and kissed his forehead…..

Shivaay : you scared me….for a second I thought….
Om : that I took drugs?
Rudra : o…
Om : I promised you guys I won’t….you both are my life how will I break the promise….trust me….
A tear escaped from his eyes…..
Three brothers hugged each other……

@PRESENT
LONDON….
Rudra was sitting in a corner dressed in white….his eyes were red and puffed up….no tears were left to get out his sorrow……
Two babies were crying in the cradle near him….
Saumya was crying her heart out….

Everyone in the hall was dressed in white…..
Saumya : rudra get up….please don’t be like this….I am scared….we knew that this would happen someday…but I know this loss is incomparable….there are rituals to be done rudra…get up…please atleast for the sake of these babies….
Rudra saw the babies….
What wrong these two little hearts did why they should be parentless….
Saumya : we are there for them….rudra we are their parents…I don’t want a child for us…they both are our world…

6 months before my superman left me now…now….my O…my life..my soul…my strength….my friend…my brother left me….I shouldn’t have recorded everything for the babies…I swear I won’t show these recordings to them….never…..
The middle of the hall which contained Shivaay and annika’s photo now had om and ishana’s photo which wore a garland as huge as the photo….
Under the photo in a table before the pandit who was arranging for the Puja was the photo of omkara singh oberoi…
The pandit asked his death time and date to which rudra replied with heavy heart and saumya was supporting him…

Okay that’s it for the day guys…I know I am late….I thought of finishing this before this week but my exams made it difficult…so only one shot to go…I am sort of thinking to post the last shot as two parts….I will decide seeing the length …hope you all are liking this…do drop your comments because it means a lot to me….

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22 Comments
  1. Arthi

    Shivay’s proposal superb dr…..and I love ur ff……u just nailed it………love u dr….

    1. Chandini

      Thanks arthi….I want a grand proposal scene of shivika in ib….I don’t know when it will happen so I tried it in my ff….

  2. Madhuani

    Awesome

    1. Chandini

      Thanks madhuani

  3. Nithu

    toooooooooo emotional at last

    1. Chandini

      Sorry for making it that emotional..even I too felt emotional while writing it.anyways thanks for commenting dear

  4. Haridhra

    It’s very emotional one at last .. Superb Proposal yaar ..

    1. Chandini

      Thanks haridha but more than your comment you dp is attracting me more??

      1. Haridhra

        Hahaaaa ?? di who can resist the charm of kunal bhaiya ?..

  5. Nita D

    Awesome chapter…..still eagerly waiting to know why Om was so pessimistic since the beginning of the ff…..
    Plz post next part soon….and I suggest u update that in a single part only as it will be a chapter of revelation and sorting everything out so it will be better if u u give it in one go…..But it’s totally upto u….

    But plz post soon….
    N best of luck for your exams…..

    1. Chandini

      Thanks nita for commenting and also for your wishes….I am confused how to post next part but as you suggested me I am now in a conclusion to post it in one go and not breaking the revelations

      1. Nita D

        Pleasure is all mine dear…..
        And thank YOU for coming up with such a khidkitod ff…

  6. Nikita_jai29

    It is nice and emotional dear… Eagerly waiting for the next update please post ASAP….

  7. Niriha

    Awesome…it’s very emotional eagerly waiting for next update soon

  8. Nice update

  9. Yashu

    It was really gr8 chandu di……i loved it……it was so very emotional……u wrote it so beautifully…….eagerly waiting for nxt 1…..n ya do update ur journey through lives of oberoi brothers…..love u…..

  10. Anu16

    nice n emotional…try to post soon… n all the best 4 ur exams

  11. Alekhika20

    Superb updt

  12. it was awsom. btw is om realy died? i cant bear it 🙁

  13. Nice update dear.. Emotional..

  14. Its good ….update soon

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